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Jul 26, 2001, 09:31 AM
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Chapter 1

Parents' Death

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Hello. I am Wazz Wackrabbit.

This is my history... It was been few years ago... about 3..

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Yet another cool day in my house. I was in my room, doing a

plan for my blaster. A blue color - very similar to one of legendary saver

of all universe. Of Jazz Jackrabbit.



I am similar to Jazz - since my Mom was Jackrabbit.

I got blue fur, and red handsleeves.



Wazz: Nah. It'll be RED, otherwise...

I grabbed it and melted. Then I aimed on the trash.

BANG. The project landed in trash. I started new, and then I heard few blasts.

After looking out the window, I saw a big turtle with oversize specs.

Devan Shell.

Wazz: DAAANGEEER!!!!

Mom: Wha?

Wazz: They - want - Devan - group - YOU --

Then Devan Shell entered the house.

He aimed a blaster on my father.

Wazz: DEVAN! You WON'T get my dad!!

Devan: Shut up kid or I'll take you too!

I ran to my room and taken my blaster. It's simple, one similar to Spaz's.

Then I aimed at Devan Shell. BAANG.

It hit Devan hard. But he just threw a bomb.

BOOOOM. I hurried out of my house, crying,

and watched my house fall over... then Devan unstopabbly rushed off with my Mom, leaving Father almost dead.

I walked up to Dad.

Wazz: You... alive...?

Dad: Almost dead.. Take.. my.. blaster...

Dad handed me new blaster. Identical to Jazz's, but red.

Dad: Take good care of it...

And then Dad died.

A loud cry issued trough the forest as Dad did die...



Chapter 2

Carrotus Castle and First Meet Of Lori

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I finnaly got to Carrotus Castle...

As I stood under it crying "I'M LOOKING FOR HOME, LET ME IN!!!",

I felt a aurora. Somebunny was stepping to balcony. And then doors opened.

It was Jazz Jackrabbit.

Jazz: Hey, kid! Looking for home?

Wazz: Yea! Lemme in, PLEASE!

Then Jazz walked off. Doors opened - Jazz stood in them again.

Jazz: Come in! Many rabbits came here searching for home-- You got a blaster?

Wazz: Yes, my dad's.

Jazz: Oh. C'mon then.

I walked in with Jazz, who lead me to my new sleeping room.

Jazz: Here's your room, kid. Oh, by the way.. Your name?

Wazz: Wazz Wackrabbit.

Jazz: I know Wackrabbits! Your my cousin! Nice to meet ya!

Jazz walked off, leaving doors shut. I sat in my bed, feeling that someone watches me...

I looked around the room and saw a rabbit who make me jump off the fur.

A yellow rabbit, in pink T-shirt and shorts.

Wazz: L-Lori J-Jackrabbit!??

Lori: Yeah.

Wazz: Yowza...

I slightly smiled/blushed.

Wazz: You've been with Jazz Jackrabbit from some time...

Lori: Yes.. And you are Wazz?

Wazz: Uhuh.

Lori: I see.

I prepared my bed, walked into the dressing chamber and put on my pyjama.

Then I got up to bed, and laid on it, falling asleep. A bad day it was.. I'll

remember it long...



TO BE CONTINUED
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Jul 26, 2001, 09:53 AM
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Lori is with doc jones
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Jul 26, 2001, 01:13 PM
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Anywayz, nicely done
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Jul 26, 2001, 02:24 PM
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and if jazz is your cousin. And Lori is Jazz's sister then she is your cousin to.

but go on, nice story so far
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Jul 26, 2001, 10:42 PM
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Heheheh...

Thanks. I'm gonna continue next two chapters after I'm back from cottage for a short time.

And yes, SlAyEr, if Jazz's my cousin, then Lori and Spaz's too.
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Jul 26, 2001, 10:46 PM
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Quote:

On , SlaYer wrote:

Lori is with doc jones




-_o I saw it.

(I was spying on her 19th birthday--)

*notices someone yellow aim on him and jumps off his fur* AAAAAAH NOT LORIiiii.... *runs*

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Jul 27, 2001, 02:32 AM
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Chapter 3

Wazz's New Air Board

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Another silent day in Carrotus Castle.

Wazz was reading a book named "History of Carrotus System". "Interesting..." he said.

"Interesting-- what?" Jazz's voice said,

making Wazz jump outta his fur.

"DONCHA DARE SCARE ME LIKE THAT!!!" Wazz shrieked. "Oops, sorry kid. Found a legend or?" asked Jazz. "Nah" Wazz said. "Just history of Tubelectric."

"I see. By the way, you want a new Air Board?" asked Jazz.

"Air What??"

"Air Board," repeated Jazz, leading Wazz somewhere. He opened a doors.

3 boards stood here. One was yellow-blue, one - pink ("*Lori's,*" thought Wazz) and one

oddly red. Jazz picked the yellow-blue one. He jumped on it and flied off somewhere.

Later, he held another in his hand. A blue board. "Tis' yours." Jazz handed the airboard to Wazz. He jumped on it and flew

two rounds in the air. "YAY! Thanks Jazz!"

he moaned. Then he jumped off the board and stored it in the room where Jazz hold Jackrabbits' airboards. Jazz also stored here his airboard and shut the doors down.

Wazz and Jazz walked off to dining chamber to eat some dinner.



Chapter 4

Spaz's Welcome ; Wazz Won't Roast Her!

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At dinner, Wazz sat between Lori and a red, skinny rabbit. He looked quite insane.

"Who're you?" Wazz asked. "Spaz," said the rabbit. "And you?" "Wazz Wackrabbit. Your cousin. And Jazz's and Lori's." Wazz grinned.

Then he turned to eat his carrot pudding.

As they finished, Jazz got up. "Who gonna train?" "ME!!!" said both Spaz, I and Lori.

Jazz said "Okay. You" - he pointed at Wazz - "got Lori as partner to fight. 10 roasts."

"HER???" Wazz shrieked. "Gosh.." Wazz's eartips went red. "SHE'S only my COUSIN, eartips!" Everyone laughed.



Wazz stepped into the hall, taking a place with Lori to fight.

Jazz picked another stadium to fight on with Spaz. "START!" roared Jazz. Then he fought Spaz... But Wazz sat here holding his Blaster. "Lori.."

"What's wrong?" asked Lori, looking worried.

"No... I am loyal. I won't fight ladys.." "Oh c'mon Wazz! It's just a training!" Lori said. "Okay.." said Wazz. "I'll let ya roast me. This loyality for my cousin. Lady cousin." . Then Lori opened fire. After a while, it was 10th roast made by her. "Lori won!" said Jazz.



TO BE CONTINUED...

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I got more ideas for this comeup today. So I posted 2 new chapters. Enjoy!

[edit] My BIG mistake.

On end of Chapter 3 Jazz and Wazz gone off to dinner..

Later I wrote "At the breakfast". Darn me. It's now corrected.



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Jul 27, 2001, 07:43 AM
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Fresh idea
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Jul 27, 2001, 07:57 AM
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Frrrrrrrrresh.

My mind is fast - so I quickly get new ideas!
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"Mrph..Is that you pie?" ~BM
"No, silly. It's me. Woman of your dreams." ~WM
"A woman made entirely out of pie?" ~BM (This is from FF1 8-Bit Theatre comic)



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Aug 6, 2001, 08:54 AM
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Chapter 5

Walking Away: Jackrabbits' Picnic!

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Wazz was walking along a corridor.

He felt something watching him.

It's gettin' unbearable... he thought.

He took out a blue Pokedex-alike (hope someone watches Pokemon here...) machine and opened it. "Search for someone on base of his/her blaster," barked Wazz, getting kinda angry. [Lori Jackrabbit] flashed on screen of Wazz's Dexter. "GAAAAAAAAAAH," roared Wazz, "LORI! COME OUT!" And Lori came out of another corridor. "I want reasons for spyin' me along whole Carrotus Castle." barked Wazz.

"Eeeer..." Lori started thinking. "Oh, nevermind. Gonna go with us for a Walking Away?" "What!?" asked Wazz, being confused. "Picnic." Lori winked. Wazz's ears splitted. It would be brilliant thing, goin' along with Jackrabbits, Wazz thought. "Yeah! Lezzgo!" Wazz then zoomed to his room, Lori trying to get up with him. "YOU WOULD MIND GOING SLOWER!!" roared Lori. But Wazz went faster. Lori stopped, a screech came from her legs. "Gaaah," she moaned, red of anger. "I had, I HAD to spy him...."



Wazz was packing his food, humming under his nose. His pack was finnally ready. He grabbed it and zoomed to find Jazz, using his Dexter. As he opened it and watched map, he saw Jazz rushing towards his room. BAAANG!!! He crashed into a green rabbit with red headband, and a blue blaster. "Jazz, watch out next time." Wazz grinned. "Wha? Hit ya? Aaah, sorry.." Jazz moaned. "Never mind. So ya ready for da picnic?" said Wazz. "How did ya know?" Jazz looked confused. Then Lori appeared, worried. "I've.. told.. him.. as.. he.. found.. me.." gasped Lori. Wazz suddenly went red. "Lover boy," laughed Jazz. "LOVER WHAAAT??" roared both Lori and Wazz, slamming Jazz with their blasters. "It was ONLY anger!" roared Wazz. "Sorry," muttered Jazz. They three looked at themselves. Wazz run off to get Spaz.



"Spaz!" roared Wazz as he saw Spaz roasting a bird to pack to his picnic set. "I'm getting my picnic food! Bang! Hyaaah!" groaned Spaz. "Right, what Jazz told me," barked Wazz. "You're completely insane. We're going now." Wazz grabbed Spaz by arm.



CHAPTER TO BE CONTINUED...
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"Stupid Fighter.. must destroy..
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"Hellooooo Black Mage!" ~White Mage
"Mrph..Is that you pie?" ~BM
"No, silly. It's me. Woman of your dreams." ~WM
"A woman made entirely out of pie?" ~BM (This is from FF1 8-Bit Theatre comic)



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Aug 7, 2001, 10:20 PM
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Continuing from...



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Chapter 4

Walking Away: Jackrabbits' Picnic!

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Jazz and co. followed to the exit, holding their foodpacks. Wazz, our hero, took lots of carrot pudding, the same juice and 2 real carrots. "Wait... Who took blasters?" asked Wazz. Jazz and Spaz shrugged. Lori... took out her blaster. "Jazz, Spaz," said Wazz and opened his palms. BZIIING. Jazz's and Spaz's blasters apppeared on Wazz's hands. Brothers took their blasters. "Naturally, I got mine," muttered Wazz. He felt like they're gonna fight some Devan's goons.. turtles, obviously. As the gang walked out of castle, Jazz said "So where do we go?". "I'd purpose forest," said Spaz. "Some extra birds to get." "SPAZ!!!" roared Jazz, Lori and Wazz. "I'd purpose Streetwize," said Lori. "Nice atmosphere." "Me too," said Wazz, nodding.

"Ok," said Jazz. "Streetwize." Then they all warped. As they landed in Streetwize, they heard odd noises. A turtle was walking patrolling a shop. "Supposedly a masked hideout of Devan," said Wazz.

He blasted the turtle down.

"WHAT THE HECK YOU DOING TO MY PET!" roared a woman from doors of the shop the turtle patrolled. "Ooops....." murmured Wazz. BANG.

Someone banged him with a blaster. "YEEEOOOOOWWWWWW! Lori!" Wazz roared. He turned over. Yes. Lori was standing here with Jazz. "Make sure if it is a PET or a NORMAL guard next time," said Jazz and Lori at once. "Ok, ok," growled Wazz and took out a carrot. He started eating it. "Whew," he muttered. Suddenly, he heard a blast. "YEOOW!" roared Jazz in agony. After a while, Spaz meowed with pain. "YEOWCH!" cried Lori. "WHOA!" roared Wazz, dodging a blast. and getting his carrot

blasted off. "What is THAT!?" growled the gang at once. Lots of bigger turtles stood before them, with Blasters. Wazz gulped.

"REVENGE FOR MY DAD AND MOM, SCHWARTZENGUARDS!!!!" he cried and opened fire from his RF Missiles. BAAAAM... The Schwartzenguards were gone.

"VICTORYYYY!!!" roared Wazz in happines. "Gratulations!," growled Wazz, smiling. Lori repeated it, so did Spaz.

Wazz blowed smoke from his blaster.



Chapter TO BE CONTINUED




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"Stupid Fighter.. must destroy..
evil is good...mmm, pie." ~Black Mage.
"Hellooooo Black Mage!" ~White Mage
"Mrph..Is that you pie?" ~BM
"No, silly. It's me. Woman of your dreams." ~WM
"A woman made entirely out of pie?" ~BM (This is from FF1 8-Bit Theatre comic)



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Sep 4, 2001, 08:42 AM
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CONTINUED..



Suddenly Wazz heard steps.

"Ooops..." He gulped.

Jackrabbits gulped too.

Devan and his Army, leaden by Schwartzenguard, came along. Wazz went angry. His eyes glowed red.

WHIZZZZ!!! Wazz launched Seekers. After a while, LOTS of shells laid on ground... Only Schwartzenguard left. "GROARR!" the guard roared. He swinged his Spike Boll and threw it. Wazz felt intense pain. "YEOWWW!" he cried. WHIZZZZZ! He blasted more seekers. Schwartzenguard is a toast.



Devan stepped aside. "All my army is defeated..." he murmured.



===Devan

VS

Wazz====



"It's for my Mum!" cried Wazz. "I challenge you!" Wazz grabbed his blaster and crouched.

PTEW PTEW! He shot at Devan with his blaster.

Devan took his electrolaser and shot Wazz.

"YEOWWW!" Wazz screamed with pain again. "GRRR!" Wazz suddenly sped at Devan in air. He pointed his fist on Devan's slimy beak. *BAAAANG!!!* Devan laid on floor, Wazz

punching him. POOF! Devan's left arm went muscular. *POOFFF!!* Instead of Devan, there was a green dragon with a small hole on belly. It had big muscules, long tail and wings.



Devan Dragon====

VS

====Wazz Wackrabbit



Wazz laid flat, fist pointing at Dragon in air. WHIZZ! Wazz shot into air, hitting Devan in stomach. Dragon breathed fire instead of a loud OOF. Wazz used helicopter ears to keep up in air, punching Dragon. *POOF*



===Wazz won===



Devan laid here, shocked. *WHIZ!* He disappeared. "WOW!!" Jazz, Spaz and Lori stood here shocked. "Yer great," said Jazz.

"I see," murmured Wazz. "My mission is to get Medivo Gem, then." "???" Jazz, Spaz and Lori moaned.



====THE END====



Stay Tuned! "Medivo Gem Mission" coming soon!
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RuxOr. . .



I keep wanting to say "Wackwabbit." Isn't that wierd?
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Wow, simple, short, a bit explanitory on inferences... but non the less an overall good story.
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Sep 5, 2001, 04:22 AM
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Thanks! But it's not The End!



Still collecting ideas for my Gem Mission.

But stay tuned... I'm not givin' up!
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"Stupid Fighter.. must destroy..
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"Hellooooo Black Mage!" ~White Mage
"Mrph..Is that you pie?" ~BM
"No, silly. It's me. Woman of your dreams." ~WM
"A woman made entirely out of pie?" ~BM (This is from FF1 8-Bit Theatre comic)



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