Shiverz
Jun 9, 2002, 02:15 AM
Devan Strikes Back !!!
Chapter 1
The bar went quiet. Jazz stood and grabbed his gun and slowly aimed it. At a rabbit at the door. “Jazz what you doing this is meant to be a place to chill not to aim your gun
at rabbits you don’t know, ”Yelled Spaz. Lori Ran over to Jazz and grabbed his gun
then looked at him in a stern way. “ LORI gimme my gun back I need it to shoot
people , “ said Jazz.
The Bartender looked at Jazz and pointed his finger towards the door. Jazz stood there like a dummy until Spaz whispered in his ear , “ I think he wants you to leave “. Jazz slowly walked out he took his back pack off and picked out a carrot. “ Why do I always get sent out (Crunch) it’s not fair (Crunch) “ moaned Jazz. “ Hey what’s that over there it looks like a turtle but it can’t be one of Devan’s turtles because him and the turtles were banished to the Jungrock planet.
In fact there stood a turtle but the shell wasn’t the colour of Devans and his minions shell instead this turtles was blue and white . “ Emm excuse me mister rabbit could you direct me to Nippius “ asked the Turtle. Jazz Stood Puzzled . “ Sorry but that’s another planet this is the planet Carrotus I could take you to Nippius though “ replied Jazz.
Chapter 2
The Ice Bar stood in front of Jazz’s eyes . “Great now I have a place to have a drink “ exclaimed Jazz. The turtle went inside and Jazz was just about to follow when his mobile phone rang . “ Jazz were are you … oh I can see your on Nippius well enjoy yourself I noticed theres rabbits on that planet “ said Spaz. Jazz turned his phone off and went inside the Ice Bar . The bartender stared at him as if he knew who he was then said , “ JimBob where have you been “.
“Excuse me I’m called Jazz not JimBob “ said Jazz. He walked in all the rabbits round him glared at him as if he were Devan . A rabbit sat in the corner Jazz could just see him. The rabbit approached Jazz slowly then took his gun out and aimed it at Jazz’s head . “ Who are you rabbit and where you from, “ asked the rabbit .
“ I’m Jazz Jackrabbit from Carrotus and you are … , “ replied jazz. The rabbit looked at Jazz and said , “ I’m Shiverz Coldrabbit and I come from here , Nippius I protect all rabbits from Devan Shell and I’ve heard that your Carroutus’s Protecter.Jazz stood and looked at Shiverz but didn’t say anything.
To be continued :)
Chapter 1
The bar went quiet. Jazz stood and grabbed his gun and slowly aimed it. At a rabbit at the door. “Jazz what you doing this is meant to be a place to chill not to aim your gun
at rabbits you don’t know, ”Yelled Spaz. Lori Ran over to Jazz and grabbed his gun
then looked at him in a stern way. “ LORI gimme my gun back I need it to shoot
people , “ said Jazz.
The Bartender looked at Jazz and pointed his finger towards the door. Jazz stood there like a dummy until Spaz whispered in his ear , “ I think he wants you to leave “. Jazz slowly walked out he took his back pack off and picked out a carrot. “ Why do I always get sent out (Crunch) it’s not fair (Crunch) “ moaned Jazz. “ Hey what’s that over there it looks like a turtle but it can’t be one of Devan’s turtles because him and the turtles were banished to the Jungrock planet.
In fact there stood a turtle but the shell wasn’t the colour of Devans and his minions shell instead this turtles was blue and white . “ Emm excuse me mister rabbit could you direct me to Nippius “ asked the Turtle. Jazz Stood Puzzled . “ Sorry but that’s another planet this is the planet Carrotus I could take you to Nippius though “ replied Jazz.
Chapter 2
The Ice Bar stood in front of Jazz’s eyes . “Great now I have a place to have a drink “ exclaimed Jazz. The turtle went inside and Jazz was just about to follow when his mobile phone rang . “ Jazz were are you … oh I can see your on Nippius well enjoy yourself I noticed theres rabbits on that planet “ said Spaz. Jazz turned his phone off and went inside the Ice Bar . The bartender stared at him as if he knew who he was then said , “ JimBob where have you been “.
“Excuse me I’m called Jazz not JimBob “ said Jazz. He walked in all the rabbits round him glared at him as if he were Devan . A rabbit sat in the corner Jazz could just see him. The rabbit approached Jazz slowly then took his gun out and aimed it at Jazz’s head . “ Who are you rabbit and where you from, “ asked the rabbit .
“ I’m Jazz Jackrabbit from Carrotus and you are … , “ replied jazz. The rabbit looked at Jazz and said , “ I’m Shiverz Coldrabbit and I come from here , Nippius I protect all rabbits from Devan Shell and I’ve heard that your Carroutus’s Protecter.Jazz stood and looked at Shiverz but didn’t say anything.
To be continued :)