A picture of Jazz [Archive] - JazzJackrabbit Community Forums

Stormie

Feb 26, 2005, 06:13 AM

I'm not too good with MS paint so it's not that good, but for a begginer...

http://img80.exs.cx/img80/5886/jazzjackrabbit6vc.png

[EDIT] I made a direct image for ease

LittleFreak

Feb 26, 2005, 09:25 AM

Let's just say it's abstract. :P

Fawriel

Feb 26, 2005, 11:23 AM

Eheh. It's not all too bad, actually. You got some details relatively nicely done. The ears, for example.

White Rabbit

Feb 26, 2005, 12:10 PM

:D!!

Violet CLM

Feb 26, 2005, 01:09 PM

What's the big orange circle? And Jazz's teeth should be white, not green.

Hazel-rah

Feb 26, 2005, 01:40 PM

lol nice

White Rabbit

Feb 27, 2005, 01:11 AM

Jazz has an orange shoulder band, Violet. ;) Either that or it's part of the backpack with poorly done layers.

Doubble Dutch

Feb 28, 2005, 12:18 AM

Hmmm, you should really try cubist, or perhaps abstract painting. You'd be real good.

No kidding.

No insult either.

NinJazz

Feb 28, 2005, 05:42 AM

:p well I think that rox

Stormie

Mar 5, 2005, 07:40 AM

Thanks for posotive feedback

I re-did it with more effort and concentration

http://img160.exs.cx/img160/5827/jazznew1wh.png

Thoughts?

Radium

Mar 5, 2005, 08:31 AM

Wow. Much improvement indeed; that's very good for something made in MSPaint. His ears seem kind of small in the new one, however.

LittleFreak

Mar 5, 2005, 09:21 AM

The new one's much better. :)

I agree that the ears are too small though.

EDIT:

The way Jazz holds his gun is a little bit wrong, one of the fingers should be behind the gun.

Sciz CT

Mar 6, 2005, 06:06 PM

Hide his thumb behind the gun, make the ears larger, and make the eyes black-on-blue, not blue-on-black. Otherwise, this is very impressive for an MSPaint drawing.

n00b

Mar 6, 2005, 06:23 PM

Hide his thumb behind the gun, make the ears larger, and make the eyes black-on-blue, not blue-on-black. Otherwise, this is very impressive for an MSPaint drawing.
I must agree

Stormie

Mar 7, 2005, 07:59 AM

Look, I don't really wanna do it again

Let's just say it's a big improvment, I made a few mistakes but it's good for an MS paint drawing

White Rabbit

Mar 7, 2005, 12:56 PM

gg no re

Strato

Mar 7, 2005, 07:17 PM

You don't have to remake a drawing after you've done it already. Criticism is there for future reference mostly.

LittleFreak

Mar 8, 2005, 03:34 AM

You did it very well, though it's not perfect. You'll probably do better in your next picture, even if it's not about Jazz.