Chapter 1 - The attack

Jazz Jackrabbit lay in his bed in the carrotus castle, next to Eva. He was enjoying peaceful nights, were no evil maniacs like Devan Shell tried to kill him, and no nights when his soon to be mother-in-law kicks him into the dungeons. Now he was happily married, with his brother, Spaz, bored with no girlfriend. Except he was eyeing up the waitress in the palace!

Outside, a large figure stood, looking at Eva through the binoculars.
"It's good we found the remains of the time portal from the city. And we also stole the emerald from the sacred caves of Diamondus."He smiled."And we also have the weapon. The waitress."

The next day, the palace waitress was waiting for the breakfast to be made. She was going to insert a small bomb that looked like the Crispy Carrots cereal. And then the future of good would never come.

The food was ready, and the waitress would take it in. The waitress took it, and gave three bowls of cereal, one each to Jazz, Spaz and Eva. But the one with the bomb in was for Eva.

Jazz was sitting next to Eva, when he smelt an oily smell. A smell that he didn't think mixed with the cereal. He had been in a bomb training lesson before. So he knew what it was. A bomb.

Jazz chucked Eva's cereal away. And it exploded. That left a big holein the wall. Where a speeder X100 pulled away. It was the waitress.

Jazz leapt onto his speeder X50, an older model. He drove away. But he knew that the speeder X100 would be long gone. So he got out his homing missile-launcher.

Jazz fired a missile. It went very slowly at first, but then went zooming towards the speeder X100. Jazz could control where the missile went and see it because of a controller and a view screen on the launcher.

The missile hit the speeder. But the waitress had jumped of. Jazz could see that. So, he drove towards the waitress and got out his pistol.

He got of the bike and pointed the gun at the waitress.
"What on Carrotus are you doing?!"He roared."Who sent you?"
And that was when the waitress stabbed herself, and Jazz found himself surrounded.

To be continued....

Sounds interesting. I'd like to see it continued.

This is indeed interesting, though once or twice I got a little confused. My main quibble is "Now he was happily married, with his brother, Spaz,", which took a while to parse, and the fact that the story moves very fast.