Hi!, i am new in this forum

[Sauronman]

Hello, i am chilean and mi english is very bad, 14% english 100%spanish lol... welll, i not have a traductor to spanish to english ehehehe, ok...

well, i created a picture, i do not try to bother to fans of Lori, i only want to show a drawing which I did a long time ago, thanks friends,.bye!!



http://img42.exs.cx/img42/9971/lori_mueree.jpg

[Odin]

What You Say!

[Fawriel]

Oh please, it's easy to get what he's saying.

And.. nice picture. The facial expression is good.

[Violet CLM]

Hey, not a bad picture. The shading style seems to be basic gradients, but it works very well, especially on the pants. My main problem is that a few areas should have had a little more work put into them...
Lori's front hair. It looks two dimensional. Actually, the whole top-of-her-head area is really confusing, and I can't figure out what parts are her head, which her hair, and which her ears. My current guess is that one of the ears is really big. I'm not sure. Needs a lot more distinction and 3dism.
Lori's hands. Those do not look like fingers at all. They look like a roundish object with a few black lines drawn on it. Again, too flat.
Lori's right foot (our left) is also confusing. It just seems to cut off at the bottom, instead of being rounded like the other.
Final nitpick are the breasts, which do not suffer from being flat at all. The one on the left (our right) is fine, though it may be a little big for Lori - artist's interperetation, I guess. The other one, unfortunately, looks more like a picture of a fish, painted purple and yellow. It's shaped and sized differently from the round one. I suspect you may have been trying to place emphasis on Lori's more feminine attributes - the butt is a little big, by the way - which may not be the best idea for a rabbit who dresses in exercise gear, jumps around a lot and does karate kicks with great regularity. Would this body be very useful for that?
Anyway, this isn't bad, but there were a few things which jumped out at me. Keep up the good work, and consider submitting it to Lori Central... far too much Lori art is posted here but not submitted.

[Odin]

I suspect you may have been trying to place emphasis on Lori's more feminine attributes

You're turned on. Admit it.

[Hazel-rah]

lol, nothing wrong with the female body... :P

The only two things I have to say are her legs are huge. Make then skinnier and a little more muscular.
And she appears to only have 2 toes on each foot. Bump it up to three, with the middle toe a little bigger/longer than the other two.

Other than that it is very nice fan art. :)