Edit: small update, changing 30 years to some unknown amount of time so that the age in my character's profiles will make more sense.

It has been 30 years quite some time since Devan had been defeated by Jazz. The rabbits now live in peace with the turtles. The rabbits lived happily, researching technologies that could help them live easier.
One inventor, namely Acid, had come across an interesting idea for a defense mechanism that could encase carrutus in a “Bubble” that would eliminate all harmful projectiles aimed at Carrutus. However, this seemingly perfect defense system was about to become Carrutus’s biggest threat…

Okay, now that I've got a beginning, I need some more characters. Now is the time to apply.

I need:
EVIL person: Seemingly nice person who becomes a traitor and tries to destroy carrutus.

EVIL person's assistant: A squeaky littly guy who is terrified at everything at first, but when EVIL person is defeated, he takes over EVIL person's plans and kinda reverses his personality.

Good guys: People that can help defeat EVIL person and EVIL person's assistant. Be ready for interesting plot twists.

Random people: I could have a few cameos here and there, nothing important, just for fun.


Hints? Suggestions? Praise? Flames? All is appreciated as long as it's helpful. I might change the cast requirements once I get the story more fixed in my head.

Also, please make sure there aren't too many applications for one section. I don't want like 50 people wanting to be on the good guys team or something.

dito
I got ya a good pic so I wantwould like to have a big one!

Okay, there are currently 3 people on the good people team(me, Piccolo and Phoenix wing) And nobody's applied for anything else.

I think I should split the good guys into 2 categories: The people who defeat EVIL person and EVIL person's assistant and the people who are on the good guy's side but don't have as big of a role.

I want to be the Evil Good person!

The one who is on the good site, but acts evily. Not a traitor, though. ^_^

I did not entireley understand you. Do you want to be EVIL person, who is going to be my assistant, but steals the plans for the bubble and tries to use them against carrutus, or do you want to be on the good people's side and just not be a very nice person?

No, I want to be good. :P

Just kind of evil, but good.

Trafton, before I can include you, I need a character profile. I found piccolo's and Phoenix's but not yours in the everyone's characters thread.

Eh...I'll do that in a bit...

okay, so let me tallie up the positions again...

Good guys who defeat EVIL person:

Acid
Phoenix wing

Good guys that I don't know what good guy team they want to be on yet:

Trafton AT
Piccolo



However, I'll probably close the section for good guys defeating EVIL person once I get 4 or 5.

And also, I want to remind everyone defeating EVIL person is no fun when you haven't got an EVIL person.

I'm a very good good guy,although I am NOT a person who likes to be with others(bad experinces).
So make me a good guy who destroys some baddies and is mostly in a bad mood.

Que Passa!!!!

I'm always up for a cameo...

I want to get the story going! All I need is EVIL person and EVIL person's assistant and then I can go!


...Of course, I could make up my own, but I don't want to.

here we go:

Good guys who defeat EVIL people:

Me
Phoenix wing

Other good guys:

Piccolo
Trafton AT

Cameos:

Batty Buddy

EVIL person:

...?

EVIL person's assistant:

...?


Also, a new section!

People who don't want to be the big bad guy but work for the EVIL person, they can sign up as EVIL person's minions.

heehee.

Check the "Everyone's characters" section for the good guys.

Cameo: Emmi Somerkallio (Hyppaa Kaivoon). Good-natured nurse-turned-fighter during the Buster Assault. Female, gold-furred, and carries a cyan blaster. Loves to heal things, and hates to see destruction; however, this doesn't stop her fighting alongside the Elite Task Force.

Bad guy's right hand: Black Jack, Jack Flash's evil clone, originally created by Buster Tank, thought to be destroyed by Jack himself, but surviving. Normal rabbit, black fur, red bandana, darkened silver blasters. And evil. EVIL EVIL EVIL.

Bad guy's assistant: Omicron Hellgod. The ultimate thinking machine. Built by Acid's precedent's precedent to be a war machine... but to protect the rabbits. His OS was virused by Slicer Tank, and now he's switched sides. But when Black Jack was seemingly killed by Jack, Slicer put him into stasis to begin a new revolution... 30 years later.

Ack! Confused confused confused! *falls out a window*

Actually, no. I'm Canadian, not Finnish. I don't even know what Hyppaa Kaivoon means. I just hope it doesn't mean anything bad. I got it from Emmi's e-mail address. It sounded cool, so I included it here. (hint hint: Emmi's her real name, but Hyppaa Kaivoon could -- and should -- be her character name.)

and what the poo does "Mukava huomata et suomalaisia Jazz -pelaajiaki löytyy! (tosta hahmos nimestä päättelin..)" mean?!

All I need is the actual EVIL person and I can start!

Good guys that defeat EVIL ppl:

Acid
Phoenix wing
Electrik

Other Good Guys:

Piccolo
Trafton AT

EVIL person:

...?

EVIL person's assistant:

Omicron Hellbot

Other EVIL ppl:

Black Jack

Cameos:

Batty buddy
Emmi Somerkalio



In case you're wondering, Electrik is my other character. I'll update Acid's Profile and Put up Elektric's eventually...

Also, the EVIL person doesn't actually need to be nice at first, he / she just starts out on the good guy's side.

*Thinks* Hmm... EVIL... EvilMike? PERFECT!!!

Heh... Either that or Scarry Sarry...

Unless someone else wants to play that part...

Actually, it might be a better idea for me to think of my own EVIL person.

Now all I need is Trafton AT's profile...

Edit: I can probably start the story without it, however if he DOES want to be in the story he has to post it before it's too late.

It's OK. I'm still thinking of a profile.

Go ahead and start it without meh.

It was another normal day on Carrutus, the birds were singing, the carrots were standing tall, and Acid was about to wake everybody up with his usual morning ritual.
*BOOM!!!*
“AAUUGH!!!”
Yes, Acid normally starts his day with an explosion and a yell. He had never gotten his personal coffee maker to work right. He walked back into his workroom, singed and frayed. It might be a little harmful, but he likes to wake himself up by blowing himself up, rather than drink a cup of Joe. He sat back down on his chair and got to work on his “Bubble” design. Just a few more days work on the blueprints and he’d be ready to begin construction.
The Bubble project was under very high security, and only Acid’s friends, Electrik and his co-workers were allowed in the building. Acid began whistling, and because of his scorched tongue, it sounded a little off key.
Thus, the day began.

Acid had done a lot of work on the Bubble, and decided to take a little break. He bumped into one of his co-workers, Terminator, on the way out.
“Oops, I’m sorry!”
“That’s okay.”
Acid headed down to the deli down in carrutus central.
“the usual.”
“One turkey and bacon sub, no Mayo, no mustard?”
“yup.”

On the way back, happily munching his sub, he saw Terminator dash out the door with his hands full of papers. Acid wondered where he had to go so quickly with all those papers. When he got back to the office, he decided he would double check the blueprints for the bubble before sending them in to construction.
“Huh? I thought they were right here…” Acid rummaged through his desk, but to no avail. “Darn! I worked so hard on that.” He suddenly realized what had happened. “Oh, Asterisk.”

He shot out the door towards where Terminator was running. Everyone who was standing by knew that if Acid was running, it was VERY important, and ran after him.
He followed the directions of people who had seen him run by until he got to Carrutus launch pad. Terminator’s ship was still there, and he was trying to get launch clearance as fast as possible.
“STOP HIM!!!” yelled Acid, panting from the run. He was to late. The ship took off. “ASTERISK BOMB SWORD EXCLAMATION MARK DOLLAR SIGN NUMBER AT!!!!!” he proceeded to name every violent weapon and key on the keyboard.

Word of things like this spreads like wildfire, and soon Carrutus council was meeting.
“We cannot let him get away with it! We must destroy him, even if we lose to plans! Just a few tweaks and out ultimate protection can be turned into a weapon of mass destruction!” roared the military officer. “We should send carrutus fleet to seek out and destroy him!”
“Aye!”
One by one, the members of the council agreed with him. Even Acid gave a dejected “Sure…” as he was very upset about letting the plans be stolen.
“Then it has been chosen. We will send carrutus fleet to destroy him. The meeting is-“
“Wait!” the council turned as the doors swung open. There stood a green weasel with blue hair. He was fairly muscular and tall. “If we send the whole carrutus fleet, then think of all the things that could go wrong! They can detect a large fleet much better than one ship, I’ll tell you that! Besides, a large fleet is a large target. We could lose a lot of men with that method.”
Lori’s face curled into a snarl.
“and Women, if they choose to fight. My plan is this, send a small squad in one ship that can repel radar detection. They can dock onto the station and destroy it from the inside.
Jazz’s face took on a contemplating expression, and after a while he said, “Very well, Fawriel. I can see your plan is a much better idea. But, now, who must be on the squad?”

Yay! I finished the first chapter! I've already used Piccolo too! And he did get a fairly big part because he did do that wonderful piccie of Acid.

To piccolo: Your character IS a weasel, right? Or am I seriously wrong?

Um, sorry I didn't read the top of your post, 4I falcon, but don't worry, the good guys will be included in the next chapter, and with your permission, I would like to put Jack Flash on the team the kills EVIL person!

The story ish one of the best I ever saw here!
And I don't only say that because of my role!

originally posted by acId
He was fairly muscular and tall.

Hur hur!

BTW, Piccolo, the times have changed. My name no longer has a capital I in it because in too many places I have typed my name AcId and it turns out Acld.

*cough**cough*
Oh,well,thanks fer telling me!

Also, in your profile you said your character is quick to volunteer if it comes to fighting something/someone. Does that mean he should sign up but get rejected or what?

(yes, I do look at these things.)

Fighting ish always good if you have something worth to fight for!
(Now if THAT is no quote,I don't know what is! )
Why should I be rejected?
DRAW YER SWORDS!!!!!

Go me!

BTW, absolutely schwa story so far, Acid. And the "ASTERISK BOMB SWORD EXCLAMATION MARK DOLLAR SIGN NUMBER AT!!!!!" idea was prolly the fooniest one I've heard all day.

One thing tho. Carrotus is spelled like that, with an o. Just for future chapters and such.

Also, I wouldn't mind if Jack Flash aids in killing the bad dood.

Speaking of bad doods (and this might be a really stupid idea, but just bear with me on this one), why not use a villain from Redwall? I mean, Brian Jacques doesn't seem to know about JJ2 (or maybe he does, but I'm doubtful as to whether or not he knows about this community... ), so what he doesn't know, won't hurt him, right?

Right?

Right.

Que Passa!!!!

"Percentage sign, Ampersan, Dollor sign..."
"And Colon, and Semi-colon too..."
"What the #@$# are you two doing?"
"Swearing in longhand, Asterix-breath!"
-Conversation
Sam and Max hit the road

Great story so far. Any story that starts with an explosion is a good story in MY book.

Originally posted by Piccolo
Why should I be rejected?

Earlier I thought you said you didn't want to be one of the guys who defeats Terminator. Oh well.

That makes
Acid
Phoenix wing
Electrik
Fawriel
Jack Flash

Am I right?

Also, 4I falcon, the tileset is called Carrutus. If that's not how it's spelled, then sue Epic. Edit: WHOOPS! My mistake, I don't know where I got the 'Carrutus' spelling.

And Phoenix Wing, I have no idea how long it's gonna be. It can be anywhere from 4 to 1,000! It all depends on how dumb Terminator and Omicron Hellgod are.

oooohie!!!
Can i be an evil... nothing...
Like i get in the way of the ship...
Maybe i warp them somewhere else...
mess with all their minds...

But i am NOT on the same team as Terminator, i am just another obstacle to overcome

`N0

The next day, Acid still got up, and although rather dejectedly, blew up his coffee maker again.
*BOOM*
"AAUUGH!!!"
He returned to his desk and sat down with an unceremonious flump. It was going to be another one of
those days.

He worked through to lunch break, when he got up and walked out of the building. An intriguing piece of
paper nailed to the wall caught his eye.

Calling all citizens of Carrotus!

A serious matter is at hand! A deadly threat has appeared
And we need men(penciled in here with lori's handwriting was: /women)
To fight and save Carrotus! Sign up now!

Phoenix Wing
Fawriel
Jack Flash
Electrik

Acid smiled. If his brother was joining up, why shouldn’t he? At the bottom of the list he penciled in his name.

He then continued his work, however a lot perkier than he was earlier. He even accidentally set off his coffee maker as he hurtled through the room.

On the day of the launch, Acid was a little behind schedule. First, the coffee maker blew up three times instead of one. Then on the way out of the office, he tripped over a stray wire. A lot of other things happened, making him very frayed and scorched by the time he got to the launch pad.

The ship set off towards Terminator’s station. It was a long trip, and the occupants took up little games to occupy themselves. Acid was running back and forth explaining to Jack Flash that it might be better to use a piece of scrap metal as target practice than the ship’s flight computer, telling Fawriel that The weapons cabinet (which was very heavy) didn’t need to be moved to the other side of the ship, and convincing Electrik that playing with the reactor core is NOT a good idea.

Suddenly, a dot appeared on the radar, then quickly disappeared. Everyone rushed over to the display screen. The dot did it again. It repeated this about 20 times, all in different spots. Then the ship went crazy. Alarms went off, the ship jerked back and forth, the weapon systems fired, the lights flashed on and off, Sending the crew into a confusion. When it all stopped, the crew was Very beat up. They had landed on each other, accidentally kicked and scratched each other, and bonked heads a lot.
“Phoenix, you drew blood!”
“Sorry, I’ll try to keep my claws retracted next time.”
“Ow, Fawriel, did you have to kick so hard?”
“I couldn’t see where I was going from the lights flashing on and off!”
“That was quite a shock, Electrik.”
“I can’t control my electricity. I’m sorry it zapped you.”
“Hey who’s that?”
They looked up. A translucent orange thing was standing over them, a smirk on his face.
“NOBODY?”
He nodded.
“What are you doing here?”
NOBODY stopped smirking. “I’d like to ask the same question myself.”
“We’re on a mission! We need to destroy Terminator!”
“Never heard of him. But if you’re so desperate, I’ll make you a deal. I’ll let you and your ship go, but there is something I require.”
“What do you want?” growled Electrik. When he gets mad, the electricity starts flowing a lot more on his body, and He looked like a lightning rod that had just gotten hit.
“You might think you can please me with petty gems or pathetic weapons, but I require something more.” NOBODY said as he walked closer. “I need this.” He held up a globe. The picture was foggy at first, but then it cleared.
“Oh my gosh…” gasped Electrik.
“You need THAT?” shouted Acid.
“How are supposed to get THAT?” added Fawriel.
“It’s almost impossible, you know,” said Jack Flash.
“Do you need anything else or is that all we can do?” asked Phoenix wing.
“I need a human, and a human I will get from you! You have 4 months.” NOBODY snarled. “And if you don’t succeed, then you can say goodbye to Carrotus and all your petty little friends. Then he vanished.

How do you like that?

I got NOBODY in, so there becomes a new plot twist! How will they meet his demand?

Originally posted by acid
Acid was running back and forth explaining to Jack Flash that it might be better to use a piece of scrap metal as target practice than the ship’s flight computer, telling Fawriel that The weapons cabinet (which was very heavy) didn’t need to be moved to the other side of the ship, and convincing Electrik that playing with the reactor core is NOT a good idea.

ROFLMHO,THIS IS THE BEST WAR TAVERN STORY EVER!!!!!!
AND IT'S THE PROOF THAT YOU HAVE A GOOD MEMORY AND SENSE OF HUMOUR!!!!!!!!!
AND THIS IS THE BEST WAR TAVERN STORY EVER!!!!
AND ESPECIALLY THE FUNNIEST ONE!!!!!!!!!
(AND MY FINGER GOT STUCK TO THE SHIFT KEY!!!!!!!!!!!)

Wow, i think that is the best anyone has ever used my charcter in a story!!!
I love it!!

You will never get the globe, tho.
you shall fail and i will rule carrotus!!
(get it? nobody will ruule carrotus?)
`N0

Eh,acid,weren't ya supposed to still think of a name fer the story?

To Piccolo: I'm working on more important things, right now. Ahhh... I'll think of a name later is okay for now.


To NOBODY: Just to make sure you understood, It's not the globe NOBODY wants (He already has it!) It's what the globe shows. Of course, the "I need a human, and a human I will get from you!" Is kinda a dead giveaway. Of course, I have no idea which would be easier to get.

Edit: I claim second page in the name of Ahhh... I'll think of a name later!

did i... shoot... the flight comp?

*checks* weel so i did. don't worry, i'll pay for that...

...from right out of R.O.A.R.'s budget... *snicker*

btw again, acid... don't ALWAYS call me Jack Flash. You can just identify me as Jack. That's enough for the cause.

heehee... NOBODY's there...

I claim the 43rd-ish (or whatever number this post is) post for stuff, which is good!

I am a paradox...

You foo's!

You went into the middle of nowhere where nobody rules!

I'm waiting....

`N0

Acid began his day by waking up, stretching, and walking over to the lounge. He pushed the button on the coffee maker. It made coffee.
“Eh?” said Acid, peering squint-eyed into the cup that was filled with coffee. “Oh, right, I didn’t bring my coffee maker.”

He walked up to the control deck.
“Hello, lazybones, we’ve been waiting for you!” said Electrik.
“We found Terminator’s station,” said Jack, grinning.
Acid looked first out the window, then at the radar. The radar was completely filled. “Where is he?”
The crew exploded into laughter. “We’re docked on his station right now!” said Phoenix Wing.
“Oh, well, then, we better get to it!”

The crew stepped out of the ship, flanked by the ship’s medical officer. Emmi Somerkallio did not like to see destruction, but she did her best to do her job.

They had been walking a while, when suddenly Jack stopped, and fired. About 20 yards ahead, a smoldering security camera lay on the floor.
“Nice,” said Acid. “With you around, we don’t have to worry about the security cameras!”

Meanwhile…

“Maybe you won’t, but they’re the least of your troubles,” chuckled Terminator. “Omicron! How are you coming on the Bubble?”
“SIR, WE ARE OUT OF RESOURCES. IT WILL HAVE TO BE POSTPONED FOR ABOUT AN HOUR SO WE CAN GET A SUPPLY SHIP.” Replied Omicron Hellbot, Terminator’s assistant.
“Blast! Oh well, we won’t need it for now.” Terminator looked back at the display screen. Apparently, they had just reached a security area, and were getting ambushed by security droids. “I think I’ll deal with the pests myself.”

Back with the crew…

“There are too many of them! We can’t hold off much longer,” yelled Fawriel, kicking a droid hard in the place where it would have REALLY hurt if it were human.
Acid pulled out his bazooka. If this wasn’t heavy duty, he didn’t know what was.
Meanwhile, electric grabbed one and pried its back open. He fiddled around with the cables a bit, gave them a jolt of electricity and slammed the door again, and letting it wreak havoc on the other droids.
“Heh, nice going!” said Jack Flash, picking off another with his blaster.
Suddenly, all the droids fled.
“Eh?” said Acid.
*BOOM!!!*
the wall blasted inward, showering the crew with debris.
A large red mech stood there. It had large feet and long legs. The legs ended in a body, out from which came two arms, which ended in Gauss rifles. On the top were two missile launchers. From the front of the body was the cockpit, and sitting in it was none other than Terminator.
“Ahhh!!!” yelled the crew.
The mech walked forward a few paces, then opened fire.
The crew could just bareley dodge the Gauss bullets, and was running in circles in the middle of the room.
“Huh? Where’s Jack?” asked Acid, jumping out of the way of one of the missiles.
Suddenly, there was a series of shots, and both missile launchers and their cargo exploded, creating a large hole in the mech’s body, and disabling it.
Terminator Quickly jumped out, and ran down a hall. The crew followed in hot pursuit until Suddenly, Terminator turned around. The crew saw something glint by his side, then he charged.
“He’s using a SWORD?” yelled Acid.
Terminator was about to lunge at one of them when- CLANG!!! Fawriel had drawn his sword, and parried Terminator’s blow. The two launched into a swordfight, and everyone else edged back, so that the two would have their space. Fawriel seemed to be doing better than Terminator, and Terminator seemed to notice. Right after parrieng a very close attack by Fawriel, he jumped back, flung his sword, and ran off down the hall.
“did it hit anybody?” asked Emmi.
“Aaarrrggghhh…” said Acid, crumpling onto the floor with the sword embedded in his shoulder.
“Oh no!” shouted Electrik.
“The problem is, we can’t just leave him here, and we can’t leave Terminator alone. I’ll go on with Electrik, Fawriel and Phoenix wing. Emmi can bring Acid back to the ship and help him,” said Jack. “We must still fight on.”

I did the third chapter! I've decided that The crew needs to finish off Terminator first, because NOBODY was nice enough to give them four months.

Originally posted by acid
Acid began his day by waking up, stretching, and walking over to the lounge. He pushed the button on the coffee maker. It made coffee.
“Eh?” said Acid, peering squint-eyed into the cup that was filled with coffee. “Oh, right, I didn’t bring my coffee maker.”
...
“There are too many of them! We can’t hold off much longer,” yelled Fawriel, kicking a droid hard in the place where it would have REALLY hurt if it were human.
...
The two launched into a swordfight, and everyone else edged back, so that the two would have their space. Fawriel seemed to be doing better than Terminator, and Terminator seemed to notice. Right after parrieng a very close attack by Fawriel, he jumped back, flung his sword, and ran off down the hall.

BEST STORY EVER!!!!!!!!!YOU GET AN OSCAR!!!!!!!!!YOU'RE A GENIOUS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Lmho,why can't I rate this thread?