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Jan 24, 2007, 05:59 PM
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Thanks...I think. It does kinda suck though. I can't draw well with 'Paint'...Anyways...ON WITH THE STORY!!

MORE CHAPTERS!!!

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Chapter 5: Death to the Jackrabbit!! (D)

The Figure patiently looked out of his inner sanctum. His eyes seemed to burn with fire, as well as the remains of the cities that were around them...the scent of decay...of flesh burning...of people...DYING! His eyes burned brighter, before he unleashed his rage on the nearest thing...one of his own servants. The poor fool was quickly ablaze in hellish fire, in a few seconds, there was nothing but ash left. The remainder of his servants trembled with fear before leaving the room with great haste.

"Master Devan! An intruder has been detected in the vicinity of the city we destroyed last night! Shall we intercept?" a commander requested.

Devan kept his back to the commander, a remote in his left hand. With a single push of a button, the whole planet seemed to shake violently. Something rose from the depths of the Earth, molten rock slowly vanished, a large robot resembling Robotnik's Egg-O-Matic could be seen. It's large, pulsating eye scanned the ruins...

[Progran Initiated...Scanning...Complete...GOTO 20...]

[GOTO 20...Individual life form detected. Life signs are vital...accessing data...Data found...GOTO 35...]

[GOTO 35...Green Jackrabbit located...speciman known as Jazz Jackrabbit...Objective...Destroy...]

Devan sensed his foe's arrival, before he chuckled softly.

"That rabbit doesn't have a chance against Bolly...Version 4.9! After this is over, we'll be having roasted rabbit for a banquet! That blasted Joshua must have managed to bring him to us...To his death!" Devan laughed, rubbing his hands together.

Jazz cautiously approached the center of the ruins. He wasn't all surprised at Bolly floating in the middle of it all, it's single, blood-shot eye stared at him, unblinking...even though it was a machine...it still felt a great amount of hatred towards Jazz. His many defeats would end here...and Jazz's death would bring him glory!

"So, ol' Devan decided to give you a tune up, huh? Does he ever learn? There's no way a giant tin can will be able to stop me! This will only take a few seconds...then you'll be scrap metal!" Jazz confindently laughed.

Bolly quickly locked on Jazz, unleashing a barrage of missiles. The effect was minimum. They flew right past him, exploding in the flames further behind him. Letting out a frustrated digital cry, it zoomed forward, it's flails hoping to impale Jazz. But our hero was too nimble, leapt into the air and stomped down on his foe weak spot. The glass screen began to crack, but it was only a small scratch at most.

[Error...Target showing increase of power...Activating defense systems...ELETRICAL STORM!]

Bolly's system suffered a temporary overload, causing many volts of energy to be flung through the air, many of them collided into Jazz's body, the result was for Jazz to be flung into air, before crashing into the ground, leaving a large crater underneath. A loud series of cracking sounds could be heard. It seemed some of the bones in Jazz's body had been broken, making him limp slowly, doing his best to dodge Bolly's unrelenting onslaught.

[Enemy Weakening...Begin countdown...5...4....3...]

"H...Huh?" Jazz stammered.

[2...1...0...]

A huge explosion could be seen from the distant Realm of Darkness. Devan smiled wickedly, before laughing madly. At last, his greatest...a loud series of bleeps echoed through the life scanners. It seemed the celebrations would have to wait. That blasted Jackrabbit must have survived...and was going to make it back to Gaming Force HQ. Everything around Devan became a haze of red, before his glasses shattered to pieces, his shell sprouting two demonic wings...
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