Hmm, the only critics I have are IMO and may not even be valid to professionals. (The reason I don't use Moz is becuase there isn't enough to complain about ^^).

1)The lower part of the cheek looks... _? I don't know...
2) The eyelashes needs clarification of some sort becusae it looks like her right eye has a black eyelid.
3) Her cheek is too huge or it could just be an illusion.

Wildie, there's only one difference between a photograph of this woman and your airbrush portrait...

Your's looks better .