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Jan 23, 2007, 04:47 AM
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Hot Chocolatus: The Revenge of Tweedle!

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>>Hot Chocolatus
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Jan 23, 2007, 08:16 PM
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What, exactly, is the purpose of this thread?
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http://www.jazz2online.com/jcf/showthread.php?p=394593

Something related to that.
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Jan 24, 2007, 05:14 AM
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I can't wait. This sounds so exciting.
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Sorry, I have problems with the connection


Here it continues:



"Hm" said Spaz,"If this is deleted, so Jazz and Lori should be there"
Three months after Jazz and Spaz were kidnaped, Spaz was trying to find them. And he found an info that there's and old Devon's base on Chocolatus. But even the info in the Main System Computer (MSC) can be deleted.

"Maybe I should go there"
-=-=-=-=-=-=-=

-I ask you for the last time, Jazz, where's Devon!
-I told you! I don't know!
-Don't say that again. You'll wait another 3 days here. As you can see, I'm not evil as Devon.
-I see. Look, I knowyou're confused...
-Shut up! You'll recive no more Hot Chocolate from now!

-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-
Spaz's space trip to Hot Chocolatus wasn't nice. Tube Electric's millitary forces are not-so-kind as his girlfriend. But atleast it wasn't bad. To that moment.

*BANG*

[Warning, there's an enemie in the ship!]
-What the... What happened computer?

[Computer is shutting down]

-Oh, no!
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Wow, I didn't see that coming.
Please continue, I like where this is going.
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Jan 24, 2007, 11:53 AM
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Slay, you're so supportive. Haha.
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-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-
-Where am I?
-Dun't wurry, yo are in save!
-Who are you? And where am I!
-Yo are on Papricotus, ind I em King Kahuta! Wilcome tu our plyanet!
-Is there a spaceport?
-Ufcurse! What iz a plyanet widoud spyeispurt!
-Take me to it!
-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-
Papricotus wasn't a bad planet, but it was little backwards. The natives had an awful accent, and the spaceships were old. They were still using oil machines, and the city (named Peachland) was poor. However, it wasn't hard to find an spaceship owner, that is ready for adventures. The rabbits just wanted to get out of this planet.

-Hey, you, the orange one, yes, you! I heard that you're looking for someone to take you to Chocolatus!
-Yes, sir! I'm Spaz, nice to meet you, sir!
-Well, don't call me sir! I'm Mirc, and as you can see, I'm not a native. Why are you looking for a transport to Chocolatus? Looking fo somebody?
-Actually, yes! My best frie...
-Shut up!
Spaz was so suprised, that he "shutted up". In the next moment, nearly 30 turtles passed near him. Big turtles.
-Thank you, sir!
-Mirc, only Mirc. If you want to travel, we must go now. OK?
-OK, let's go.



-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=
Lerk was an ordinary rich rabbit, that is having a good time on Lepporidae- Terra. He was also in Perfection's secret group union, the union that is trying to find and kill Devon. But know he was relaxing in his pool with two sexy babes.
-Hi, Lerk!
-Oh, Cata, hi! How are you?
-I was just passing...
Cata WASN'T the ordinary rich rabbit. Infact, he wasn't ordinary in every point. He was tall, slim, with long ears, light-blue skin with green patches and red eyes. And also, he knows Tweedle. And, like Lerk, he was in Perfection's union.
-No problemo, friend! Want to come in?
-Err... No! I wan't to ask you something...
-Well, ask then!
-Can I ask you in the house?
Lerk had got a big mansion with two pools, a park, a paintboll field, and a BIG house. Big enought for Cata's sizes.
-OK, Tweedle's done something really stupid. He thinks that Jazz, you know about him, is in union with Devon!
-So? That's stupid, bu...
-He kidnaped him and now he's on Hot Chocolatus!
-What is he doing there?! If Devon find him... I don't wan't to think!
-That's the problem! Devon is searching for him everywhere! Today I recived a message from Papricotus. 3,000 turtles from the Special teams...
-I've got a bad feeling about this!
-That's not all! They destroyed Spaz's ship!
-Spaz? He was Jazz's best friend, right?
-Right! Mirc said that he'll take him to Chocolatus. He'll try to talk with Tweed, and get them out of Devon's territories!
-Do I sense war?
-I think you're not the only one that senses war!





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Part 2

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Fotokoinus was a small desert planet in the outer regions of the Devan's empire. It was full of Liazrds, which was strange for that region. Spaz was staying in the cantina, waiting for Mirc. They stoped here on their way to Chocolatus to buy some food.
-OK, I'm ready.
-Mirc, there's something strange here... All these lizards.
-I said I'm ready. I'll tell you in the ship.
Mirc's ship was with too cargo rooms, an engine zone, and a large living zone. A classical ship, used by the smugglers.
-OK, have you ever heard about WerBack III?
-The king of Psych?
-Yes, he's some kind of crazy. He tries to find Devon... and he tries to kill him.
-OK, so what?
-I beg you don't know... He used to be a rabbit...
-What? But he's a lizard! How the...
-Nobody knows. They say that he hates the rabbits...
-And so... You think he'll kill us...
-Psych is a closed planet in the Outer Regions. They say that its king was a rabbit. Except you, Jazz and Fanna, there are no other rabbits, that have returned from Psych.
-OK... But why are the Psychers here?
-They are searching for Tweedle. And they know that you're searching for him. I think that your ship was attacked by lizards, not by turtles...
-Oh, no! If they find Jazz, they'll kill him. They hate him. Remember that he killed their last king?
-Yes. But if they kill him, this will cause a war. A perfect situation for Devan.
-Oh my lord...
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