Okay so here's another story,my island which is HUGE falls on Carrotus almost destroying it so here's the story

Chapter 1:The time you think it's the end of the world

Jazz,Spaz,Lord and the others were happy after destroying Devan's latest invention,The Turbulance Machine (I hope i spelled it right),it's been 6 months since Devan's defeat,the rabbits were having a festival of Devan's final defeat until next month suddenly Master Cheater's island fell on Carrotus destroying half of it,Jazz saw the island and he thought "Wow! How much can a island get big?? It's gigantic!!" and said "Whoever was or made the island must be happy but who?" Jazz said while being curious,Spaz said "Hey,i didn't knew islands this big existed unless,you know who made it" (Warning! Some readers will quit reading this story when the see the other part,Example: Piccolo),"not that man again.....didn't he help us enough in The Lost Jazz Adventure 2?",
Lori said "So MC must be the guardian of the Ultimate Emerald and the Sky Island right?","Correct" Jazz said. The heroes came close the island and the island wasn't as big as they expected it was Giant! A collision like that could've destroyed Carrotus not half of it,unless MC made the island a bit non damagable. a red hedgehog with grey long spikes and blue shoes fell out of the island and into the ground and a hedgehog with yellow color,pink spikes,clothes and shadow shoes came out,both hedgehogs,they were Omnius and Klara,Omnius was like a dope while Klara (MC's cousin) was a girl hedgehog and infact she had the super powers of MC,Omnius was MC's friend (Omnius's real name is Vasja,but that is Slovenian call him Omnius).
MC teleported to help Omnius and Klara stand up,Are you two alright?
Omnius: Yeah i'm fine,i'm just fine *rubing his nose*
Klara: No damage only i got a headache
Jazz: MC!!
MC: ACK! Jazz? What are you doing here
Jazz: We live here
MC: (If i ever see Dtsh i am soo gonna beat the crap outta him)
MC: Oh yeah.....eheheheh......*scratches head*
Omnius: Hi Spaz!
Spaz: Who are you?
Omnius: I am Vasja but you can call me Omnius,the girl is Klara,MC's cousin and MC is the semi-powerfull,Ultimate Master Lord of God's
MC: Don't mention it.....I'm very busy making my self not power crazed *snaps fingers*
Jazz: How did the giant island fall?
MC: Dtsh! He made my island fall,but i don't know but i am gonna remember
*flashback in the past 3 months*
MC: Well guarding the Ultimate Emerald is boring but guarding the Sky Island is a bit too big
Dtsh came with a mobile he stole the Ultimate Emerald,a lazer shot him and Dtsh had dropped the fake Ultimate Emerald
Jazz interupting: But why replace it with a fake?
MC: the power of the fake emerald made my island fall on Carrotus,it was clear that after the defeat Devan wanted revenge after he died so he hired Dtsh,but lucky for me i am too powerfull for Dtsh
Lori: Ohh....I see....
Klara: I swear if Doma Sonic defeat's MC again,i am gonna kill him!
Jazz: That's not related to the Jazz stories
MC: Like the one i am creating right now?
Jazz: Umm....Yeah,gezz........

Stay tuned for Chapter 2: Time to think the strategy of destroying

*blinks*
Erm, okay.

Chapter 2: Time to think the strategy of destroying

After the giant island fell from the sky the heroes went to find this Dtsh guy,MC summoned the Streak Reaver (The Soul Reaver and Streak Saber combination) and went to Sky Island,unknown to him it was loaded with enemies each hero has gone in their own way,MC and Klara to the mountains,Omnius and Spaz into Darkness Town,Jazz and Lori went to the sea

The tallest mountains
MC and Klara running at top speeds
MC:Klara,we just have to go straight ahead right
Klara:That's what the navigator says (Dr.Robotnik became a nice guy,on the good side,built the navigator and gave it to Klara),then a blast came out of nowhere,MC fell into the ground but he stoped with his hand but sad for Klara she hit her head onto the ground and landed with her stomach.
MC found a big enemy the size of 20 km's or 40
Klara:Get outta our way tin can!!
The robot made his right hand into a minigun
Robot:It's not gonna be that easy!!
the robot started to shoot MC and Klara but they dodged every bullet and made fun of him,they did all sort of naughty things,until MC spindashed to the robot's head,MC was immobilized for a moment and then when he hit the robot he'd only hurt his knee
Klara grabbed on the robot's face,the robot tryed to punch Klara but Klara dodged before the robot even hit her,so the robot hit his face
MC: LOL!
Klara: ROFLOL
the robot got really angry and started shooting again,but before MC and Klara were shot they dodged the bullets,they hid behind a tree,big enough to cover our heroes.

More to come in Chapter 3: The Final Fight between the robot,MC and Klara

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Chapter 3: The Final Fight between the robot,MC and Klara
MC transported infront of the robots face which it's name was Metal Disruptor,and blasted MD's face with his Shinku Hadoken
MC badly damaged MD's face,MC turned Super,Klara's jaw dropped as she saw that MC can go super,a normal MC is bad but a Super MC is worse (Super triple's everything i ever had,power,speed and others).
MC rips out MD's metal wings,because MC thinks he's the only one who must have deadly wings,MC gave a hard kick on MD,Klara just laid down on the tree MC and Klara were hiding and she watched the fight between MC and MD,MC grabbed MD's hand before it started firing bullets after it transformed into a minigun,and MC threw MD into the biggest mountain which was the water spraying volcano,MC didn't detect MD and he thought he was dead but MD activated a shielding sequence to keep MC from finding MD,MD sneaked up on the victory posing MC and hit him on the head,MC fell to the ground getting really angry,MC turned Hyper,Klara's pupils became small as a dot with her jaw dropped not able to say a word

Meanwhile...... in
The Darkness Town

Spaz was shivering like a scardey cat
Omnius: And i thought i was the only one dumb and scared alot......
Omnius slaps his face with his hand
there were badniks in sight,Omnius prepared his Hyper Cannon (Omnius thought MC about the Hyper Cannon) and fired at the enemies destroying them,Spaz wasn't shivering anymore
Spaz:Somehow....i fell safe with this Omnius guy
Omnius and Spaz were walking down until they saw a red emerald.
Omnius: A Element Emerald! Fire element!
Spaz: How'd you know about this emerald??
Omnius: MC told me about these emeralds,each emerald with color presents each power if it's dark or green it may represent psychotic powers,each Element Emerald has a diffrent Emerald,the dark one has a element of Chaos,it can do Immolation and other dark spells or even self thought or even made up
Spaz: Okay...Whatever...
Spaz: (Element Emeralds eh?)
Omnius: I read that
Spaz: (Dang)
Omnius: and that....
Spaz (Will he stop reading my mind?!?!)
Omnius: Okay
Omnius and Spaz went to search for more Element Emeralds.

Meanwhile again....

The endless sea

Jazz and Lori were in the water searching for anything supicious
Jazz: Found anything yet??
Lori: Hey! Jazz come look at this!
Jazz: What is it?
Lori: Looks like an emerald but not a ordinary emerald
Jazz got out of the water and pulled out a Walkie-Talkie (Don't question me where and how he got that),activated it and said
Jazz: Klara!
Klara: Yes?
Jazz: We found a emerald in the endless sea,better come,see it and tell us what kind of emerald is this
Klara: On my way!
in 40 seconds Klara was on the endless sea on the spot were Jazz and Lori were
Klara: That's the Blue element emerald,a water Element
Lori: What does it do?
Klara: It's control's water,it makes it insane,whirpoles,possibly water tornado's and other things that are possible
Lori,Jazz and Klara got out of the endless sea,Klara grabbed Lori and Jazz's hand and teleported on the spot where MC had already beaten MD,MC picked out a black emerald from the robot's stomach and it was the black element emerald,The Chaos Element
MC: A few are missing,let me check the emerald scanner
MC: Hmmm.......
Red,Blue,Grey,Dark,Green,Brown and the Rainbow emerald
Lori: What's the Rainbow Element Emerald for?
MC: The Rainbow Element Emerald or as i call it the Master Chaos Emerald has all of the Element Emeralds powers,it has all of the element's twogether
Dtsh was just preparing a roboticizor,with the help of the Roboticizor,Devan can live

A message from the author:
The Roboticizor is a special machine,a machine with a green tube preferably,that makes any living creature into a robot,Dtsh used the dead Devan into the roboticizor and Devan became Mecha Devan,Devan was still smart as he was in the past but his strenght tripled,his defence and sensor's,it was clearly known that Devan was half Mecha and half turtle but 3 times faster than his normal self (His dragon form triples his defence,speed,strenght and sensor's again,if Devan would go higher than his Dragon form than Jazz wouldn't even able to stop him!!!!

Stay tuned for Chapter 4: The search for the Element Emeralds and Dtsh

Originally posted by Master Cheater
a normal MC is bad but a Super MC is worse (Super triple's everything i ever had,power,speed and others).

mmm... damage amp...

Hmm...sounds alot like the Angel Island story...

This is more of a mix,between my island colliding on Carrotus,my world meets Jazz's world,my characters plus Jazz's characters
I can't write longer chapters cause i don't have my energy to do it,instead i do short ones.

It seems you're going a little easy on them... 3 emeralds already and one of them is one of the most powerful?

That's the Rainbow Element Emerald,I am already making making MCA 4: The World Desolation 2,but the demo Tgf expired,so i am trying to install it (Tricking it) to work again,it happened but it seems that Tgf improved,i'll try to make it work!! I promise

Chapter 4: The search for the Element Emeralds and Dtsh

Omnius and Spaz were still searching in the Darkness Town,unaware that Devan is back on his feet (A diffrent kind of meaning,like Devan is back in life).
Omnius: Spaz.......what are you doing??
Spaz: Playing on a vine
Omnius: We have more important things to do like fiding Devan and Dtsh
Spaz: No
Omnius: Yes
Spaz: No!
Omnius: Yes!
Spaz: NO!
Omnius: YES!!
Omnius: We're going and that's final!!
Omnius grabs Spaz's hand and teleports
Can't do much sorry! wait for part 2

*waits*

Originally Posted by Coppertop

*waits*

Okay so probably some of you didn't notice i'll mabye post a part of the fanfic each 2,3 or 4 days,cause i have other things to do
See ya

And Admins and Mods,DON'T CLOSE THIS THREAD!!!

They don't close them just because nobody posts, MC. It just sort of ... dies ...

Originally Posted by Coppertop

They don't close them just because nobody posts, MC. It just sort of ... dies ...

Indeed. Kind of like my stories.

*poke poke*

Well, I could stick them up at the top with the character thread, but I doubt that would encourage people to reply.

Originally Posted by Ducky

Well, I could stick them up at the top with the character thread, but I doubt that would encourage people to reply.

That, and it would probably encourage them more to beat me to a bloody pulp with my own arm.

Meh, I'll just threaten futilely to discontinue my stories again, and see how many people actually notice.

I just dont get why nobody reads 4I's stories anymore.

Possibly because they've been going on for a long time? People are more interested in a fresh, new story rather than one that already has 20 chapters. However, that's just my idea. =/

er... *points out that we've been going off topic again*

Originally Posted by acid

I just dont get why nobody reads 4I's stories anymore.

Possibly because they've been going on for a long time? People are more interested in a fresh, new story rather than one that already has 20 chapters. However, that's just my idea. =/

There's one problem with your theory, ace. I had a grand total of six readers during chapters 1 through 4, and that number has steadily declined to one. Meanwhile, Copper's stories (just an example...) has roughly twenty plus readers, not to mention a topic-stalker (Eval) and a rampant page-claiming maniac (Kaz), to their respective names.

I just feel left out, is all.

[QUOTE=4I Falcon]There's one problem with your theory, ace. I had a grand total of six readers during chapters 1 through 4, and that number has steadily declined to one.QUOTE]

Correction: 2. Me and Scatman.

True. I sit corrected.

Chapter 4: The search for the Element Emeralds and Dtsh

Omnius: Okay this Spaz guy is weirder than i thought
Omnius points with his thumb to Spaz who was hanging on a vine.
Spaz: WEEEEEEEEE
Omnius: Get down from there you flippin lunatic!!
Spaz: Nya
Omnius: He asked for it......
Omnius started charging a blast and shot it the place the vine was attached to,Spaz fell down hitting the floor.
Omnius: I told you to get down.........
Spaz: grrrrrr............
Omnius: Ohh.....Bohoho......I am so scared *laughs out loud*
Spaz jumps in the air,and is about to kick Omnius's face.
Spaz: Eat kick hedgehog!!
Omnius: Is that the best you can do!!
Omnius grab's Spaz's leg and throws him into the ground.
Spaz: Ow....
Omnius: heheheh...........
Spaz: Omnius??
Omnius: Yes?
Spaz: Can you make my life suck any more than this??
Omnius: If you insist
the ground started shaking and was falling apart.
Omnius: The Darkness town is collapsing!!
Omnius: QUICK!!! TO THE FOREST!!!!!!
Spaz and Omnius just shot off to the forest leaving dust behind
As they saw,multiple obstacles were in the way.
Omnius saw a rock and jumped away and saw a spiked floor he destroyed it,he dodged,jumped and destroyed bad things very fast,He grabed Spaz's hand and teleported with a sound preforming a loud boom.
Spaz and Omnius teleported to where MC,Klara,Jazz and Lori were talking about the island colliding with Carrotus
Jazz: There is NO way you could've done that spell in a snap
MC: Oh yes i did!! Then how do you explain the beam attack i used on MD?!?!
Lori: Stop arguing you two!!
Klara was still leaning on the wall,this time she was snoring
MC saw Omnius
MC: There you are! What happened? What was that loud boom there?
Omnius: Ohh? That thing? That's when we teleported and Bad News!! Darkness town started falling apart
MC: WHAT?!?!?!?!
Omnius: It wasn't my fault
MC: Dtsh is so gonna regret being born!!!
MC shakes his fist very angry.
MC started to glow black.
There was a bigger boom sound heared from MC.
Despite the fact.................................MC turned Maverick Shin.............O_O;;
AS.......we continue MC turned Maverick Shin,stronger than his Shin form that was stronger than his Hyper form,(I told ya i can go over shin and i can go Ultimate or Unknown if i or you wanted to)
MC: OHH!!!!! WHEN I GET MY HANDS ON DTSH!!!!!
Klara quickly noticed MC going Maverick Shin,She woke up and tried to calm MC,and MC did calm down and got back to his normal form
Klara: What did i told you about going Maverick Shin??
MC: Never do it?
Klara: YES!

Short but wait for part 2

*waitz*

Maybe if you wrote more, 4I, you'd get more responses just a suggestion

Just noticed this.

Originally Posted by Master Cheater

Jazz,Spaz,Lord and the others were happy after destroying Devan's latest invention,The Turbulance Machine (I hope i spelled it right)

Thanks for the semi-cameo, MC (it's spelled Turbulence, btw), but your choice of timeframe invites inquiries. Or something sophisticated along those lines.

The episode of the Turbulence Machine comes between the second and third episodes of JJ2 (at the moment, their names escape me), not after all four episodes, and so Devan's done more devious things since the capture and ensuing forced subordination of the Jackrabbit brothers. The six months idea isn't bad, considering one doesn't exactly know how much time has passed between the destruction of the Turbulence Machine and the destruction of the Time Machine.

But thanks anyway.

CT: I would write more if I had the time, and I wasn't busy obsessing over UT or pestering people on mIRC.

Rar.

Chapter 4 part 2: The search for the Element Emeralds and Dtsh


"Okay so what do we do now?",MC said while being a bit mad,"Don't you understand?" Klara whacks MC on the head "We have to search for the Element Emeralds,Dtsh and Devan,if.....he's still alive,we can kill him them",MC rubs his head "Yeah i remember now,but that's NO reason to whack me on the head",Jazz screames "ARE WE GONNA SEARCH FOR THE EMERALDS AND DTSH OR NOT?!?!?!?!",Omnius said while trying to call Jazz down "There's no need to scream till the end of the world ya know?",".........","Thought so","Okay we're all here and desprate to do something" as MC sighed when he finished,MC also said "Listen Jazz,you don't command me on my island you know",MC looked at the sky and thought to himself *"I am gonna be the ruler of earth one day....."*,Omnius said "Your not gonna rule earth....",MC also thought *"Crap! I forgot that Omnius and Klara can also read minds!"*

In the Turbotechno zone (Cool name eh?)of the inner dimension in Carrotus,there stood a robot with big spikes coming from his shoulders,his Tritanium legs,one small spike on the back of his head,and left red eye,without glasses,and the half of him was the normal Devan that now had also the small spike on the back of his head,the robot was known as the old villian that used to terrorize Carrotus and destroy Jazz,Spaz and Lori,Dtsh was sitting in a chair monitoring the group: MC,Omnius,Klara,Jazz,Spaz and Lori.

Dtsh pressed a button and closed the monitor and pressed another button showing up a soldier that was entirely black and had red eyes,and has spikes in his arms like Dtsh had,had spikes on his shoulders too,his name was Master Campaigner.

"Master Campaigner reporting for duty Dtsh!",Dtsh grinned as the project Master Campaigner was finnaly finished and said "MC2,Go destroy MC!"

PAUSE STORY:
To avoid confusion between MC and the other MC,Master Campaigner is gonna be MC2 while the ORIGINAL MC is Master Cheater (Later to be Lord Cheater).

With that Dtsh flipped a button shuting down the monitor that the soldier was seen through,Dtsh jumped out of his chair and laughed "MWAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!! MC WILL FINNALY BE DESTROYED!!!!!!" as then the scene goes black.

Meanwhile in Planet Zenus........
Darkangel walks around worrying about MC's adventure,"Gezz,that MC,always goes on exciting missions while he says i am too young to go with him",Alexandria heard it and appeares behind DA's back,"Now Darkangel,you know you are too young to go on missions with your dad","But i am 10+ for crying out loud! Aren't i old enough for that age?!","No son,It's after dark now,go to sleep",Darkangel sighed and said "Yes mom..." and with that he walked into his bedroom and got in his bed and started to sleep,Alexandria thought to herself *"MC,please be carefull"* the scene agains goes black.

Meanwhile in the Ruins of the older Carrotus (Not the new one Jazz lives in),a group of people were discovering the site,"Jezus this is boring" said XiV (Dunno the full name of XiV),as another person said revealing that he was a famous discoverer (Famous? How the heck?),and his name was Jetro,"Okay it might be a bit boring,but rumor has it that there might be a new source of power that is hidden in here",as the 46 year old man (Jetro) walked 5 steps forward,he tripped over something and said for XiV to handle him a shovel,Jetro digged on what he tripped on and found what looked like a big green emerald that was glowing.
"XiV come here! Quick!" XiV speeded up to Jetro and saw what must've been or is the emerald,and there was also a rock that showed what was the name of the big emerald.

"The Master Emerald." with that a discovery music came and when it finished XiV,Jetro and the other searchers picked up the big but HEAVY Master Emerald and carried on to Jetro's Museum of fame (Fame? Famous? Museum? oh brother...i don't wanna know.....).

Wait for part 3.

XiV and Jetro were made up characters made by Master Cheater,characters made by MC ask permission before use
(Characters of this story copyright to The Sonic Forever HQ,MC's site)

Sorry,due to new circumstances the story got canned,but don't worry,new one's are on the way