Jazz shooting picture

[StormyThunder]

This is a picture I sketched at first, then covered with a roller pen. I colored it on the computer and it looks pretty good. Here it is: <img src="http://us.f1.yahoofs.com/users/f43e60af/bc/My+Photos/My+Drawings/Jazz+Shoot.jpg?bc_NOo9AaktbFKut">

[Trafton AT]

That came out very well. I really like it's cartoony style. Very nice job. :)

[Nemesis]

I like it. Only thing is that usually when you're aiming a gun down, you have your arms equal angle to the gun. Otherwise you can't aim. :)

Also try to keep characters feet level.

But it is pretty cool. Keep going. :)

[Violet CLM]

I think the handle's way too small.

[Kaz]

Hmm... tips...

Add more shading.
I thought Jazz held his gun like a machine gun...
Hide the backpak behind him a lot.
The bottom of the feet should be closer to even unless he's stepping on a rock.


-v-... Other than that the coloring is very good.

[Batty Buddy]

Que Passa!!!!

Jazz's face and head look especially good!

[Fawriel]

Much better than yer previous ones!^.^
Critic:
Proportions!How's he supposed to hold it like that?:p

[StormyThunder]

It does need a little fixing (the way Jazz is aiming his gun, the handle kind of bent... :lol:, the feet are out of place, I wasn't really trying to get shading, but I can always add it, and the backpack probably should be a little more behind him.)

[StormyThunder]

Well, my third version is going to have shading. I corrected the things people said I should fix and here is the fixed picture.<img src="http://us.f1.yahoofs.com/users/f43e60af/bc/My+Photos/My+Drawings/Jazz+Shoot2.jpg?bczzbo9A9W5Y5Guf">

[MoonBlazE]

The arms is weird, and the fingers is too small. ;P
And the red from Jazz backpack was supported to go under his arm geez :P

[StormyThunder]

Oops... your right about the straps..... and the fingers are a little small, I think I can fix that.

[StormyThunder]

Here's another picture I just made of Jazz, Spaz, and Lori. I did the same steps as the last picture (sketched it out in pencil, and covered with a black razor point pen, then colored them on the computer- I made a backround after, then pasted their names on.)
I think Jazz looks pretty skinney on that picture, and IMO, I'm not that good at drawing Lori.

Btw: I drew Spaz's feet and ears facing eachother on pupose. Here it is:<img src="http://us.f1.yahoofs.com/users/f43e60af/bc/My+Photos/My+Drawings/__hr_Jazz+Picture.jpg?bcMl3e9ALFTtBAD6">

If anyone wants me to draw them, I'm not really busy right now, so you can take requests.

[Flint LP]

Interesting, but that little red "X" doesn't quite look like them. This pic sounds like it could be good, so please try to rewhatever, so it isn't broken.

:cool:

[StormyThunder]

Hmmm..... sometimes it shows up if you refresh a couple times. Also, you can see it if you click "Reply" and page down to see the picture.

[Trafton AT]

The only thing that I don't like is the way Jazz is holding the gun. It looks a bit unnatural. Otherwise, it's very good.

[JJ BBoy KS]

Beauty

[Snowball]

I like the picture(s) but i can only see the first... he aren't good at aiming :p

Can you draw me? :rolleyes: then you would be the first ;)

[StormyThunder]

Have a description of what he/she looks like? Or you could give me a picture to get an idea of what your character looks like. I might want to put in the name, so tell me the name too.


Also, I've got another way you can veiw the pictures: First go to any of the links to see the picture you want to see. ( I'm having a problem with my account on Yahoo. It won't upload some images-like the second version of my Jazz shooting picture. Or it could just be this computer.....)

Go To: http://photos.yahoo.com/bc/jazzjackrabbit4/vwp?.dir=/My+Photos/My+Drawings&.src=ph&.dnm=Jazz+Shoot.jpg&.view=t&.done=http%3a//photos.yahoo.com/bc/jazzjackrabbit4/lst%3f%26.dir=/My%2bPhotos/My%2bDrawings%26.src=ph%26.view=t

to see my first Jazz shooting picture. (this one already shows up on JCF.

Go To: http://photos.yahoo.com/bc/jazzjackrabbit4/vwp?.dir=/My+Photos/My+Drawings&.dnm=Jazz+Picture.jpg&.src=ph&.view=t&.hires=t

to see my Jazz Group Picture.

[Wolfie]

:( I can't see the pictures! *sad* Well, I suppose they are nice pics... :D