Prologue



Hi citizens my name is Zafitarier & boy do I have a story to tell you. Here's how it started the evil Warlock Magifar was trapped in a dungeon 6 years ago on February 19, 1995. For he performed a crime and the crime was he kidnapped the Princess Flaria. But when the Knights of Zavitarius from the Kingdom of Zitracius and Castle of Zavitarius came the 3 of them went to find him. They finally tracked him down for he nevere left town they tracked him down by splitting up.



He cast ThunderDown on the 2nd Knight named Pasicar who found him it inflicted Light damage on the Knight. The Knight used his chain on Magifar it was defelected when Magifar used Reflect. Next, the knight hid behind a rock, Magifar thought he ran away but he didn't. Using the old Guerilla Warfare technique Pasicar slinged the Chain right at him and his his stomach good thing the chain had no spikes on it. Magifar fainted and awoke when he was arrested.



Pasicar found his brother (the other 2 kknights) & they took Magifar to the the castle. And was sent to the dungeon to serve 8 years. Pasicar released the princes Flaria, & she was returned to the castle. 6 years later Magifar broke out.

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JJT



Read my story Zafitariers Quest in the War Tavern.

Awww, add me!! lol

Sorry nobody in the community or any other person is in this story. Not even I am in the story and this purely made up.



Welcome to my 1st story in the War Tavern i hope you enjoy it. I and no one stars in the story. Every character is made up, that makes the story even better.

Chapter 1: Escape



It's April 27, 2001 and something has happened at Castle Zavitarius. A guard was guarding Magifar's Dungeon Cell, just then Magifar realized that he had a Fire attack. And he has never used it since May 4, 1500, so he decicdes to use it on the bars and he melted his Dungeon Cell. He realized he had the attack when he used his wand and fire came out, for he hid his wand in his cloak so the guards wouldn't find it. Next, he used Sleep on the guard and escaped.



To get escape from the Dungeon and Escape he used Invisibily, it only lasts for 5 mins before going off. So he just ran right out of the castle. He was running out of Mana, so he went look for the sacred Pool of Mana.

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JJT



Read my story Zafitariers Quest in the War Tavern.

Nobody cares about me story I'm so depressed right now. I nobody cares you guys should say that you don't like my story. Sob Sob...

Now now, don't go pulling a Kiku on me here!

Keep it up JJ!

Its AWESOME!!!!!

Your just saying that I don't believe you.

BAH!!!!

If I wasn't serious, I'd insult the story, im that type of person, KEEP IT UP!!!!!!!!!!!!!Or else Ill bombarden this page with messages that don't make any sense

Pi is rux0r.

Er, pie.

Do continue, I have been reading this but I never wanted to move the mouse aaaaalll the way uuuuuup to the post reply button.

So, will you?

`Ducky

Thanks for the nice comments Blizzard & Ducky now on to Chapter 2!

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Chapter 2: Plan of Evil



Magifar realized that if he went back to his hideout & committed a crime the first place the Knights of Zavitarius would look would be his hideout. So Magifar decides to pick up all his most treasured belongings and tried to relocate. Magifar had just about enough magic for 1 more spell. So Magifar decides to leave the Kingdom of Zitracius where his hideout is, he decides to move to Turrot the town which is 70 Miles away from Zitracius. But he didn't move into the town to leave he decided to use his last bit of magic for a spell called Dig and he dug a hole with the last of his magic and moved into there.



But this was his plan because he knew it would take him about 12 days walking/running to make it to Turrot. He decided to search for the Mana Pool he had a map in his Treasure Chest of the Desert (which is next to Zitracius) & Zitracius. It told him of where Cactus's are little Houses and even the Buildings in Zitracius, & all importantly the Mana Pool which is somewhere in the Desert. The 70 mile Desert is what separated Zitracius from Turrot. Magifar 2 days later find the Mana Pool, then powers up.



He removes from his treasure chest 6 Clear Jars with Caps. He fills each Jar with the Mana so he can power up any time. Now he used his magic made a Magic Carpet and arrived 3 hours later at Turrot made a Hole in the ground and lived there. Now he decides how will he get his revenge against Pasicar, the other 2 knights, the Castle of Zavitraius, & finally the Kingdom of Zitracius. He decides this time to start by going after Pasicar, but first he decides to create $1000.00 that is totally real now he goes into town and buys 100 jars for $30.00.



And finally fills the jars with Mana using his Magic Carpet which he kept secret in his home. Magifar yells excitedly "It's Payback Time!"

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JJT



Read my story Zafitariers Quest in the War Tavern.

BRAVO!

WAY TO GO JJ!

Keep it up man!

Wait Chapter 2 wasn't over I messed up continue where you stopped Blizzard. Thanks for the comments. Chapter 3 may be tommorow.

*heh*Its all good though

Blizzard it's sad only you like my story. At least someone appreciates their 1st attempt at a story in the Wart Tavern.



I'm still Depressed, Chapter 3 will probably be wrote tommorow. You know that Laburum story (I know I spelled the name wrong) is totally crushing my story. My 1st chance at a War Story that well sorta has to do with War is a total bust.



I gotta stop posting these stupid replies.

Don't worry man, for my first story I had to stop it cause noone wanted to join, don't worry, I had to insult people just to get them to be the bad guys, or at least to join

Should of seen my stories. NEWBIES had more replies then me, I was not happy

Cheers. And besides...your story will probably be up longer because its been seeming like Kiku and Timothy write all their stuff beforehand, or at least have the plot done, so..

`Ducky

Acutally Ducky, I've written stuff about a Year in advance...but im too lazy to post it, I can write on the spot, but its much too difficult, cause then you see your errors, spelling mistakes, grammer mistakes, punction, characters, ect...I can go on and on and on, and that just shows how good they are, they are EXTREMELY good story writers, I would like to put more work into mine, If only I had the time

By the way i've changed my e-mail address i'm still singed up to a service. But I tricked the service into giving me my own e-mail address Jazz2Land is my sorta dead right now website heh. And now I wait no longer Welcome to Chapter 3!

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Chapter 3: Birth of a Warrior



Hi again friends, now I bet your probably wondering how I knew so much about Magifar well i'll tell you. And I also will tell you how I came into this story.



Dateline: March 14, 1497, 3 years before Magifar's rampage, my father Toman was fighting in a war against the Northern Country Turrot. The Wars Toll: 15,000 Men Killed at Zitracius's side. 17,586 men killed at Turrot's side. My father was fighting for Zitracius, the war had lasted 5 years. All but 12 men were killed in the battle my father and Magifar are 2 of the men alive. On the third year of the war those 2 dueled each other.



Toman used a trick of pretending to have died when Magifar used his sword (which he has lost today) on Toman. Just then Toman pretended have died. Maigfar and the 6 other soldiers of the army that were alive on the Turrot side went back to Town because Zitracius' side surrendered. Then the 4 other soldiers on Zitracius's side awed as Toman awoke, because they thought he was dead. And so Tomen went home, Toman my father was killed on 1998 of a Heart Attack.



Even know he was a Wizard, he does have immortal life but until a Natural Cause occurs. But just before he died he told me about Magifar and about his war, you see I was born on 1988 and even know i'm 12. He knew that i'd understand. And so I promised to get revenger on Magifar for his evil deeds. Before he died he said "Take my Dagger & Light Shield, to help you on your quest."



And so tommorow May 3, 2001 I will get revenge on Magifar.

Chapter 4: Plans



Now I know your going to be wondering how I will accomplish this task of taking down Magifar. First I'll have to get a Broad Sword from the Village which costs $750.00! And next some Health potions from the Magic Shop for $3.00 each & I'll need about 5 of the Potions, and finally a Long Shield from the Armory for $100.00! Hmm, how will I accomplish this? I got it, in the desert there are foes that are waiting to eat any hero.



The creatures give you $10.00 everytime you beat one of them or a group of them together or a assorted group of monsters. Well all I need is $865.00. And so 30 days go by and I have all the money I need. I would have been dead but thanks to the nice people at the Inn back at Zitracius they only make me pay $4.00 to heal all my wounds & to rest for a day. I've gotten Powerful over the days, the creatures in the desert aren't so evil after all their kinda nice, heh.



Now I think i'm ready to go face Magifar. Since I saw him in the Desert hiding near Turrot i'll go there!

I think this story is doing pretty bad I should start bugging people heh.

Now now, I don't know why these people aren't reading this story, and what happened to this -~Blizzard~- character?

From checking this he/she's posts, they haven't been on in awhile, what happened?

and btw, Im a new comer, and I like your story

Blizz won't be posting for a while :P

But, do continue, Tublear..or however you spell that

`Ducky

Sorry Moderators, I messed up and sorry Shatered Halo, I guess I misread my story... Let me see if I can extend the story it was originally gonna be a Prologue, and 6 Chapters but maybe longer. So after I finish Homework Chapter 5 might be written. And this is my 1st story.

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Ahh that's not cool can't wait for Blizzard to come back online!



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Read my story Zafitariers Quest in the War Tavern.

What do you mean, he won't be on for awhile?

Does he have too much homework?

Chapter 5: Zavitarier vs Magifar



I guess I messed up and decided to go after Magifar on May 4. Now that I have all my Equipment it's time to face Magifar. Luckily my father Toman taught me some useful spells. Such as Speed, and so I cast Speed and I ran to Turrot in 6 minutes. Speed wore off when I arrived. I knocked on his house: Magifar said "I'm coming."



"Who are you and what're you here for?" Magifar asked, "My name is Zafitarier I think you remember my father Toman, Magifar." "What!" Screamed Magifar "So your his son!" "Yes, I am his son and I am very angry about the things you have done." "Kidnapping the Princess, causing a war, may I go on?" I said. "No, so you wanna fight me? Well bring it on!!!!" Magifar screamed, and I reply "Yes, I want a war: and don't think i'm just coming up to you, i've been training in the desert." Magifar replys "Ha, you'll still won't be a match for me!"



"There will be 2 rounds Zavitarier, I will crush you slowly by slowly in both rounds if you manage to survive, you'll still be dommed HAHAHAHAHAHA! Are ya ready Warrior?!" I say "Yes, i am ready."



In the first round he threw bolts of Lightening at me, I can't hit him back or i'll get hurt. So I hit my sword at his bolts, I did this 5 times, dissapearing after a while. Then came round 2.



He threw 3 fireballs at once. I couldn't use the sword so I tried my shield. It deflected the Fireballs and shot it back. After 3 hits he said, and also he was dissapearing again. "Very good Zavitarier, but like I said YOU WON'T WIN!" "Ahh!" I screamed.



Magifar dissapeared, and dropped me into the Dark World which is the opposite of this place, but crimson, scarier, more powerful, & definantely more deadly.



I figured that Magifar disappeared into this world I dropped into, and is waiting for me somewhere. It's time for some major revenge!



Oh yeah for not telling you friends, but I have 2 names one is Zavitarier my original name, & my more easier to say name is Zavitarius

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JJT



Read my story Zafitariers Quest in the War Tavern.

During the school year?

Well maybe, you never know, and BRAVO!!!!!!

Blizz was banned for yelling at Kiku.

Nice chapter. Do continue..

`Ducky

Just for yelling?

Whoa, im not too sure I should of came onto this message board then, just hopefully no one will make me mad, and he musta said some pretty bad stuff, either that, or this kiku must really not be thinking, whats -~Blizzard~-'s email?

I don't know. Blizz had warnings before, this was his last.

I think a lot of people wanted to yell at Kiki. He got there first and had a bad record...siigh.

`Ducky

Hmm...Too bad, didn't she get warned for anything?

From what I've read in the past, I would of banned them BOTH, seeing as they both create havoc on this community, but thats my opinion, and thats all it is

Shattered Halo, you are fooling no one.

It took me a while to realize that. Heh.

????

Whatever, well nice meeting you too bobby, and hopefully we can see another chapter from you again jj, and can someone tell me what -~Blizzard*~-'s email is?

please

Nice goin', JJ!



Here's an explanation for why ppl aren't replying: They are so absorbed in the story, waiting with bated breath for the next part that they can't stand to hit he reply button for fear they will miss something. I had to FORCE myself to leave that last part, it's so good.



Okay, maybe it's stretching the truth a little, but in my opinion this story is excellent (for a 1st one). Just continue and wait for ppl to catch on that their supposed to encourage you too, not just hope desperately for the next part.

I strongly agree with Copper!

Hey, don't let this discourage you. People read, we are just too lazy to post.



Besides, if we all stopped when there were few replies, we'd have no stories. Although I almost considered stopped Akeldama because no one replied, but I kept it up and its still somewhat a favorite of some.



Keep up the writing!



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"Cowards die many times before their deaths;

The valiant never taste of death but once.

Of all the wonders that I yet have heard,

It seems to me most strange that men should fear;

Seeing that death, a necissary end

Shall come when it shall come"

Thank y'll for your nice comments. I've been wondering for a while why no one was replying. I think Bobby and me and other people know who you really are. Well at least we think so. And please call me Tub everyone, and now waiting no longer Chapter 6.

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Chapter 6: Travel through the Dark World



Hi again friends, last time when I left off on May 4, 2001 me and Magifar were battling then he threw me into the Dark World. The only way to escape from the Dark World is to find the Portal of Power which is in the Swamp Of Diablo. But the people who died in the Dark World had no Armory or at least lost their armory. From what my father Toman taught me. Well now to go look for Magifar.



Hmm, lets see it's a good thing Toman gave me a map that shows the Light World when in it, and the Dark World when in it. Say, there are Several Towers on the map, maybe that tower which is the tallest is where Magifar is hiding. Also what are the 4 books which are appearing on my map for? Hmm, I wonder if they are spell books. Each book has a number, so I guess I should visit each place 1st before facing Magifar.



For, if they are Spell Books then they may make it easier to beat Magifar. All right then off to the 1st Book! Also strangely these books are in all 4 sides of the map: North, South, East, & West. The 1st Book is the North, second is in the West, third in the East, & fourth in the South. I suppose going to the first of the numbers will make it easier to get the other 3.

Whats that suppsose to mean?!?

You don't actually think that im -~Blizzard*~- do you?

Look, the guys alright, but common, I've been accused of being many different people before on Starcraft,but never on jazz2, I don't play that game anymore, I just started getting back into it. I can't believe it, and here I am, being nice by replying to your story JJ Tublear, and what do you do? You accuse me of being someone that I met on jazz2 OVER A YEAR AGO!

I haven't seen the guy in ages and i've been trying to find him. But when I finally do, I find out that hes banned from here forever, so now I can't talk to him. But you people better not ban me, cause if you falsely accuse me of being someone im not, and then ban me, thats just wrong.

I'm sorry for accusing you Shattered Halo, but I think Bobby thinks that you're Blizzard. Sorry for accusing you well how do you like this Chapter?

Well thank you JJ, and Bobby can think what he wants to, and its a good chapter JJ Tublear!

Good job!