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Originally Posted by Strato
His pinky looks like it's the longest one.
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Aww, FF got this before I could. But yeah, I think this comment brings up two things that need work =P.
You have some problems with making things look female, at least judging from this picture and that Blackraptor one in OC that I do not want to remember - though the pic for Dal looks okay. You need to remember to give female characters wider hips (at least equal to their ribcage width), less upper-body muscles, and an overall smoother and curvier form. And less of a chin; she looks kind of like Jay Leno.
Also, the secret to making shattering spell effects look awesome is to have little bits of rock mid-air or falling into the pit. Rock rarely breaks that cleanly, and having things mid-air gives cues to the speed or intensity to which something is moving.
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