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Aug 29, 2002, 07:00 PM
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Chapter one: When everything goes wrong

It was another normal day on Carrutus, the birds were singing, the carrots were standing tall, and Acid was about to wake everybody up with his usual morning ritual.
*BOOM!!!*
“AAUUGH!!!”
Yes, Acid normally starts his day with an explosion and a yell. He had never gotten his personal coffee maker to work right. He walked back into his workroom, singed and frayed. It might be a little harmful, but he likes to wake himself up by blowing himself up, rather than drink a cup of Joe. He sat back down on his chair and got to work on his “Bubble” design. Just a few more days work on the blueprints and he’d be ready to begin construction.
The Bubble project was under very high security, and only Acid’s friends, Electrik and his co-workers were allowed in the building. Acid began whistling, and because of his scorched tongue, it sounded a little off key.
Thus, the day began.

Acid had done a lot of work on the Bubble, and decided to take a little break. He bumped into one of his co-workers, Terminator, on the way out.
“Oops, I’m sorry!”
“That’s okay.”
Acid headed down to the deli down in carrutus central.
“the usual.”
“One turkey and bacon sub, no Mayo, no mustard?”
“yup.”

On the way back, happily munching his sub, he saw Terminator dash out the door with his hands full of papers. Acid wondered where he had to go so quickly with all those papers. When he got back to the office, he decided he would double check the blueprints for the bubble before sending them in to construction.
“Huh? I thought they were right here…” Acid rummaged through his desk, but to no avail. “Darn! I worked so hard on that.” He suddenly realized what had happened. “Oh, Asterisk.”

He shot out the door towards where Terminator was running. Everyone who was standing by knew that if Acid was running, it was VERY important, and ran after him.
He followed the directions of people who had seen him run by until he got to Carrutus launch pad. Terminator’s ship was still there, and he was trying to get launch clearance as fast as possible.
“STOP HIM!!!” yelled Acid, panting from the run. He was to late. The ship took off. “ASTERISK BOMB SWORD EXCLAMATION MARK DOLLAR SIGN NUMBER AT!!!!!” he proceeded to name every violent weapon and key on the keyboard.

Word of things like this spreads like wildfire, and soon Carrutus council was meeting.
“We cannot let him get away with it! We must destroy him, even if we lose to plans! Just a few tweaks and out ultimate protection can be turned into a weapon of mass destruction!” roared the military officer. “We should send carrutus fleet to seek out and destroy him!”
“Aye!”
One by one, the members of the council agreed with him. Even Acid gave a dejected “Sure…” as he was very upset about letting the plans be stolen.
“Then it has been chosen. We will send carrutus fleet to destroy him. The meeting is-“
“Wait!” the council turned as the doors swung open. There stood a green weasel with blue hair. He was fairly muscular and tall. “If we send the whole carrutus fleet, then think of all the things that could go wrong! They can detect a large fleet much better than one ship, I’ll tell you that! Besides, a large fleet is a large target. We could lose a lot of men with that method.”
Lori’s face curled into a snarl.
“and Women, if they choose to fight. My plan is this, send a small squad in one ship that can repel radar detection. They can dock onto the station and destroy it from the inside.
Jazz’s face took on a contemplating expression, and after a while he said, “Very well, Fawriel. I can see your plan is a much better idea. But, now, who must be on the squad?”

Yay! I finished the first chapter! I've already used Piccolo too! And he did get a fairly big part because he did do that wonderful piccie of Acid.

To piccolo: Your character IS a weasel, right? Or am I seriously wrong?
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