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Just a Little Something

just recently got myself a Side7 account, so have loaded the one picture i have scanned onto this machine of mine,,

http://www.side7.com/cgi-bin/S7SDB/D....pl?INO=243407

am ready to be flamed!! *endurance pose; eyes shut*
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Oh boy, flaming! I live for this. I'll make it as nice as possible.

Well, first of all, the face (and the whole thing in general) seems kind of flat and 2D. The right knee is too far forward, and the left leg is too tube shaped. The arms look alright, though. I'd recomend using some form of planing sketch (like breaking it down into basic shapes) to get your dimentions and proportions right. I have a sketch I did of a rabbit somewhere... I'll post it when I find it (everything on my hard drive is kind of stored in one folder).
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<i>"This picture shows me that the gray bird man is just a bully and picks on smaller birds. Just because he has no friends and takes it out on others smaller than him to look good. I can see in the parrats eyes that it does however have a understanding of the gray bird man and is upset about getting cut."</i> - Speeza on cartoon birds.
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Plain, simple, I love it. :D
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YAY!!!!!!
YOU CAN DO IT,RADIUM,YOU REALLY CAN!

Well,I like it!^^
Of course it's 3D and maybe the proportions aren't exactly master-pieces,but it shows potential!^^

And it's pretty cute!
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Must... flame....


YOU SUCK! YOU ALL SUCK! BWAHAHAHHAHA!

*pant* *pant* Okay, I feel better now.
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oh i knew id get some sort of criticism for that one,, just note that it was done last summer (when i was first experimenting with furry-style), and i have improved,, will scan some more when i have the chance to,, JUST TO MAKE RADIUM FEEL BETTER,,
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Don't be hurt if I flame it, it's just my nature.
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didnt say i was "hurt", just telling yous' that this pic is a little out of date for my current skillz,, :P

and, seeing as im a "noob" to this side of the forums, i decided to stick something up here for now,,
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I understand, but remember that you only get one shot at first impressions =P.
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i've never drawn a half-good picture in my whole life, fireball. that one's a masterpiece compared to mine.

well, actually i had one with kirby standing on jazz's head, but i lost it... dad-burnit...
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I understand, but remember that you only get one shot at first impressions =P.
So you need to know how to draw to impress those who would comment on your skill and help you improve your drawing?
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practise is all i need to improve myself,, dont really take orders (advice) well into it,, heh
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practise is all i need to improve myself,, dont really take orders (advice) well into it,, heh
I'd advise taking advice (I know that sounds odd). There's no sense figuring something out for yourself when someone else already knows it and is willing to share.

And you need to "practise" your spelling =P.
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"And you need to "practise" your spelling =P."

No, actually, Practise and Practice are both correct spelling.

The good thing about the picture is that its simple. But like Radium said, construction is worth a shot, just to get proportions and all the like correct first. But of course, we haven't seen your latest art. Hurry!
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I'd advise taking advice (I know that sounds odd). There's no sense figuring something out for yourself when someone else already knows it and is willing to share.
but thats the way i work! ,, i LIKE figuring things out for myself, that way i know it works for sure,,

and will post some of my newer stuff soon,, after exams!!
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Don't take advice ;p...

That sounds oxymoronic, but okay.

=\, I find it tough to draw out sketches of shapes resembling the final product.
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