I was pretty much skimming by Chapter 2 of the first one and by Chapter 10 I had given up. I have a few quotes I liked, though:
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“Thanks for leaving me with this baby (-) hole!”
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Needs comma badly D=
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“Really great! Jazz, I’m not pregnant!” she squealed. Jazz hoped in the air and hugged Angela and the two started hopping around like crazy! Even Sasha smiled despite her anger towards Angela.
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Fo some reason I think it's really funny when people use exclamation points in narrative text.
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“Jazz, do you like me?” Jazz sighed.
“Yes.” He admitted.
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SCHIZOPHRENIA
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GENERATION 22: The first time you see this, copy it into your sig on any forum and add 1 to the generation. Social experiment.
<i>"This picture shows me that the gray bird man is just a bully and picks on smaller birds. Just because he has no friends and takes it out on others smaller than him to look good. I can see in the parrats eyes that it does however have a understanding of the gray bird man and is upset about getting cut."</i> - Speeza on cartoon birds.
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