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The heat might have screwed the shields >.>.

Or perhaps an outdated computer Eval might not be able to get in, or if he did it'd really hurt ;p.
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The heat might have screwed the shields >.>.

Or perhaps an outdated computer Eval might not be able to get in, or if he did it'd really hurt ;p.
It could have compatability issues.
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It could have compatability issues.
Indeed. For instance, it could run on WinXP. --;
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Or maybe, because Eval isn't compatible with magic, he got it through a loophole and couldn't find it again.

I wasn't allowed on yesterday, so you get a double part today.

Roughly fifteen minutes later the Assassin and the Lessaria burst out of hyperspace into the Brochant system, home to Sarida and Sardiff. They came out close to Sardiff, and so they could see what Evaluator had gone to "check out".
A large capital ship orbited Sardiff's moon, not precisely huge but not small, either. Copper winced when she saw it.
"Shonar, hang back. There's a chance they haven't seen us. Electrik, what is it?"
"Navari-class, Vertigo. Here to rendezvous with the Conquistar."
"How do you know that?"
"Automatically sending it out on all comm channels."
"So they don't know we're here. Shonar, can you do an advanced search on both Vertigo and Conquistar?"
"Affirmative, Assassin. Hang on a few moments."
"Make it quick, Shonar. Haven't got much time."
"Understood. Here we go. Vertigo, owned by one A.K., commanded by one Shasah Aurych."
"Well, that's useful. What about the Conquistar?"
"Conquistar, owned by A. K. again and commanded by Nasp Rakaro. Mean anything to you?"
"No. What class is the Conquistar?"
"Reminol."
Copper winced. "Not good."
"Copper, 'nother capital on the scopes. It's the Conquistar."
"Great timing. Okay, uh ... pull back behind Sarida."
"Copy, Assassin. Fire Chaser obeying orders."
"Right behind you, Fire Chaser. Scorecard will cover you."
"Copper, incoming comm message."
"Oh, that's real good. All right, let's hear it."
"Coppertop, it's Evaluator."
"Flames of Gyron, Evalu, where are you?"
"I'm stuck on the Conquistar. Copper, this isn't good. They don't know I'm here, but I can't get out. So I need to tell you this quick."
"Shoot."
"Both the Conquistar and the Vertigo are Kiyrenin ships. Whoever's behind this has more, too. Their names are Phobia, Double Dare, Frostbite, Horizon's Edge, Serpent's Stare, Death Secret and Nightmare, and of course the Vertigo and the Conquistar."
"That's nine capital ships, Eval."
"I'm aware of that. The Conquistar, Phobia and the Frostbite are the big ones, maybe the size of the Venomstrike. They're assorted types, and they don't have a strong starfighter fleet. Mostly they rely on magic, though not to the extent of the Deathless Ones."
"Do you know who their leader is?"
"Just the initials A. K. and that he originated from Carrotus."
"What about the mage-hunting thing?"
"They somehow believe that everyone should serve their master, but especially the mages. They think that it's destiny or something like that, and that mages are meant to be Kiyrenin."
"That's the weirdest thing I ever heard."
"Me, too. They almost worship this A. K."
"Great."
"That's what I said."
"Okay, how do we get you off?"
"You have to come with something I can attach myself to."
"Okay, that's a bad idea."
"That's the only idea."
Copper sighed. "Shonar?"
"He's right, Copper."
"Of course I am. There's something else."

"More?"
"Yeah. You can't use the Scorecard alias any more. They know you. And -"
"What?"
"Shinyso's here."

Man, you don't know how hard it is to constantly do those italics
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And 4I, Hellantrans use outdated ships. So nya.

"I didn't expect the Conquistar to be here," Tiger said nervously. "I can understand the Vertigo, but the Conquistar is the Kiyrenin flagship."
"Doesn't make sense, huh," N0 said, and grinned. "It'll work out, Tiger. Relax."
"That's harder than you think."
"I know. Hey, what's that on the scopes?"
"The last thing I need. More company. The Crusader and the Fire Chaser."
"Is that bad?"
"Worse than bad. I recognize that Darkspray. It's Coppertop's."
"What, the one you almost killed?"
"Uh huh. And she's likely got Radium with her. I doubt they've split up."
"Radium's the one who nailed you, right?"
"Yeah."
"You're right. That's worse than bad. You think they'll try to kill you?"
"Maybe. If I don't do this right."
"Then by all means, do this right."
Tiger sighed and flimmed on the commlink.
"Assassin, this is the Timelost. Please acknowledge."
There was a pause. Then, "Timelost, this is Crusader. What do you want?"
Tiger took a breath. "First, to thank you. After that, the downfall of the Kiyrenin will do."
"Timelost, perhaps you'd better explain."
"Acknowledged, Crusader. Would the name Tiger mean anything to you?"
"Negative, Timelost."
"I believe we last met on Firen, under less-than-desirable circumstances."
There was a long silence. Then, "Timelost, this is Crusader. Power down all weapons immediately."
"Crusader
, already done."
"Timelost, is this channel secure?"
"Crusader, Fire Chaser. It is now."
"Roger,
Fire Chaser. Tiger, I thought I killed you."
"Just about, but you know I'm tougher than that, Radium."
"Unfortunately. Do we have to try again?
"Negative, Radium. I'm not Kiyrenin anymore."
"I'm not sure if I believe that."
"Near-death experiences can be beneficial."
"I'll bet."
"Can I talk to him?" N0 asked quietly. Tiger nodded. "Rad, it's N0."
"N0, what are you doing?"
"Being mindful of what you said before you left. Rad, he's telling the truth."
"Are you sure?"
"As sure as I live."
"Which might not be much longer, Timelost, Crusader. Conquistar is on the move."
"Sword of Catten, are you sure?"
"Very. Crusader, this is bad. If she doesn't stop Eval's gone."
"Eval's resourceful, Shonar. He'll stop her."
It was Copper's voice. Tiger sighed. He wasn't sure what to think. At least they hadn't shot him on sight.
"Well," N0 said conversationally, "I think that went quite well."


We're getting towards the end here. Almost.

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I can't believe nobody replied yet

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It's called bedtime, Eval.

Great chapters. But getting towards the end? =\
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Aw, near the end... somewhat dissapointing CT >.>...
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Nice! More of my char! Keep it up!

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N0, you haven't tried

Well, close to the end anyway. Don't worry, there's always a sequel ... and at LEAST two more major fights before the end.
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Erm, forgot to post the story.

Sardiff was a large world, a gas giant. Its inhabitants were all winged, semi-intelligent creatures. It had been colonized by denizens of Sardiff's sister planet Sarida. The Saridans were a graceful, resourceful people, taming the Sardi and living on floating platforms. Many Saridans were telepathically or empathically talented, which made them free game for the Kiyrenin.
The Vertigo had arrived on schedule, with a skeleton crew of seventeen Kiyrenin, one very nervous commander, and Shinyso.
Shinyso was slightly irritated with Shasah Aurych. She was not accustomed to actually giving orders; her second in command, Saja Dakrin, directed Shasah's subordinates. Additionally, Shasah was easily flustered, and she tended to lose her head with the smallest problems.
Shinyso was not impressed.
He never said as much, but it was clearly evident in the way his voice and manner reflected his scorn of the incompetent commander.
"You know," he said to his distant maser via commlink, "I think more and more that Dakrin is the true commander of this ship. Shasah gives some vague order, and Saja does the rest."
"Interesting," came the thoughtful reply. "You believe this is the secret of the Vertigo's success?"
"One of them, anyway. Shasah is incompetent."
"And this Saja is not. Very well, that's perfectly believable."
"My lord, there is possibly a much more serious charge against Shasah than incompetence. There are rumors of treason that may not be baseless."
There was a pause. Then, "I see. Have you searched her mind to establish the truth?"
"Not yet, my lord. I await your command."
"Check. If you find any indications, dispose of her."
"As ordered."
"Good. Contact me when you have some news."
"Affirmative. Out."
Shinyso pocketed the commlink and thought for a minute. Shasah had no mind-powers, only a weak mage-ability, and mainly to block magical attacks. However, if she became aware of his prying, she could construe that to mean he was attacking her, and block him out.
The best time is now, before she suspects anything.
Having made up his mind, he closed his eyes and cconcentrated.
He found Shasah's mind immediately. Her thoughts were all glossed over with a thin sheen of panic, with a layer of underlying guilt and fear.
Fear of what?
He probed deeper beneath the surface thoughts, to the deeper worries and emotions. He was not an empath, so he sensed the feelings very dimly. But the thoughts were loud and clear.
Why would the master send Shinyso if he hadn't found out?
What if Saja tells them?
What will they do to me?

And that was all Shinyso could pick up. He couldn't find what she had done.
Saja knows. That much was sure. Vague feelings of guilt and fear weren't enough to condemn Shasah. He needed concrete proof.


Besides, I can't end before I give Defalcon some action I did promise.
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I think we'll be able to blow up the thread to 14 or 15 pages

This chapter is a bit confusing... What has Shasah done

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hmm, hopefully it's something that'll make us think, so many stories lack that *cough* ;p.
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Besides, I can't end before I give Defalcon some action I did promise.
*cough* Crystal *cough*

Another rux chappie. I only wish I knew who's side who's on right about now.

/me wanders off to go rereread Conquests and the Conqueror.
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Don't worry, there's always a sequel ...
But you ran out of Conq- words!

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Cool chapter, all mysteriouslike.
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Besides, I can't end before I give Defalcon some action I did promise.
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Rad, they don't have to be Conq-words. They can be other things. Maybe I'll write a story with somebody else as the main character, or maybe one about Tiger Interesting.
But now, for the part.

Copper scowled at the comm. Claw thought that if she did it any longer the commlink would burst into flames.
Kaz was, for once, quiet. Radium watched Copper, and Claw watched them both.
The Conquistar was moving slowly. It wasn't picking up speed, but it wasn't stopping either. Evaluator's voice came over the comm.
"Sabatoge can be good. She's got a hyperdrive leak. She's not going anywhere."
"How long have we got?"
"Three or four hours."
"That's good."
"I have to go before they catch me."
"Best of luck, Eval. Now," and she turned to Radium. "Who is N0?"
"His actual name is Nobody, seriously. He's an odd creature I met on Firen."
"So why is he with this Tiger now?"
"His story is that he found Tiger healing and very much alive. So far he hasn't used his gift once, and has only spoken of the Kiyrenin in terms of his enslavement."
"And you believe him?"
"I found nothing untrustworthy in him."
"And what's Tiger's story?"
"That he came to his senses and fought off the brainwashing when he nearly died. It is plausible, and in all the years I knew Tiger, he never lied when he could help it."
"That doesn't mean he isn't lying now."
"No, but why would he? If he was Kiyrenin, he could go to either capital ship right now, but he hasn't, and N0 won't let him if he does."
"Well, I have to take your word for it. Now, who's going to help me get Eval?"
"You didn't seriously think I was going to stay behind," Claw said. She grinned and shook her head.
"Of course not."
"Well, I been cooped up too long," Defalcon said. "So I definitely am coming."
"I'll come," Acid said. "That leaves Electrik, Rad, Kaz, KRSplat and Crystal to stay on the Assassin."
"All right. What do we take to bring Eval back?"
"This," Claw said, holding up his wrist with the computer on it.
"I'd forgotten about that. Kaz, still got SAM?"
"No," Kaz said, pulling a sad face. "Kovu toasted her accidentally."
"Pity. Well, it'll have to do. Once you drop us off, back off, out of range. The Crusader alias should protect you unless they do a visual scan. When we signal, Shonar will come to pick us up, and we're getting the heck out of there."
"Sounds like a plan."
KRSplat took the controls from Copper. Veering away from Sarida, he throttled up and headed for Sardiff, sheering to the left every now and then.
In a few minutes they drew up by the Conquistar, which like most Reminol-class ships had open bays that were protected by magcon shields. KRSplat veered dangerously close, puncturing the shield and opening the airlock long enough for Copper and her rescue team to leap out. His comm crackled.
"Crusader, power down all weapons and back off, then state your intentions."
"Acknowledged, Conquistar. Weapons powered down. Withdrawing." As he pulled away he sent the Assassin sharply to the left again before pulling her back under control.
"Crusader, what are you DOING?" The demand was frantic.
"Apologies, Conquistar. My ship has developed steering problems. I'm bound for Sardiff for repairs," KRSplat lied smoothly.
"Wouldn't Sarida have done just as well?" The operator's tone was aggrieved.
"Affirmative, Conquistar, but the problem is severe and I'm not sure I can control it to reach Sarida."
"All right, then, Crusader, continue on your way."
"My thanks and apologies again, Conquistar." He headed for Sardiff, still faking steering problems. He never saw Tiger pull into the same bay he had swiped.

Copper sighed. "Eval, I hope you can hear me."
"Don't worry. I can."
"Good. Attach yourself to Claw's computer and let's get outta here."
"Awesome. Let's go."
Defalcon found his commlink and turned it to the prearranged channel.
"Fire Chaser, cargo ready for pickup."
"Roger, Rescue. On my way."
They headed back to the hangar.

Tiger knew the Conquistar like the back of his hand. He found the armory with no problem, and with it his sword.
Discarding the heavy broadsword, he replaced it with his own.
"That is a nice sword," N0 said appreciatively. Tiger nodded.
"We've got to get back to the Timelost. Now." He led the way throught the maze of corridors, N0 faithfully following.
"Good thing we decided to head for Sarida," N0 said with a grin. Tiger snorted.
"Yeah."
They rounded a bend to find a patrol between them and the hangar. Tiger pulled his sniper rifle (which he had also re-appropriated) off his back and checked the charge. It was full.
"N0, if Coppertop comes back she'll run right into them."
"I know. In fact, here she comes right now."
Sure enough, Copper and her small rescue team came into sight right then. The patrol saw them, and drew their weapons.

Copper drew Shale easily. There were roughly seven of the patrol, which was better than ten but worse than none.
"Claw, Acid doesn't have any close-range weapons."
"No."
"Get him up here. They're a perfect rocket target at the moment."
"Gotcha."
Acid came up beside her with a grin. "This is what I had in mind on Udari."
"Well, here's your chance."
Acid braced himself and fired. The rockets slammed into the patrol, knocking two out of action.
That left five, and there were four of Copper's friends. Much better odds.
Copper found two charging at her, one a large schwartzenguard, the other a dog from Deseka. The shwartzenguard was long on strength and short on brains, while the dog was small and clever. She feinted at the shwartzenguard and he ducked; at least he had some sense.
Not enough, evidently; she feinted again and came up with a double-handed slash, which, if it didn't kill him, certainly put him out of action.
The Desekan took advantage of her distraction to try and score on her. She ducked past his attack, but he blocked her and forced her to backpedal.
The whine and flash of laserfire made her duck automatically. The dog stiffened and then keeled over, giving her a glimpse of Tiger, who was rising to his feet, sniper rifle slung over his shoulder. He flashed her a grin before turning away to his ship, N0 trailing behind.
She turned to her companions who had already finished their fights.
"Defalcon, tell Shonar all clear."
He nodded and did so, and they waited.
A few seconds later the Lessaria came barrelling towards them from the other side of the moon. He stopped dead, airlock already cycling, and they got on board as fast as they could. Tiger's Timelost was already out of range. Shonar was on the comm.
"Fire Chaser, state your intentions!"
"Whoops, sorry, Conquistar. Wasn't watching. No hostilities intended!"
"And what problems do YOU have on your ship?"
"Huh? None. I just wasn't paying attention. Won't happen again."
"Hope not, Fire Chaser. Go on your way."
"Thanks, Conquistar."
Shonar glanced back. Copper gave him the thumbs up; he grinned and gunned the engine. The Lessaria shot forward, making Defalcon swear, Claw glower at Shonar, and Copper grin at all of them. Acid picked himself up with a groan.
"Give us a warning next time, man!"
"Not on your life," Shonar chortled. "It's way too much fun to watch you guys!"
- I'll bet, - Evaluator said. - Thanks for the help, guys. -
"You're welcome. Hey, how come you couldn't get off?"
"Yeah," Acid said. "How'd that happen?"
- Ehh ... I was a little less than careful. -
"What's THAT supposed to mean?"
- It means they had magical shields around their system. I got in, and couldn't get out again. -
"Figures," Copper said. "Eval, you underestimated the Kiyrenin."
- It won't happen again, I promise you that. -
"I'll hold you to that. Now, where are we going?"
- My little jaunt wasn't all in vain, you know. Shinyso's next stop is Diamondus. -
"Really," Copper said. "Isn't that interesting. So is ours."
"We gonna beat 'em to it?"
"You bet. I don't know about you, but I'd like to have the Ninja back again."
"Hear hear," Claw seconded. "Let's go."
"Right," Shonar said. He flipped the comm on. "Crusader, Timelost, this is Fire Chaser. Next stop, Diamondus."
"Fire Chaser, Crusader. Acknowledged."
"Fire Chaser, Timelost. We copy and are following orders."
"Right. What are we waiting for?"
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Awesome chapter, as always...

Hmm... How do you re-brainwash somebody
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/me spins.

I'm betting the Conquistar is getting mighty confused right about now...
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Awesome chapter, as always...

Hmm... How do you re-brainwash somebody
- Agreed.
- I'd assume different methods would be required since they'd be ablt to resist the old one?
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You might be able to, but brain washing would only take time...

Continue CT, finnally some small cliffhanger.

Lol, yeah... that's it. Kovu toasted her... not me >.>. Other than that, if Eval was to even try to get in she's slice his code into pieces smaller than binary....
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What SAM are you talking about?
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In Conquerer Kaz had a supercomputer with an attitude named SAM. So I toasted her

Anyway, sorry I didn't post yesterday.

Uhh ... re-brainwash? I'm not planning to re-brainwash anybody ...

Commanding Officer Saja Dakrin stood stiffly at attention. Shinyso nodded coolly at her.
"At ease."
She relaxed and dropped her gaze to look directly at him. Her bold manner reminded Shinyso of someone he'd known before he'd become Kiyrenin, but he ignored the resemblance.
"You requested my presence, sir," she stated. He nodded.
"I have a few questions for you about Commander Aurych."
"Yes sir."
"At my lord's orders I searched Commander Aurych's mind, and found distinct traces of guilt and fear. Apparently she fears our discovery of something she did. We had hoped you would clarify."
"We, sir?"
"My lord and I."
"Ah. Sir, I have been ordered not to discuss the matter."
"By whom?"
"The Commander, sir."
"Indeed. If I countermanded the order, would you comply?"
"Yes, sir. You do outrank the Commander."
"Then consider it done."
"Yes sir. Commander Aurych left confidential files unguarded for a time. When she returned they had been accessed and stolen by an unknown party. I found out about this and confronted her. She then attempted to threaten me, and when her tactic did not succeed she proceeded to order my silence."
"How recent is this incident?"
"It occurred two days ago, sir."
"DO you recall what files were stolen?"
"Not the exact filenames, sir, just that they were confidential and important. I feared a security breach or a compromise to my lord."
"I see. Commander Dakrin, I do not blame you for following orders."
"Sir?" Her surprise was obvious, but she made no other comment.
"The fault is with Aurych. Commander, my orders are to deal with Aurych in whatever manner I see fit."
"Yes, sir."
"Therefore I have demoted her. She carries the rank of Lieutenant. You are promoted to Commander, and I leave the rest of Aurych's punishment to you."
"Thank you, sir."
"May I suggest dealing with her now?"
"Of course."
"What shall her punishment be, Commander?"
"I brand her a traitor, sir. She will be dealt with accordingly."
"Excellent. Shall we get this over with, Commander?"
"Certainly. Let's do away with the formality as well, what do you think?"
"Good idea."
"My best yet," she said, and turned towards the bridge. "I have another one. Let's make this public."
"As public as you can with nineteen people on board," he said dryly. She nodded.
When they reached the bridge, Shinyso leading, they were ignored. Shinyso glanced at Saja, and she made her way to the intercom.
"All crewmembers are requested on the bridge immediately! All crewmembers to the bridge!"
Shasah swung around, confusion and anger obvious in her manner. "Dakrin," she said, "I never ordered that!"
"No," Shinyso said, steel in his eyes, "I did."
Shasah shut up. Saja watched as the Kiyrenin assembled, all at attention. Shinyso moved forward.
"Commander Shasah Aurych."
Shasah stepped nervously toward him.
"After careful observation and evaluation, I find Shasah Aurych unfit for command and unsuitable for her rank. Therefore I demote her to the rank of Lieutenant." He paused as shock and disbelief flitted over Shasah's face. "And after due deliberation and the permission of the Kiyrenin lord, I promote Commanding Officer Saja Dakrin to the rank of Commander, of the Vertigo."
Saja nodded, impassive. Shasah stared at the pair of them, bewilderment written all over her.
Saja stepped forward at a nod from Shinyso.
"Thank you, sir. I accept this rank. May the master of the Kiyrenin live forever!"
There was a ragged cheer. She held up her hand. "However, I have an important accusation to make. I charge Lieutenant Aurych with treason."
Then all hell broke loose.
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That last line makes me want to tackle you and persuade you with the tip of a rusty knife to write more. However, since I am generally sane, I won't do that.

I will, however, coax you lightly, prod you a few times though, to write some. Can't wait to read more.

...

*checks the topic again*

Nothing? Blah...

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*checks the topic again*

Still nothing...

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*checks the topic again*

Dammit, CT, where are you?! ><
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Sorry, guys, I've been sick (honest). No chance to write I'm getting better tho.
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REST! *crack* NOWW!!!
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I'm trying as hard as I can

I'll oblige you, Kaz, but only because I'm in a good mood.

Copper sighed. The sight of the three ships together was familiar, although a year ago Tiger's Timelost would have been replaced with Omega's Jendara, Kovu's Moonblaze, or the Vortex Crawler, maybe even Jassiv's Starblown. Now the ship of an ex-Kiyrenin who had tried to kill her and had assisted in the capture of one of her closer friends had taken their place. Despite Radium's assurance that Tiger could be trusted, she was incredibly wary of the striped rabbit.
Diamondus was green and bright in front of them. The three ships arrowed towards the planet, racing pieces of debris and dodging junk, not slowing in the slightest. Shonar was as excellent a pilot as he was a codebreaker, KRSplat was definitely qualified, and Tiger was doing well.
Diamondus was not a popular place due to the vicous insects that called the planet home. Copper had only been there three times, once when she was with Claw. Why Shinyso would be coming here was a question she couldn't answer.
Likely there's some telepathic honeybee that he wants to capture. Good luck!
When they landed, Diamondus was apparently abandoned. This was an illusion that Diamondans liked to foster, evidently having nothing better to do with their time than to hide and ambush unwary visitors. When Defalcon told Electrik this, the blue rabbit looked appreciative.
"Wow," he said, "these guys have some serious problems. And none of us psychiatrists - !"
"Eval," Copper said, "do you know where Shinyso is landing?"
- Sector 9-13, Quadrant 2, whatever that means. -
"It means he's landing on top of us," Shonar said. "We'd better move the ships."
"Good idea," Copper said, and it was, and they did.
"Now," said Acid, "we wait."
So they did.

Saja was a much better Commander than Shasah ever thought of being, giving precise orders and getting the job done with little or no fuss.
Their rendezvous was over - they had transferred the few Saridans they had captured to the Conquistar before Saja ordered them to pull out and head for Diamondus, where Shinyso had been ordered to personally capture two very specific targets.
Diamondus is better than Keenrei.
Why had he had that thought? He tried to remember when he'd been to Keenrei, but it escaped him for the most part. He did remember a black lizard captain, and blood. Not his, either. And a black door ...
He was sure he was not Kiyrenin at the time. At the thought of the Kiyrenin, the memory clouded and vanished, to his frustration. He stood immobile, trying to recapture it.
"Shinyso," Saja said quietly, coming up beside him, "the shuttles are ready. We have three minutes before the Vertigo exits hyperspace."
"Which shuttles are we taking?" he asked, glancing down at her. She frowned slightly.
"Silver Hornet and Locust. Why?"
"No matter. It's of no consequence."
"Ah. Is something troubling you?"
"No. Yes. Saja, what were you before you became Kiyrenin?"
"I was a spaceport coordinator on Cetilar III. Why? What were you?"
"I ... can't remember ... "
"It's not important, Shinyso. You're Kiyrenin now."
"I know. But the fact that I'm missing memories troubles me."
"Perhaps our lord removed them so that they would not interfere with your work," she suggested diffidently. He shrugged.
"Could be."
Whatever else he was going to say was drowned out by the sound of the sublight engines starting as the hyperdrive cut out. The Vertigo shuddered and then became still. Saja shook her head.
"As soon as we get back to Abiatel, I am getting those engines repaired."
"Sounds good. Saja - you're staying here."
"Why?" Her tone was belligerent.
"Because these marks are incredibly dangerous. If they weren't, do you think I'd be here?"
"Fine. I know you can pilot, so don't hesitate to take over the ships if you need to."
"I won't."
"I know. Good luck. Don't get yourself killed. Your orders may be to bring back these marks, but my orders ar to bring you back alive."
"Ah ... I knew that."

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Whee, another ruxful chapter by CT. I should actually try doing something.
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... like continuing SoT?*hint hint*
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^^. CT is back. Feeling better?

Oooh, Shinyso suspects something, I would too, but I'd be a lot more angry about it o.o;.
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Yeah yeah yeah, I'm working on those. I'll have them up before I go off to work in July.

I mean, I'll have them up soon.
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Yeah, I got a good chunk of work done on SoT last night, so I can truthfully say they're coming along nicely. Unfortunately, there's going to be some massive slowdown over the next five days, as I have my finals.

I will try to have a new chapter of each in ASAP.
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Not quite.

*yanks the page*
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PH33R the double posting skillz.

I hate these school computers.

And I still have the 12th page.
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