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Here it is folks. My first tavern story. I hope you guys enjoy.



Regalia: THe Runes of Time

A Story based in the Jazz Jackrabbit Universe

PROLOGUE:

'The rabbits of three, the turtles they shall thy defeat. But their victory is only an illusion, much worse must come to follow.'

- The Book of Time



It has been 20 years since Jazz Jackrabbit, Spaz Jackrabbit and Lori Jackrabbit confronted and finally defeated one of the most dreaded enemies ever faced by Carrotus: Devan Shell.



Since then, Carrotus has enjoyed peace. Not a single living creature has ever waged war on the Jackrabbits. But a new dawn has arrived.



Now, old and new terrors alike have come together and unknown to the creatures of the universe they have moblised their forces of destruction to wage a universal war. And so, it begins...



CHAPTER 1

Devan Shell awoke. His surroundings were unfamiliar. He was greeted by a large, grotseque demon.

'My lord, it is I your faithful servant Bilsy. Don't recognised me? I wouldn't be surprised. It is the year 3600. You may recall that Jazz Jacrabbit killed you. What you don't know is that fragments of your tissue were recovered despite the total annihalation of every thing in the area. It took nearly a century for the technolgy to restore you to be developed, and in these years I have searched for the seven ancient runes of Regalia. We rebuilt you into this cybernetic army and have been building a fighting force since you died. Now that you are complete, you shall lead your troops back through time using the runes in order to conquer Carrotus.'

'Ouch, that's alot to lay on a guy in the morning. Well then Bilsy, show me to my troops. Prepare for war...'



All was quiet in the War Tavern. Many a ledgend had passed through there, many a ledgend who have now vanished. The great Dethman, the all powerful Merlin. Nowadays, the tavern was host to warriors, some of whom were old heroes, some of whom were wannabies. And there were some, who were heroes in the making...

'A carrot ale please, without the ginger strips.' A blue and white furred rabbit walked up to the bar and sat down.

'Drinking carrot ale without the ginger strips? Who's feeling daring then?'

defalcon recognised the voice. He turned round.

'Kazooie! I thought you were off-planet!'

Kazooie stared at him. 'Haven't been out much lately. I came in that big cruise ship. Biggest in the galaxy.'

'Oh. Guess I should read the papers more,' defalcon was about to say something else when a piercing scream cut through the air.

'Get down!' Kazooie screamed, pointing out the window. Without warning, the tavern exploded taking everything on the same street out with it.



'The runes worked! Haha! Now I shall have my revenge on that pitiful rabbit. And these new weapons work well too. First target that building there, for a little test, then mobilise the forces and prepare to barricade and storm the city.' Devan cackled with evil laughter. He watched with glee as a scarlet bolt of energy the size of a building ripped towards the tavern, destroying it.

'Hahaha! Okay Bilsy, we're going in!' Devan flexed his mechanical claw. 'Let the battle begin!'
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Nicely done! I like the start of this mmm a reference to the Book of TIME, something I came up with some time ago. Maybe a reference to Rumbo Rabbit should be included.......



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Basically Rumbo, it's a bit like that. Do you wanna be in the story?
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You BLEW up the Tavern?!

Waaa!
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Everyone blows up the tavern eventually. And I should know.
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Is there any possibilty for joining the story?



(btw: nice prologue+story)
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I'll be taking joiners soon. It's a bit too early into the story. Just be patient. And now, Chapter 2...



CHAPTER 2

'Eva! Get the kids into the ship! I'll try to buy you some time!' King Jazz Jackrabbit ushered his family into a royal shuttle and headed for his trophy room. From under a dusty old cabinet he removed an old, worn blaster case. Carefully removing the sturdy, blue blaster inside it, he removed his crown and cloak, before strapping on a red headband and wristbands.

'Okay, I know you haven't seen too much action lately,' he spoke to his weapon, 'but I just hope that you're still loaded.' With that, he rushed off to the royal barracks to assemble an army.



'Forward!' Devan stood upon his floating battle barge as he moved from the outer reaches of the city into its depths. 'Foot-soldiers, attack!' Large cybernetically enhanced turtles armed to the teeth with futuristic weapons laid siege to the unarmed rabbits fleeing their homes. Devan cackled with manioc laughter as his hover tanks rammed through a large building.

'Status report, Ensign Inswax.'

'D-Cannon fully charged. Fire when ready sir.' The young but eager turtle officer waited for further instructions.

'Fine then, officer. See that rabbit army heading this way? I want it vapourised.'

'Yes sir, but from this range we'll only be able to take out a small portion of it. I suggest the commanding officer...'

'Ah yes, Inswax. King Jazz, hero of Carrotus. The mighty warrior. He hasn't seen action for so long he probably can't lift his blaster. Fire at will.'



'Man, I need to get in shape. It's a little difficult to hold this blaster. Oh, wait, Spaz, let go of my blaster. Much better.' Jazz led a mass of rabbit soldiers forward towards the turtles. Already they had encountered several turtle warriors and had disposed of them with little trouble. But now they were facing an army...Jazz gave the word and the advancing army of rabbits sped forward, blasters blazing and blades swinging in anticipation.



'Fire the D-Cannon!' A massive orange beam split through the air. Currently, it was the biggest weapon they could use without blowing themselves up. The beam lanced into the rabbit army and blew a wide path of charred corpses straight through the street.

'Hahahahahahah! If they liked the D-Cannon, wait till they get a taste of my gargantuans! Launch the titans!' Devan signalled his officers. Instantaneously, large pods came hurtling into the city from high orbit, devastation buildings. Then, the pods opened and large, armoured beasts the size of a large house emerged. Devan's vicious laughter grew louder and louder until it was the only thing the turtle army could hear.



'Jeez! Look at the size of those things!' Rumbo watched with a grim face from his home on Time Mountain. He knew that the rabbits would lose. It was the way it was written. TIME himself stated this. But he could not clear his mind of the horrible visions in his head. He looked anxiously at the time stone. When the turtles had arrived, it began to glow and vibrate. He'd never seen this happen before. Despite obvious physical changes in the time stone, it's molecular structure remained the same. Pouring over his books, he found reference to such an occurance in his oldest and most sacred of all books. The Book of Time.

'Wait a second!' double checking the Book of Time over and over, his eyes widened and his throught became tight with fear.

'In order for the Time Stone to react like that, time has to be modified without the use of the stone. That mean it must be the seven missing pieces...' he glanced at the Time Stone, which had only just settled. 'The Runes of Regalia have been activated! Dear god..we're all doomed!'



The rabbit army was fighting desparetally to hold on. They hadn't even reached Devan's main forces yet. The D-Cannon, Gargantuans and his footsoldiers had already taken a huge toll on the army.

'Fall back! Everyone take cover! Spaz, is my family okay?'

Spaz finished talking on the comm. 'Lori and Dr Jones said they're all okay. The ship got away.'

'Good. We're fighting a losing battle here, and even if we don't win, we'll at least take some of them with us. CHAAAAAARRGEE!!!!!!'



'Looks as if we're safe.' Lori looked anxiously on as Dr Jones piloted the ship. Eva was huddled in the cabins with her kids.

'Looks as if we're clear. Nothing on radar.' Jones checked his controls then fastened his safety harness. 'We're clear to go! I'm lowering shields so we can make a jump for the nearst system. Engaged...'

The shuttle's engines glowed and the ship sped up. Unknown to them, a large bolt of green plasma was speeding towards he shuttle.



'Haha!' Admiral Nova Shell watched from his viewpost on the bridge. 'Do they think their primitive scanners can detect our ship! Fat chance. Fire the pulsar blaster!' He watched with a sick, twisted smile on his face as a green bolt shot towards the unshielded shuttle. The bolt connected with the engine just as the shuttle entered lightspeed. Time seemed to warp around the exploding ship as it sped through a collapsing wormhole, disintergrating.



To be continued...
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Doomed? We're all gonna die again!?!? I swear, this is getting redundant. Oh well. Nice chapter, or whatever the standard compliment is.
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yay im in it, im in it!!!!!!! MMMM reference to titans and gargantuans, just like in Renegde



Loving it already. Defalcon you're definitely in mine!!!!



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Okay, here comes Chapter 3. So far, the shuttle containing the royal family has been blasted into nothing, defalcon and Kazooie are underneat a crushed tavern, Rumbo is freaking out and the rabbits are losing a fight. Ready? Lets go!



CHAPTER 3

'Worlds will weep and time itself shall cry, as demons of all begin to surface.'

-The Book of Time



Jazz fired a bolt of energy up at one of Devan's five Gargantuans. It stabbed through the breastplate of the monstrous beast and did little more than aggravate it.

'HUURRR!!!!' The titanic creature shook its head savagely, its brown fur smouldering. It picked up the nearest rabbit and threw it into it's mouth. In s scream of agony, the rabbit's bones were crushed in a mass of sinew and flesh. Jazz looked away, then diverted his attention towards Spaz. He had launched himself from the top of a building towards a platoon of soldiers.

'Spaz! No!'

The platoon opened fire. Spaz was hit and hurtled down into the troop of turtles. Spaz thrashed and fired his blaster, whirling a dagger through them. But he was outnumbered. In a final act of desparation, Spaz activated a plasma bomb on his belt. The timer went off and Spaz, along with the turtles, vanished in an explosion of shrapnel and fire.

'Noooooo!' Jazz hurtled through the streets gunning down everything in his way. he arrived at the site of the explosion but all he could find was a scortched, green blaster.



Dr Jones opened his eyes. He was in a strange land of swirling mist. He recognised it; he knew what it was thanks to Rumbo. It was TIME. But not TIME as Rumbo had described it. The sky was a firey red and black, with lightning raining down all over the landscape. Warps and portals were opening and closing at random, the place looked destroyed. Jones pondered over this. WHat had happened here, and what had happened to Eva and Lori? Jones was interuptted and found himself face to face with someone. Someone who had all the answers.



Rumbo screamed in pain, a pain that he had never felt before. It seemed as if his mind and body were simultaneously being torn apart. Something was wrong with TIME, something was definetly wrong. Still connected to TIME, Rumbo could tell this. But what had happened he did not know. But with these crippling spasms wracking his body with pain, he was in no condition to find out.



defalcon crawled out from underneath the ruins of the tavern and dragged Kazooie out with him. While the red bird regained consiousness, defalcon surveyed the scene. The turtles had passed the tavern and were heading deeper into the city. THis meant they could attack from behind. defalcon felt his adrenaline start up and unsheathed his golden swords.

'defalcon, I think it's best if we attack with the element of surprise. You know, if we storm screaming up the streets, they MIGHT ust notice us, don't you think?'

'Whoops. Sorry Kaz.' defalcon placed the swords back in their scabbards and unholstered his blaster. 'Stealth it is. Come on, we better move.'

defalcon and Kazooie sped up the street after the advancing army of armoured menaces.



SWIPE! Devan's mechanical claw beheaded a rabbit warrior and his other gripped a rabbit by the neck like a vice. He was now off his battle barge and was mowing down the rabbits without breaking a sweat. He watched , pleased at his titan's work. They had destroyed half the city with ease, and the rabbits had nothing in their arsenal powerful enough to top them.

WHAM! A blaster bolt hammered the back of his head and sent him sprawling into to ground.

'That is some blaster,' Devan thought, pulling himself up. 'Even Jazz himself hasn't got a blaster that powerful.' He turned around and found him face to face with a large red bird and a sky blue rabbit.

'Hello Devan,' the rabbit spoke. 'I'm defalcon. This is my blaster, I believe you just met him.

'Mock me, will you you filthy rabbit! Eat this!' Devans claw retracted and in it's place was a modified plasma/D-Cannon hybrid. He fired a beam of blue energy. defalcon twisted a knob on his blaster and fired a counter beam that cancelled out Devan's.

Devan was agravated. 'Fool! I'll just turn up the power!' The cannon on his arm started to glow with an intense heat.

'Stupid turtle. That thing takes so long to charge up when at max power we can walk out of the way.' Kazooie stood there mocking him, then raised his blaster and squeezed the trigger. Devan's breastplate was hammered by a barrage of plasma. Then he realised what he had done. In an attempt to lessen the blow of the blaster bolts, he had clenched his fists shut. In doing so, he had pulled the trigger on his mini-cannon which was now fully charged. Devan's gun blew a small crater into the ground. His battle barge had absorbed some of the blast and was now teeter-tottering at the edge of the crater.

'Phew, it didn't crash.' Devan sighed with relief. Then he realised how wrong he was.



defalcon and Kazooie jumped aboard the barge. Kazooie used his blasters to blow away the gunners, and defalcon stormed the bridge, slaughtering he crew with his twin blades.

'Ready, defalcon?' Kaz was poised at the control panel.

'Ready, Kaz. Right then. Masenko-HA!!!!!'

defalcon blew a hole in the bridge as Kazooie hit the accelerate button. As the ship ripped down the crater, Kazooie and defalcon flew out of the way, leaving Devan to deal with the out of control barge heading straight for him.



To be continued...
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What do you guys think so far? THis is my first story, so go easy on me.
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Hold on folks! Chapter 4 coming soon! (I'm assuming there are people who read it, of course, )
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Oh its cool. Are you taking joiners? I have to get off like instantly so if your aren't here is the profile anyway..its not me, is THAT okay?



Name, Avin Moss

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Appearance: Black hair, short, in his eyes. White fur, dark grey eyes. Leather coat.

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Very Cool! Just one quick question..can i be in it? Tell me before i rewrite me profile
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Me too! I want in! (no I will not say the P-word.) (alright maybe I will.) P-p-please?
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Not me, I'd probably die. But good work.
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I'm getting a few profiles, etc, except some won't appear until later. Is that okay?
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Sorry, Chapter 4 will take a bit longer as I was about to post it when something screwed up. I lost the chapter, so wait till later. Sorry.
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I agree with Coppertop...hurry! TIME cannot wait forever



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I want to see if Spaz is alive or not. And if he isn't, if the others will die. 'n stuff.
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Okay, sorry I took so long! Chapter 4!



CHAPTER 4

'Status report.' Bilsy paced around on the bridge of his ship, the Vengeance. He looked at his twisted, mutated hand and recalled how he had come to be like this. The rabbits had blown him apart, his atoms flying in different directions. But the large amounts of heat had refused part of his body. He was a living mess and it had taken the best cybernetic enhancements just for him to be able to walk again.

'Reconstruction is nearly complete. We have had a chance to test out the new cybertronics on lord Devan's body. It is unfortunate that he suffer such an accident not long after being placed in his new body. However, he is alive and well. It will take a full 48 hours for him to completely recover use of the cybertronics.'

'Very good. Very good indeed...'



'Uh...where am I?' Jazz awoke, his head in a bandage and his body in a large cast. His head was pounding. He felt like passing out, and just before he did he was sure he had seen the somewhat distorted face of a familiar, red rabbit...



'Okay TIME! What's the deal?' Rumbo stormed through a portal, carrying a small pack of painkillers. 'I know somethings wrong. Spill it now.'

'It is the runes of time, Rumbo. The seven runes of Regalia...' Time's voice echoed around him.

'I know that. They were mentioned in the Book of Time. The, ahem, well you know. The MAIN Chapters. So what does it mean?'

'What does it mean? Have you completed reading? Surely you know what those chapters tell of. The prophecy...the end of the world...' Time's voice seemed distant and grave.

'What? There's no way! Those chapters can't be true! If not...then we're...'

'We're...?'

'Well Time, we're screwed.' Rumbo thought for a moment. Then it came to him. He had to find Talec.

'Good luck Rumbo. I have a confused Doctor to deal with...' Time's voice echoed in the distance before fading out completely.



'Wha?' Jazz awoke fully. he sat up and yelled out. A motely assortment of battle-scarred rabbits came running to his aid. Some were new faces, young yet scarred. Others seemed familiar, yet...older...

'Yes Jazz?' Jazz twisted his head as far as his neckbrace would let him. Yes, he knew who it was. Spaz. But not the Spaz he knew; it was an different Spaz. As old as him, if not older. Scars ran along his arms, and a large scar ran across his face. He was dressed in rough, worn leather and carried not his old blaster, but a sleek, black pistol.

'Where am I? What happened? I thought you were-'

'Dead?' Spaz spoke. His voice was not the comical high-pitched voice he knew, it was deeper and more rasping. 'Oh yes, I was dead Jazz. But that was in another time. All will be explained. First you must rest.' Spaz turned and walked out of the room leaving Jazz to recover from his injuries.





What has happened to Jazz? Is he dreaming? What has Rumbo so spooked? And why does he need Talec? Stay tuned!
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YaY! I'm up so early so I can reply early! Interesting chapter!
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Yay Im working with Talec again



Cool im supposed to be Rumbo and I have no idea what this Rumbo is on about



Good story so far my man.....
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As you are only SUPPOSED to be Rumbo, of course not. Nice story.
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Hehe! Yay, me be confusing people! That's my aim for now.
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Rumbo still thinks he's Rumbo? Eeh.

Oh well, not too big a problem.Niiiiiiice chapter. PLease, continue

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Ive confused people more, defalcon, believe me, read Renegade (which I kow you are already).



Yes Ducky, I, Rumbo Rabbit, still think I am Rumbo Rabbit, which coincidentally me!



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Thanks Coppertop. Here comes Chapter 5!



CHAPTER 5

'Two small fighters coming up from the surface of the planet! They're of Jackrabbit design!' A lizard in a black jumpsuit pushed some buttons on his control panel. 'And they're heading on a hyperspace vector. They'll be clear in a few minutes! Your 'orders sir?' The lizard turned his head towards the commander, Admiral Nove Shell.

'Shoot them down, liutenant. Shoot them down.'



'Switching to lateral stabilisers! We are on an exit vector out of this system!' Kazooie flipped some switches and plotted a course into his computer. After disposing of Devan's battle barge, defalcon and Kazooie had rushed to the spaceport and escaped with two A-Class Intercept Fighters.

'Jump course locked in. Are we clear?' defalcon nudged his flight-stick, causing his ship to enter into a lazy barrel roll.

'We should be. Checking sensors...all clear. Once we're unobstructed by any gravitational forces we'll jump.' Kaz locked himself into his seat and prepared to jump into hyperspace.

'Okay then. On my mark. Three...two...one...'

WHAM! The twin fighters had begun to accelerate when they were slammed back into real space.

'Ack! What in the suns of Carrotus?!' defalcon swore before checking his computer. 'They've got a gravity well set up. We can't jump system until we get clear!'

'Easier said than done. We've got a flight of superiority fighters incoming. Coordinates 056 mark 278. Not to mention a system dominator!' Kazooie's eyes drifted towards the large turtle warship.

'Kaz! We've got a full wing of fighters coming in! A full wing!'

'Six squadrons! SIX SQUADRONS! 72 fighters!' Kazooie's mouth went dry. There was no way in ****they were going to survive without a miracle.



'Ugh! My back!' A scortched, battered, bruised and heavily bleeding Spaz pulled himself out of a pile of rubble. After detonating his plasma grenades, the blast had thrown him though some buildings. He pulled himself out just in time to see Jazz being pulled through a warp. Warps were opening everywhere, sucking in everything in their pull. Out of some warps came strange, monsterous creatures.

'Ulp! Looks like I'm by myself.' He reached for his blaster and found his holster was empty. Wiping the torrent of blood pouring from his forehead, he retreated to the saftey of a burnt out tank shell and waited.



Rumbo was thrown out of the air and landed with a crash in the middle of a forrest. He picked himself up but nearly collapsed again. Pain wracked his head and a trickle of blood dripped from his nose.

'The runes...not again...they used the runes again...Talec...' Rumbo collapsed. A strange rabbit in a cloak walked up to his unconsious body and flew off with it.



Well, it's a relatively boring chapter. Sorry guys, I got a little writers block. But don't worry, its clearing up.
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Jul 13, 2001, 08:44 AM
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.................................................. ................................................I collapsed......................................... .................................................N ICE!



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'With his father dead and his life as confusing as TIME itself, he stood independantly with his blaster and sword by his side. He was going to save the world, no doubt about it...'
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Hehe! Chapter 6 is coming soon. Stay tuned.
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Okiedays! The story continues. Here ya are. Oh and I will take a few joiners for now. Coppertop, Axman, Tha Psycho and Ducky. You guys wanna be in it? I'll need your profiles if you do.



CHAPTER 6

'Fold eggs into mixture and beat until light and fluffy.' - The Book of Time, Homecooking Chapter



'Ack! Evil, disgusting things! Heeeelllp!' Spaz screamed as he ran through the war-torn streets of Carrotus towards the spaceport. THe battle was lost and the turtles were bringing in more forces through time-warps. But along with these warps were uncontrolled portals from which strange demon-like creatures poured forth.

'Man, I wish I had a gun. I'm more helpless than...well, something helpless!' The distressed Spaz sped along the road until he ran straight into a tank. Spaz looked up at the large barrel which swung towards him. and gulped. The turtles inside would show no mercy.

'Are you friend or foe?' The hatch opened and a pair of rabbit ears poked out of the hatch as the tank pilot stared down at Spaz.

'A rabbit? Boy, am I glad to see you.'



'Ugh. Where am I?' Rumbo awoke in a small wooden hut. He stared out the window and found he was deep in a dark forest.

'Greetings Rumbo. You collapsed, I believe?' The hooded rabbit strode towards the bed and took a seat. Rumbo could not make out his face under the cloak, but the voice seemed strangely familiar.

'I did, yes. But I don't know why. If I may ask you a question?' Rumbo stared at the cloaked figure. His posture was oddly familiar as well.

'Yes you may, Rumbo. Ask what you wish.'

'Okay. Here's my question: Where in the world am I?'

'You Rumbo, are in my home.'

'I thought that much was obvious. I meant whereabouts? I don't remember this patch of woods before.'

'No. Nor do I, at least until the time warps started opening. Then, the forest appeared.'

RUmbo's jaw dropped and he gaped for air. 'You mean this forest just appeared out of nowhere around your house?'

'Yes Rumbo. It did.'



'Look at the small insects. They don't stand a chance. There's no way in all the trees of Diamondus that two fighters could take on a full wing of ours. Pity they're too nimble for our main eapons to target, though. Otherwise I'd take great pleasure in personally blasting them out of the sky.' Admiral Nova Shell clenched his fists with anticipation. Soon they would be his.



'Oh jeez! One of the squadrons is on an inbound vector towards my ship! Switching to evasive manuvers, pattern Alpha5B.' defalcon threw his craft into a series of manuvers that cause opposing fire to pitch wide of his craft.

'There's too many! We can't dodge forever!' Kazooie did likewise. An azure blast of emerald green energy sizzled against his aft shield. Kazooie turned his head to see a barrage of laser bolts hammer defalcons craft.

'Argh! I'm hit! My shields have collapsed! Fire in engine 2! My remaining engine is leaking coolant!' defalcon's voice crackled urgently over the comm. Kazooie sterred his craft towards defalcon's trying to aid him, but found his path was blocked by a swarm of angry fighters.



Again, this chapter is rather short. I'll try to make the next ones longer. Unfortunately, as of next week ou'll only get about 1-3 chapters a week due to school.
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*Scared of Defalcon's genius*
 

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