Alright, if you don't mind having a story that moves way to quickly then ill try not to do to much editing. Charm doesn't sell but i'll try to edit as little as i can, im not holding back on editing my own chapter, the problem would be this.
My chapter - 40 pages
Yours - 5 pages
If you are ok with this then i'm ok with it, maybe you are not and you would like to try a little harder and make your own chapters bigger.
If im going to bring this to a publisher and have a book with several huge chapters mixed in with tons of chapters that don't even fill a page i think he will not take me serious and he'll wish me a lot of luck trying to find another publisher.
Good luck on that.
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