I'm gonna try making a story again...
*everyone who remembers the olds attempts run screaming*
Hey! I wasn't THAT bad!
The prelude!
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The story I am about to tell takes place in carrotus, in the future.
In a place that might be.
It was a dark, and stormy night in Carrotus when Devan took over the universe, after killing Jazz and friends. Devan, trying to eradicate all rabbits, released a chemical into the air to try and kill the rabbits. Instead, it mutated them so that every rabbit born since the spreading of the chemicals had magic powers.
This magic came in six types, each with its own weaknesses and strengths.

Fire: Immune to Wood-Type magic, weak to Water-type magic.
Water: Immune to Fire, weak to Lightning.
Lightning: Immune to Water, weak to Ground.
Ground: Immune to Lightning, weak to Air.
Air: Immune to Ground, weak to Wood.
Wood: Immune to Air, weak to Fire.

Devan OBVIOUSLY hated this mutation, and sent out his lizards and turtles to kill the rabbits. Only those in hiding remain.

Then, one of Devan's scientists, named Ka'Ell, found a way to create sentient robot rabbits, which are more powerful than real rabbits.
Ka'Ell made a single robot rabbit, which he named Grath.
As Ka'Ell's research went on, he found a way of implanting parts into the robot's brains to make them follow Devan's commands.
He tried to perform that process on Grath, but Grath escaped.

These robot rabbits could use limited spells of any type of magic, and even use gun ammunition, like that that Jazz and his siblings used.
By now, Devan's armys have grown massive.
Grath, the first robot rabbit, has grown strong fighting these armies, but he is not strong enough, He is currently going through the planet looking for those brave enough to join him in his quest to rid the world of devan.

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Will you join him?

My rules on profiles are not too bad.
1. No overpowered-ness. If you are too powerful, then you just don't use the overpowered attacks.
2. You MUST choose a type of magic.
3. Being a Robot-Rabbit is possible. If you're a robot rabbit, then your backstory is you were captured alone by rabbits, your implant removed, and you have been living with your captors since.

Dude.
I remember you.
Heh.
I'm in. Of course I'm in.
Black

I will join! My profile is the last post on the profile forum thing. And ill be water.And ive seen you on the JMMB!

I'm lazy.

I want electric magic and i want to be a robot.

Blackie has a problem.
Blacksheep: I need an element for you.

Ninja: I like you, so I'm putting IN lightning.

Heh, I remember a long, long time ago, Grath stole BlackSheeps raspberry jello gun idea or something.

The first place that Grath went was an old clan base, that of GPW.
There he found that most of the clan had been wiped out in fights with other clans. Only one member remained: Shinyso, also known as 'NinjA'.
He was a robot-rabbit, rescued by the GpW. His attacks are different than those of a normal robot-rabbit, being lightning-based and stealth-like attacks.

As Grath entered the clan base, a rubber chicken promptly flew through the air and stuck itself into the wall next to Grath by its beak. Ninja then popped his head out from a door, and recognized Grath.
'Sorry about that, Grath' said Ninja as he went over and got the rubber chicken back.
'It's okay, Ninja. I'm trying to overthrow Devan and his armies, freeing the armies. Want to join me?' said Grath.
'I don't know. I need to think about it for a bit.' said Ninja.
'Well, I'm heading off towards the mountains for a bit. Catch up if you want to come with me' said Grath.

And so Grath went on his way towards the mountains. As he started to climb, Ninja caught up. 'Wait up, Grath! There are some troops of Robot-Rabbits coming for the largest hiding place!' said Ninja.
'What? Then let's go, Ninja!'
They both ran back towards Under-Carrot, the largest hiding place since Devan made his army.
As they got there, Rabbits were running from the troops of rabbits.
Grath stopped a rabbit with white fur and blonde hair who was wearing blue and white clothes.
'Why are people running? Why don't they fight?'
'Because they are trained, and none of us have trained our magic!' said the rabbit. 'Will you help us in our fight? I'll help you with your training!' 'Why sure, My name's Sherry.' said Sherry. 'Then lets go fight. My name's Grath.'
Sherry pulled a tennis ball from his pocket, and smashed it at the robot rabbits, knocking one's head off.
Grath extended a gun from his arm, and started firing his minigun at the robot rabbits, injuring many.
Ninja pulled out his blade and started slashing.
'Devan's sure making them flimsier now. My construction's pretty sturdy, but I could kick these things apart.' said Grath as his switched to Telekinetics, retracting the gun and flinging a robot-rabbit into another, smashing both.

Then the enemy robot-rabbits pulled machineguns from their backs, firing back.
'Duck!' yelled Grath, and they all dived to the ground as the rabbits shot at them. The robot-rabbits aimed back down at them, and the leader said 'Surrender, or die.
'Time to use this up' Grath said, pulling out a card, putting energy into it, then tosses it forward at the enemy leader's feet. The card burst into flame, and the ground rumbles ominously.
'Okay, Time for us to get away. Ninja, would you use your grappling hook to pull us away?' Grath said. Ninja grabbed both, then tossed the grappling hook and pulled them away. 'Now let's watch the fireworks.' said Grath and they turned and watched the panic-stricken robot-rabbits looking around then suddenly a yellow beam shot up from the ground in the middle of the robot-rabbits, decimating the ranks.
'Now let's rock!' said Grath, extending his gun and firing RF rockets into the reminaing robo-rabbits. Ninja hurled shurikens at the robo-rabbits, and Sherry smashed robo-rabbits with tennis balls until all the robo-rabbits were dead.
'Thanks for helping out there, Sherry. We couldn't have done it without your help.' said Grath. 'I'm currently trying to overthrow Devan. Want to come with?' 'Sure,' said Sherry. 'I'll try to help out.'
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As you can see, I've managed to put a fight scene, and the joining of two people in a single chapter. My chapters are fairly short, but I need Blacksheepie's response before I keep writing, so bug her to if you want more.

New profile, specially custom-tailored for this story.

Name: Skyrider
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Type: Air
Personality: Very friendly. Makes alliances with pretty much anyone for as long as he can hold them, and never turns his back on his friends. He will often fight to the death to protect his allies, and is sometimes the intermediator of arguments within his group.
Around the enemy, however, Skyrider becomes a flying deathmonger. His insane speed, coupled with his ability to teleport about the sky, makes him not only a hard-to-hit target, but an unpredictable adversary. He has a penchant for suddenly appearing in front of an opponent, executing a wild combination of punches, kicks, and various other martial-arts strike techniques, then disappearing again.
Skyrider's one downplay is that he is a complete idiot around any female. He's never had a true companion of the opposite sex in his life, and he simply feels alone without a girlfriend.
Appearance: Pale cyan, medium- to well-built, and wears a necklace of a flying bird around his neck. He also wears two armbands, one red and one white, around his right shoulder, and another two, red and white again, around his left ankle.
Weapons: None. Skyrider prefers melee combat, so that he can use his agility to its utmost extent.
Special Powers: Being an air-type, and an experienced one at that, Skyrider can not only fly, but can disappear, and reappear somewhere else in the sky.

Grathie, you're making me actually put aside my extreme laziness for the moment and drudge up my old prof. Don't you remember me at all? Sigh.
Alright, since I'm in a Matrix-y mood, (only 10 more days!!!)...
I'm 17 years old, and have long hair to the middle of my back, which is lavender, the same colour as my tail, the insides of my ears and palms, and other miscellaneous places like that. Of course I can be a sheep or a bunny as the mood calls, but I believe I'll be a bunny most of the time, for this story. My fur is all white, but it's rather a dingy grey-white. I have dark blue eyes, and I wear rags of the same color. All of my clothing is white: (like Switch!) a halter under a white leather jacket that just ties in the front and has limitless pockets, and white canvas pants with holes in the knees and around the bottoms. However, my socks are periwinkle, you know, the light blue color like at the bottom of the ocean. I'm very small in height and weight, and try to act like I know what is going on when actually I'm perpetually confused. Very unsure of myself and dependent on other people, and I hate being alone. Affectionate with me friends.

Oh. And MY jello-ray gun, which (curse you!) grath at one point tried to steal from me but is now forgiven and all is rectified. Oh right, and there is no spoon.

Continue. I want to be a heroine!
Black

Blacksheep: You STILL need to have an element.
And I have your profile from the everyone's characters thread. I just needed an element.

Wind.

You mean Air

I'll join of course
Use my Tiger prof. And Fire. I can call light and make fires burn with no fuel but oxygen

good stuff!

It usually is.

Feel free to add me in, if you are so tickled.

Tickled?

4I's right. Usually is.

*'Accidentally' trips and bumps the thread up to the top*
No update today, door slammed on my finger.

Snark. I was hoping this was something useful.

Sorry 'bout your finger, Grath.

Second Chapter! Part 1, because of this *pats large block labeled "Writer's" that's next to him*
Grath headed back into the mountains with Sherry and Ninja.
Near the summit of the mountain, they met pale cyan rabbit with a necklace of a flying bird around his neck.

He immediatly leapt up and started to fly away, but Grath extended small jets from his legs and chased after the rabbit, eventually catching up to him. Grath asked 'Why are you running' and the rabbit answered 'Because I've never seen anyone but robo-rabbits up here, so I assumed you were a robo-rabbit. My name's Skyrider, and I'm trying to defeat Devan. You are?' Grath answered 'My name's Grath, and my friends and I are trying to defeat devan too. You were right, and I am a robo-rabbit actually, but I don't like Devan.'

Grath continued on, after letting Skyrider get his equipment from his cave. They got to a town, called 'Devanville' Current rabbit population: 0 Current turtle population: 30,000
There, they heard that Devan was going to have a pep talk to his turtles.
'Sounds like a good time for an assasination to me' said Grath, as he readied his sonic wave. Sherry said that she wanted to stay behind on this mission, but Skyrider and Ninja wanted to go.

Ruxulent chappie, Grath. Um, nothing more to say here, except that it was an awfully short chapter. But then, that was explained via the *points at block labeled "Writer's* next to Grath*

Whee.

That wasn't a full chapter. that was the first half/third of the chapter.

Originally posted by Grath AR
That wasn't a full chapter. that was the first half/third of the chapter.

I was getting to that. I just... forgot. Yeah.

Ruxor. Or something.

I'm gonna update!
Gimme some time. I need input: Fencer-dudes from JJ2 in the big battle, yes/no?

NO. The fencers are über-annoying; don't put them in, anywhere.

J/K. I personally don't like the fencers, but do whatever you want.

Fencers drive me crazy.

No, then?
Fine. One huge Fencer-dude/Robo-Rabbit cross.

ARGH

As long as Skyrider has a hand in taking him to pieces, I'm fine with it.

K. I'll have Skyrider be the one to kick his head off.

/me is placated for the moment.

Moment is up!

Uh, continue?

Hold on, you lynch mob. No lynching, I continue. K? I should have another chapter up by around 11:00 EST?

Grath noticed that his weapons were a bit low on energy, and proposed that they go for reinforcement and recharging. Skyrider and Ninja agreed, and they went to ask Sherry about it. She said yes, and Grath pulled out a card, then tossed it onto the ground, the card, with a loud sucking sound, made a swirling black vortex.
Grath jumped in, followed by Sherry and Ninja, then finally Skyrider. They appeared in a large, metal room. 'Welcome to my laboratory.' Grath led them into a second room full of partly-made roborabbits. 'These are works in progess. This next room here... Well, you'll see.' said Grath.
They all went in, and four rabbits were sitting around a table. They all got up, putting down their card game. 'Shall I alert them' said the first rabbit, black with strange foot-long metal claws on his hand. 'Sure. The same for the rest of you.' said Grath.

The other rabbits were different. The second of the four was a dark green, with what looks like a pistol. The third was wearing a large brown cloak, covering his entire body, except for his feet, with blood red fur on them. His face was in shadow, not showing any color. The last had brown fur, with a set of blue-and-gold arm bracers, blue-and-gold leg bracers, and a circular blue gem with a gold circle around it on his chest. The last thing seemed embedded into his chest.
All the rabbits left to alert their divisions.
Ninja, Skyrider, and Sherry all looked at him questioningly, and Grath said 'I've built a number of roborabbits.'

'Now for the recharge, there's this door to the left.' said Grath, indicating a door, each person goes in, sits down on the chair, and fall asleep for two minutes, waking up refreshed.
'Now for the action!' said Grath. 'Sherry, if you want to stay here, just don't press any red buttons, and no pressing any buttons labeled "fire"'

The three went back to the vortex and jumped through. As they got there, a loud humming was heard. As they watched, four large hovercrafts came flying in to the landing pad. After the landing, four troops came out of the four hovercrafts. Each one was led by one of the four rabbits they'd seen eariler.
'They'll get the troops. We'll go for the two generals and devan. Ninja and I'll head for the general with guns, and Skyrider, you go for the tall one with the sword.
-End of part, coming soon: Part 3. I didn't feel like a huge fight scene right now-
I've also got Earthbound soon. Bye.

Good.

Now we're going to start screaming for more again

Yeah, I remember when he stole BS's blue raspberry jello gun on the JMMB.

As proof I'm not a n00b, wasn't the alternative butterscotch pudding? ;-P
Anyway, I told BS to put a (C) on it so she just said "Blue raspberry jello gun(C)" and Grath never copied it again. Also, I called him GrathPOL until he stopped. (He was in AR then. ;-P)

Part 3
Pronunciation guide:
Schypher: Schei Pher
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Grath said 'Schypher, you come with us.'
The red rabbit in a cloak stepped forward, and threw the cloak off, revealing a red-furred rabbit with Rabbit/Cat ears. (Rabbits ears, angled back with points at the end. The ears are also a bit ragged on the rear edge) He was wearing loose brown pants, and a grey shirt.
The group walked towards the soon-battlefield, but before they'd gotten halfway an echoing voice called out to them 'You choose Schypher to battle, but you don't even notify me of a battle?'
Grath motioned to his partners to stand back, then said 'I knew you would find out, so I thought I'd give you the satisfaction of a dramatic enterance.'
At that moment, smoke started coming out of the ground, forming a rabbit-like shape.
A shadow appeared inside the smoke, then a human stepped out, and the smoke dissapated.
The human had blue-purple hair, a purple vizor, a black suit of armor (Breastplate, shoulderpads, and leg protection) with a purple gem in the center of the breastplate, a loose, dark grey long-sleeved shirt under the armor, and white gloves held on with gold bracelets.
'Why hello, Forte.' said Grath.
The rest of the team was understandably astonished to see a human.
'He's actually a cyborg. He showed up in my lab one day and asked to join me.' said Grath.
The team (With Forte coming along) went to the gates. At the gates a roborabbit asked for their permission slips. When Grath failed to give him one, the Robo-rabbit got angry. 'You must be those badguys Lord Devan told me about!' At which point, Forte shot a large purple beam from his glove, and the Robo-Rabbit was suddenly missing the upper part of his torso.
'Stupid gatekeeper...' muttered Forte.
The group went in, just as Devan's speech was starting. I'll spare you the usual megalomaniac speech and skip to the end. 'You must crush these rebel rabbits, my loyal troops!' at which point the crowd cheered. 'Time to move out.' said Grath. Schypher extended blood-red claws, Ninja pulled out his blade, and Grath pulled a machinegun out of his trench-coat. Skyrider headed towards the first general, knocking out a robo-rabbit with each punch.
Schypher just started slaughtering roborabbits. Each robo-rabbit Schypher killed shot a black thing at him the moment he killed them.
'Schypher's got a special weapon system. He gains power with every kill he makes. More power from more powerful people.' said Grath. 'I call is "Get Ability"'
Skyrider teleported to the general he was to take, and caught him by suprise with a punch in the back, but then the general started attacking, and all Skyrider could do is defend. Grath told Schypher to go help Skyrider, and Schypher started slashing and slashing, moving at higher speeds until he was basically a red blur cutting a line through the troops. Schypher and Skyrider began assaulting the general. I started gunning down robo-rabbits, and Ninja was slicing his way through. At first it seemed like we would never get through, then Forte fired a shot which almost cleared a line all the way to the boss. Ninja and I ran along, killing as we went.
Forte continued his job as a one-person armageddon, and by this point has killed about 1/6th of the army.
Ninja and I reached the general, and I distracted him while Ninja got in close, and cut off one gun. Then I fired at the other gun, Ninja sliced it off quickly. Then I started gunning down robo-rabbits who were attacking, while Ninja hacked at the general until he chopped it's head off. Then Ninja and I turned to slaughtering robo-rabbits.
Now back to Schypher and Skyrider. Schypher's first move on reaching the general was to slice the swordblade off, so then the rest was easy. Then, I'll skip the slaughter and head to Devan. I fired at him... but the bullets went straight through! Devan laughed, and we realized it was a hologram. It dissapeared and we were left with a lot of dead robo-rabbits.
Yes, same grath (I just remembered the password)

Edit:
If nobody cares about this, I'll stop.

As I said in the previous post, this time continued: one more chapter, then unless I get Muchos Supportos, NO MORE STORY!

Rally the people! The Legions of Grath's Story that Doesn't Have a Name Yet donate their support to the cause of Grath's story that doesn't have a name yet!

hmm... I should have read this earlier. RALLY TEH PPLZ!!11!11!1oneone!11!

Oh, and yes, I'm joining. I'll be using Acid, modified to fit this story.

Name: Acid
Species: Jackrabbit
Appearance: His fur is teal, and he has green hair. He wears a red headband, black sweat pants and a white T-shirt that says 'I am teh Suxxors!'
Element: fire
Powers: Acid has alarming skill with the fire element, able to create explosions that rival the power of atom bombs. However, this does come with a cost; the powers are very draining and half the time they end up scorching Acid as well.
Personality: Acid is very friendly, and makes friends very easily. Apart from that, he is a big fan of blowing things up.