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My first battle level: Flat battle

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Jan 15, 2006, 03:31 AM
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Lightbulb My first battle level: Flat battle

Its maby lame, but hey this is my first battle level !

http://www3.webbyen.dk/hentfil.asp?hentfil=194930

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Jan 15, 2006, 03:56 AM
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This level is quite ugly.

The sky needs to be fixed and no level should be flat. Levels should have all sorts of different types of land. It should also have a wall around the level. It makes it look better. It also needs music and maybe even a few more text signs saying who it's by. Oh and you should change the name because I said that you should have all sorts of different types of land, and that would mean it is no longer a flat battle. Try to think of a more original name. Try put this stuff into your level.
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Originally Posted by ßlõöðråbbït
This level is quite ugly.
And you're so oblique
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Well, I agree with everything Bloodrabbit said. But there's still some strategy involved, on the other hand, because you cannot collect any more ammo after you've left the starting room. I'd give this a 1.2. And do feel free to copy from better levels because you will see, first-hand, how they work. Just don't ever submit another person's level, ever.
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