New story!

[Grath AR]

I'm gonna try making a story again...
*everyone who remembers the olds attempts run screaming*
Hey! I wasn't THAT bad!
The prelude!
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The story I am about to tell takes place in carrotus, in the future.
In a place that might be.
It was a dark, and stormy night in Carrotus when Devan took over the universe, after killing Jazz and friends. Devan, trying to eradicate all rabbits, released a chemical into the air to try and kill the rabbits. Instead, it mutated them so that every rabbit born since the spreading of the chemicals had magic powers.
This magic came in six types, each with its own weaknesses and strengths.

Fire: Immune to Wood-Type magic, weak to Water-type magic.
Water: Immune to Fire, weak to Lightning.
Lightning: Immune to Water, weak to Ground.
Ground: Immune to Lightning, weak to Air.
Air: Immune to Ground, weak to Wood.
Wood: Immune to Air, weak to Fire.

Devan OBVIOUSLY hated this mutation, and sent out his lizards and turtles to kill the rabbits. Only those in hiding remain.

Then, one of Devan's scientists, named Ka'Ell, found a way to create sentient robot rabbits, which are more powerful than real rabbits.
Ka'Ell made a single robot rabbit, which he named Grath.
As Ka'Ell's research went on, he found a way of implanting parts into the robot's brains to make them follow Devan's commands.
He tried to perform that process on Grath, but Grath escaped.

These robot rabbits could use limited spells of any type of magic, and even use gun ammunition, like that that Jazz and his siblings used.
By now, Devan's armys have grown massive.
Grath, the first robot rabbit, has grown strong fighting these armies, but he is not strong enough, He is currently going through the planet looking for those brave enough to join him in his quest to rid the world of devan.

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Will you join him?

My rules on profiles are not too bad.
1. No overpowered-ness. If you are too powerful, then you just don't use the overpowered attacks.
2. You MUST choose a type of magic.
3. Being a Robot-Rabbit is possible. If you're a robot rabbit, then your backstory is you were captured alone by rabbits, your implant removed, and you have been living with your captors since.

[BlackSheep]

Dude.
I remember you.
Heh.
I'm in. Of course I'm in.
Black

[CottonTail]

I will join! My profile is the last post on the profile forum thing. And ill be water.And ive seen you on the JMMB!

[Ninja]

I'm lazy.

I want electric magic and i want to be a robot.

[Grath AR]

Blackie has a problem.
Blacksheep: I need an element for you.

Ninja: I like you, so I'm putting IN lightning.

[Ninja]

Heh, I remember a long, long time ago, Grath stole BlackSheeps raspberry jello gun idea or something. ;)

[Grath AR]

The first place that Grath went was an old clan base, that of GPW.
There he found that most of the clan had been wiped out in fights with other clans. Only one member remained: Shinyso, also known as 'NinjA'.
He was a robot-rabbit, rescued by the GpW. His attacks are different than those of a normal robot-rabbit, being lightning-based and stealth-like attacks.

As Grath entered the clan base, a rubber chicken promptly flew through the air and stuck itself into the wall next to Grath by its beak. Ninja then popped his head out from a door, and recognized Grath.
'Sorry about that, Grath' said Ninja as he went over and got the rubber chicken back.
'It's okay, Ninja. I'm trying to overthrow Devan and his armies, freeing the armies. Want to join me?' said Grath.
'I don't know. I need to think about it for a bit.' said Ninja.
'Well, I'm heading off towards the mountains for a bit. Catch up if you want to come with me' said Grath.

And so Grath went on his way towards the mountains. As he started to climb, Ninja caught up. 'Wait up, Grath! There are some troops of Robot-Rabbits coming for the largest hiding place!' said Ninja.
'What? Then let's go, Ninja!'
They both ran back towards Under-Carrot, the largest hiding place since Devan made his army.
As they got there, Rabbits were running from the troops of rabbits.
Grath stopped a rabbit with white fur and blonde hair who was wearing blue and white clothes.
'Why are people running? Why don't they fight?'
'Because they are trained, and none of us have trained our magic!' said the rabbit. 'Will you help us in our fight? I'll help you with your training!' 'Why sure, My name's Sherry.' said Sherry. 'Then lets go fight. My name's Grath.'
Sherry pulled a tennis ball from his pocket, and smashed it at the robot rabbits, knocking one's head off.
Grath extended a gun from his arm, and started firing his minigun at the robot rabbits, injuring many.
Ninja pulled out his blade and started slashing.
'Devan's sure making them flimsier now. My construction's pretty sturdy, but I could kick these things apart.' said Grath as his switched to Telekinetics, retracting the gun and flinging a robot-rabbit into another, smashing both.

Then the enemy robot-rabbits pulled machineguns from their backs, firing back.
'Duck!' yelled Grath, and they all dived to the ground as the rabbits shot at them. The robot-rabbits aimed back down at them, and the leader said 'Surrender, or die.
'Time to use this up' Grath said, pulling out a card, putting energy into it, then tosses it forward at the enemy leader's feet. The card burst into flame, and the ground rumbles ominously.
'Okay, Time for us to get away. Ninja, would you use your grappling hook to pull us away?' Grath said. Ninja grabbed both, then tossed the grappling hook and pulled them away. 'Now let's watch the fireworks.' said Grath and they turned and watched the panic-stricken robot-rabbits looking around then suddenly a yellow beam shot up from the ground in the middle of the robot-rabbits, decimating the ranks.
'Now let's rock!' said Grath, extending his gun and firing RF rockets into the reminaing robo-rabbits. Ninja hurled shurikens at the robo-rabbits, and Sherry smashed robo-rabbits with tennis balls until all the robo-rabbits were dead.
'Thanks for helping out there, Sherry. We couldn't have done it without your help.' said Grath. 'I'm currently trying to overthrow Devan. Want to come with?' 'Sure,' said Sherry. 'I'll try to help out.'
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As you can see, I've managed to put a fight scene, and the joining of two people in a single chapter. My chapters are fairly short, but I need Blacksheepie's response before I keep writing, so bug her to if you want more.

[4I Falcon]

New profile, specially custom-tailored for this story.

Name: Skyrider
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Type: Air
Personality: Very friendly. Makes alliances with pretty much anyone for as long as he can hold them, and never turns his back on his friends. He will often fight to the death to protect his allies, and is sometimes the intermediator of arguments within his group.
Around the enemy, however, Skyrider becomes a flying deathmonger. His insane speed, coupled with his ability to teleport about the sky, makes him not only a hard-to-hit target, but an unpredictable adversary. He has a penchant for suddenly appearing in front of an opponent, executing a wild combination of punches, kicks, and various other martial-arts strike techniques, then disappearing again.
Skyrider's one downplay is that he is a complete idiot around any female. He's never had a true companion of the opposite sex in his life, and he simply feels alone without a girlfriend.
Appearance: Pale cyan, medium- to well-built, and wears a necklace of a flying bird around his neck. He also wears two armbands, one red and one white, around his right shoulder, and another two, red and white again, around his left ankle.
Weapons: None. Skyrider prefers melee combat, so that he can use his agility to its utmost extent.
Special Powers: Being an air-type, and an experienced one at that, Skyrider can not only fly, but can disappear, and reappear somewhere else in the sky.

[BlackSheep]

Grathie, you're making me actually put aside my extreme laziness for the moment and drudge up my old prof. Don't you remember me at all? Sigh.
Alright, since I'm in a Matrix-y mood, (only 10 more days!!!)...
I'm 17 years old, and have long hair to the middle of my back, which is lavender, the same colour as my tail, the insides of my ears and palms, and other miscellaneous places like that. Of course I can be a sheep or a bunny as the mood calls, but I believe I'll be a bunny most of the time, for this story. My fur is all white, but it's rather a dingy grey-white. I have dark blue eyes, and I wear rags of the same color. All of my clothing is white: (like Switch!) a halter under a white leather jacket that just ties in the front and has limitless pockets, and white canvas pants with holes in the knees and around the bottoms. However, my socks are periwinkle, you know, the light blue color like at the bottom of the ocean. I'm very small in height and weight, and try to act like I know what is going on when actually I'm perpetually confused. Very unsure of myself and dependent on other people, and I hate being alone. Affectionate with me friends.

Oh. And MY jello-ray gun, which (curse you!) grath at one point tried to steal from me but is now forgiven and all is rectified. Oh right, and there is no spoon.

Continue. I want to be a heroine! ;)
Black

[Grath AR]

Blacksheep: You STILL need to have an element.
And I have your profile from the everyone's characters thread. I just needed an element.

[BlackSheep]

Wind.

[Coppertop]

You mean Air:p

I'll join <s>of course</s>
Use my Tiger prof. And Fire. I can call light and make fires burn with no fuel but oxygen:D

[CottonTail]

good stuff!

[4I Falcon]

It usually is.

[Tik]

Feel free to add me in, if you are so tickled.

[Coppertop]

Tickled?

4I's right. Usually is.

[Grath AR]

*'Accidentally' trips and bumps the thread up to the top*
No update today, door slammed on my finger.

[4I Falcon]

Snark. I was hoping this was something useful.

Sorry 'bout your finger, Grath.

[Grath AR]

Second Chapter! Part 1, because of this *pats large block labeled "Writer's" that's next to him*
Grath headed back into the mountains with Sherry and Ninja.
Near the summit of the mountain, they met pale cyan rabbit with a necklace of a flying bird around his neck.

He immediatly leapt up and started to fly away, but Grath extended small jets from his legs and chased after the rabbit, eventually catching up to him. Grath asked 'Why are you running' and the rabbit answered 'Because I've never seen anyone but robo-rabbits up here, so I assumed you were a robo-rabbit. My name's Skyrider, and I'm trying to defeat Devan. You are?' Grath answered 'My name's Grath, and my friends and I are trying to defeat devan too. You were right, and I am a robo-rabbit actually, but I don't like Devan.'

Grath continued on, after letting Skyrider get his equipment from his cave. They got to a town, called 'Devanville' Current rabbit population: 0 Current turtle population: 30,000
There, they heard that Devan was going to have a pep talk to his turtles.
'Sounds like a good time for an assasination to me' said Grath, as he readied his sonic wave. Sherry said that she wanted to stay behind on this mission, but Skyrider and Ninja wanted to go.

[4I Falcon]

Ruxulent chappie, Grath. Um, nothing more to say here, except that it was an awfully short chapter. But then, that was explained via the *points at block labeled "Writer's* next to Grath*

Whee.

[Grath AR]

That wasn't a full chapter. that was the first half/third of the chapter.

[4I Falcon]

Originally posted by Grath AR
That wasn't a full chapter. that was the first half/third of the chapter.

I was getting to that. I just... forgot. Yeah.

[Coppertop]

Ruxor. Or something.

[Grath AR]

I'm gonna update!
Gimme some time. I need input: Fencer-dudes from JJ2 in the big battle, yes/no?

[4I Falcon]

NO. The fencers are über-annoying; don't put them in, anywhere.

J/K. I personally don't like the fencers, but do whatever you want.

[Coppertop]

Fencers drive me crazy.

[Grath AR]

No, then?
Fine. One huge Fencer-dude/Robo-Rabbit cross. }>

[4I Falcon]

ARGH

As long as Skyrider has a hand in taking him to pieces, I'm fine with it.

[Grath AR]

K. I'll have Skyrider be the one to kick his head off.

[4I Falcon]

/me is placated for the moment.

[Coppertop]

Moment is up!

[CottonTail]

Uh, continue?

[Grath AR]

Hold on, you lynch mob. No lynching, I continue. K? I should have another chapter up by around 11:00 EST?

[Grath AR]

Grath noticed that his weapons were a bit low on energy, and proposed that they go for reinforcement and recharging. Skyrider and Ninja agreed, and they went to ask Sherry about it. She said yes, and Grath pulled out a card, then tossed it onto the ground, the card, with a loud sucking sound, made a swirling black vortex.
Grath jumped in, followed by Sherry and Ninja, then finally Skyrider. They appeared in a large, metal room. 'Welcome to my laboratory.' Grath led them into a second room full of partly-made roborabbits. 'These are works in progess. This next room here... Well, you'll see.' said Grath.
They all went in, and four rabbits were sitting around a table. They all got up, putting down their card game. 'Shall I alert them' said the first rabbit, black with strange foot-long metal claws on his hand. 'Sure. The same for the rest of you.' said Grath.

The other rabbits were different. The second of the four was a dark green, with what looks like a pistol. The third was wearing a large brown cloak, covering his entire body, except for his feet, with blood red fur on them. His face was in shadow, not showing any color. The last had brown fur, with a set of blue-and-gold arm bracers, blue-and-gold leg bracers, and a circular blue gem with a gold circle around it on his chest. The last thing seemed embedded into his chest.
All the rabbits left to alert their divisions.
Ninja, Skyrider, and Sherry all looked at him questioningly, and Grath said 'I've built a number of roborabbits.'

'Now for the recharge, there's this door to the left.' said Grath, indicating a door, each person goes in, sits down on the chair, and fall asleep for two minutes, waking up refreshed.
'Now for the action!' said Grath. 'Sherry, if you want to stay here, just don't press any red buttons, and no pressing any buttons labeled "fire"'

The three went back to the vortex and jumped through. As they got there, a loud humming was heard. As they watched, four large hovercrafts came flying in to the landing pad. After the landing, four troops came out of the four hovercrafts. Each one was led by one of the four rabbits they'd seen eariler.
'They'll get the troops. We'll go for the two generals and devan. Ninja and I'll head for the general with guns, and Skyrider, you go for the tall one with the sword.
-End of part, coming soon: Part 3. I didn't feel like a huge fight scene right now-
I've also got Earthbound soon. Bye.

[Coppertop]

Good.

Now we're going to start screaming for more again;) :p

[Ninja]

Yeah, I remember when he stole BS's blue raspberry jello gun on the JMMB. :-)

As proof I'm not a n00b, wasn't the alternative butterscotch pudding? ;-P
Anyway, I told BS to put a (C) on it so she just said "Blue raspberry jello gun(C)" and Grath never copied it again. Also, I called him GrathPOL until he stopped. (He was in AR then. ;-P)

[Grath]

Part 3
Pronunciation guide:
Schypher: Schei Pher
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Grath said 'Schypher, you come with us.'
The red rabbit in a cloak stepped forward, and threw the cloak off, revealing a red-furred rabbit with Rabbit/Cat ears. (Rabbits ears, angled back with points at the end. The ears are also a bit ragged on the rear edge) He was wearing loose brown pants, and a grey shirt.
The group walked towards the soon-battlefield, but before they'd gotten halfway an echoing voice called out to them 'You choose Schypher to battle, but you don't even notify me of a battle?'
Grath motioned to his partners to stand back, then said 'I knew you would find out, so I thought I'd give you the satisfaction of a dramatic enterance.'
At that moment, smoke started coming out of the ground, forming a rabbit-like shape.
A shadow appeared inside the smoke, then a human stepped out, and the smoke dissapated.
The human had blue-purple hair, a purple vizor, a black suit of armor (Breastplate, shoulderpads, and leg protection) with a purple gem in the center of the breastplate, a loose, dark grey long-sleeved shirt under the armor, and white gloves held on with gold bracelets.
'Why hello, Forte.' said Grath.
The rest of the team was understandably astonished to see a human.
'He's actually a cyborg. He showed up in my lab one day and asked to join me.' said Grath.
The team (With Forte coming along) went to the gates. At the gates a roborabbit asked for their permission slips. When Grath failed to give him one, the Robo-rabbit got angry. 'You must be those badguys Lord Devan told me about!' At which point, Forte shot a large purple beam from his glove, and the Robo-Rabbit was suddenly missing the upper part of his torso.
'Stupid gatekeeper...' muttered Forte.
The group went in, just as Devan's speech was starting. I'll spare you the usual megalomaniac speech and skip to the end. 'You must crush these rebel rabbits, my loyal troops!' at which point the crowd cheered. 'Time to move out.' said Grath. Schypher extended blood-red claws, Ninja pulled out his blade, and Grath pulled a machinegun out of his trench-coat. Skyrider headed towards the first general, knocking out a robo-rabbit with each punch.
Schypher just started slaughtering roborabbits. Each robo-rabbit Schypher killed shot a black thing at him the moment he killed them.
'Schypher's got a special weapon system. He gains power with every kill he makes. More power from more powerful people.' said Grath. 'I call is "Get Ability"'
Skyrider teleported to the general he was to take, and caught him by suprise with a punch in the back, but then the general started attacking, and all Skyrider could do is defend. Grath told Schypher to go help Skyrider, and Schypher started slashing and slashing, moving at higher speeds until he was basically a red blur cutting a line through the troops. Schypher and Skyrider began assaulting the general. I started gunning down robo-rabbits, and Ninja was slicing his way through. At first it seemed like we would never get through, then Forte fired a shot which almost cleared a line all the way to the boss. Ninja and I ran along, killing as we went.
Forte continued his job as a one-person armageddon, and by this point has killed about 1/6th of the army.
Ninja and I reached the general, and I distracted him while Ninja got in close, and cut off one gun. Then I fired at the other gun, Ninja sliced it off quickly. Then I started gunning down robo-rabbits who were attacking, while Ninja hacked at the general until he chopped it's head off. Then Ninja and I turned to slaughtering robo-rabbits.
Now back to Schypher and Skyrider. Schypher's first move on reaching the general was to slice the swordblade off, so then the rest was easy. Then, I'll skip the slaughter and head to Devan. I fired at him... but the bullets went straight through! Devan laughed, and we realized it was a hologram. It dissapeared and we were left with a lot of dead robo-rabbits.
Yes, same grath (I just remembered the password)

Edit:
If nobody cares about this, I'll stop.

[Grath]

As I said in the previous post, this time continued: one more chapter, then unless I get Muchos Supportos, NO MORE STORY!

[4I Falcon]

Rally the people! The Legions of Grath's Story that Doesn't Have a Name Yet donate their support to the cause of Grath's story that doesn't have a name yet!

[acid]

hmm... I should have read this earlier. RALLY TEH PPLZ!!11!11!1oneone!11!

Oh, and yes, I'm joining. I'll be using Acid, modified to fit this story.

Name: Acid
Species: Jackrabbit
Appearance: His fur is teal, and he has green hair. He wears a red headband, black sweat pants and a white T-shirt that says 'I am teh Suxxors!'
Element: fire
Powers: Acid has alarming skill with the fire element, able to create explosions that rival the power of atom bombs. However, this does come with a cost; the powers are very draining and half the time they end up scorching Acid as well.
Personality: Acid is very friendly, and makes friends very easily. Apart from that, he is a big fan of blowing things up.

[Coppertop]

Most ppl like blowing things up :D

CONTINUE TEH STORIE!!!!!!!!!!!

[4I Falcon]

Page claim in the name of the Legions of Grath's Story that Doesn't Have a Name Yet.

[Grath]

wow...
'kay. No more final chapter (Basically, it would've been 'it was all a video game' the end.)
Now... TO CONTINUE!
Storyname: The conquest of devan, PART 2
(If I feel like it, I'm gonna make a prequel. Warning: Prequel will be pretty much the badguys winning, so be warned)
For now, be happy with this artwork of my character, as he is in my story. Also, artwork of Forte:
www.crynwr.com/jazz/GrathArt.png
www.crynwr.com/jazz/ForteArt.png
Images digitally retouched with:
The gimp (For Forte)
and Paint (For Grath)
Oh yeah, and for those who can't see .png: I LAUGH AT JOO, FOO!
Edit #2: 4I, I need input: How is skyrider an idiot around women? Like, blush and become partially non-functional, or just stupid things. (Like, a woman's obviously attracted to him, but he says 'Hold on, I've got an appointment with someone else')

[4I Falcon]

Edit #2: 4I, I need input: How is skyrider an idiot around women? Like, blush and become partially non-functional, or just stupid things. (Like, a woman's obviously attracted to him, but he says 'Hold on, I've got an appointment with someone else')

The first one. Except he becomes almost completely non-functional whenever a female shows any sort of feelings towards him.

[Grath]

Chapter 3

As the team headed back to the airships, they noticed that Schypher looked a bit funny, as though there were some stains on his back. These corresponded to the bones, and Grath noticed it especially.
'Schypher, did your internal computer notice any new abilities?' asked Grath.
'Yes, I noticed something funny.' said Schypher. As they walked, a survivor crawled towards them. Schypher said 'I think I'll try my new ability.' Schypher ran to the survivor, and plunged his hand into the survivor's back, though no hole existed. schypher pulled out his hand, holding something black, which seemed to seep into his hand. No mark was left on the victim, the only thing stopping his life, was that he was, well, DEAD!
As they got back to the field, the small army rejoiced at seeing the heroes come back. Grath pointed at three robo-rabbits and one squirrel, then motioned for them to come to the group. These robo-rabbits/squirrel were named: Blacksheep, Tiger Reibeck, 'Gasp', and Acid.
'I think these people shall be excellent additions to the group.' said Grath. Acid, an inventor, pulled out a coffee maker, and said 'Anyone want some coffee?' Unfortuanatly for Acid, Blacksheep poked the coffeemaker, and it exploded in acid's face. 'He's always coming up with some new way to blow things up' said Blacksheep.
The team boarded one airship, and the army people headed onto the other three. As they flew back, Grath at the controls, the group was greeting the new people. Unfortuanatly for him, Skyrider got stuck with greeting Blacksheep.
Skyrider and Blacksheep walked around a bit, Skyrider fortuanatly not acting stupid... yet...
Then they found the holo-training machine, and started doing a bit of training. Skyrider immediatly went for the groups of turtles that appeared, causing miniature tornados around them, then picking them off by teleporting behind one, then kicking him out into the tornado, to slam against the roof. Blacksheep pulled out her Raspberry Jello Gun (© & ™ Blacksheepie) and picking off turtles, shooting them in the head, trapping their head in a block of jello.

Blacksheep noticed how good Skyrider was, and once they finished that training excercise, she said 'You're pretty good at this.' Skyrider turned away and blushed, and Blacksheep noticed this, and went over to hinm. 'Is something wrong?' she asked. At this, Skyrider fainted, and Blacksheep caught him. Blacksheep carried him up to the deck, and asked Grath 'Is something was wrong with Skyrider? He fainted after their training.'

*laughs evilly*
I figured I'd make Blacksheep fall in love with Skyrider (Both are Air-type magic users, and otherwise I'd have to have Sherry be the love interest for him. Given he's an idiot around women, I figured I had to make someone fall in love with him.)

[acid]

Grath pointed at three robo-rabbits and one squirrel, then motioned for them to come to the group. These robo-rabbits/squirrel were named: Blacksheep, Tiger Reibeck, 'Gasp', and Acid.

Acid isn't a robot. He is a 100% organic rabbit. Nyar.

*can't wait to see what'll happen when Grath sticks him in a battle*

Heh, I just imagined Acid in the training simulator...

"Nyarharhar!"
BOOM
"Whatahuh?!?"
"Darn it, Acid, you blew up the simulator again!"

[Grath]

Acid: Roborabbit means in the story now, organic rabbit means in a few chapters in.
Roborabbit ~= rabbits, just better at fighting, stronger, higher endurance, and sometimes even smarter.

[acid]

¬_¬

I dun care. I am an organic rabbit.

You do realise, that no matter how hard you fight with me, I'm still going to be as persistant as a 3-year-old.

[Blade Nightflame]

I know how much i asked for people to allow me to join the fanfics,but this one,mabye or is the last one,my element will be "Wildcard" Grath said that i could be like that

[Grath]

Fine. Acid's a test, which fortuanatly resulted in a live, organic, rabbit, not a robo-rabbit.

[acid]

Yay^_^

[Blade Nightflame]

Good for you,>_>,<_< (just hope Foo isn't here..)

[4I Falcon]

Just got here. Good job with Skyrider passing out and such.

What element would Foo be, anyway?

[acid]

Foo?

um

Wood, probably/possibly

[Coppertop]

YaY! My name was mentioned!
*hugs Grath*

[Blade Nightflame]

Is a chapter gonna come soon?

[Grath]

I am no longer taking applicants to the story, unless they are willing to:
die, and be evil.
NEW CHAPTER! AT LAST!

Chapter 4

Tiger Reibeck, a silver furred rabbit, with black stripes, brought Skyrider to the infirmary-place, and put him into a machine. a green glass tube came up, swallowing up Skyrider, so that he floated inside, in stasis. Tiger started the scan, and then left to train some.

An excerpt from Skyrider's journal:

3/6/19XX (Writing is smeared, and is unreadable)
I woke up in a tube thing after the training. I managed to attract the attention of a passing worker, and he let me out.
Right now the airship is nearing a large forest with patches of field. these patches together form a wiggly X in the forest, only viewable at about 500 feet up in the air. At this time, Ninja is piloting. He is carefully flying down into the very center of the X. As I speak, we should be landing. (After this, the writing's rough, and not very good) I wonder what happened to me during training? I have no bruises. I must stop now, as I am wanted on deck.

The reason why Skyrider was wanted on deck, was because some hedgehog/human thing just went hurtling down from space, wearing huge mechanical boots, and crashlanded near them. Since they didn't want to reveal the lab's place, they decided to teleport in. Grath took the controls, and pressed the green button labeled 'Do not touch', and the ship started hurtling along at speeds of over 300 miles per hour. Grath then turned all power to the engines, speeding the ship up to insane speeds until suddenly the landscape became just swirling colors. After ten minutes, a loud, sharp, 'Crack' was heard, and the swirly colors dissapeared, and the ship was in a large metal room. People unstrapped themselves from the seats, and shakily got out. At this time, the hedgehog/human creature came out, suprisingly, of the lower decks.
Grath says 'A stowaway? Acid. Him. Fire.' And Acid went off to a portion of the lab with ultra-strong walls for sparring (It would take quite a few atom bombs to CRACK the wall. Unfortuanatly, this material is unmoldable, as it would take a constant stream of atom bombs to forge it.), locked him in, and then set off his Atom-bomb strength fire in the room. The hedgehog somehow didn't get scratched even, and burst through the door. Then, a black swirl appeared out of the air. A dark figure, human, with brown hair, did some kind of spell, and banished the cheater, then disspearing.
Grath took everybody to the main hall, where Sherry was waiting. 'May I suggest we all train a bit? Afterwards, it's time to head toward Devan's base!'
'What training do you want?' asked Grath. The answers were:
Sherry said 'Magic training!',
Ninja said 'Target practice!',
Blacksheep said 'Target practice' aswell,
Skyrider chose 'Unarmed combat',
Tiger Reibeck chose not to train,
Gasp, and Acid, chose 'All around training'.
Grath set up the machines for each person.
Sherry was forced to watch turtles 'killing' some simulated animals, which REALLY got her angry.
Sherry's eyes started to glow blue, her hair blew as if in high wind, and the cross necklace started floating. Then, she made a throwing motion at the turtles, and immediatly a large wave shot away from her, smashing the turtles against the wall, breaking the backs and shattering their shells. Then, Sherry's rage-based power faded away. She was amazed at the wreckage she had managed to cause. Grath's voice came to her: Focus your face. Think of the innocents killed by the turtles. Concentrate the anger, then release it in full! That's the secret to magic! CONCENTRATE YOUR ANGER. Again, she saw some turtles. This time, she needed no extra pushing, and slammed her hand to the ground, then, as if a river flowing up from underground, water blasted out at insane force, slamming the entire group into the ceiling. Sherry's rage had unlocked to her the secret of magic.
Ninja and Blacksheep started target practice. Ninja was pegging bullseyes right away with ninja stars, then Blacksheep would shoot out the entire center hole cleanly with one shot. They obviously needed no training.
Skyrider was kicking and punching, killing on first hit. He too needed no training.
Spaztic, A.k.A Gasp, and Acid, were also not needing much training.
Everyone but Spaztic/Acid came out, then they heard maniacal laughter from Acid, unconsious (Conciousness being the part training) and Grath yelled 'HIT THE DECK!' and they all dived down. Then, Acid blew up his training simulator. 'Huhwha?' said acid as he woke up in the smoking wreckage. Spaztic saw acid's smoking 'corpse' hit the ground after he blew up the bomb, and quickly got out to see how Acid was doing. Fortuanatly, Acid was fine, just a bit burnt. Acid said 'Anyone up for some coffee?' and everyone laughed, recalling the episode with Acid's exploding coffee maker before.

Then, Grath headed towards the hangar bay, with the rest following after him.
As they reached the hangar bay, he stopped... 'Wait, Didn't devan look a bit... strange?' said Grath. 'Yes, he did.' said Ninja. Grath brought up an image of the old devan on the computer, and then said 'Oh. My. God. He's got IT. Quick! we must head to tubeelectric!' They all went into the hangar bay, and headed towards the battleship. 'Okay. Ninja, Tiger, Acid, and Blacksheep, you man the guns. Sherry, you keep an eye on the radar for enemies. Skyrider, you get co-pilot. Gasp, you prepare the sub-ships.' said Grath. They all went to their positions. Gasp returned to the cockpit after preparing the fighter ships. 'Okay. Let's go!' said Grath, and took off. (The battleship looks like a cross between the millenium falcon and a X-wing, FYI.) They headed for Tubeelectric, finding a few un-manned fighters, not much trouble since the CMP beam(Concentrated EMP.) shot them out of the sky with ease, then zapped with machinegun turrets, or blown up by the missile racks. (Acid manning the CMP, Blacksheep with the machinegun, and Ninja/Tiger with the missile racks.)
They made it to Tubeelectric, and headed into the planet through a very hidden airvent, using the fighter ships that Gasp readied. These are one-man flyers, green, grey, and brown, with six guns (a pair of each: Lazer cannon, flamethrower (Flame about 30X the heat and size of a blowtorch flame, little ammo) and missile launcher) and found a large vault, with a locked door. Grath was in the lead, and blowtorched the door open.
Behind the door was an airlock. Everyone flew into the airlock, it filled with air, and they got out of the ships. Then, they went in. Inside, on a pedestal, a black pistol lay.
As they approached, a voice came out of nowhere: 'You try to obtain Thanatos, the onyx pistol? Your bodies will rest in pieces when I am done with you.' Then, a black figure appeared, holding a katana in each of it's 6 arms. The creature also had four legs. Ninja pulled his energy sword from the air, Grath formed an energy sword, Gasp pulled out his circular saw blade, and formed a katana from leaves. Sherry started preparing some water magic, Blacksheep pulled out her raspberry jello gun, Acid prepared some fire spells, Tiger pulled out his katana, and Skyrider began teleporting around the room. the creature, Thanatos, started spinning around, whirling his blades. Ninja leapt to attack, slashing from the side. Grath performed an uppercut, though both slashes were deflected.
Acid cast Fire on Gasp's sawblade, which he hurled like a boomerang at Thanatos. The sawblade sliced one swordblade off, Thanatos discarding the hilt. Blacksheep shot at Thanatos' 2nd arm down on the left, encasing it in jello, immobilizing it. Tiger waited, then slashed at Thanatos, taking off an arm, though it didn't bleed. Skyrider kicked Thanatos in the back, distracting him long enough for Grath and Ninja to get in some slashes, both of them managing to hack off a single arm. (Two arms off so far.) Gasp sliced at Thanatos with his katana, slicing off another swordblade. (3 swords, four arms, left.) Now, Ninja put away his sword, and pinned one of Thanatos' arms to the wall using shurikens. (Ninja throwing star, four points.) Thanatos yelled: 'NOW YOU DIE.' and ripped away from the wall. Grath said 'Everyone back off!' and dematerialized his sword. Then he formed a katana in each hand, and said 'You. Duel.' pointing at Thanatos.
Thanatos said 'We shall go all-out. Your Caroc cards, I get to use my full power.' 'Allright.' said Grath. Thanatos began changing, turning from a black monster with six arms, into a cloaked figure. He pulled the hood back, revealing a skull, with blue eyes. (Skeletal body) Then formed a scythe, the blade looking a bit blue. 'So it is you, Death.' 'Yes. It is me' said Death.

Next chapter: THE DRAMATIC FIGHTSCENE!

[4I Falcon]

Yay!

Killthings!

Wheeeeeeeee!!!!!11111 *crash*

[Coppertop]

"Don't just stand there, shoot something!"

Nice chappie, Grath.

[4I Falcon]

Aww, where was that? I missed it!

In case you didn't get the idea from my last post, I agree with CT on the "good chappie" point.

[Grath]

Good news, Bad news.
Bad news: I'll be gone until sunday night (EST)
Good news: I'll be having tons of fun without you guys! HAHAHA! :D

[Coppertop]

Aww, where was that? I missed it!



That wasn't in there. I got it from somewhere else. I plan to use it in my story. :p

[4I Falcon]

Oh.

Eeyay. ^_^

[Coppertop]

Yeah, that's what I thought.

[Grath]

Been back for a few days.
No progress yet...
Oh, did you know, in pokemon sapphire I have/had 112 pokemon, (Some evolved into another pokedex entry,) and 153 seen?
And I'm only missing one legendary, and that's because I can't have it in the game without cheating/trading, and I can't trade?

[4I Falcon]

That's why you must cheat. Cheating, despite everyone else's opinion and all those moral laws and junk'n'stuff'n'things, is good.

I know Master Cheater's going to applaud this, so I'm going to pre-empt him with oh my GOD WHAT'S THAT BEHIND YOU?! *yoink*

[Grath]

*looks from side to side*
I had to cheat to get one, but it's legally available in the game (I just had to get the Eon ticket, which is being given away by nintendo. They aren't gonna be anywhere near where I live, anyway)
And I've got 99 leftovers, and 99 heart scales. And 99 Master balls.

[Grath]

I need six votes of approval before continuing the story. *runs off*

[VashTheStampede]

*gives 7 votes of approval, by rigging voter turnouts*

here you go,

when you need help,

always consult the family,

we'll be there to help.

(mafia)

[VashTheStampede]

:)

Just Kidding.

[Radium]

I've never actually read this story, but I like the concept of underage voting.

+1 vote of approval.

[Grath]

4 more votes!

[acid]

Ah Voteh!!! Keep Teh Storie!!! =(((

[Radium]

*reads thread*

You need evil characters to die? Yay, feel free to use my Rafael or Senor Enchilada! (find their profiles in the "Everyone's Characters" thread and see why I want them to die so badly.)

[Grath]

*Decides to have half-off week in voting*
K. Continuing... Now!
Chapter coming in about a half-hour.

Edit: Or less.
Chapter 5
Grath reached into his coat, and pulled out a vial, painting the contents in a five-pointed star on the ground, then casting a card onto it.
'Death, I have a call for you!' and the card burst into fire... and Death dissapeared, re-appearing in the star.
'Hey Death. Did you know that only I can release you from that circle?' said Grath.
'That's cheating!' said Death.
'How about this: You give me all the weapons, and I'll let you go if you promise not to interfere with me. Deal?'
'Deal.'
Death handed over several sword hilts, and the schythe, then dissapeared.
Grath handed out sword hilts, keeping one for himself, gave NinjA Death's schythe, and grabbed Thanatos, the pistol, for himself.
'Rotate the hilt and it activates' said Grath.
Blacksheep's was a large broadsword.
Sherry's was a katana.
Skyrider's was a katana.
Grath's was a whip.
Acid's was a longsword.
Everyone trooped back to the ships, and went out of Tubeelectric, back to the main ship.
'We've got incoming fighterships' said Acid, looking at the radar.
'Using the degaussers is too easy. I've got a few fighter ships of my own in the hangar bay. Anyone with me?' said Grath.
'I'll go' said Blacksheep.
'Me too' said Acid.
'Me three!' said Ninja.
Sherry went to training, and the others hung around.
Focusing on the ones left behind...
Sherry started training, but the enemies were too strong for her, and she was overpowered. Unfortuanatly, these training machines are like the matrix. When she got killed in training, she shuddered, then fell over. Dead. Everyone saw there was trouble when the alarm went off. 'Accident in training! Level 5 alert! Be careful!' said the loudspeakers.
Everyone rushed to the training room, and on careful examination the machine had a small, removable, device which had caused the defect.
Grath and the others returned from beating up enemies, and saw the sad looks on the rest's faces.
'What happened?' asked Grath.
'This.' said Skyrider, opening the door to reveal Sherry.
'Oh my... What happened to her?' asked Grath.
'Training machine defect. We found this in it.' said Tiger, holding up the chip.
Grath took it, and saw on it, faintly, 'Rafael' etched onto it.

[Coppertop]

OMG EVIL TACO OMG OMG

Ow. How can a taco (or whatever) kill someone?

[Radium]

Wow, I didn't actually think you'd use them. I feel 44% specialer now.