ahhh... I'll think of a name later.

[acid]

Edit: small update, changing 30 years to some unknown amount of time so that the age in my character's profiles will make more sense.

It has been <s>30 years</s> quite some time since Devan had been defeated by Jazz. The rabbits now live in peace with the turtles. The rabbits lived happily, researching technologies that could help them live easier.
One inventor, namely Acid, had come across an interesting idea for a defense mechanism that could encase carrutus in a “Bubble” that would eliminate all harmful projectiles aimed at Carrutus. However, this seemingly perfect defense system was about to become Carrutus’s biggest threat…

Okay, now that I've got a beginning, I need some more characters. Now is the time to apply.

I need:
EVIL person: Seemingly nice person who becomes a traitor and tries to destroy carrutus.

EVIL person's assistant: A squeaky littly guy who is terrified at everything at first, but when EVIL person is defeated, he takes over EVIL person's plans and kinda reverses his personality.

Good guys: People that can help defeat EVIL person and EVIL person's assistant. Be ready for interesting plot twists.

Random people: I could have a few cameos here and there, nothing important, just for fun.


Hints? Suggestions? Praise? Flames? All is appreciated as long as it's helpful. I might change the cast requirements once I get the story more fixed in my head.

Also, please make sure there aren't too many applications for one section. I don't want like 50 people wanting to be on the good guys team or something.

[Fawriel]

dito
I got ya a good pic so I <s>want</s>would like to have a big one!:D

[acid]

Okay, there are currently 3 people on the good people team(me, Piccolo and Phoenix wing) And nobody's applied for anything else.

I think I should split the good guys into 2 categories: The people who defeat EVIL person and EVIL person's assistant and the people who are on the good guy's side but don't have as big of a role.

[Trafton AT]

I want to be the Evil Good person! :D

The one who is on the good site, but acts evily. Not a traitor, though. ^_^

[acid]

I did not entireley understand you. Do you want to be EVIL person, who is going to be my assistant, but steals the plans for the bubble and tries to use them against carrutus, or do you want to be on the good people's side and just not be a very nice person?

[Trafton AT]

No, I want to be good. :P

Just kind of evil, but good.

[acid]

Trafton, before I can include you, I need a character profile. I found piccolo's and Phoenix's but not yours in the everyone's characters thread.

[Trafton AT]

Eh...I'll do that in a bit...

[acid]

okay, so let me tallie up the positions again...

Good guys who defeat EVIL person:

Acid
Phoenix wing

Good guys that I don't know what good guy team they want to be on yet:

Trafton AT
Piccolo



However, I'll probably close the section for good guys defeating EVIL person once I get 4 or 5.

And also, I want to remind everyone defeating EVIL person is no fun when you haven't got an EVIL person.:)

[Fawriel]

I'm a very good good guy,although I am NOT a person who likes to be with others(bad experinces).
So make me a good guy who destroys some baddies and is mostly in a bad mood.

[Batty Buddy]

Que Passa!!!!

I'm always up for a cameo...

[acid]

I want to get the story going! All I need is EVIL person and EVIL person's assistant and then I can go!


...Of course, I could make up my own, but I don't want to.

[acid]

here we go:

Good guys who defeat EVIL people:

Me
Phoenix wing

Other good guys:

Piccolo
Trafton AT

Cameos:

Batty Buddy

EVIL person:

...?

EVIL person's assistant:

...?


Also, a new section!

People who don't want to be the big bad guy but work for the EVIL person, they can sign up as EVIL person's minions.

[4I Falcon]

heehee.

Check the "Everyone's characters" section for the good guys.

Cameo: Emmi Somerkallio (Hyppaa Kaivoon). Good-natured nurse-turned-fighter during the Buster Assault. Female, gold-furred, and carries a cyan blaster. Loves to heal things, and hates to see destruction; however, this doesn't stop her fighting alongside the Elite Task Force.

Bad guy's right hand: Black Jack, Jack Flash's evil clone, originally created by Buster Tank, thought to be destroyed by Jack himself, but surviving. Normal rabbit, black fur, red bandana, darkened silver blasters. And evil. EVIL EVIL EVIL.

Bad guy's assistant: Omicron Hellgod. The ultimate thinking machine. Built by Acid's precedent's precedent to be a war machine... but to protect the rabbits. His OS was virused by Slicer Tank, and now he's switched sides. But when Black Jack was seemingly killed by Jack, Slicer put him into stasis to begin a new revolution... 30 years later.

[4I Falcon]

Ack! Confused confused confused! *falls out a window*

Actually, no. I'm Canadian, not Finnish. I don't even know what Hyppaa Kaivoon means. I just hope it doesn't mean anything bad. I got it from Emmi's e-mail address. It sounded cool, so I included it here. (hint hint: Emmi's her real name, but Hyppaa Kaivoon could -- and should -- be her character name.)

and what the poo does "Mukava huomata et suomalaisia Jazz -pelaajiaki löytyy! (tosta hahmos nimestä päättelin..)" mean?!

[acid]

All I need is the actual EVIL person and I can start!

Good guys that defeat EVIL ppl:

Acid
Phoenix wing
Electrik

Other Good Guys:

Piccolo
Trafton AT

EVIL person:

...?

EVIL person's assistant:

Omicron Hellbot

Other EVIL ppl:

Black Jack

Cameos:

Batty buddy
Emmi Somerkalio



In case you're wondering, Electrik is my other character. I'll update Acid's Profile and Put up Elektric's eventually...

Also, the EVIL person doesn't actually need to be nice at first, he / she just starts out on the good guy's side.

[Kientero]

*Thinks* Hmm... EVIL... EvilMike? PERFECT!!! :D

[acid]

Heh... Either that or Scarry Sarry...

Unless someone else wants to play that part...

[acid]

Actually, it might be a better idea for me to think of my own EVIL person.

Now all I need is Trafton AT's profile...:rolleyes:

Edit: I can probably start the story without it, however if he DOES want to be in the story he has to post it before it's too late.}>

[Trafton AT]

It's OK. I'm still thinking of a profile. :p

Go ahead and start it without meh. :)

[acid]

It was another normal day on Carrutus, the birds were singing, the carrots were standing tall, and Acid was about to wake everybody up with his usual morning ritual.
*BOOM!!!*
“AAUUGH!!!”
Yes, Acid normally starts his day with an explosion and a yell. He had never gotten his personal coffee maker to work right. He walked back into his workroom, singed and frayed. It might be a little harmful, but he likes to wake himself up by blowing himself up, rather than drink a cup of Joe. He sat back down on his chair and got to work on his “Bubble” design. Just a few more days work on the blueprints and he’d be ready to begin construction.
The Bubble project was under very high security, and only Acid’s friends, Electrik and his co-workers were allowed in the building. Acid began whistling, and because of his scorched tongue, it sounded a little off key.
Thus, the day began.

Acid had done a lot of work on the Bubble, and decided to take a little break. He bumped into one of his co-workers, Terminator, on the way out.
“Oops, I’m sorry!”
“That’s okay.”
Acid headed down to the deli down in carrutus central.
“the usual.”
“One turkey and bacon sub, no Mayo, no mustard?”
“yup.”

On the way back, happily munching his sub, he saw Terminator dash out the door with his hands full of papers. Acid wondered where he had to go so quickly with all those papers. When he got back to the office, he decided he would double check the blueprints for the bubble before sending them in to construction.
“Huh? I thought they were right here…” Acid rummaged through his desk, but to no avail. “Darn! I worked so hard on that.” He suddenly realized what had happened. “Oh, Asterisk.”

He shot out the door towards where Terminator was running. Everyone who was standing by knew that if Acid was running, it was VERY important, and ran after him.
He followed the directions of people who had seen him run by until he got to Carrutus launch pad. Terminator’s ship was still there, and he was trying to get launch clearance as fast as possible.
“STOP HIM!!!” yelled Acid, panting from the run. He was to late. The ship took off. “ASTERISK BOMB SWORD EXCLAMATION MARK DOLLAR SIGN NUMBER AT!!!!!” he proceeded to name every violent weapon and key on the keyboard.

Word of things like this spreads like wildfire, and soon Carrutus council was meeting.
“We cannot let him get away with it! We must destroy him, even if we lose to plans! Just a few tweaks and out ultimate protection can be turned into a weapon of mass destruction!” roared the military officer. “We should send carrutus fleet to seek out and destroy him!”
“Aye!”
One by one, the members of the council agreed with him. Even Acid gave a dejected “Sure…” as he was very upset about letting the plans be stolen.
“Then it has been chosen. We will send carrutus fleet to destroy him. The meeting is-“
“Wait!” the council turned as the doors swung open. There stood a green weasel with blue hair. He was fairly muscular and tall. “If we send the whole carrutus fleet, then think of all the things that could go wrong! They can detect a large fleet much better than one ship, I’ll tell you that! Besides, a large fleet is a large target. We could lose a lot of men with that method.”
Lori’s face curled into a snarl.
“and Women, if they choose to fight. My plan is this, send a small squad in one ship that can repel radar detection. They can dock onto the station and destroy it from the inside.
Jazz’s face took on a contemplating expression, and after a while he said, “Very well, Fawriel. I can see your plan is a much better idea. But, now, who must be on the squad?”

Yay! I finished the first chapter! I've already used Piccolo too! And he did get a fairly big part because he did do that wonderful piccie of Acid.

To piccolo: Your character IS a weasel, right? Or am I seriously wrong?

[acid]

Um, sorry I didn't read the top of your post, 4I falcon, but don't worry, the good guys will be included in the next chapter, and with your permission, I would like to put Jack Flash on the team the kills EVIL person!

[Fawriel]

The story ish one of the best I ever saw here!
And I don't only say that because of my role!
originally posted by acId
He was fairly muscular and tall.

Hur hur!:D :D :D

[acid]

BTW, Piccolo, the times have changed. My name no longer has a capital I in it because in too many places I have typed my name AcId and it turns out Acld.

[Fawriel]

*cough**cough*
Oh,well,thanks fer telling me!

[acid]

Also, in your profile you said your character is quick to volunteer if it comes to fighting something/someone. Does that mean he should sign up but get rejected or what?

(yes, I do look at these things.:))

[Fawriel]

Fighting ish always good if you have something worth to fight for!
(Now if THAT is no quote,I don't know what is!:D )
Why should I be rejected?
DRAW YER SWORDS!!!!!:D

[4I Falcon]

Go me!

BTW, absolutely schwa story so far, Acid. And the "ASTERISK BOMB SWORD EXCLAMATION MARK DOLLAR SIGN NUMBER AT!!!!!" idea was prolly the fooniest one I've heard all day.

One thing tho. Carrotus is spelled like that, with an o. Just for future chapters and such.

Also, I wouldn't mind if Jack Flash aids in killing the bad dood.

Speaking of bad doods (and this might be a really stupid idea, but just bear with me on this one), why not use a villain from Redwall? I mean, Brian Jacques doesn't seem to know about JJ2 (or maybe he does, but I'm doubtful as to whether or not he knows about this community... ;)), so what he doesn't know, won't hurt him, right?

Right?

Right. :D

[Batty Buddy]

Que Passa!!!!

"Percentage sign, Ampersan, Dollor sign..."
"And Colon, and Semi-colon too..."
"What the #@$# are you two doing?"
"Swearing in longhand, Asterix-breath!"
-Conversation
Sam and Max hit the road

Great story so far. Any story that starts with an explosion is a good story in MY book.

[acid]

Originally posted by Piccolo
Why should I be rejected?


Earlier I thought you said you didn't want to be one of the guys who defeats Terminator. Oh well.

That makes
Acid
Phoenix wing
Electrik
Fawriel
Jack Flash

Am I right?

Also, 4I falcon, the tileset is called Carrutus. If that's not how it's spelled, then sue Epic. Edit: WHOOPS! My mistake, I don't know where I got the 'Carrutus' spelling.

And Phoenix Wing, I have no idea how long it's gonna be. It can be anywhere from 4 to 1,000!:D It all depends on how dumb Terminator and Omicron Hellgod are.;)

[n0]

oooohie!!!
Can i be an evil... nothing...
Like i get in the way of the ship...
Maybe i warp them somewhere else...
mess with all their minds...

But i am NOT on the same team as Terminator, i am just another obstacle to overcome

`N0

[acid]

The next day, Acid still got up, and although rather dejectedly, blew up his coffee maker again.
*BOOM*
"AAUUGH!!!"
He returned to his desk and sat down with an unceremonious flump. It was going to be another one of
those days.

He worked through to lunch break, when he got up and walked out of the building. An intriguing piece of
paper nailed to the wall caught his eye.

Calling all citizens of Carrotus!

A serious matter is at hand! A deadly threat has appeared
And we need men(penciled in here with lori's handwriting was: /women)
To fight and save Carrotus! Sign up now!

Phoenix Wing
Fawriel
Jack Flash
Electrik

Acid smiled. If his brother was joining up, why shouldn’t he? At the bottom of the list he penciled in his name.

He then continued his work, however a lot perkier than he was earlier. He even accidentally set off his coffee maker as he hurtled through the room.

On the day of the launch, Acid was a little behind schedule. First, the coffee maker blew up three times instead of one. Then on the way out of the office, he tripped over a stray wire. A lot of other things happened, making him very frayed and scorched by the time he got to the launch pad.

The ship set off towards Terminator’s station. It was a long trip, and the occupants took up little games to occupy themselves. Acid was running back and forth explaining to Jack Flash that it might be better to use a piece of scrap metal as target practice than the ship’s flight computer, telling Fawriel that The weapons cabinet (which was very heavy) didn’t need to be moved to the other side of the ship, and convincing Electrik that playing with the reactor core is NOT a good idea.

Suddenly, a dot appeared on the radar, then quickly disappeared. Everyone rushed over to the display screen. The dot did it again. It repeated this about 20 times, all in different spots. Then the ship went crazy. Alarms went off, the ship jerked back and forth, the weapon systems fired, the lights flashed on and off, Sending the crew into a confusion. When it all stopped, the crew was Very beat up. They had landed on each other, accidentally kicked and scratched each other, and bonked heads a lot.
“Phoenix, you drew blood!”
“Sorry, I’ll try to keep my claws retracted next time.”
“Ow, Fawriel, did you have to kick so hard?”
“I couldn’t see where I was going from the lights flashing on and off!”
“That was quite a shock, Electrik.”
“I can’t control my electricity. I’m sorry it zapped you.”
“Hey who’s that?”
They looked up. A translucent orange thing was standing over them, a smirk on his face.
“NOBODY?”
He nodded.
“What are you doing here?”
NOBODY stopped smirking. “I’d like to ask the same question myself.”
“We’re on a mission! We need to destroy Terminator!”
“Never heard of him. But if you’re so desperate, I’ll make you a deal. I’ll let you and your ship go, but there is something I require.”
“What do you want?” growled Electrik. When he gets mad, the electricity starts flowing a lot more on his body, and He looked like a lightning rod that had just gotten hit.
“You might think you can please me with petty gems or pathetic weapons, but I require something more.” NOBODY said as he walked closer. “I need this.” He held up a globe. The picture was foggy at first, but then it cleared.
“Oh my gosh…” gasped Electrik.
“You need THAT?” shouted Acid.
“How are supposed to get THAT?” added Fawriel.
“It’s almost impossible, you know,” said Jack Flash.
“Do you need anything else or is that all we can do?” asked Phoenix wing.
“I need a human, and a human I will get from you! You have 4 months.” NOBODY snarled. “And if you don’t succeed, then you can say goodbye to Carrotus and all your petty little friends. Then he vanished.

How do you like that?

I got NOBODY in, so there becomes a new plot twist! How will they meet his demand?:D

[Fawriel]

Originally posted by acid
Acid was running back and forth explaining to Jack Flash that it might be better to use a piece of scrap metal as target practice than the ship’s flight computer, telling Fawriel that The weapons cabinet (which was very heavy) didn’t need to be moved to the other side of the ship, and convincing Electrik that playing with the reactor core is NOT a good idea.
ROFLMHO,THIS IS THE BEST WAR TAVERN STORY EVER!!!!!!
AND IT'S THE PROOF THAT YOU HAVE A GOOD MEMORY AND SENSE OF HUMOUR!!!!!!!!!
AND THIS IS THE BEST WAR TAVERN STORY EVER!!!!
AND ESPECIALLY THE FUNNIEST ONE!!!!!!!!!
(AND MY FINGER GOT STUCK TO THE SHIFT KEY!!!!!!!!!!!)

[n0]

Wow, i think that is the best anyone has ever used my charcter in a story!!!
I love it!!

You will never get the globe, tho.
you shall fail and i will rule carrotus!!
(get it? nobody will ruule carrotus?)
`N0

[Fawriel]

Eh,acid,weren't ya supposed to still think of a name fer the story?;)

[acid]

To Piccolo: I'm working on more important things, right now. Ahhh... I'll think of a name later is okay for now.


To NOBODY: Just to make sure you understood, It's not the globe NOBODY wants (He already has it!) It's what the globe shows. Of course, the "I need a human, and a human I will get from you!" Is kinda a dead giveaway. Of course, I have no idea which would be easier to get.:D

Edit: I claim second page in the name of Ahhh... I'll think of a name later!

[4I Falcon]

did i... shoot... the flight comp?

*checks* weel so i did. don't worry, i'll pay for that...

...from right out of R.O.A.R.'s budget... *snicker*

btw again, acid... don't ALWAYS call me Jack Flash. You can just identify me as Jack. That's enough for the cause.

heehee... NOBODY's there... :lol:

I claim the 43rd-ish (or whatever number this post is) post for stuff, which is good!

[n0]

I am a paradox...

You foo's!

You went into the middle of nowhere where nobody rules!

I'm waiting....

`N0

[acid]

Acid began his day by waking up, stretching, and walking over to the lounge. He pushed the button on the coffee maker. It made coffee.
“Eh?” said Acid, peering squint-eyed into the cup that was filled with coffee. “Oh, right, I didn’t bring my coffee maker.”

He walked up to the control deck.
“Hello, lazybones, we’ve been waiting for you!” said Electrik.
“We found Terminator’s station,” said Jack, grinning.
Acid looked first out the window, then at the radar. The radar was completely filled. “Where is he?”
The crew exploded into laughter. “We’re docked on his station right now!” said Phoenix Wing.
“Oh, well, then, we better get to it!”

The crew stepped out of the ship, flanked by the ship’s medical officer. Emmi Somerkallio did not like to see destruction, but she did her best to do her job.

They had been walking a while, when suddenly Jack stopped, and fired. About 20 yards ahead, a smoldering security camera lay on the floor.
“Nice,” said Acid. “With you around, we don’t have to worry about the security cameras!”

Meanwhile…

“Maybe you won’t, but they’re the least of your troubles,” chuckled Terminator. “Omicron! How are you coming on the Bubble?”
“SIR, WE ARE OUT OF RESOURCES. IT WILL HAVE TO BE POSTPONED FOR ABOUT AN HOUR SO WE CAN GET A SUPPLY SHIP.” Replied Omicron Hellbot, Terminator’s assistant.
“Blast! Oh well, we won’t need it for now.” Terminator looked back at the display screen. Apparently, they had just reached a security area, and were getting ambushed by security droids. “I think I’ll deal with the pests myself.”

Back with the crew…

“There are too many of them! We can’t hold off much longer,” yelled Fawriel, kicking a droid hard in the place where it would have REALLY hurt if it were human.
Acid pulled out his bazooka. If this wasn’t heavy duty, he didn’t know what was.
Meanwhile, electric grabbed one and pried its back open. He fiddled around with the cables a bit, gave them a jolt of electricity and slammed the door again, and letting it wreak havoc on the other droids.
“Heh, nice going!” said Jack Flash, picking off another with his blaster.
Suddenly, all the droids fled.
“Eh?” said Acid.
*BOOM!!!*
the wall blasted inward, showering the crew with debris.
A large red mech stood there. It had large feet and long legs. The legs ended in a body, out from which came two arms, which ended in Gauss rifles. On the top were two missile launchers. From the front of the body was the cockpit, and sitting in it was none other than Terminator.
“Ahhh!!!” yelled the crew.
The mech walked forward a few paces, then opened fire.
The crew could just bareley dodge the Gauss bullets, and was running in circles in the middle of the room.
“Huh? Where’s Jack?” asked Acid, jumping out of the way of one of the missiles.
Suddenly, there was a series of shots, and both missile launchers and their cargo exploded, creating a large hole in the mech’s body, and disabling it.
Terminator Quickly jumped out, and ran down a hall. The crew followed in hot pursuit until Suddenly, Terminator turned around. The crew saw something glint by his side, then he charged.
“He’s using a SWORD?” yelled Acid.
Terminator was about to lunge at one of them when- CLANG!!! Fawriel had drawn his sword, and parried Terminator’s blow. The two launched into a swordfight, and everyone else edged back, so that the two would have their space. Fawriel seemed to be doing better than Terminator, and Terminator seemed to notice. Right after parrieng a very close attack by Fawriel, he jumped back, flung his sword, and ran off down the hall.
“did it hit anybody?” asked Emmi.
“Aaarrrggghhh…” said Acid, crumpling onto the floor with the sword embedded in his shoulder.
“Oh no!” shouted Electrik.
“The problem is, we can’t just leave him here, and we can’t leave Terminator alone. I’ll go on with Electrik, Fawriel and Phoenix wing. Emmi can bring Acid back to the ship and help him,” said Jack. “We must still fight on.”

I did the third chapter! I've decided that The crew needs to finish off Terminator first, because NOBODY was nice enough to give them four months.

[Fawriel]

Originally posted by acid
Acid began his day by waking up, stretching, and walking over to the lounge. He pushed the button on the coffee maker. It made coffee.
“Eh?” said Acid, peering squint-eyed into the cup that was filled with coffee. “Oh, right, I didn’t bring my coffee maker.”
...
“There are too many of them! We can’t hold off much longer,” yelled Fawriel, kicking a droid hard in the place where it would have REALLY hurt if it were human.
...
The two launched into a swordfight, and everyone else edged back, so that the two would have their space. Fawriel seemed to be doing better than Terminator, and Terminator seemed to notice. Right after parrieng a very close attack by Fawriel, he jumped back, flung his sword, and ran off down the hall.

BEST STORY EVER!!!!!!!!!YOU GET AN OSCAR!!!!!!!!!YOU'RE A GENIOUS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D
Lmho,why can't I rate this thread?:lol:

[acid]

Note: I'll try to get everyone into the story with good parts, but I can't really think of anything for phoenix wing, and Fawriel seems to be the best choice for many situations.

BTW Piccolo, do you think I should start a poll about this story? Like rate it from 1 to 10?

[Fawriel]

Dunno about the poll.
But you HAVE to get Pho a good part!
She's clever and pretty strong for a girl(after all,she's a cat!).

Uh,I think EVERY thread gets rateable after a while...
at least my Have you seen this person thread (http://www.jazz2online.com/jcf/showthread.php?s=&threadid=4618) did...
But the poll would be a good idea,ah think!^.^

[acid]

It has? I didn't see anywhere where I could rate it.

[Fawriel]

At the very bottom...
This thread doesn't have it...

About the name...
what about:"the a-team"?
o.O;;

Okay,just kidding,this is a really-hard-to-find-a-name-for-story!:rolleyes:

[acid]

I think you can only rate the ones in the comedy cafe... And you can rate all the ones in the comedy cafe...

[acid]

How about: Why does everything happen to ME?

[Fawriel]

Sounds quite good!^.^
A little self-centered,though.
Kinda more...uhm:
I HATE mondays?:p
Okay,since it has nothing to do wif mondays,yours is better!

Whee!^.^We have a name!^.^

[acid]

Darn! I can't change the name of the thread. Does anyone know how?

[Fawriel]

Ehm,if you edit the first post,you can also change the name!

[acid]

I edited the first post, and it DIDN'T change the name! :mad:

[Fawriel]

Can't be!
It worked with my Happy Birthday,Soulfire-thread!

Piccolo,correction edit:Nope,it didn't!^.^;;
It just changed the heading of the first post,not the thread!

[Skulg]

Originally posted by acid
Heh... Either that or Scarry Sarry...

Unless someone else wants to play that part...
Uh, I bet I'm too late. xD

Well, Sarry is not really evil. She just looks like she's evil. She's a caring person, but she doesn't talk much, so noone really knows on which side she is.
She actually helps the good guys, but sometimes she falls in love with one of the bad guys :D

Well, if you still have some part for her, feel free to include her. I'd love to be in your story :)

[MoonBlazE]

Originally posted by $kúlg
I'd love to be in your story :) *Is jealus*
ICQ you traitor! ;-P (j/k, but still ICQ :P)

[Batty Buddy]

Que Passa!!!!

Falling in love with badguys, huh... I've known people like that...
Sounds to me as if Scarry Sarry would be a better villians side-kick then a master villian, if she's gonna be bad in this story...

Anyway, who am I to play casting dirrecter./\:p/\

[n0]

I claim Page five!

...so, If nobody wants it, then it must be very radioactive, or poisness, or somthing...

And sombody must own it if nobody dosen't....

You have 3 months, 1 week, 4 days, 9hours, 37 minutes, and 41 seconds b4 nobody will rule carrotus

[4I Falcon]

Originally posted by acid
They had been walking a while, when suddenly Jack stopped, and fired. About 20 yards ahead, a smoldering security camera lay on the floor.
“Nice,” said Acid. “With you around, we don’t have to worry about the security cameras!”

Did I mention "go me"?

Anyway, like I said before, very schwa story. Interesting character development on acid's part, also. (heehee, exploding coffee maker...)

BTW, idea for the name: The Doomsday Device, or Machine, or something. Titles that are really ominous usually denote a good story. I mean, Stephen King and all them horror writers always use ominous titles, don't they? Well, either ominous or straight-to-the-point, like Christine, or something. But "The Bubble" kinda lacks that... whatever it is that... does... stuff... in a title.

BLAAAAAA.

[acid]

“Okay, so everyone’s clear on the plan?” Asked Jack Flash.
“Yeah!” responded the other three.
They set off towards the reactor room, or at least where they thought it would be. They were just guessing.
“Okay, remind me again, who has the TNT?”
“I do,” said Electrik.
“Good.”
They were planning to set a load of TNT for 2 minutes, place it next to the reactor core, and RUN. After a little bit of searching, they found the reactor room, labeled by its Authorized personnel only and DANGER: radiation signs.
“Okay, had me the TNT.”
Electrik was about to hand it over, when suddenly something hit it and knocked it out of his hand, and off the catwalk. He looked up.
“Not so fast,” said Terminator. By his side was Omicron and Black Jack, Jack Flash’s evil clone. And being Jack’s clone, he shared the perfect marksmenship.
“Don’t anybody make a move, or else someone’s gonna get hurt!” Yelled Black Jack, pointing his gun at the group.
“We certainly didn’t expect this, did we?” said Electrik.
“Now would you all exit this room, and we can have a little talk,” said Terminator.
Phoenix wing Leapt from the catwalk, onto a large tube hanging from the ceiling.
Black Jack fired. Something fell from the ceiling down into the white glow from the reactor core.
“As I said, nobody move! Unless you want to end up like your friend there.” Said Black Jack.
Suddenly, something started clanking. It sounded like someone pounding on a pipe.
“Eh? What’s up with the reactor?” Terminator said as he looked at the source of the clanking. It was one of the large pipes above them. Suddenly it fell, making a big hole in the catwalk that Terminator, Omicron and Black Jack were standing on. They were so surprised by the sudden drop of the pipe, they didn’t notice a figure darting onto another pipe.
“Omicron, see if you can see what’s wrong,” said Terminator.
“SCANNING.”
A few moments passed, then Omicron said “LIFE FORM DETECTED.”
Everyone looked up. They saw a dark figure running along a pipe towards the central pylon. Black jack fired again. The pipe the figure was running on fell, but the figure gabbed onto another pipe. It hung for a second, then swung itself onto a ledge on the central pylon.
“Get it! That’s where the plasma generator is!”
Black Jack fired again.
“You idiot! You’ve shot the generator!
The figure leapt onto the platform, pinning Black Jack.
“Whaaa??? I thought I shot you!” Said Black Jack.
“Funny how your eyes deceive you, isn’t it?” Said Phoenix Wing.
“WARNING, SELF DESTRUCT SEQUENCE ACTIVATED. SELF DESTRUCT IN TWO MINUTES.” Said the ship’s computer.
Terminator and Omicron ran out of the room, and Black Jack flung off Phoenix Wing and did the same. Phoenix Wing followed them. The rest of the group ran out the other exit.
When the rest of the group caught up with Phoenix Wing, she had lost them. They ran back to their ship, and took off. At least they had destroyed his station.

A minute later, they watched the station blow itself apart. It was a very interesting scene to watch.
“Now we can head back to Carrotus, and- what’s that?
Everyone looked at the dot on the radar that was behind their ship.
“Strange,” said Electrik.
*BOOM!!!*
The ship rocked with the force of the explosion.
“What the heck was THAT?!?” Shouted Jack.
They looked out the rear. Terminator was in a ship behind them and chasing them to Carrotus!
“We can’t fight them out here, we need to get to Carrotus!” Yelled Electrik as another blast rocked the ship. “Full throttle!”
Even at full throttle, Terminator’s ship easily stayed right behind them. Electrik watched in horror as the shields rapidly dropped from all the laser fire. First 50%, then 40%, 32%, 24%, 18%, 17%, and 10%. Electrik looked up. Carrotus was in view!
“WARNING!!! WARNING!!! SHIELDS DEPLETED!” Blared the ship’s computer.
They were in Carrotus’s atmosphere now, and the titanium allow was doing its best to withhold both the friction from the atmosphere and the constant laser blasts. Finally, the atmosphere was behind them. But they still had to deal with Terminator.

There! That's the longest chapter I've written so far. I've included Phoenix wing, too!

[n0]

This story is L337!!!

Even the parts that have sombody in them...

Keep it yup!

`N0

[4I Falcon]

w00t w00t! no argument heyah!

did i just say that?

[Trafton AT]

Great story so far. :D

[n0]

Noooooo!!!

Don't let it die!!!

I must have more!!!
Acid, can i help wright it?
Id like to do the part where they hafta find me it...

`N0

[Flint LP]

Little late, but can I join too? I'll be a guard on Carrotus and I'll have to protect the queen or someone from Mr. Evild00d and then I follow the second evild00d to destroy him, after someone or other kills evild00d #1 just as I arrive. Or any other way you could incorporate me into your story. Please:

Name:Flint
Occupation:Elite Queens Guard
Weapons:A Full rapid fire blaster and powered flamer.
History:Slightly larger, and stronger then normal rabbits, since he is a hare. He was born on nippius, b4 Devan invaded. As a baby him and his flamily escaped Devan's main assault, fleeing to carrotus. Later, he would lead the second assault, and recapture Nippius, defeating Devan's troops at the Durok Fortress, which Jazz had missed. He succesfully liberated the planet and rescued the captive hares that were being held prisoner. But he decided to go back to Carotus because he had no memory of Nipius as he was too young when he his parents fled. And he regards Carotus as his home.
Characteristics:has an accent,(due to being born on Nipius)and is very friendly and honest. He is a tactics expert and a born leader.
Special: Being a guard member he can call for cool stuff like super powerful tanks that belong to the Queen. Also being trained as an elite guard he is really good at protecting people.
Appearance: Tall and stocky with grey fur and a white stomach. His gun is blue. Also he wears body armor and has a tattoo showing that he is a member of the elite guard.

Hopefully its not too late and you can still incorporate him into your story.





:cool:

[acid]

“Electrik, see if you can get the computer to show a diagram of the ship’s armor,” said Jack.
“Sure thing!” said Electrik. He fiddled with a few of the switches, and then the computer showed a model of their ship. It then got shaded over with green, and then got shaded in how damaged it was. The more damaged it was, the redder it was. Electrik looked worriedly over at the engine area, where the diagram showed a very definite shade of orange. “Oh no! They’re trying to blast into our engine!”
The orange faded to red, and then snapped to black.
“WARNING!!! ARMOR COVER BREACH-“ the computer didn’t have time to finish what it was saying.
*BOOM!!!*

Somewhere in Carrotus palace…

A purple rabbit entered the room. He was wearing small glasses and a green backpack.
“Yes, Wizard Of Odds?” said Jazz.
“We lost track of them on the radar. Their ship might have been destroyed, but they might have survived.”
“We should send a search party out right away to find them!”

A little while later, Captain J. Firefox, Blaze Blackrabbit, Headcheese and Wizard of Odds set off to try to find where the ship had disappeared.
“It should be over in this direction,” said Wizard of Odds.
After a little while of searching, they saw a crashed ship. Headcheese ran up to it. She opened a hatch, poked her head in and said, “Hewwo!!!”
“Headcheese! Where did you come from?!?” said Jack.
The rest of the search party ran up to the ship.
Wizard of Odds radioed Jazz at the palace.
“We found them!”
“Good!” came the voice at the other end.
“Okay, let’s get back. They’ll be waiting for us!” said Wizard Of Odds.
“Leaving so soon, are you?”
Everyone looked up. Terminator was in his ship, and didn’t look very merciful.
“Out of ideas, eh? Well too bad,” said Terminator. He trained all of his guns on the group.
“RUN!!!” yelled Electrik.
Everyone ran just as a barrage of bullets would have pulverized them if they hadn’t. Terminator swerved his ship and began chasing them.
“Okay, I’ve got a plan!” said Acid. “We’ll split into two groups. Jack, Electrik, Fawriel and Phoenix Wing can run back and try to attack Terminator, while the rest of us try to distract him!”
Everyone decided this was a good plan. When the ship got really close, they jumped as high as they could.
Terminator heard several bumps, but he dismissed them with a shrug. Omicron didn’t. He walked over to the lift and told it to take him to the roof.
When he got there, he saw the attackers on the roof of the ship. They did not seem to notice them yet. He identified them by how much of a threat they were, and how dangerous it would be to attack them. He decided that he would attack Phoenix Wing.
200 pounds of black metal pounded into Phoenix Wing’s back, nearly knocking her of the ship. She whirled around, and saw Omicron readying for another attack. This time, she was prepared. Omicron launched forward, and Phoenix Wing did the same, and the two met in the center and began fighting. Everyone else knew that if they tried to help Phoenix Wing, it has a 50% chance of hurting her instead.
Omicron had been built to have more power than anything. One of his punches felt like 50 people punching you at the same time in the same spot. He had only been losing because he had been surprised by Phoenix Wing’s attack. Soon, however, he regained the edge in the fight. He waited for the perfect moment, and then landed one of his punches in Phoenix wing’s stomach. She flew straight into the tailfin and left a very large dent. Electrik, Fawriel and Jack Flash immediately started attacking Omicron because he was alone. Omicron knew only Electrik could do anything to him, and immediately laid him flat with a hefty blow to the head. He then turned to Fawriel. Fawriel kept his distance because he knew Omicron’s physical strength was much greater than his.
Jack meanwhile, was digging in his ammo pack for some TNT. He didn’t find any but found some electro blaster, which would work anyway. He shot at Omicron. The electricity fried Omicron’s circuits, and he shut himself down to prevent self-destruct. Fawriel ran over to Jack. He was kneeling by Electrik.
“He’s still breathing. It’s amazing he could survive a blow to the skull like that.” Said Jack Flash.
They ran over to Phoenix Wing.
“Okay, we need to get her out of here as soon as possible. It looks like she has a broken back, and that was no soft punch to her stomach area.” Said Jack. They both jumped off the ship with Phoenix Wing and Electrik, knowing that they couldn’t attack Terminator just yet. They ran off towards Carrotus City.

The distractions were huddled under a rock that would keep them from being seen by terminator. One of the shots from the ship had hit Firefox. Emmi was doing her best to heal it. Terminator was circling overhead, wondering where they went and what happened to Omicron.

There's chapter 5! I'm sorry there wasn't any part for you, Flint, but I will try to include you in a later chapter.

Anyone (or nobody:D) can help me with ideas on how to write my chapters, the plot, or they can WRITE actual chapters(e-mail them to me, though, don't just post them on here. I want to make sure I like them first before they get posted.

[Fawriel]

No quotation this time!:p

Erm,story is still cool,having stronger enemys makes it a little more interesting of course!^.^
Erm,I have some group of demons in my head,you could use those as soon as I drew and uploaded them!^.^
And I'm good at storys in general.Whee!:D
Me likes helping!^.^

[acid]

BEEP! BEEP! BEEP! BEEP! The light on Acid’s transmitter lit up. He picked it up. “Yes?”
“I’m sorry, but we couldn’t make it. Omicron met us up there, and injured two of us. We couldn’t just leave them there, so we need a few of you to continue the attack.” Came Jack’s voice at the other end.
“…Okay…” said Acid. He switched off the transmitter. “Okay guys, we need some of us to get up there and continue the attack. Jack Flash said two of them had gotten injured, so they couldn’t continue the attack. Who should go this time?”
None of them moved.
“Okay, then I guess I’ll pick some myself. I’ll go, since my shoulder’s healed, and I’ll take Wizard, Blaze, and… Hmmm…” Acid considered. Headcheese was the only one left, besides FireFox, who had gotten hit, and Emmi, who was trying to heal him. “Headcheese can be a small diversion. She can run out, run around, and then get back under the rock before Terminator hits her.”
Headcheese nodded very enthusiastically, then shot out from under the rock.
“Here’s our chance!”
The three of them who were attacking ran out, and jumped onto the ship. They ran over to the lift shaft (Acid pausing to kick Omicron off the side of the ship) and got in. When they reached the cockpit, they hesitated.
“They probably know we’re here.”
“Yes, I do!” came a voice from the other side of the door.
The door opened. Terminator was there, flanked by Black Jack and a few guards.
Acid, Blaze and Wizard of Odds jumped out and began shooting. They took out a few guards, but they were cornered.
“Nowhere to run, nowhere to hide…” chuckled Terminator. “Now I can finally get rid of you and complete… Darn, Black Jack, what did I call it again?”
“The flux field.”
“Ah, yes, thank you.”
Acid took the opportunity to shoot the dash. The ship flew out of control, and began diving towards the surface.
Terminator, Blaze, Wizard of Odds, Black Jack, and Acid squeezed into the lift shaft, forgetting all about how they were supposed to kill each other for the moment. When they reached the top, they ran out, and jumped off the ship. When they had gotten off the ship, they suddenly realized they had had the perfect opportunity to get rid of each other in the lift, but had forgotten because they were so frantic to get out, and fell over anime style.
“Argh, I’ll get you for this!” yelled Terminator, launching himself at the group. Acid met him head on, and they both launched into a fight. Blaze and Wizard of Odds backed off- they knew when to give other people space. Suddenly the two fighters broke apart.
“You remember <s>thirty years ago…</s> before Jazz defeated Devan... You were a fighter then, not a petty inventor. Let’s see if you’ve still got the skill.” Terminator said. He pressed a button on something, and suddenly he and Acid disappeared.

They reappeared in a large room that was filled with lava. They seemed to be in a temple. There were platforms coming out of the lava. There were also platforms floating in midair that had a few cracks in them.
“You remember this? Asked Terminator. “You created it! And now, as the creator, let’s see if you know how to fight in it!”

There! That's probably by far the shortest chapter I've written besides the intor. How do you like it?

[n0]

Nice.

Must i say more?

Just hurry up and finish off Terminator so i can take over carrotus.
`N0

[4I Falcon]

Then do I get to finish you off too?

Then again, that might be an insult to Jack... i mean, killing nobody, he'd take that pretty hard...

:D

[acid]

Originally posted by acid
When they had gotten off the ship, they suddenly realized they had had the perfect opportunity to get rid of each other in the lift, but had forgotten because they were so frantic to get out, and fell over anime style.


I POSTED that?!?! O.o

Hehe... Oops.

[4I Falcon]

i think your alternate self posted that, acid. no need to worry, you're not going insane.

[acid]

I just thought of another paradox...

Nobody wants a human. Therefore, nobody has to get a human!

Ahhh... I love paradoxs.

[Batty Buddy]

Que Passa!!!!

Hyooomuuun.... TAAASTEEE!

Just kidding- I couldn't resist... (Removes Zombie costume.)

[Fawriel]

Me likes!
I just kinda got lost in the plot!^.^;;;
(Where the heck AM I?)
Erm,oh,yeah,Electrik's ready!:D Go look at him in"Piccolo Productions"!^.^

*claims the page fer Acid*

[Ducky]

Rock on ^_^

`Duckah the ..late

[4I Falcon]

I CLAIM THE THIRD PAGE!

btw... Paradoxes are good. Plotholes are bad.

[acid]

Psh, 4I falcon, Piccolo already claimed the page.

[4I Falcon]

Oi, sorry. Missed that.

*de-claims the page* :(

[Flint LP]

Great Story!Please try to include me, that would be so cool.

:cool:

[acid]

Ummm... Plotholes? Do I have one? Just tell me, and I'll get rid of it!!!

[4I Falcon]

Nope, no plotholes as of yet. Plotholes are just bad in general.

[acid]

“Bring it on!” shouted Acid right back at him.
The two began their fight.
Acid leapt onto the platform Terminator was on, and quickly ducked to avoid a kick from him. He spun around on the ground, knocking into Terminator and making him lose his balance. He jumped onto another platform. Acid jumped onto one of the floating platforms. The platform started to crumble! Acid leapt off just in time and knocked over Terminator. Acid had him pinned. Terminator was not bout to give up, though, and landed a kick that sent Acid flying. Terminator got up, and jumped over to where Acid was. Acid dodged Terminator’s kick then jumped on him. The two wrestled and rolled on the platform a little, and then Acid jumped back. Terminator followed him, and was rewarded for his efforts by a HARD kick in the stomach. Acid ran over to Terminator, and Terminator jumped up, swinging his blaster towards Acid. Acid wasn’t ready for it, and a loud CRACK sounded as Acid fell backwards, off the platform.
Terminator laughed. Evilly, not the hearty laugh of someone who has just seen something funny. “He never learns, does he? Nobody can beat me.”
A strange sound from below interrupted him. Terminator peered down, and saw Acid climbing back up!
Acid jumped onto the platform.
“Heh, amazing what a few trips to the rocknasium can do for your climbing skills.”
“Then why don’t we put your ‘skills’ to the test?!?” Said Terminator, a little annoyed at how this weakling could have survived.
Acid Ducked under Terminator’s punch, and jumped to avoid his kick. Acid then jumped back, onto another platform. He picked off one of the little cubes in the pillar. He tossed it up and down a few times, then threw it as hard as he could at Terminator. Terminator lost his balance a little, then leapt over towards Acid. Acid met him with another kick, and as Terminator flew backwards, Acid took out his bazooka and fired. When the smoke cleared, the platform Terminator had hit was gone, and so was Terminator. Acid wiped the sweat from his forehead.
“Hey, looking for someone?” came a voice from behind Acid. Terminator was there, and his gun was loaded. Acid dodged a barrage of bullets, and then jumped towards Terminator. Terminator let out another barrage of bullets that were easily dodged by Acid. Acid then leapt onto the platform where Terminator was and pinned him. Terminator tried to kick Acid, but Acid jumped back. Acid then launched a seeker at Terminator. He knew it wouldn’t hurt Terminator that much, but it can knock him pretty far with the force of the explosion. Terminator was launched into the air by the seeker, and then he fell. Unfortunately, he wasn’t anywhere near any platform walls, and did not have anything that could help him to one.
Acid, having beaten his opponent, was then warped back to Carrotus.

Ooo... Short. O.o I have to start writing longer chapters...

And don't worry Flint, I'll get you into the next chapter.



I also have I question. Does everyone on the forum like my story, or do the people who don't like it just keep their mouthes shut?

[Batty Buddy]

Que Passa!!!!

Hey, I like it- I just try to keep from talking too much.

(Also, all the good complements have already been given.)

[n0]

Nice, but not enough humor in this one

[Fawriel]

It's cool!
But one thing bothers me...
When did the fight end?
It stopped so suddenly!^.^;;

[acid]

Are you all ready for a maaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaajor spoiler? Or should I just keep writing and not tell you what's going to happen next.

(Actually, I'm reaching about the end of my story. Giving away the next part will probably just give away the end!;))

BTW, I already spilled the beans to Piccolo over MSN. He now knows what's going to happen, unless I throw in a few plot twists...*evil grin*

[acid]

eli_m33@hotmail.com

There. And my MSN username is currently BigBadBen, so just don't be too surprised if you see that in MSN messager.

And also, about your question about the other peoples, they're gone because Acid and Terminator got warped away to fight in that arena, and they were left behind. You will see them in the next chapter, I promise.

[n0]

So, when is the next chapter?
Am i in it?

[Flint LP]

Nice story, keep it up!
Oh, some plot twists should be nice.

(yeah I know this is a short worthless post, but I gotta show my support for this tale, its really good.)

[acid]

“I DON’T THINK THOSE ORGANIC BEINGS WILL BE EXPECTING THIS.” Said Omicron, giving the robot version of a grin. “BLACK JACK, HOW IS THE WORK COMING?”
“Very well. I don’t believe those pesky animals will get in the way when you’re in charge. Terminator was just too overconfident for his own good.” Said Black Jack, tweaking his gun. “Nobody can stand in our way when we’ve got our ultimate weapon!”
Omicron Hellbot began calculating. He took on a worried expression. “YOU’RE RIGHT. WE SHOULD MAKE SURE OUR SHIELDS ARE DOWN AND OUR WEAPON SYSTEMS OFF WHEN WE’RE NOT ENGAGED IN A BATTLE. THAT WAY, NOBODY CAN’T BEAT US.”
Black Jack looked puzzled. “Why? We don’t need to save energy, and what if they surprise us?”
Omicron whirled to face him. “WHY?!? WHY?!?!? LOOK, WE CAN’T DEFEND AGAINST NOBODY WITH OUR SHIELDS AND WEAPONS RUNNING. YOU SEE, NOBODY HAS TAKEN FORM. HE CAN DEFEAT THE STRONGEST ARMIES, BUT HE CAN’T HANDLE A DEFENSELESS ANIMAL. HE RULES OUTER SPACE, THE OCEAN, EVERYTHING SOMEBODY DOESN’T OWN, BUT HE IS A STRANGER WHERE THERE ARE MANY PEOPLE. HE IS ALWAYS BEING SEEN. BE WARNED. NOBODY TEAMED WITH ACTUAL LIFE FORMS CAN BE DEVASTATING; YOU CAN DEFEND AGAINST ONE OR THE OTHER, BUT NOT BOTH.”
Black Jack had receded a bit, but looked less puzzled. “Ah. I see.”

We now return to our show after that important news brief…

The group began the walk back to Carrotus City.
“So what happened with you and Terminator?” asked Fawriel.
“Well, to make a long story short, I pushed him into the lava. I’m not sure if he’s dead though, evil villains have a knack of popping up again no matter what.” Acid replied.
“Don’t worry, Acid, I’m sure he’s gone, and we can return to normal.” Said Electrik, patting Acid on the shoulder.
“The one thing that bugs me is that robot of his… And your evil clone.” said Acid.
“Omicron and Black Jack? No ide- you have a point there. We have to tell Jazz.” Said Jack.
Acid looked at his watch. “I’ve gone for 48 hours without sleep? Where’s my coffee maker?”
Headcheese didn’t know where Acid’s coffee maker was, but decided to use her own special way of waking people up. The mallet practically left a dent on Acid’s forehead.
“…That worked,” Acid said. He continued walking, but a bit more dizzily.
They soon arrived, beaten and battered, at Carrotus City. They walked up to the palace, and asked to speak with Jazz.

“So, in conclusion, we’re afraid that there might still be two of them out there, ready to strike.” Acid said, finishing their report.
Jazz nodded. “Yes, I can see why you think that. We can send you tomarrow, after everyone’s gotten a good night’s sleep. And I hope R.O.A.R. can pay for the damage your sister has done to my room, Jack Flash.”
Jack looked sheepishly at Headcheese, who was trying to find the best angle to swing her mallet with to smash the vase sitting on Jazz’s dresser. There was a crash, and the tinkle of glass. Headcheese stared proudly at the remains of the vase. She was going to cost R.O.A.R. at least $1,000.00.

The next day, Acid got up bright and early. He walked unsteadily over to his lounge, and pressed the button on his coffee maker. This one worked.
*BOOM!!!*
“AAAUUUGGGHHH!!!”
He then ran down to the launch pad. He was early this time. He sat down and waited for the others to arrive.
When they did, they all looked very interesting. Acid was black pretty much all over. Fawriel had dropped his computer on his foot while he tried to move it to a different place in his room, and was trying to cringe and smile at the same time. His foot was starting to look a little like a balloon. Phoenix Wing was having a serious bad hair day, to make a long story short. Jack Flash had accidentally grabbed the wrong gun, and was sheepishly holding a purple and yellow spotted pistol. Wizard of Odds had made several scientific errors, and looked a lot like Acid. Headcheese had accidentally bopped herself on the head with her mallet in her sleep. Electrik looked like a light bulb. Basically, everyone in the group was looking strange in their own way. Flint had joined them for this time, because more is better. He was looking very strange because he did not have any apparent problems, as the others did.
“Que Passa!!! Wait a second!”
The people in the crowd parted to reveal Batty Buddy.
“Don’t leave yet! I’ve got something for you!” Batty Buddy pulled off his backpack, and began digging through it. “Ah, here it is!”
Batty Buddy pulled it out. The chicken didn’t look like it liked being held by Batty Buddy. It scampered off, squawking.
Batty Buddy blinked. “Umm… That wasn’t it. Let me se…” he continued searching. “THERE!!! Found it!”
Batty Buddy placed a glowing red diamond in Acid’s hand. “I don’t remember where I got this or what it does, but I’ve got a feeling you’ll need it. Sixth sense stuff, you know?”
After that was over, the ship launched. Acid stared and stared at the red stone in his hands. What could it do? Why could it help them?

There! Flint has made a small appearance so far(being one of the people going on the ship) and I've finally done Batty Buddy's cameo!

Trafton AT's still not given me his profile, and I'm afraid that after this, he might not be able to fit in the story.

Also, my sense of humor is back!^.^ Enjoy.

[Batty Buddy]

Que Passa!!!!

Hmmm... CAMEO!

..|\/|
...:lol:
/\(..)/\
..^^

Now where'd that chicken go off to... I have an emu I want to introduce it to...

[4I Falcon]

Headcheese! You're grounded!

I've always wanted to say that. :D

But seriously, nice story. Authors with a sense of humour r00lzors. Unfortunately, I'm not one of them. *sniff*

[n0]

I claim page 7!
Contuine on!
More!
Wheee!!
I like how you use the paradox of my name!

`N0

[Fawriel]

Dun forget tha plottwist!^.^
(Still)Cool story,got a lot funnier again!^.^

[Flint LP]

Yay, this story is great, the plot continues to get better(and not just because im in it)

[n0]

DooD!!!
Don't stoP!!!!!!
Or I will eat yoU!!!!!
`N0

[acid]

I know, I know, strange topic.

okay, what I wanted to say is, I've not only got room in my story for a few more ppl, for the plot twist I'm planning (muchos thanks to Phoenix Wing, who had the idea) I need at least 1 more!

But, for the extras, there are these rules:

They must NOT be your main character. The extras are the kind of 'expendable' characters and I don't want to use someone's real character in a slot like that.

You should make them up specifically for this story. This isn't required, but as I said earlier, they are going to be kind of the 'expendable' characters.

I need at least 1, and I'm not taking more than 3.

There. See? I am making progress on my story.:lol: (A little bit)

[Fawriel]

Emigna (http://www.side7.com/cgi-bin/S7SDB/DisplayImg.pl?INO=202345)
This is a cat character I made up!^.^
She's a nature person and very vivid.
No much further description!:D

[n0]

Agent 00Zero is an agent for... well, Nobody knows that.
She trusts nobody, and nobody trusts her.
She is a weird cross between two animals, nobody is sure what,
but she has a tail and is purple and furry.

She lives in space with nobody, and is on nobody's team.

Ahh... The paradox of my name.... I just love it.

[4I Falcon]

Dark Hauc:

The semi-evil twin brother of Jack Flash's friend Hauc. He's slightly taller than Spaz, slightly shorter than Jazz, and has blood-red eyes. (not bloodshot... he's not high, dammit! :D) He carries a silver pistol with a gold stripe along the top, and is ready and waiting to fire at anything that moves. Even if it is one of his own team members.

Now you can tell why Hauc doesn't really mind whenever Dark Hauc leaves to go on a mission. There's a slight chance he'll get killed.

[Blackraptor]

The evil person! I am just plain evil. }> }> }>

[acid]

errr... You got here a bit late, didn't you?

[acid]

I'm sorry, but I have decided not to use these characters. None of them really work with what I had planned. They're great characters, just they don't fit in well here.

I think I'll think up my own character, anyway. The problem with yours is you don't know what I'm thinking of. Because of that, you can't make characters that fit in with it well, unless by luck, because you don't know what they're going to be for!

[Fawriel]

Lol,Acid,how was that supposed to work if you don't tell us what we have to give ya?:p
(I have lots of ideas for characters in my brain already,would just have to draw them!)

[4I Falcon]

Yeh, you didn't tell us what kind of characters you wanted! I gots lotta dem!

(Hauc, in the background): Does this mean that Dark Hauc still isn't dead yet?!

[acid]

What I was thinking of was someone like what the EVIL person was supposed to be like at first. Seemingly nice, but a traitor. I just didn't want to give away the plot.

[Ducky]

Pretty darn rux0r, man.

*bawls*



Do carry on :)

[n0]

DON'T LET THIS STORY DIE!!!

[acid]

“FAWRIEL!!! HOW MANY TIMES DO I HAVE TO TELL YOU!!! THE WEAPONS CABINET DOES NOT NEED TO BE MOVED TO THE OTHER SIDE OF THE SHIP!!!” Shouted Acid. Fawriel was at it again, trying to move the weapons cabinet to the other side of the ship. He had kind of turned into a game, where he tried to move the cabinet while Acid wasn’t looking. Acid wasn’t amused.
The shuttle was getting close to Omicron’s ship. Acid began to fidget. He tried not to think about what might happen. He walked into the lounge. He sat down.
“Tough day, huh?”
“Yeah, it’s as if they’re children! I don’t understand. They’re always taking up sports that could be harmful to the ship, to them, or to us. It’s as if you’re the only one not doing it, Jiaike. I’ll be mostly glad when we get to the station.”
Jiaike began tossing one of his grenades up and down. “I agree. They’d better stop goofing around and get their act together. I don’t want to attack Omicron with you and a bunch of clowns on my team.” He put the grenade back down.
Acid looked toward the red furred rabbit. “They were like this last time. All goofy and such. As soon as we got on Terminator’s ship, however, they started being serious again. I just hope they do the same this time.”

A little while later, after docking on Omicron’s ship…

Jiaike stopped. They were at a 6-way intersection in the halls- forward, right, left, the directions in-between, and back. “Okay, let’s split up into teams. We’ll have a better chance of finding Omicron and Black Jack if we split up.”
“Okay,” said Acid. “Good plan.”
Fawriel and Phoenix Wing edged closer together.
“I’LL make the teams, thank you,” said Jiaike. “Okay, Acid and Electrik, take straight forward. Flint and Jack Flash can take the forward right diagonal hall. Wizard of Odds and Headcheese take the path on the right. Blaze, Firefox and Fawriel take the path on the left. Phoenix Wing and I will take the diagonal forward and left.”
The search teams split up, and went down their paths. After a little while, everyone got a message from Jiaike.
“Somethings fishy. I can’t tell what, but I know something’s going to happen. I’ve just got that feeling that BOO-“
The explosion was cut off. It was probably because of the radio getting destroyed in the explosian. Everyone hurried back to the middle.
“We have to help them! We can’t just leave them alone!” said Acid, and they hurried down the forward left diagonal path. They kept walking for a while, then they found the remains of the radio, and a black scorch on the wall.
Acid began looking around. “The hall’s to skinny and goes on too long for there to have been a fight…” he looked closer at the ashes. “What the- fragments of a grenade! Jiaike sat us up!”
They began sprinting down the hall. They got to a large metal door.
“Locked!” said Electrik.
Acid fired his bazooka at the door. It did nothing. “The door’s bulletproof!”
Blaze, while everyone was trying to get through the door, had found a computer lock. He fiddled with a few combos on the keypad, and then he found one that opened the door! Fawriel flew right through the open space, as he had just launched another kick at the door, only to find it rise up right before his foot hit it.
“Oof!”
“Sorry.”
They all walked through. They were in a very large room. It looked like the perfect spot for a battleground. It was.
“SO, YOU FOUND US. VERY GOOD.”
The group looked up, and saw Omicron, Black Jack, Jiaike and Phoenix Wing standing on a platform above them.
“heh. You are definitely smarter than Terminator. A spy! Jiaike did his work well.” Acid commented.
Jack flash began aiming his blaster at one of the supports for the platform. He had found his, and given the purple and yellow spotted one to Headcheese.
“WE HAVE YOU RIGHT WHERE WE WANT YOU. NOW, IF YOU WILL ALL SURRENDER NOW, NOBODY WILL GET HURT. ATTACK, AND YOU MAY LIVE, BUT I CAN’T SAY THE SAME ABOUT YOUR FRIEND.”
Black Jack made his point clear by pointing his blaster at the side of Phoenix Wing’s head. “Yeah, what he says. If you don’t come quietly, then we know for sure you’re going to return to Carrotus with at least 1 less member of your team.”
Jack Flash fired. The shot ricocheted of Black Jack’s blaster, and into the support. Black Jack dropped his blaster, and it fell onto the platform where the team was standing, where it was promptly kicked off into the blackness beneath them. The support snapped, and the platform began leaning. Jack fired again, at another support, and the platform shifted to a 90-degree angle. Needless to say, the four standing on the platform fell onto the platform with the others.
Omicron got up first, and launched himself at Jack. He hit him head on. The two rolled back a little, then Omicron threw Jack Flash. Jack slammed straight into Acid, Electrik, and Flint, and the four hit the wall and were knocked out. Emmi ran over to help them. Omicron then leapt at Blaze, who did his best to defend, but failed. He was thrown on top of the heap, knocking into Emmi on his way. Wizard of Odds and Firefox attacked Omicron from both sides, but the attack was thwarted by Omicron grabbing one and using him as a bat to smash the other with, resulting with them being added to the now quite large pile of unconscious rabbits.
Headcheese walked over to Omicron with her hands behind her back, and putting on her angelic look. Omicron Scanned her. Headcheese took the opporitunity to show Omicron the object behind her back. The mallet actually left a dent on the top of Omicron’s head. Omicron looked surprised, then gathered his circuits and kicked her into the heap.
Now it was just Fawriel, and it didn’t look like he would win. He edged over to the wall.
The door opened.
“DARK HAUC? YOU’RE LATE, AS USUAL.”
“Oh, great. It looks like I missed something important.”
“ACTUALLY, JUST ME BEATING THE HECK OUT OF THEM.” Omicron gestured towards the pile of unconscious rabbits.
Phoenix Wing had grown tired of being held by the back of her neck, and began open rebellion. Black Jack had not been ready to battle Phoenix wing, or her with her claws extended, and much less a very TICKED OFF Phoenix wing.
Black Jack regained his senses as fast as he could, and tried to combat the new threat.
Fawriel ran over to the fight.
So did Omicron, who cut into the fight with a harsh kick that landed right on target. Phoenix Wing crashed into the railing, and almost fell, but caught the platform.
Omicron wasted no time in knocking Fawriel to the other side of the room.
Meanwhile, Acid started to come to.
“Uhhh?”
He accidentally kicked Electrik. Electrik woke with a start, and a burst of electricity. The electricity woke up all the other rabbits in the pile. They all jumped up.
“YOU WANT TO FIGHT AGAIN, HUH? I DON’T THINK THE OUTCOME WOULD BE ANY DIFFERENT.” Omicron was beginning to receive anger messages. “BLACK JACK, I’M GETTING TIRED OF THIS. I THINK IT’S TIME WE PUT AND END TO THIS.”
Black Jack nodded, then turned to Phoenix Wing, who was trying in vain to pull herself up. He took out another blaster.
“NO!!!” Fawriel began to run over.
Black Jack ignored Fawriel, and fired.
There was a silence. It was one of the silences you get when someone has just done something REALLY bad.
Fawriel started running again, fuelled by a rage he had never known before. He slammed into Black Jack with such a force that Black Jack fell off the platform as well. Fawriel then looked over towards where Omicron, Jiaike and Dark Hauc were standing.
Omicron Launched at Fawriel, but was repelled back by a kick from his foe. He had never experienced being hit with so much power before; he had only used it! He got up again, and Fawriel grabbed him. Fawriel threw Omicron straight at Jiaike, and they both skidded off the platform. Dark Hauc ran for his life, but didn’t make it to the door. A small trail of smoke rose from Jack Flash’s gun.
Fawriel looked over the edge of the platform. It was a long, black fall. Driven by his rage, he dived down off the platform.
“NO!” shouted Acid. It was too late. Fawriel had already jumped. They all ran over. Blaze produced a length of line and a grappling hook.
“Use this. Someone can climb down, and see what happened. The others will stay up here, and secure the line.”
“I’ll go!” said Acid, before anyone could even finish taking in what Blaze had said.
He began climbing down.

It was a long way to the bottom. When he finally got there, he got off the rope, and started to adjust his eyes to the darkness. That didn’t help much, but he did see a few wooden crates. He used a little flamer ammo to set one on fire, as a makeshift candle. He looked around. He looked around. There appeared to be some kind of padding on the floor. That was pretty lucky for them. He looked around until he found the motionless figure of Phoenix Wing. She was still breathing. He couldn’t see Fawriel anywhere. He knew calling out would be stupid, as he would probably have been knocked out from the fall.
A figure limped out from behind a pile of boxes. It walked a few steps, and then collapsed next to Phoenix Wing. Acid brought the crate a little closer, and saw that it was Fawriel. He knew they were both still alive, but they couldn’t get back up on their own.

There! Ninth chapter. I'm sorry I forgot to make Flint do something.

To anyone who wants to know, Jiaike is pronounced Jee Iy ake

NOBODY is going to be in the next chapter, I promise. And this story is NOT going to die, not if I have anything to say about it!

[Fawriel]

What she said!:D
*smiling all the way*
Just the way I like it!^.^

*claims page for Acid,the story,Pho and himself*

[4I Falcon]

Originally posted by acid
Headcheese walked over to Omicron with her hands behind her back, and putting on her angelic look. Omicron scanned her. Headcheese took the opporitunity to show Omicron the object behind her back. The mallet actually left a dent on the top of Omicron’s head.

:lol: rux0r!

In other news, I can't believe I was so useless... :(

*double-claims the page for the story*

[acid]

Don't worry, I'm plainning to let off a few characters in the next chapter. These will be ones I think were a little overused. When I'm done, I'll probably be left with Acid, Electrik, Jack Flash and Flint. It just seems that I get all the inspiration for some characters and none for others.:(

[n0]

Originally posted by acid “WE HAVE YOU RIGHT WHERE WE WANT YOU. NOW, IF YOU WILL ALL SURRENDER NOW, [b]NOBODY[\b] WILL GET HURT. ATTACK, AND YOU MAY LIVE, BUT I CAN’T SAY THE SAME ABOUT YOUR FRIEND.”




NOBODY is going to be in the next chapter, I promise. And this story is NOT going to die, not if I have anything to say about it!

Whadya mean, "in the next chapter". I was in this one! And, thankfuly, I didn't get hurt.
`N0

Btw, Thanx for not letting this story die!

[Fawriel]

Originally posted by acid
Don't worry, I'm plainning to let off a few characters in the next chapter. These will be ones I think were a little overused. When I'm done, I'll probably be left with Acid, Electrik, Jack Flash and Flint. It just seems that I get all the inspiration for some characters and none for others.:(
HEY!!!
YOU CAN'T LET ME OUT!;.;
I OWN ALL THOSE GUYS!!!
AND I CAME UP WIF A BIG,FAT PLOT-TWIST!!!!
I'M IMPORTANT,MAN!
*goes into a corner to cry*;.;

[4I Falcon]

I'm confused.

[acid]

Piccolo, the reason I've decided to continue only with Acid, Electrik, Jack Flash and Flint because hey are the ones with the least action so far. Heck, practically the only thing Flint did was come along!:p

I know I've done quite a few things with Acid and Electrik, but it is my story, and what would that be like if it didn't have my own characters? :p

I'm sorry I have to leave the others out, but I want to give my brain a chance to think up plot twists for the characters it hasn't been able to use yet.

[4I Falcon]

I'd say something more useful here, but I'm still completely stunned...

[n0]

*Sniff*
THE STORY JUST DIED!!!!1
AND YOU DIDN"T EVEN GOT TO TEH BESTEST PART YET!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
*/Sniff*
`N0

[acid]

what do you mean the story died?

I'm just taking a break, that's all.

(And I'm home sick with a cold.:r)

[Flint LP]

*sends card*
Get well........And write some more of that story.

[n0]

What flint said.

[4I Falcon]

The cold seems to be going around like an evil epidemic of ultimate doom.

Get well, acid, and i hope to see more of this truly RUX story soon.

YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!

[acid]

Bleh... The cold turned into strep throat, and I had an operation on my toe. The story might be postponed for a while.

[4I Falcon]

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! *dies*

[Ducky]

It's not a cold, it's anthrax, and I've got it too. It's lingering...spreading through my school...we're all going to get it...

on your TOE? That is EFIL! Wow!

But anyway. Carry on as soon as you get better. :)

[acid]

wOOt!!! I hit the double digits!

The view screen faded on a little, and then went back to black. It then faded back to normal, the status light flashing red. The view screen brought up a window showing the damage. It didn’t look good. Most of it was red, with a few crushed spots and some short-circuited parts. He was a wreck.
Omicron switched off his view screen, and lapsed into auto-repair mode. He needed to fix a bit of the damage before attempting to do anything.
“YOU THERE, BLACK JACK?”
“Just let me die in peace…”
“AW, COME ON. IT’S NOT THAT BAD, IS IT?”
“Yes.”
“ALL RIGHT, WHAT HAPPENED?”
“The fall crushed my feet and legs, and caused serious damage to my ribcage and spine.”
“AY YI YI… I CAN GET YOU TO THE MEDICAL WING…”
“Okay… Jeez this hurts…”
Omicron focused on repairing his legs and feet for a few minutes, then returned to his normal mode and walked over to Black Jack. He picked him up, and began walking towards the door.
“Oh, you’re going to play favorites, are you? OWOWOWOWOW!!!”
“OH, SORRY JIAIKE. BUT I’M NOT SURE I CAN CARRY TWO RABBITS. DO YOU THINK YOU CAN LAST UNTIL I GET HIM TO THE MEDICAL WING?”
“Okay… OWOWOWOWOW!!!”
Omicron cringed, and then began running as fast as he could. He decided against augmenting his leg circuits, considering his current state.

Meanwhile…

“Foo.”
Acid looked around, trying to think of a way to get them up. His eyes landed on a large crate, and he got one. He began climbing quickly up the rope.

“Back so soon?”
“They’re both unconscious. They’re still alive, though. I need to get them back up here. Do you think you could toss the hook down there and tie the rope end up here? I’ve got an idea.” Acid said. Blaze obeyed.
“Okay, if I pull twice, start pulling. If I yank, stop pulling.

Acid jumped off at the end of the rope. He found the crate, and punched a hole in the bottom. He stuck the hook through the hole, then pried the boards back over the hole. He tugged twice on the rope.
The rope started going up. The box appeared to hold, and stayed upright. Acid yanked the rope, and it stopped. He pulled it back down to a satisfactory height. He then went over to the two unconscious figures. He picked up Fawriel, then walked over to the crate and put him in. He walked back over, and was about to pick up Phoenix Wing, when suddenly he heard someone say something.
“OWOWOWOWOW!!!”
Acid looked around.
“Who’s there?”
“Oh, Fitzwick. OWTCH!!!”
Acid began walking towards where the sound was coming from. He only remembered two of the people in his group falling, and if he were correct, this would be one of the enemies.
“Oh, sh- wait, there could be kids reading this, couldn’t there? Umm… Shoot!”
Acid instinctively pulled the trigger on his gun. The blast showed the reclined figure of Jiaike, trying to squirm over to the exit.
“NOOOOOOOOOOOWTCH!!!!”
“Hello, TRAITOR!”
“NO! PLEASE!!! DON’T KILL ME!”
“Foo.”
“What?”
“I’m out of ammo.”
“Boy have we seen THAT gag a lot.”
Omicron took that moment to burst into the room. He saw Acid and Jiaike, and launched himself at Acid.
FWOOMP.
“That wasn’t the sound I expected to hear.”
“I DIDN’T EXPECT IT EITHER. MAYBE I NEED MORE REPAIRS.”
Omicron picked up Jiaike.
“WELL, CATCH YOU LATER. IT WAS NICE MEETING YOU. BYE!”
Omicron rushed out of the room. Acid blinked. He then shook his head, and returned to the task that he was supposed to be doing. When Phoenix Wing was in the crate with Fawriel, he tugged twice on the rope. The crate went up. After a while, it came back down, empty. Acid climbed in, and tugged twice on the rope again. The crate went up.

After a while, they had gotten back into their ship and set Omicron’s ship to self-destruct. As they watched the explosion, they saw a rather interestingly shaped piece of shrapnel fly off seemingly without rotating. They shrugged it off, dismissing it as a strange piece of shrapnel. They settled back down, and waited to get back to Carrotus.

A few days Later, at the end of the week…

*BOOM!!!*
“AUUUGHHH!!!”
Things had pretty much settled back to normal. Phoenix wing and Fawriel had healed, and everyone had settled down a bit. They had forgotten about one important thing, and were about to be reminded.

Acid walked back into his office. NOBODY was there.
“Oh, um, hi, didn’t know you were visiting!” said Acid.
“You probably didn’t. I drop in whenever I want to. Now, to the point. I have been thinking, and decided 4 months is too generous. After all, you only need to get a human. I have decided to shorten the time limit. You now have 4 weeks.”
After giving his information, NOBODY disappeared. Acid blinked, and then ran to tell the rest of his past crew what NOBODY had said.



I know I told you I had the cold and strep throat and toe operation, but I knew I had to do another chapter. Here it is.

Piccolo complained enough to me over MSN that I got majorly ticked off and decided to leave everyone in the story. Happy now?

I will still try to get the other people doing stuff, so that they don't feel really left out at the end of the story or anything.

hehe... Fitzwick!!!

[Fawriel]

Originally posted by acid

“Oh, sh- wait, there could be kids reading this, couldn’t there? Umm… Shoot!”


“NOOOOOOOOOOOWTCH!!!!”
“Hello, TRAITOR!”
“NO! PLEASE!!! DON’T KILL ME!”
“Foo.”
“What?”
“I’m out of ammo.”
“Boy have we seen THAT gag a lot.”



Mehehee,a lyrical genius as always!:D:D:D:D:D

originally posted by acid
Piccolo complained enough to me over MSN that I got majorly ticked off and decided to leave everyone in the story. Happy now?
ROFL,but looks like you,Pho,Enig,Trafton,Skulgah and Franky aren't the only geniuses here!:D *wink*:p

[n0]

Yeah!
Im Back!

[acid]

One of the things I think I should tell you...

That "strange piece of shrapnel" is an escape pod with the enemies. Bad guys in my stories don't know when to quit.

Sorry I've slacked off a little, getting too worked up with school, ideas for other stories, games, other stuff, etc.

FITZWICK!!!

[Flint LP]

Originally posted by acid
Sorry I've slacked off a little...ideas for other stories etc.

Ohhh, other stories, hope they are as good as this one, but finish this one first please.

[4I Falcon]

Yesh, don't pull a me and go working on two or three stories at one time... I'm not sure why I did in the first place...

my head is too full of ideas... :6

[acid]

*BOOM!!!*
“AAAAARRRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHH!!!”
Acid had been trying to build an interdimensional transport thingymabobber ever since NOBODY had visited. At least that’s what he currently calls it. It wasn’t working. He had been able to make it, but when he tested it, it exploded. The test room no longer has a floor, just a sea of shrapnel.
“THIS IS THE LAST STRAW!!! I GIVE UP!!!”
Minor note: this IS Acid, not Omicron.
Acid stormed out of the test room, a look of pure rage fixed on his face. Some people might say he looked homicidal.
“Hey, Acid, did the test run go-” Electrik’s words were cut short when he realized the big mistake he had made.
“The test run? Oh, it went FINE!!! JUST FINE!!!” Acid walked across the lounge, stiff with anger. He was so mad that he didn’t notice every single rabbit in the room was looking at him.
“Um, Acid?” Said one of the rabbits in the room.
“WHAT?!?”
“What happened to your right ear? Did you get plastic surgery or someth-Ishouldn’thavesaidthat.”
Acid had put his hand up to his right ear, and a piece of shrapnel drifted down to the floor.
“AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGGGGGHHH HHHHH!!!”
Acid stormed out of the room, slamming the door so hard it swung open again, made a big dent in the wall, and closed itself.

“Que passa?”
“GO AWAY.”
“About the stone I gave you-“
“I SAID GO AWAY!”
“I think I might be able to fix your interdimensional transport thingymabobber-“
“WHAT PART OF GO AWAY DON’T YOU UNDERSTAND?!?”
“Okay, okay, jeez, I was just trying to help…”

Acid awoke the next morning, and plodded over to the lounge. He pressed the button on what he thought was his coffee maker.
A humming noise started up. A blue light flowed from the contraption. Acid’s eyes snapped open.
He was looking at a boxlike thing that was humming and giving off blue light. The red gem Batty Buddy gave him was in a small slot in the top.
He looked around, and saw Batty Buddy, smiling and looking at him.
“What is this?” Acid asked.
“Oh, an idea I got for interdimensional transport. I think you’ll like it. It’s a little clunky, however, here, let me turn that-“
There was a lound BANG, a flash of bright blue, and then everything went black.

“Hmmfurmghfnufmr?” Acid asked. He suddenly looked up, eyes open. He was in a strange place, unlike anything he’d seen before. “Is this Earth?”
As if in answer to his question, a figure popped out of a nearby pipe, and started hopping on strange turtle like things while music started playing.
“Oh, boy,” said Acid, “How did I get into Mario?”
There was another blue light, and everything went black again.

“Mhfrungnmfnt?” Asked Acid. It was the same strange feeling, except he was back in the lounge.
“I had to pull you back. I don’t have any setting to where it goes yet, but soon I’ll get the quirks out,” Batty Buddy was saying.
“How did I get into Mario?” Asked Acid, rephrasing his question.
“This is a game transporter. It links into the electronics dimension group, and can jump into any game dimension. I’m thinking if we could make a jump into the Jazz Jackrabbit dimension-“
“Aren’t we already there?”
“The GAME. Anyways, if we could do that, we might be able to hop right out of the game, and into the Earth dimension.
“Sounds good!” Said Acid. “Do you think I could help you? I have some skills with electronics…”
“Of course! Why wouldn’t I let you help? You’re a genius when it comes to making stuff like this!”

Yay, made the 11th chapter! I also decided to get Batty Buddy in it again, too!

:D

[n0]

NiCe!

Keep it going.

And I am glad that the focus has turned to me!

Please use a bunch of paradoxes with me!

OK?

ThanX!
`N0

[Fawriel]

Very neat!^.^

Keep going on!:D

[Flint LP]

Nice last chapter, but, no more excuses, write some more please. This is awsometacular!

[acid]

By request of 4I Falcon, I am changing Omicron Hellgod's name to Omicron Hellbot. You might see why later.

[4I Falcon]

Yay! Someone got my name right! * repeatedly kicks everyone who called me 41 Falcon*

Anyway, thx for the name change. As of yet, Acid only knows why, but if you want to know, then pm me.

Then again, I prolly still won't tell you. Go read Enter: Jack Flash; I'm sure the reason will eventually pop up.

GRT STORIE DOOODZR

IIf' dI bceo utlhde whraiptpei eas ts tgouryy oans tghoeo dp laasn etth,i sy iosnse!,

[acid]

I won't be able to continue the story for a while.

Why?

I lost microsoft word during the reinstallation of W2000 somehow. And Microsoft Word's the only half decent word processing program I know of.:o

[4I Falcon]

O_O

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! *dies*

haven't we gone through this already?

[acid]

*KABOOM!!!*
“…”
“Eh, that’s supposed to happen, right Batty Buddy?”
“Interesting dimension warping machine.”
“Looks more like Acid’s coffee maker to me.”
“HEY! It worked the first time!”

The ‘crew’ was inspecting the remains of Batty Buddy’s machine. Something had gone wrong between when Acid had gone to Mario, and 10 minutes later when he had gathered everybody.
“Hold on, I’ll fix it…” mumbled Batty Buddy. He reached into his backpack, and pulled out a monkey. He had intended to pull out a monkey wrench, but his backpack had misinterpreted.
“Ook?”
Batty Buddy looked sternly at his backpack, then tried again. Unfortunately, he wasn’t having much luck with his backpack today…

“Ook?”
“Hey! Don’t touch tha-“
*CRACK!*
*Fizzle*
*Zap!!!*

“Ook?” The monkey scratched his head. This was probably the Jazz Jackrabbit 2 game dimension, but he wasn’t sure if he had hit the defragmentator or the dimension interfuser. The others sat up, mumbling nonsense, like Acid had done first.
“Where are we?” Asked Electrik.
The monkey then noticed he was still carrying the cross-dimensional radio controller for the dimension traveler. He delightedly pressed the “interlace” button, then the “jump” button.

*BOOOOM!!!*
*fizz*
The boy in the room looked down, surprised. His monitor had just exploded, and 1 bat, 1 monkey, 1 weasel, 1 cat, and 4 rabbits had landed on the floor in front of him. They were all unconscious, so the boy decided to get a better look. The bat was wearing a backpack, and sunglasses. The monkey was holding a remote control thing. The rabbits had assorted weaponry, and weren’t just your everyday colors. One was teal, and one was even blue with electricity crackling all over it! The weasel was green. The teal rabbit had a big red bazooka. The boy bent down to read the inscription on the side.
“RaCO?” He reached towards the trigger.
“YAAAAAHHHH!!!!” Yelled Acid, clutching his weapon protectively and as far away as possible from the boy. “Don’t you dare!!! This thing’s loaded and dangerous! One shot could vaporize this house and demolish at least this neighborhood!”
The boy blinked.
The yell had woken up the rest of the animals, and they now sat looking at the boy.

Electrik, who always liked things simple, said “Okay, here’s our human. Now let’s get back to NOBODY so that we can forget this whole thing.”

Of course, as everything is, it wasn’t as simple as that.

First, they needed a new monitor to make the jump back into the game dimension. Also, now that the boy knew what was going on, he had started to rebel against the whole thing. Also, they needed to be able to make the transaction without being noticed.

Murphy’s law. You never can ignore it.



w00t! 12th chapter!

All praise the mighty microsoft word! Ahhhhmmm... Ahhhhmmm...

yes, my dad reinstalled MSWord. w00t.

I've done my part, now 4I Falcon and Unknown Rabbit, write your next chapters!

[Fawriel]

W007!:D

<s>(Hey,you forgot I have blue hair!)</s>


Love it!^_^

[4I Falcon]

I'm workin' on it! JEEZ!

BTW, the second chapter of SoT is done. Acid has a cameo. Go myself.

*recalls SpazQuest*
>GO DOOR
The door didn't do anything worth praise.

:lol:

[acid]

EDIT: I've been hearing so many complaints from the other people in the war tavern about I'm not giving enough information about what is going on that I'm going to rewrite the last chapter. I just don't want to leave everybody unhappy, especially with the ending.

BTW, Coppertop, I'm sorry I can't fit you in, because this is the last chapter, but I can probably include you in my next story.

[Fawriel]

Erm,worst part?

Dunno?

Hate ends!

Whatevah,you COULD have cleared stuff up more...:rolleyes:

Anyways,I'm in the next story,too!}> *maniacal laugh*

[4I Falcon]

now it's time to write an epilogue the size of the rest of the story so that maybe the readers wouldn't be so completely left out as to WHAT THE FARGUS IS GOING ON HERE?!

[acid]

Sorry, I'm totally out of inspiration-I'm using it on my next story. Also, you won't be seeing me until this friday, I'm going to Walker Creek for that 6th grade outdoor ed, where I stay in the mountains for 4 nights. It's like a very long field trip you'd say, or a very short summer camp. Bleh. This is for real, not one of those problems I say the story will be delayed and I find a solution to the problem three seconds later.

[4I Falcon]

You're implying that I thought the problem would only last three seconds.

I'm serious. I thought I would have had to resort to writing my story on my Palm's Memo Pad, which only holds 5000 characters per memo. That takes a foogin' long time to do, as I have to write the story down on the Memo Pad, then rewrite it in Word. Then, of course, there's the copy-and-paste to the JCF, but that takes all of five minutes. But, anyway, the Documents To Go problem was fixed relatively easily (thank you reinstall! n_n), I finished Chapter 12 (13? what chapter am I on again? o_O), and am almost done Chapter 3 of System of Turbulence.

Anyway again.

Good luck on that loooong field trip of yours, acid. See ya soon.

YARR AND STUFF IS BECAUSE-FUL! :B

[Nightshade]

If you're still up to taking joiners, I'll be a minion. Never been a bad guy before.
Oh, and did I mention that the story is Ruxor?
I'll just give you my prof wether you use it or not ... saves time.


Name: Coppertop

Nickname: Copper

Appearance: Tall and slim with gray fur and waist long, wavy black hair held back by a silky copper scarf(ribbon). Usually in one braid. Deep green eyes. I have my sword on my left hip and my blaster low on my right thigh. I wear calf high, scuffed black boots, black pants and a dull green, long sleeved shirt with a black vest. Sometimes I wear a hooded black cloak.

Personality: Suspicious and distrustful. Most likely to give you the cold shoulder. Doesn’t make friends that easily but keeps the ones I do have for life. I am loyal and picky about who I work for. I have a musical accent and I love a good argument. (Usually winning) I have a dry sense of humor. If I am insulted I become dangerous, usually killing the insulter. However, I won’t kill innocents.



Age: Looks to be about 27, 29

Weapons: A sleek, high powered navy and white blaster and my sword Shale which has a mirrored, unbreakable blade and a three quarter blood channel. The hilt is black and in the shape of a flying dragon the wings (razor edged in the front) forming the crosshilt and the tail twining around the hand grip. In the pommel is a faceted dark green jewel that matches my eyes. If I touch this gem I can become invisible for a couple of hours. It also gives limited healing and can give light.

Special items: A crystal key on a fine silver chain that can open any lock. This is optional.

Profession: Mercenary

Motto: Give no mercy (don't use this too much)

Ship: My modified Darkspray Assassin 216. The Assassin is black and largish with a small bay. It’s armed with torpedoes, heat seekers in limited supplies. Laser cannons and ion turrets. She’s fast and powerful. He alias is Ghryheli 78. Sometimes I have a gunner and copilot, Claw. (read about him in Conquests)

Sign: Two vertical black bars across a white horizontal bar on silver.

Other: Nightshade the Assassin is my cousin, and she and my seeress grandmother Skiye are my only living relatives.

[Ducky]

Originally posted by Nightshade
Never been a bad guy before.


I remember when I said that, so long ago. *gets all maudlin*

Anyway. Carry on. *provides a round of drinks for the anticipating listeners and for the dry-throated story-teller*

[acid]

See above for updates. I deleted chapter 13.

[Nightshade]

I claim 5th page, but I'll give it to you if you're nice:p

[Fawriel]

How neat!:D

Now gimme some giant end battle with tonsa special effects and dead people![evil laugh]MUAAAHAAAHAAAAHAAAAAAAAAAAA...[/evillaugh] *hack cough wheeze* XD

Erm,nevermind!^^;