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Shiverz
Jun 9, 2002, 02:15 AM
Devan Strikes Back !!!

Chapter 1

The bar went quiet. Jazz stood and grabbed his gun and slowly aimed it. At a rabbit at the door. “Jazz what you doing this is meant to be a place to chill not to aim your gun
at rabbits you don’t know, ”Yelled Spaz. Lori Ran over to Jazz and grabbed his gun
then looked at him in a stern way. “ LORI gimme my gun back I need it to shoot
people , “ said Jazz.



The Bartender looked at Jazz and pointed his finger towards the door. Jazz stood there like a dummy until Spaz whispered in his ear , “ I think he wants you to leave “. Jazz slowly walked out he took his back pack off and picked out a carrot. “ Why do I always get sent out (Crunch) it’s not fair (Crunch) “ moaned Jazz. “ Hey what’s that over there it looks like a turtle but it can’t be one of Devan’s turtles because him and the turtles were banished to the Jungrock planet.


In fact there stood a turtle but the shell wasn’t the colour of Devans and his minions shell instead this turtles was blue and white . “ Emm excuse me mister rabbit could you direct me to Nippius “ asked the Turtle. Jazz Stood Puzzled . “ Sorry but that’s another planet this is the planet Carrotus I could take you to Nippius though “ replied Jazz.

Chapter 2

The Ice Bar stood in front of Jazz’s eyes . “Great now I have a place to have a drink “ exclaimed Jazz. The turtle went inside and Jazz was just about to follow when his mobile phone rang . “ Jazz were are you … oh I can see your on Nippius well enjoy yourself I noticed theres rabbits on that planet “ said Spaz. Jazz turned his phone off and went inside the Ice Bar . The bartender stared at him as if he knew who he was then said , “ JimBob where have you been “.

“Excuse me I’m called Jazz not JimBob “ said Jazz. He walked in all the rabbits round him glared at him as if he were Devan . A rabbit sat in the corner Jazz could just see him. The rabbit approached Jazz slowly then took his gun out and aimed it at Jazz’s head . “ Who are you rabbit and where you from, “ asked the rabbit .
“ I’m Jazz Jackrabbit from Carrotus and you are … , “ replied jazz. The rabbit looked at Jazz and said , “ I’m Shiverz Coldrabbit and I come from here , Nippius I protect all rabbits from Devan Shell and I’ve heard that your Carroutus’s Protecter.Jazz stood and looked at Shiverz but didn’t say anything.


To be continued :)

Shiverz
Jun 10, 2002, 09:54 AM
Ill post the next bit soon :)

Shiverz
Jun 10, 2002, 10:25 AM
Chapter 3

Shiverz lead Jazz out the bar.
“ Crunch Crunch Crunch , “ Chomped Jazz. “ Do you have to crunch on that carrot that loud Jazz “ yelled Shiverz. Jazz glared at him and ran ahead in a mood. Shiverz was behind and thought , “ can this Jazz really help me I could have asked one of my friends like em well now come to think of it who a threesome would have been better. “Hey Jazz come here I think we should have a threesome maybe I should ask my friend to come along hes really good with a gun “ said Shiverz. “ Emm Jazz you go get him im afraid to go on Carrotus its too warm u see and I come from a cold planet u get it so just tell him im asking for him “ said Shiverz.

So Jazz set of on his own to Carrotus and had no idea where to go and thought to himself “ where do I go Shiverz only told me a Mystic Forest on the south of the planet “. After reaching the planet in the forest he found a small burrow and a sign saying
: Do Not Disturb Or I’ll Magic You Away. Of Course Jazz didn’t believe in magic so he just knocked . A blue rabbit emerged from the dark hole . “ How dare you disturb me Mr. Greeny “ said the rabbit. Jazz went red with anger and punched him . “ Sorry Jazz I’m half asleep what u want “ said the mysterious character. “ Zarch this rabbit called Shiverz wants you he says its urgent really really urgent “ said Jazz. “ Oh he better not be on Nippius I hate it there its too cold “ yelled Zarch . “ Zarch!!! this is really urgent we gotta go “ yelled Jazz.

To be continued :) :) :)

New Charater is MoonBlaze aka Zarch

>>Møønßlãzé<<
Jun 10, 2002, 10:43 AM
All charathers belongs to their respective owners
Btw. just mind that Shiverz playes Zarch in another way that I would have played ;-P