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Dec 26, 2002, 12:34 PM
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Talking Yay,go Bleeding Soul!^^

Yay,I became inactive enough to start posting threads everytime I update my gallery!

This is a detailed pencil sketch of Bleeding Soul..and his transformed version...^_^

His description (which I posted already):

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Bleeding Soul:
Age:-15
Species:-Rat
Height:-1,85m
Built:-extremely thin but VERY muscular
Intelligence:-average,he never had a chance to learn anything...
Story:This poor guy was an unwanted child,and was abandoned by his unknown parents when he was born...
they brought him to a forest(not named yet)where he should have been killed by monsters...
It seems he has survived,may it be of luck or strong will,nobody knows.
Through the years he became incredibly strong,capable of destroying stone walls with his bare hands...
From various battles he still has scars and doesn't look too familiar,but ladies seem to love him cos he looks so strong,yet helpless and cute!^.^
*cough*
Personality:-Since the only anthros he ever saw were his parents who brutally abandoned him,he has a phobia against the whole species...
He panicks when he sees any and will either escape or kill em.
At night,he usually cries out loud and howls...that's why all the people from the neighbour town are afraid of the woods and called the howling monster Bleeding Soul!
If you became his friend,he will always be in your reach and cuddle as much as possible...hey,he's gotta catch up the love he never got in his life!^^
That's also the reason why Kariya likes him so much!
He can speak only a few words which he learns during the story,he will also some day learn about his parents and so on...
Stay tuned...(for the next centuries^.^;; )!
Strength:-INCREDIBLY STRONG!INCREDIBLY TOUGH!INCREDIBLY FAST!
Wow!^.^;;
He can also talk with animals and he learned to eat almost anything which is pretty useful in a long battle!
Weaknesses:-He has no fat reserves or anything!That makes him extremely low on energy!
Also,he is blind on his left eye,which makes it harder for him to evade or hit an enemy!
AND,he can't use any strong weapons,he can just use fighting gloves or the strings he put around his hands.
Fighting class:-Blackbelt
Weapons:-gloves or strings for his hands
I'll color it later...
I just uploaded it colorless cos the color would just screw it all up...
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Dec 26, 2002, 09:14 PM
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Que Passa!!!!

... /\/\ Looks so sad with that plushie...
I like his tail and feet, though...
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Dec 27, 2002, 03:31 AM
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His transformed version should look meaner. More aggressive...

Good work, though. The detail in your drawings is definitely improving.
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Let me taste
Let me feel
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No need to speak
Just let it be
Carry out this wish for me let nothing interfere

Rise to submission
I'm still beneath in the soil

Discard your clothes
Let loose you hair
We're intertwined forever and have always been
Say the word
And I'll depart
Upon your lips dwells nothing but the meaning of my cause

And so comes the dark
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Flowers already withered
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Opeth - By the Pain I see in Others
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Dec 27, 2002, 07:02 AM
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Nem,he isn't SUPPOSED to look mean!
He's more supposed to look pitiful and stuff...

Is it just me or do I get less reviews than other artists? XD
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The Phantom didn't look pitiful.

I don't think a mask is a way to make a character look pitiful... It's meant to make them more mysterious.

It's good anyway.

You don't get as many reviews like me. That's because nobody can correct your drawings. That means you're improving, and the others can't see anything wrong. (Which they SHOULD... No peice of art is perfect. Be quiet. It isn't.)
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"My suicide was in self-defense - I was trying to kill me!" -Bluezy Bunny


Let me taste
Let me feel
I need to know what you keep inside
No need to speak
Just let it be
Carry out this wish for me let nothing interfere

Rise to submission
I'm still beneath in the soil

Discard your clothes
Let loose you hair
We're intertwined forever and have always been
Say the word
And I'll depart
Upon your lips dwells nothing but the meaning of my cause

And so comes the dark
Vibrant as ever before
Flowers already withered
In this endless winter of souls

Opeth - By the Pain I see in Others
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Dec 27, 2002, 02:40 PM
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Que Passa!!!!

I don't get that many reviews either. I appreciate them when I do get them, but if I don't it really doesn't matter.

After all, I am my best critic, and Side 7 to me is just an online public portfolio.
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