Zafitariers Quest

[DFX]

Prologue



Hi citizens my name is Zafitarier & boy do I have a story to tell you. Here's how it started the evil Warlock Magifar was trapped in a dungeon 6 years ago on February 19, 1995. For he performed a crime and the crime was he kidnapped the Princess Flaria. But when the Knights of Zavitarius from the Kingdom of Zitracius and Castle of Zavitarius came the 3 of them went to find him. They finally tracked him down for he nevere left town they tracked him down by splitting up.



He cast ThunderDown on the 2nd Knight named Pasicar who found him it inflicted Light damage on the Knight. The Knight used his chain on Magifar it was defelected when Magifar used Reflect. Next, the knight hid behind a rock, Magifar thought he ran away but he didn't. Using the old Guerilla Warfare technique Pasicar slinged the Chain right at him and his his stomach good thing the chain had no spikes on it. Magifar fainted and awoke when he was arrested.



Pasicar found his brother (the other 2 kknights) & they took Magifar to the the castle. And was sent to the dungeon to serve 8 years. Pasicar released the princes Flaria, & she was returned to the castle. 6 years later Magifar broke out.

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JJT



Read my story Zafitariers Quest in the War Tavern.

[Wild Angel]

Awww, add me!! lol

[DFX]

Sorry nobody in the community or any other person is in this story. Not even I am in the story and this purely made up.



Welcome to my 1st story in the War Tavern i hope you enjoy it. I and no one stars in the story. Every character is made up, that makes the story even better.

[Tubz]

Chapter 1: Escape



It's April 27, 2001 and something has happened at Castle Zavitarius. A guard was guarding Magifar's Dungeon Cell, just then Magifar realized that he had a Fire attack. And he has never used it since May 4, 1500, so he decicdes to use it on the bars and he melted his Dungeon Cell. He realized he had the attack when he used his wand and fire came out, for he hid his wand in his cloak so the guards wouldn't find it. Next, he used Sleep on the guard and escaped.



To get escape from the Dungeon and Escape he used Invisibily, it only lasts for 5 mins before going off. So he just ran right out of the castle. He was running out of Mana, so he went look for the sacred Pool of Mana.

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JJT



Read my story Zafitariers Quest in the War Tavern.

[Tubz]

Nobody cares about me story :( I'm so depressed right now. I nobody cares you guys should say that you don't like my story. Sob Sob...

[-~Blizzard*~-]

Now now, don't go pulling a Kiku on me here!

Keep it up JJ!

Its AWESOME!!!!!

[Tubz]

Your just saying that I don't believe you.

[-~Blizzard*~-]

BAH!!!!

If I wasn't serious, I'd insult the story, im that type of person, KEEP IT UP!!!!!!!!!!!!!Or else Ill bombarden this page with messages that don't make any sense

[Ducky]

Pi is rux0r.

Er, pie.

Do continue, I have been reading this but I never wanted to move the mouse aaaaalll the way uuuuuup to the post reply button.

So, will you?

`Ducky

[Tubz]

Thanks for the nice comments Blizzard & Ducky now on to Chapter 2!

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Chapter 2: Plan of Evil



Magifar realized that if he went back to his hideout & committed a crime the first place the Knights of Zavitarius would look would be his hideout. So Magifar decides to pick up all his most treasured belongings and tried to relocate. Magifar had just about enough magic for 1 more spell. So Magifar decides to leave the Kingdom of Zitracius where his hideout is, he decides to move to Turrot the town which is 70 Miles away from Zitracius. But he didn't move into the town to leave he decided to use his last bit of magic for a spell called Dig and he dug a hole with the last of his magic and moved into there.



But this was his plan because he knew it would take him about 12 days walking/running to make it to Turrot. He decided to search for the Mana Pool he had a map in his Treasure Chest of the Desert (which is next to Zitracius) & Zitracius. It told him of where Cactus's are little Houses and even the Buildings in Zitracius, & all importantly the Mana Pool which is somewhere in the Desert. The 70 mile Desert is what separated Zitracius from Turrot. Magifar 2 days later find the Mana Pool, then powers up.



He removes from his treasure chest 6 Clear Jars with Caps. He fills each Jar with the Mana so he can power up any time. Now he used his magic made a Magic Carpet and arrived 3 hours later at Turrot made a Hole in the ground and lived there. Now he decides how will he get his revenge against Pasicar, the other 2 knights, the Castle of Zavitraius, & finally the Kingdom of Zitracius. He decides this time to start by going after Pasicar, but first he decides to create $1000.00 that is totally real now he goes into town and buys 100 jars for $30.00.



And finally fills the jars with Mana using his Magic Carpet which he kept secret in his home. Magifar yells excitedly "It's Payback Time!"

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JJT



Read my story Zafitariers Quest in the War Tavern.

[-~Blizzard*~-]

BRAVO!

WAY TO GO JJ!

Keep it up man!

[Tubz]

Wait Chapter 2 wasn't over I messed up continue where you stopped Blizzard. Thanks for the comments. Chapter 3 may be tommorow.

[-~Blizzard*~-]

*heh*Its all good thoughhttp://jazz2.nagcentral.com/forum/images/smiles/icon_wink.gif

[Tubz]

Blizzard it's sad only you like my story. At least someone appreciates their 1st attempt at a story in the Wart Tavern.



I'm still Depressed, Chapter 3 will probably be wrote tommorow. You know that Laburum story (I know I spelled the name wrong) is totally crushing my story. My 1st chance at a War Story that well sorta has to do with War is a total bust.



I gotta stop posting these stupid replies.

[-~Blizzard*~-]

Don't worry man, for my first story I had to stop it cause noone wanted to join, don't worry, I had to insult people just to get them to be the bad guys, or at least to join

[Ducky]

Should of seen my stories. NEWBIES had more replies then me, I was not happy http://jazz2.nagcentral.com/forum/images/smiles/icon_wink.gif

Cheers. And besides...your story will probably be up longer because its been seeming like Kiku and Timothy write all their stuff beforehand, or at least have the plot done, so..

`Ducky

[-~Blizzard*~-]

Acutally Ducky, I've written stuff about a Year in advance...but im too lazy to post it, I can write on the spot, but its much too difficult, cause then you see your errors, spelling mistakes, grammer mistakes, punction, characters, ect...I can go on and on and on, and that just shows how good they are, they are EXTREMELY good story writers, I would like to put more work into mine, If only I had the time

[Tubz]

By the way i've changed my e-mail address i'm still singed up to a service. But I tricked the service into giving me my own e-mail address Jazz2Land is my sorta dead right now website heh. And now I wait no longer Welcome to Chapter 3!

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Chapter 3: Birth of a Warrior



Hi again friends, now I bet your probably wondering how I knew so much about Magifar well i'll tell you. And I also will tell you how I came into this story.



Dateline: March 14, 1497, 3 years before Magifar's rampage, my father Toman was fighting in a war against the Northern Country Turrot. The Wars Toll: 15,000 Men Killed at Zitracius's side. 17,586 men killed at Turrot's side. My father was fighting for Zitracius, the war had lasted 5 years. All but 12 men were killed in the battle my father and Magifar are 2 of the men alive. On the third year of the war those 2 dueled each other.



Toman used a trick of pretending to have died when Magifar used his sword (which he has lost today) on Toman. Just then Toman pretended have died. Maigfar and the 6 other soldiers of the army that were alive on the Turrot side went back to Town because Zitracius' side surrendered. Then the 4 other soldiers on Zitracius's side awed as Toman awoke, because they thought he was dead. And so Tomen went home, Toman my father was killed on 1998 of a Heart Attack.



Even know he was a Wizard, he does have immortal life but until a Natural Cause occurs. But just before he died he told me about Magifar and about his war, you see I was born on 1988 and even know i'm 12. He knew that i'd understand. And so I promised to get revenger on Magifar for his evil deeds. Before he died he said "Take my Dagger & Light Shield, to help you on your quest."



And so tommorow May 3, 2001 I will get revenge on Magifar.

[Tubz]

Chapter 4: Plans



Now I know your going to be wondering how I will accomplish this task of taking down Magifar. First I'll have to get a Broad Sword from the Village which costs $750.00! And next some Health potions from the Magic Shop for $3.00 each & I'll need about 5 of the Potions, and finally a Long Shield from the Armory for $100.00! Hmm, how will I accomplish this? I got it, in the desert there are foes that are waiting to eat any hero.



The creatures give you $10.00 everytime you beat one of them or a group of them together or a assorted group of monsters. Well all I need is $865.00. And so 30 days go by and I have all the money I need. I would have been dead but thanks to the nice people at the Inn back at Zitracius they only make me pay $4.00 to heal all my wounds & to rest for a day. I've gotten Powerful over the days, the creatures in the desert aren't so evil after all their kinda nice, heh.



Now I think i'm ready to go face Magifar. Since I saw him in the Desert hiding near Turrot i'll go there!

[Tubz]

I think this story is doing pretty bad I should start bugging people heh.

[`~Shattered_Halo~`]

Now now, I don't know why these people aren't reading this story, and what happened to this -~Blizzard~- character?

From checking this he/she's posts, they haven't been on in awhile, what happened?

and btw, Im a new comer, and I like your story

[Ducky]

Blizz won't be posting for a while :P

But, do continue, Tublear..or however you spell that http://jazz2.nagcentral.com/forum/images/smiles/icon_smile.gif

`Ducky

[Tubz]

Sorry Moderators, I messed up and sorry Shatered Halo, I guess I misread my story... Let me see if I can extend the story it was originally gonna be a Prologue, and 6 Chapters but maybe longer. So after I finish Homework Chapter 5 might be written. And this is my 1st story.

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Ahh that's not cool can't wait for Blizzard to come back online!



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JJ Tublear



Read my story Zafitariers Quest in the War Tavern.

[`~Shattered_Halo~`]

What do you mean, he won't be on for awhile?

Does he have too much homework?

[Tubz]

Chapter 5: Zavitarier vs Magifar



I guess I messed up and decided to go after Magifar on May 4. Now that I have all my Equipment it's time to face Magifar. Luckily my father Toman taught me some useful spells. Such as Speed, and so I cast Speed and I ran to Turrot in 6 minutes. Speed wore off when I arrived. I knocked on his house: Magifar said "I'm coming."



"Who are you and what're you here for?" Magifar asked, "My name is Zafitarier I think you remember my father Toman, Magifar." "What!" Screamed Magifar "So your his son!" "Yes, I am his son and I am very angry about the things you have done." "Kidnapping the Princess, causing a war, may I go on?" I said. "No, so you wanna fight me? Well bring it on!!!!" Magifar screamed, and I reply "Yes, I want a war: and don't think i'm just coming up to you, i've been training in the desert." Magifar replys "Ha, you'll still won't be a match for me!"



"There will be 2 rounds Zavitarier, I will crush you slowly by slowly in both rounds if you manage to survive, you'll still be dommed HAHAHAHAHAHA! Are ya ready Warrior?!" I say "Yes, i am ready."



In the first round he threw bolts of Lightening at me, I can't hit him back or i'll get hurt. So I hit my sword at his bolts, I did this 5 times, dissapearing after a while. Then came round 2.



He threw 3 fireballs at once. I couldn't use the sword so I tried my shield. It deflected the Fireballs and shot it back. After 3 hits he said, and also he was dissapearing again. "Very good Zavitarier, but like I said YOU WON'T WIN!" "Ahh!" I screamed.



Magifar dissapeared, and dropped me into the Dark World which is the opposite of this place, but crimson, scarier, more powerful, & definantely more deadly.



I figured that Magifar disappeared into this world I dropped into, and is waiting for me somewhere. It's time for some major revenge!



Oh yeah for not telling you friends, but I have 2 names one is Zavitarier my original name, & my more easier to say name is Zavitarius

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JJT



Read my story Zafitariers Quest in the War Tavern.

[`~Shattered_Halo~`]

During the school year?

Well maybe, you never know, and BRAVO!!!!!!

[Ducky]

Blizz was banned for yelling at Kiku. http://jazz2.nagcentral.com/forum/images/smiles/icon_mad.gif

Nice chapter. Do continue..

`Ducky

[`~Shattered_Halo~`]

Just for yelling?

Whoa, im not too sure I should of came onto this message board then, just hopefully no one will make me mad, and he musta said some pretty bad stuff, either that, or this kiku must really not be thinking, whats -~Blizzard~-'s email?

[Ducky]

I don't know. Blizz had warnings before, this was his last.

I think a lot of people wanted to yell at Kiki. He got there first and had a bad record...siigh.

`Ducky

[`~Shattered_Halo~`]

Hmm...Too bad, didn't she get warned for anything?

From what I've read in the past, I would of banned them BOTH, seeing as they both create havoc on this community, but thats my opinion, and thats all it is

[Bobby aka Dizzy]

Shattered Halo, you are fooling no one.

[Tubz]

It took me a while to realize that. Heh.

[`~Shattered_Halo~`]

????

Whatever, well nice meeting you too bobby, and hopefully we can see another chapter from you again jj, and can someone tell me what -~Blizzard*~-'s email is?

please

[Coppertop]

Nice goin', JJ!



Here's an explanation for why ppl aren't replying: They are so absorbed in the story, waiting with bated breath for the next part that they can't stand to hit he reply button for fear they will miss something. I had to FORCE myself to leave that last part, it's so good.



Okay, maybe it's stretching the truth a little, but in my opinion this story is excellent (for a 1st one). Just continue and wait for ppl to catch on that their supposed to encourage you too, not just hope desperately for the next part. http://jazz2.nagcentral.com/forum/images/smiles/icon_smile.gif

[`~Shattered_Halo~`]

http://jazz2.nagcentral.com/forum/images/smiles/icon_smile.gif

I strongly agree with Copper!

[Cobra]

Hey, don't let this discourage you. People read, we are just too lazy to post.



Besides, if we all stopped when there were few replies, we'd have no stories. Although I almost considered stopped Akeldama because no one replied, but I kept it up and its still somewhat a favorite of some.



Keep up the writing!



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www.webpak.net/~bmercer (http://www.webpak.net/~bmercer)

"Cowards die many times before their deaths;

The valiant never taste of death but once.

Of all the wonders that I yet have heard,

It seems to me most strange that men should fear;

Seeing that death, a necissary end

Shall come when it shall come"

[Tubz]

Thank y'll for your nice comments. I've been wondering for a while why no one was replying. I think Bobby and me and other people know who you really are. Well at least we think so. And please call me Tub everyone, and now waiting no longer Chapter 6.

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Chapter 6: Travel through the Dark World



Hi again friends, last time when I left off on May 4, 2001 me and Magifar were battling then he threw me into the Dark World. The only way to escape from the Dark World is to find the Portal of Power which is in the Swamp Of Diablo. But the people who died in the Dark World had no Armory or at least lost their armory. From what my father Toman taught me. Well now to go look for Magifar.



Hmm, lets see it's a good thing Toman gave me a map that shows the Light World when in it, and the Dark World when in it. Say, there are Several Towers on the map, maybe that tower which is the tallest is where Magifar is hiding. Also what are the 4 books which are appearing on my map for? Hmm, I wonder if they are spell books. Each book has a number, so I guess I should visit each place 1st before facing Magifar.



For, if they are Spell Books then they may make it easier to beat Magifar. All right then off to the 1st Book! Also strangely these books are in all 4 sides of the map: North, South, East, & West. The 1st Book is the North, second is in the West, third in the East, & fourth in the South. I suppose going to the first of the numbers will make it easier to get the other 3.

[`~Shattered_Halo~`]

Whats that suppsose to mean?!?

You don't actually think that im -~Blizzard*~- do you?

Look, the guys alright, but common, I've been accused of being many different people before on Starcraft,but never on jazz2, I don't play that game anymore, I just started getting back into it. I can't believe it, and here I am, being nice by replying to your story JJ Tublear, and what do you do? You accuse me of being someone that I met on jazz2 OVER A YEAR AGO!

I haven't seen the guy in ages and i've been trying to find him. But when I finally do, I find out that hes banned from here forever, so now I can't talk to him. But you people better not ban me, cause if you falsely accuse me of being someone im not, and then ban me, thats just wrong.

[Tubz]

I'm sorry for accusing you Shattered Halo, but I think Bobby thinks that you're Blizzard. Sorry for accusing you well how do you like this Chapter?

[`~Shattered_Halo~`]

Well thank you JJ, and Bobby can think what he wants to, and its a good chapter JJ Tublear!

Good job!

[Tubz]

Chapter 7: Quest for the Books I



Welcome back Readers, now I traveled north. I lookes on my Map just to make sure I wasn't lost and I was going the right way. I made sure what the Building looks like, it looks like a Statue of an Eagle. And so finally made it to the Eagle Statue and I went inside. I equipped my Sword and Shield when going in.



The place looked like some sort of dungeon, there was a door leading north, that is where I went first. In the room there was 3 Bumble Bees, one of them attacked using their Stinger! I quickly blocked with my Shield then I sliced it and it died. Then I ran after the two others and used my sword sliced their bodies *poof* they dissapeared! I got some Crystals from them that may prove helpful later.



I then procceded East and came to a Little Water Spring some Frogs came at me right away I sliced their bodies. I proceded South here the doors were open so I just ran to the one on the West. Inside was 20 Unguarded Gems I quickly got them all and ran back through the East Door. Now just for fun I killed the 3 Chameleons. They kept dissapearing but when I got a chance I hit them with the sword, it looked like they take 2 hits to get destroyed.



So I swinged my sword 4 more times to get the remaining 2 Chameleons. Now this door was closed when I went East, the 1st 2 doors I visited were also Locked. In here were 7 Purple Knights and on the North and South side on the room was 2 Death pits, I quickly hit the Knight they died in one hit. I tried being fun and hit one Knight from the South and made him fall in the pit hehe! I quickly dashed and used my sword on the 5 remaining Knights 3 of them fell in a pit.



One of the Knights dropped a map, hmm this should prove useful! I ran to the north door the ground started shaking uh oh ahhhh! Now I thought there was no escape, but happily I found a new weapon a Boomerang! I proceded forward and there was a huge Spider, phew! At least there was only of them, I ran to him hit him 3 times!



He shot 5 Poison Darts, I jumped avoiding 4 of them but when I landed I couldn't escape and a dart hit me ahhhhhh. And I was Poisoned, now I WAS REAL MAD! I dashed used the Boomerang and hit him 2 times and he died. This big guy when I was fighting him was blocking the door and never moved from the door. This Boomerang doesn't exactly kill as I found out when I used it on that Giant Spider, it freezes enemies for a while.



I went North and there was a Crossbones picture on the ground near the North room, I went North and... Ahh at last the Boss Room, well i'm thinking this guy will be easy since this is the first Dungeon. I was locked in the room, the boss was a giant Whitish-Blue Demon. I hit him 8 hard times with my sword in his stomach. He created a huge Twister it hurt me real bad, and I lost 60% of my health.



Everytime I get hit by a baddie I lose 5%, and with a boss the amount of health lost is Misceallaneous. I was really hurt so I walked fast to the guy just before he attacked I hit him 6 times. So far 14 hits, now he was super angry. And started Hailstorms wherever I was standing. I was hit twice losing 20%. I was getting Poisoned constantly during the battle.



I had 15% of health before I fainter. He tried a Whirlwind that would've end my life. But luckily I used Agility Left and Right to each side of the room then I was on the left side of him near him. I ran right and my sword sliced right through his body and cut him in half. He exploded then I fell to the ground tired.



Out of him came a picture of my face in a Bubble and the Book. I automatically got my health raised to 100% when I touched the Bubble! I read the Book and luckily it was a Spellbook, & I think the other books will definantely be Spellbooks. I learned the spell of Hurricane, which was the attack he was about to use before I performed Agility. Also there was some sort of cracked wall North of me, I used Hurricane and it destroyed the wall and nothing else.



I ran North and escaped out of the Dungeon. I looked at the dungeon once more and since the Guardian was gone the place was destroyed and turned into Rubble as it fell to the ground. I put the book in my Pant where all the other Equipment was. I wondered to myself is it reallly worth it to go through all this trouble for a Spellbook and maybe a new Equipment Item? I though carefully to myself, then I smiled and said to myself.....



Yeah it is worth it!

[Bobby aka Dizzy]

I know who you are Halo, there is no denying that. IP adresses do not lie.

[Tubz]

You think you can say how the story is please Bobby?

[`~Shattered_Halo~`]

????

Well thats quite a big accuisation there fellas.



and stop calling me -~Blizzard*~-

This is annoying, oh yeah!

Bobby, I plan on getting Cable sometime soon, till then, im stuck with dial up, and if you are accessing my ip, techinally your hacking me

[`~Shattered_Halo~`]

Keep it up JJ Tublear, thats a really good chapter!

and ElectroPiZZa, are you sucking up towards the Mods here?

[Ducky]

I knew. I just hope he hasn't killed himself yet. Hm. Perhaps I should don the dark shroud of modness and tell Bobby to use private messages.

Sorry Bobby.

And he-who-must-not-be-named.

`Ducky

[Coppertop]

Goo- ummmm, where was I? Oh yeah, Good story, JJ! (Tub?) It's awesome. . .

[Bobby aka Dizzy]

I'm not accessing your IP Bliz, rather comparing it based off of Blizard's IP. True the IP is different since its a dialup, but the host is exactly the same. Every time you post your IP is stored in the database.

[`~Shattered_Halo~`]

Im not a hacker.....Just cause I've stolen some ip's before....

[Tubz]

I'm sorry for not replying for such a long time. I've been kinda having a break from writing. It was like every 2 days I was writing a Chapter, and I wrote so far 7 Chapters! And boy this story isn't over yet! If I can I was thinking of a Zafitariers Quest II. Heh it's totally different from this story. Now wait for something I just had to say at the end of the Chapter.

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Chapter 8: Quest for the Books II



Hi i'm Zafitarier, I barely escaped from the first Dungeon. Well off to the 2nd Dungeon in the West. Hmm, this dungeon is in some sort of swamp & it's raining. How strange, wow when I saw this area from a distance it was raining, everlasting rain! How weird and creepy, now where is that Dungeon.



Ahh there it is on the West of the swamp! Ahh fudge dang these stupid swamp mud monsters. Looks like they're trying to grab my leg and pull me in the Swamp, I don't think so! (Swish, Swoosh, Swish) I sliced the monsters hands with my Broad Sword! Ahhh man, I ran West to the entrance, I was locked in.



Ok 2 doors one leading East and the other leading North. I'll take the East door, ahh dang wrong door I was locked in 5 Snakes were coming at me they had 3 health each. They tried shooting Poison darts at me but I blocked them with my Long Shield. Then luckily they were all in a straight line in the back of the room, they were trying to jump up and dash toward me and bite me. They missed I then dashed with my sword in front of me.



They were on the opposite side of the room, then I quickly dashed back I dashed right at them with my sword in front it took 2 hearts away. Then I slowly walked up to each and hit each one once they died. The door opened I ran back West, and went North. Right door heh 2 Blue Gems and some food was here. I carried the food and put it in my pocket, it was a snack bar (I don't know what a snack bar is doing here maybe the bosses aren't so mean and they put these treasures in on purpose).



Went back South and East, when I went back West and North I had forgot about the Key one of the Snakes dropped, so i picked up the Key and went South. 2 Turtles were in this room they couldn't attack but tried to steal my Gems. They took 20 of my gems, I got mad and swinged my boomerang at them, they stunned. I used my sword 5 times on each of the frogs and they finally died. I procceded East using my key on the locked door, it worked.



I went North 5 Gems and 3 Evil Moths in the room their health was 2, they tried spreading some sort of Spore on me. I quickly dodged the Spore. And killed 2 of the Moths and hurt the 3rd moth once. He threw Spore and it hit me ahhh I screamed, I fell asleep. Foolishly the Moth was punding me I went down to 82% Health, I finally woke up.



And punched the Moth hard he dissapeared. I went East and decided to avoid the 8 Rats who had 1 hp. I just went North the door was open without having to kill the Rats. Yay, the map was in front of me but I Giant Spider was guarding it, but not the Door. This reminded me of that spider in the first dungeon who poisoned, boy was I made seeing this Spider's face it's the same Spider as the one in the first Dungeon.



This Spider was more powerful had 10 hp and was still poisonous. He spit 5 darts I deflected them all with my shield. I pounded the Spider with my fist 3 times and used my sword 8 times he fainted. I grabbed the map and moved West. 3 Ice Cream Bars were in the Northeastern corner, dag this gets stranger by the minute!



Ice Cream Bars ina Dungeon how strange. I ate them plus that Candy Bar. My Health rose to 97%. In the Center of this room was one black pit I jumped in since there were no more doors in this floor. 20 Blue Jewels laid on the ground, I got them.



On the Ground near the only door in the room which was North was the Crossbones sign again, this meant the boss is in the next room. In the East and West there was no ground but Molten Lava. The ground I was on was Icy, geez *sigh*. I said to myself the Boss was a Giant Scorpion. I hope he had low health, he didn't he had 12 Health. He shot 7 Poisonous darts, I ran to the back of the room and blocked all 7 they homed for me but they all hit the shield.



I dashed right at the Scorpion with my sword in front & hit him right in his Stomach he totally fainted. After 20 second he awoke, and shot 14 Poisonous Darts and they all missed even when one hit me from the North, West, & East. Not South because I went in the back of the room again. I dashed right at him again with my Sword in front of me. He fainted and blew up. I grabbed the Book and learned the Spell of Poison!



And got full health. A door appeared North and I escaped. Two books down, two books to go. This is getting tougher but yet somehow still fun! The West Castle now collapsed after I escaped.

[Tubz]

Hey did you guys think my story was dead! Ahh no way, man not until the Fat lady Sings it'll be over!

[Tubz]

Do I have to start listening to Shattered Halo about what to do if you guys don't give me feedback? C'mon feedback please stop ignoring please! http://jazz2.nagcentral.com/forum/images/smiles/icon_mad.gif

[`~Shattered_Halo~`]

I told you I was the only one supporting you, and thats what I got for it, well I can thank you ex member, and go get some new friends

[Tubz]

Hey wait a second Shattered Halo. Argh this is all Bobby's fault. Dang you man Bobby you had to bring up the IP Address thing and saying Halo is Blizzard. Now look what you did. He's not a friend anymore just because of your stupid IP Address thing dang you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Tubz]

Chapter 9: Quest for the Books III



Welcome back, I almost forgot to say but when the 3 Poison Darts came at me from the North, West, & East I ran and jumped over the north one. Then the North dart splattered on a wall and the East & South dart splattered into each other, and then I ran for the Beast and killed him. The swamp turned into a desert when I escaped from the Dungeon. I traveled East to the 3rd dungeon it was in a forest. I went inside.



One door was leading North when I entered no badguys in the room, so I procceded North. One door leading West and 4 Tadpoles who were in a water puddle in the room came right out and tried to attack me, I pulled my sword back and pulled it in front of me killing 1 Tadpole. The Tadpoles had 1 hp. I just slashed the other 3 and procceded West. Two doors in here one South and 1 North, I went to the South.



15 Blue Gems lay in the room and so were 2 Metallic Knights. They were asleep, trying not to disturb them I grabbed the 15 Blue Gems. They awoke I used the Boomerang on them and they froze I escaped the room. Procceding into the North room was 10 Purple Bats with 1 Hp hanging on the wall. They were awoke they came right at me, I sliced each one until all 10 were destroyed.



Procceding into the East door was a evil Thunder Cloud. When she saw me she came right at me trying to shock me, my sword was useless on it. But in the Northeastern, Northwestern, Southeastern, & Southwestern corner of the room were 4 little pots with nothing in them. I picked each up and threw at the cloud after the fourth pot she died. I was shocked twice and dropped down to 78% Health, I felt Paralyzed.



I went to asleep for 3 minutes, I felt unparalyzed when I awoke. That was an experiment readers, I just tried to see if it would happily it did work! I had to kill the Thundercloud for the East door was locked. Going East there was 12 mad ants with 3 hp each. I ran and had my sword in front of me to kill all 12. They hurt me I dropped down to 62% Health.



I decided to name this attack I constantly use as: SwordDash. In the next room (which was north) the tiles of the room were dissapearing I had to dash to the North door. I fell down though, and had died. But strangely I appeared back at the front of the dungeon all the rooms were open and all enemies I killed were still dead. I wonder how I am alive?



Back at that Dissapearing Tiles room this time I dashed really fast, & almost made it I was hanging on to the door's cliff and climbed up and into the door. I went North for that's where the door was, and I went down into the hole since there was no rooms left on this floor. Also when I died my health returned. Skull & Crossbones sign was drawn on the floor of the North door. I went North, the door locked behind me.



A huge Monster named the Tyragipitarier (Teh-rag-ae-pi-tear-eir = Pronounciation) was the Boss of the Dungeon he was 20 feet talls he was almost reaching the Ceiling! I quickly started Battling him I used Poison on him. His health drained by 3 hp each 2 minutes. His health was 46 hp. I used SwordDash 4 times on him, he used Fire attacks I was burned after a while.



Health Status after the 4 SwordDash attacks, Poisoning, & Fire are me:59%, him 23%. To finish him off I used Agiliy & Bubble on him. He went down to 8% Health. He threw 15 fireballs at me for 8 hit me. I dropped down to 5% Health. Every 2 minutes as well a I lost 3 health to finish him. I used Bubble and he died.



I now was at 2% health before I died, I know this boss wouldn't be dead when I awoke, & he'd be alive. So I grabbed the Picture of me, & the Book which contained the Spell of Flamethrower. A door opened West and I escaped. The dungeon turned to rubble. Now thinking to myself there is 1 dungeon left.



With 3 Spells plus the one I knew before the Books I must defeat the last DungeonMaster and Magifar. Hmm, I know I can do it if I try. Never give up courage I thought to myself!



_________________

JJT



Read my story Zafitariers Quest in the War Tavern.

[Violet CLM]

You know, I first started reading this when it was started. I didn't like it very much then so I abandoned it. (Wait, there's more) Today, I read how this was being ignored and I decided to give it another chance. The milk of human kindness does something or other. I read it from the begininning, not remembering it very well. It didn't start out all that well. But your writing skills have certainly improved and the last few chaps are quite cool. Nice work, and continue. http://jazz2.nagcentral.com/forum/images/smiles/icon_smile.gif

[Tubz]

Heh I have sloppy handwriting. And the strange thing is each paragraph has 5 sentences I think. And i'm typing this as I think it's from scratch. I didn't already write this and then look at a paper and type it up.



Thanks for the comment Unknown Rabbit.

[Tubz]

Chapter 10: Quest for the Books IV



After I escaped from the East Dungeon, I went South to the final Dungeon. In the South there was pitch blackness coming out from a tree. I went inside, & I ended up in a Dark forest. I went South, West, then North and at the end was a dungeon with the entrance opened. I went inside and landed into the fourth Dungeon.



I went North and in the Northern room there was 12 bats around the North and East door of the room. The bats were sleeping, so I tried tippie-toeing to the North door. In this room there was 2 Cheetahs. They came right at me and slashed me I defended with my shield. I used SwordDash on them both and they died. Then I moved to the East door.



In this door there was 15 Rats, I went up to each and slashed them. 1 Rat bit me, I dropped to 96% health. In the room there was 3 blue gems and a key. After picking them up I went back West and South back to the room with the bats. I tried tip-toeing to the East door to avoid waking up the bats but they heard me!



I quickly sprinted to the East door, I luckily but barely made it to the East door. In here there was 2 big Frogs, one Frog dashed at me and hit me I dropped to 89% health. I was angry I just swinged me sword fast at them after 12 hits they both were dead, I moved South. In here there was dissapearing tiles and no enemies I quickly ran to the East door. In this room there laid a group of 8 bats.



The bats weren't asleep. So I quickly slashed at them, after a while the bats had died. I moved into the the North door, in here there were 13 Salamanders. The Salamanders were pretty slow at moving. So I just quickly moved East. 4 Blue gems and a candy bar laid in this room but they were guarded by 1 Ninja Fox.



I tried blocking his attacks but soon he slashed me which dropped me to 81% health. I grabbed him and threw him to the back of the room he lost half his health. Then I ran around the room slashing my sword all about. Eventually he met with the sword and was slashed, the Fox died. I grabbed the Gems and ate the Candy Bar which raised my health to 86%.



I moved East, and in here there was 1 Giant Spider. Hmm, I quickly used SwordDash and slashed him. Before he got a chance tot attack he died in front of the South door he was guarding. There was a also a East door in this room and I went East before South. In here there was 23 Chameleons and no goodies, I was pranked!



Angrily I went back West and then into the South door. In here there were more dissapearing tiles I quickly sprinted and went into the West door. In this door there was 12 Caterpillars. I just slashed quickly each of them and they were dead. Now I went into the South door and here laid a trio of Moths.



They tried putting me to sleep but I defended with my Shield. Now I went East and here there was a bag of Potato Chips smack dab in the center of the room. I ate the Chips and my health rose to 93%. I went East for a third room of dissapearing tiles. I quickly ran to the North door.



In this door was a sequence of Warp Panels. After about 6 minutes I got the sequence right and moved North. Four Tarantulas were guarding this room, I slashed eached 4 times. Till all 4 were down after 16 hits. This room was the last room on Floor One, so I went into the black square in the middle of the room and landed into the 2nd floor.



2 Turtles were in the room, I wanted to avoid the fight so I went North. There was nothing in this room but a picture of a Skull and Crossbones on the tiles next to the North door. I proceded North and landed into the boss room, the door locked beind me. This was strange the room started to go away and I was left in some strange area. When I looked behind me a Giant Tiger appeared.



He said "Hello young warrior, are you surprised that I can talk?" I replied "Yes I am." He replied "Oh so you are surprised, well welcome. I am the fourth Dungeon boss, if you beat me I will give you the Spell book that you seek." I reply "How did you know that I wanted your Spell Book? And isn't there any other way to settle this instead of fighting?" He says "I did know that you wanted the Spell Book, because I saw how you defeated my brothers and sisters in the North, West, and East Dungeon. And not there is no other way to settle this."



I reply "Very well I didn't really want to fight but if I must, then I will fight." He replied "Yes, come and get me!" He started by turning me into a Icicle then he stomped me, I went down to 76% health. I used HyperSwordDash (which is an enhanced version of Sword) and he lost from 204% health to 179% health after he broke my frozen prison by stomping me. Then I slashed him about 15 times which dropped him to 129% health.



Now he used FireGround and he shot a fire snake that chased me. I tried using my shield to block but it didn't work. I dropped to 51% health. Now I tried using Hurricane on him, it dropped him all they way to 96% health. He tried to finish me off by using SlicerDown which shot slicing weapon from his hand that went to the ground and hurt me.



I dropped to 2% health, now I used Sword Dash it dropped him to 78% health. Now he just stomped me and I died and landed back into the Dungeon. I ran all the way back to the Battlefield. The door locked again and the dungeonn dissapeared again. He replied "Boy you are a pest aren't you, you never go away."



I reply "I suppose so." Now he stomped me which dropped my health to 71%. I sliced him and used Flamethrower, it hurt and toasted him and dropped him to 10% health. He dropped some Evil hands on the ground which acted as a shield for him, they were too small to attack. So I tried using Flamethrower it toasted all the hands.



I finished him off by Slashing him 4 times it dropped him to 0% health. "You have a good heart young warrior, go and defeat Magifar!" He said, and I say "Yes thank you, rest in Peace." He just died now, and the dungeon came back. I grabbed the picture of me and read the Spell Book and learned the spell of SlicerDown.



The North wall bombed and I went through the door. I decided it was best not to have asked him, how he knew he Magifar is, he was pretty intellegent to me. After I exited the dungeon, the dungeon turned to Rubble. I escaped to Forest and said to myself that only one thing is left to do and that is to find Magifar!

[Tubz]

My story is updated, can you guys please reply.

[Sakura]

I'm tired. It was good. Grunt.

I liked it. Kinda. Sorta.

[Ducky]

It was. Good.

http://jazz2.nagcentral.com/forum/images/smiles/icon_smile.gif

`Ducky

[Coppertop]

Wot she said.

[Violet CLM]

"You know the world is crazy when people are DiYing left and right and are normal again right afterwards." Or whatever that Bluebloard post said. http://jazz2.nagcentral.com/forum/images/smiles/icon_smile.gif Anyway, nice.

[Tubz]

Chapter 11: Showdown



Welcome back readers, where we last left off I had learned the 4 Spells of the 4 dungeons: Hurricane, Poison, Flamethrowers, & SlicerDown. Now it's time to search for Magifar. Hmm, just like how the four dungeons appeared on my Map so does a picture of Magifar's face appears on my Map. Looks like the face is at the tallest tower in the map. After a long time I eventually reached the tower.



I went inside, and the map was right ahead of me waiting was Magifar. "Ahh, good to see you Zafitarier. I was waiting here for you." He said, and I reply "Do you mind asking me why you had dropped me into the Dark World?!" He replies "No, I don't really mind it's that you were becoming a pest. So I had to get rid of you somehow, and the only way to get rid of you I decided was to drop you here into the Dark World!" I said "Oh so that's why well I beat you thought you would get rid of me. Well wrong Magifar i'm back! And now to finish this rendezvous."



He replies "Geez, you really are a pest Zafitarier. Well prepare to meet death for your first and last time!" I reply "Eat your words Magifar! Because I have heard that one too many times and it seemed that the fate happened to them and not me!" He replies "That's it your dead!" I reply "Fine, Magifar have it your way but i'm warning you to back off and stop acting like a baby!" He says "I'm a baby huh, well we'll just see about that. And i'm not scared of you punk!"



He started off by dashing me and pounding me with my fists. I got hurt and dropped down to 88% health. I started off on him and used SwordDash he dropped from 238% Health to 222% Health. I used HyperSwordDash on him he dropped to 210% health. I kicked him about 3 times and he dropped to 198% Health.



He slashed me with his sword 12 times, I was heavily wounded and dropped to 53% Health. I used Hurricane which hurt affected him a lot. He dropped to 114% Health, and I lost from 10/10 Magic down to 7/10 Magic. He MegaKicked me in the Stomach I dropped to 21% Health. Now I used Flamethrower and Poison on him I went down to 3/10 Health which isn't enough to cast anymore spells.



He was poisoned and lost 2% Health every 30 seconds. And his Health went down to 82% Health from the Flamethrower and Early effects of the Poison spells. He cast DoomTruce which knocked off the walls and ceiling in the room and started Poisoning me by 4% every 15 seconds. He replies "Oh yeah did I forget to say this, but you won't win." I reply "You may be right, but not the way you mean as in saying your going to live, nope someone else will kill me."



He replies "You are smart Mr. Zafitarier, that's what I did mean." I slashed him quickly 12 times and used SwordDash plus HyperSwordDash, and his health dropped to 8% Health. I dropped to 5% Health, so I quickly used a SwordDash and he fainted. I dropped to 1% Health from more Poison. He replied "Ahh geez, you killed me, I can't believe it. Even when I cast DoomTruce on you which was supposed to make you give in to accepting defeat."



I reply "Yeah you were tought to defeat, your reign is finally over Magifar." He replies "Yes, you're right, but my master will take care of you, here let me mark him on your map. Ok good I marked him on your map, defeat him and you truly are a warrior! Master will continue my rein of evil for me! Sorry master, I failed you." I reply "Yes Magifar i'll defeat him!" He just fainted, I collected the picture of me that he left behind. The pictures of me replenish both health and magic.



I left the tower, and it turned to rubble. As I thought originally that defeating Magifar was my original goal, no I guess I was wrong I have a new goal.

[Tubz]

Chapter 12: A new foe



Ahhhhhhhhh, what's going on?! Suddenly after I exited the tower where I defeated Magifar and then just suddenly the Dark World is shaking and is starting to collapse! Whoa, this is freaky I said to myself. I'm in the middle of nowhere! Just suddenly the area turned into some of room, with no windows and no doors!



And in the back of the rooms lay about a 6' Pig, with a Axe. Pig said "Argh, your the person who defeated my Apprentice um well I mean Henchman!?" I say "Yes, and oh my gosh! No you can't be it's impossible, oh boy your, your Ganon!" Ganon said "Yep right you are and now lets cut to the chase get ready to dance with doom!" I say "Bring it on!"



His health is 1022%, and I know him because I played the Zelda games, and he isn't all that hard to beat. Oh shoot, I forgot I need Silver Arrows to beat him! What the heck, and this picture of Link appears: "Wish granted, oh yeah Zafitarier don't forget the bow!" Boy, I gotta stop eating this doughnuts with Chocalate Milk! "Thank you picture of Link!"



I say, he replies "No problem, just doing my good deed. Oh look at the time gotta run Flagsitar needs help putting out the fire in the real world in London, United Kingdom." I attack him with HyperSwordDash and he stun for 5 seconds. I quickly prepare a arrow in the bow, and shoot it at him. Ow, that's gotta hurt he dropped to 503%. I used Flamethrower and a Silver arrow and he stunned for 5 seconds again before his health dropped to 15%.



I finished him off by using SlicerDown and an arrow he stunned for 5 seconds then his health dropped to 0%. You see, the thing with Ganon is that you can't just hit Ganon with the Silver Arrows and he'll die, you have to hurt me with anything but the Silver arrows then shoot the Silver Arrows at him. But once again before he died he replied "I just can't belive this my other Henchman Agahnim was defeated by link. And you defeat this Henchman of mine Magifar. Argh anyway you know i'll be back." I reply "Maybe, but someone else will conquer you just like I did." He died well sorta, the room dissapeared and I was brought back to the Dark World.



And now to go home!



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JJT



Zafitariers Quest is about a boy who quested to defeat a magician who did evil things.

[Tubz]

Afterword



Yes i'm so happy. The time portal that takes people back to the Real world has appeared on my map! Now after a long time the Time Portal appeared in the Northwestern corner of the map. What's cool is that I suppose since Ganon was dead, all those bad creatures are nice now. I suppose they were controlled by Ganon, they see and are not attacking me so I gues that means that they are good.



I went into the time portal and landed into the Real World. The time dissapeared so no one can gain access to the Dark World ever again, hopefully. I went to the castle and I talked to King Zitracius "Hello King, your worries are over. I have defeated Magifar and Ganon well at least until he comes back in another place." The King replies "Thank you Zavitarier. Now would you like any reward for your good deed?" I reply "No thanks Kind Zitracius, I don't need to accept gift. I am happy for what I have done. Now I will go home to my house in Zitracius. And take a long deserved rest!"



I leave the castle and leave for my house. While I walk I think to myself hmm, well I could've been killed in that battle. I just think that it was crazy that Ganon didn't even touch me in the battle. Cool! Now to go to sleep when I get home, and put this worry to rest.













The End

[Tubz]

Pronounciations



Here is how you pronounce those crazy names that were in the story. Yes, it's me Zafitarier talking. I have a tendency of talking to myself to much even my creator JJ Tublear talks to himself. These names aren't in order.



1. Zafitarier-(Zah-fi-tear-e-err)

2. Zitracius-(Zi-trace-e-us)

3. Magifar-(Mag-i-far)

4. Ganon-(Gah-nin)

5. Flagsitar-(Flag-si-tar)

6. Flaria-(Flare-e-a)

7. Pasicar-(Pass-i-car)

8. Turrot-(Ter-row)

9. Toman-(Toe-min)

10. Tyragipitarier-(Teh-rag-ae-pi-tear-eir)

[Tubz]

1 New Chapter, the Afterword, and Pronounciations added. The story has finally been finished.

[Tubz]

Story - Over



I hope y'll enjoyed it. Now to give it to a boy at school.

[aeshibby13]

*Claps*

[Ducky]

Thank you, Tublear. *grins* You're a spiffy cool authour.

[Tubz]

HAHAHAHA, thanks Ducky. Did you all forget about that last few chapters. Perhaps you all did forget.

[4I Falcon]

Was this story based off of an RPG, or just a made-up RPG story?

Either way... *rolls eyes* RPGs are un-l33t. Especially D&D-esque RPGs. Bleh.

[Tubz]

Well actually it's based off a RPG. Well sorta, read the story and find out for yourself 4I Falcon.

[4I Falcon]

I did read the story, and, no offense to you or your authoring skills of course, I'm not impressed.

[Tubz]

HHAHAHA and you and a few people are the only ones who didn't like my story. Foos.

[4I Falcon]

No, it is you who art the foo.

*waves arms around and disappears in a cloud of smoke*

I claim the first page of the War Tavern.