The most interesting part of N0's post is his references to the "good guys" and the "bad guys". Because, really, we still have no idea of the identity of either one. Quickly glancing over the updates, I see four different subplots, and they don't seem connected at all. Well, Kaz is looking for Coppertop, I think, but that's about it. Would it be possible to develop the main plot (whichever it is... I assume Coppertop's) before introducing new characters?
pageclaim in the name of simpler plotlines