Not recommendedQuick Review by Zoro

Posted:
10 Oct 2011, 08:56
For: Sun Battle
Level rating: 5.4
Rating
2.5

What is this!? :/
eh…bad one

7.2 with DR!? Can’t believe…

Review by mortalspaz

Posted:
19 Jul 2009, 13:05 (edited 19 Jul 09, 13:20)
For: Natural Battle
Level rating: 3.5
Rating
N/A

you don’t have to get angry.
“N00b” has more than just 1 sense:

Definition 1

1: Someone who is new to a game, or website, online game, or something.

2: A “noob” is a person who is new or inexperienced in a subject.

3: “Noob” is derived from the word ‘new’ .

4: Noobs are often referred to as n00bs as a sign of disrespect toward them.

Definition 2:

Originally an (shortened) insult to newcomers in forums or internet games. It is used in certain places to describe someone who is slightly – err…slow and ditsy. Basically it is used to insult a pesron who makes a stupid comment or somebody who makes many stupid comments.

Just because she said it(she did?!)that dosen’t mean that you are.
Think like this: If she did, she maybe didn’t actually knew what she was talking about,and she said it just because it’s a…..- common used word? -..
And what bug can be in MSPaint?

Not recommendedReview by Rodrigo_arg

Posted:
2 Jul 2009, 20:27 (edited 3 Jul 09, 20:00)
For: Natural Battle
Level rating: 3.5
Rating
3.5

I will go by parts:
Scenario:
The shape of the map is very close, I mean that is not a circle, you enscrrás you waxed. The rest is well done ta.
Decoration:
Is not finished, ie zanahoraias, for example, do not you put the tip, or go, Why?, The edges are are posts, the big carrot is not end to end, otherwise, the “water” not putting tip to tip, and the earth is repeated again and again.
Weapons:
The power-up of gun1 is hidden, but I found it just started, but the barrels have a small espacion, only one or Spaz tnt can break them.
PD: Error in the background.
PPD: I have to warn that a server lori099 told me jazz2 NOOB! 3.5…

Review by Lori099

Posted:
1 Jul 2009, 15:56 (edited 1 Jul 09, 19:08)
For: Sun Battle
Level rating: 5.4
Rating
N/A

Okay, carrots were fixed.
If will be found any other rewiever,
tell me what I can make better in this lvl, ok? Thanks a lot.

RecommendedReview by mortalspaz

Posted:
1 Jul 2009, 14:33 (edited 5 Jul 09, 12:38)
For: Sun Battle
Level rating: 5.4
Rating
7.2

It needs 1.23 but it’s well on TSF too
. THIS is non jj2+.
The edited pack has: Fixed tile bugs, fixed rain, fixed missing tiles, fixed caves, enhanced caves, bigger size fixed waterfalls, cave thingies. If you want to add me at credits, just add me for beta-testing.

Now the review…

First.. Layer Analisys:
Layer 8: BG with texture background with pallaxing stars.
Layer 7: That landscape with the big tree and where it should have been a waterfall as well.
Layer 6: Rain….
Layer 5: Cave Bg.
Layer 4: Most of the activity, eyecandy, ammo,carrots, platforms.
Layer 3: Water trees carrots.
Layer 2:oops? Nothing…
Layer 1: The same….
Layer 1 isn’t often used so the’re not so bad.
You could also add rain in the Layer 2 but horisontal one to be cool!
Ok.
EYECANDY
This time the eyecandy is good , bugs were fixed. having no tilebugs.

PICUPS
This levels have all sorts of ammo and p-ups. You did not put a small nr of seconds of regen. things.
Problem! I did not found any carrots in here. You can fix that.
(don’t put more than 1 regen. fullNRG! and hide it)

GAMEPLAY is better. You added some place to hide which is actually original!
I never met something like it and trust me… i played many…

MUSIC
And again you used jj3 music which is not bad at all.

TILESET
Levels were made with 2 of the carrotus edits.Evening and… Zombified? Oh well..Most of the tiles were used, even the rain.
The level feels large. Being a more wider level having rain, water and caves.
Caves were fixed.
In all the level the tiles fit themselves, being no risk of getting stuck.
I think it’s way better than the other and this time it worths a 7.2 with dl rec.
Good job!
You can try to make Single Player levels.
If you make such Battle levels i’m sure you can do good SP levels as well.

I think your zip is corrupt.Could you reupload it by recompressing your files?

Review by Jimbob

Posted:
29 Jun 2009, 22:28 (edited 30 Jun 09, 16:45)
For: Flower Lands
Level rating: 3.5
Rating
N/A

I’ll have to admit, I didn’t play this online so that’s what explains the lack of a rating from me. But judging from the screenshots, it doesn’t look too great. I’m feeling generous today so I’m going to give you a few tips of advice. I’m sorry if this sounds harsh, as I do not intend it to:

It looks like you used a very ‘natural’, out-doorsy tileset, but you didn’t make the level look very ‘natural’ as your level is very squared-off. (“Squared-off” means that there aren’t very many bumps or things that keep it interesting, the platforms are just squares and rectangles. You can read more on JCSRef.)

It looks like there are also a few tilebugs. Now I’m trying not to be a critic here, in fact I’m trying to go easy since it looks like you’re new. Tilebugs are formed when two tiles next to each other look glitchy and do not ‘tile well’. Tilebugs are just like typos, oto amny itlebgus detract from the experience.

But do not worry, if you keep making levels, you will get better, I’m sure of it! ;-)

Not recommendedQuick Review by minmay

Posted:
29 Jun 2009, 22:21 (edited 29 Jun 09, 22:22)
For: Flower Lands
Level rating: 3.5
Rating
2.2

You can pretty much tell by the screenshots that almost no effort was put into this level. Not really any redeeming features here.

Also, the level is TSF, despite being marked as 1.23.

Not recommendedQuick Review by Rodrigo_arg

Posted:
29 Jun 2009, 21:34 (edited 1 Jul 09, 19:57)
For: Flower Lands
Level rating: 3.5
Rating
2.5
I tried it and liked it a lot here is the note: Work background: 3, because the poorly regulated (X / Y), but it worked well. Weapons: 4, because scarcity and power-up are poorly hidden. Decoration: 2, badly closed, the walls are simple blocks. Map: 4, a map is open, not to say …

[Review changed to quick review. – cooba]

Review by Lori099

Posted:
29 Jun 2009, 15:38 (edited 30 Jun 09, 08:46)
For: Flower Lands
Level rating: 3.5
Rating
N/A

Ok, now I did what you said. The mountains now have that X-Speed and Y-Speed and its good, yea. And the gun generator fixed. If you will find any new bugs, report it to me ye?
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Thats weird because I used TSF to 1.23 converter and It dont work…its bad. Well, if you think my levels is bad, you can say it but I will never fix it because I dont know, what I should fix. I will upload new screenshots and little update the level. I hope you will like the new version and I will try to again convert it to 1.23

RecommendedReview by mortalspaz

Posted:
29 Jun 2009, 15:17 (edited 21 Jul 09, 06:31)
For: Flower Lands
Level rating: 3.5
Rating
4.7

It’s a good battle level but you could try to fix the background a bit!
And put a biggen nr. of seconds of respawning things!
The gameplay is not good but not bad , and as i said before the bg must be fixed. I mean the mountains.
Go to the layer where you put the mountains and try this: Y speed:0.0299988(not auto Y speed) and X speed:0.0149689 with limit visible region.Oh and you could try texture bg. Go to layer 8 and click the last 2 options if you only have the bg image!Try texture mode and palaxing stars.
Hope it works!
Look. I found a bug! Animations: The waterfalls and the blocks.
And… PLEASE don’t password your levels!
i think i’ll review.

Layer 8:
You listened to my advice and now the bg is better. Layer with muontains isn’t totally fixed but it’s better than first time
Layer 4.
In this layer there are some bugs and a place where you can get stuck, the waterfall is kinda poorly animated and you forgot to put the cave tile in the 1× 2× 3× 4x block.
In here are lots of ammo.
Bouncer freezer RF seeker Electro,toaster,peeperspray.
The bad part is that most of these ammo have they’re power up next to them.
You could try to hide them somehow to be a little complicated to get to them.
Try hiding something inside a wall.
Another thing is the carrots. You placed only a single carrot.
I don’t know if it’s respawning or no because the level is protected by a password!(please don’t do that)
If it’s not respawning you should put a generator for it but(do not plce regenerating fullNRG!! Never!)
There are few bugs but not
significantly.
The music.
Well i really like the tune though JJ3 will never be on market so i could hear it there but this time it fits these levels. Even if one level is snowy and the tune’s name is SunSong.
I can’t rate more than 4.7 because:
2 & 3 ratings for a level are like walking through nothing at all or a very bad level with all sorts of bugs and access violations! and 5.5 like i was planning to rate is a bit exagerated
But i won’t give a no dl rec, i’ll give a N/A one. It’s better
Sorry.
You could re-make them.

minmay: If a tileset dosen’t have more than 1024 tiles it can be used by 1.23 version and TSF.
But if it has more than 1024 tiles it would be a waste of time trying to play it on 1.23.
This tileset has 870 tiles. What do you think?

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