Devan Strikes Back !!!

Chapter 1

The bar went quiet. Jazz stood and grabbed his gun and slowly aimed it. At a rabbit at the door. “Jazz what you doing this is meant to be a place to chill not to aim your gun
at rabbits you don’t know, ”Yelled Spaz. Lori Ran over to Jazz and grabbed his gun
then looked at him in a stern way. “ LORI gimme my gun back I need it to shoot
people , “ said Jazz.



The Bartender looked at Jazz and pointed his finger towards the door. Jazz stood there like a dummy until Spaz whispered in his ear , “ I think he wants you to leave “. Jazz slowly walked out he took his back pack off and picked out a carrot. “ Why do I always get sent out (Crunch) it’s not fair (Crunch) “ moaned Jazz. “ Hey what’s that over there it looks like a turtle but it can’t be one of Devan’s turtles because him and the turtles were banished to the Jungrock planet.


In fact there stood a turtle but the shell wasn’t the colour of Devans and his minions shell instead this turtles was blue and white . “ Emm excuse me mister rabbit could you direct me to Nippius “ asked the Turtle. Jazz Stood Puzzled . “ Sorry but that’s another planet this is the planet Carrotus I could take you to Nippius though “ replied Jazz.

Chapter 2

The Ice Bar stood in front of Jazz’s eyes . “Great now I have a place to have a drink “ exclaimed Jazz. The turtle went inside and Jazz was just about to follow when his mobile phone rang . “ Jazz were are you … oh I can see your on Nippius well enjoy yourself I noticed theres rabbits on that planet “ said Spaz. Jazz turned his phone off and went inside the Ice Bar . The bartender stared at him as if he knew who he was then said , “ JimBob where have you been “.

“Excuse me I’m called Jazz not JimBob “ said Jazz. He walked in all the rabbits round him glared at him as if he were Devan . A rabbit sat in the corner Jazz could just see him. The rabbit approached Jazz slowly then took his gun out and aimed it at Jazz’s head . “ Who are you rabbit and where you from, “ asked the rabbit .
“ I’m Jazz Jackrabbit from Carrotus and you are … , “ replied jazz. The rabbit looked at Jazz and said , “ I’m Shiverz Coldrabbit and I come from here , Nippius I protect all rabbits from Devan Shell and I’ve heard that your Carroutus’s Protecter.Jazz stood and looked at Shiverz but didn’t say anything.


To be continued

Ill post the next bit soon

Chapter 3

Shiverz lead Jazz out the bar.
“ Crunch Crunch Crunch , “ Chomped Jazz. “ Do you have to crunch on that carrot that loud Jazz “ yelled Shiverz. Jazz glared at him and ran ahead in a mood. Shiverz was behind and thought , “ can this Jazz really help me I could have asked one of my friends like em well now come to think of it who a threesome would have been better. “Hey Jazz come here I think we should have a threesome maybe I should ask my friend to come along hes really good with a gun “ said Shiverz. “ Emm Jazz you go get him im afraid to go on Carrotus its too warm u see and I come from a cold planet u get it so just tell him im asking for him “ said Shiverz.

So Jazz set of on his own to Carrotus and had no idea where to go and thought to himself “ where do I go Shiverz only told me a Mystic Forest on the south of the planet “. After reaching the planet in the forest he found a small burrow and a sign saying
: Do Not Disturb Or I’ll Magic You Away. Of Course Jazz didn’t believe in magic so he just knocked . A blue rabbit emerged from the dark hole . “ How dare you disturb me Mr. Greeny “ said the rabbit. Jazz went red with anger and punched him . “ Sorry Jazz I’m half asleep what u want “ said the mysterious character. “ Zarch this rabbit called Shiverz wants you he says its urgent really really urgent “ said Jazz. “ Oh he better not be on Nippius I hate it there its too cold “ yelled Zarch . “ Zarch!!! this is really urgent we gotta go “ yelled Jazz.

To be continued

New Charater is MoonBlaze aka Zarch

All charathers belongs to their respective owners
Btw. just mind that Shiverz playes Zarch in another way that I would have played ;-P