Oct 31, 2004, 02:09 AM | |
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This is a long story mostly by me, Dalspots, Criss and Dayanne. I'll probably eat most details because I don't remember them (like the evidence that Yasco killed Neon =p). What will happen? FBI will fight against SGWST, Smart Guyz Who Steal Treasures. Here's the beginning... It was a clear night. No cars, no people in the streets, it was 3:30 AM. It was a quiet night near Hotel Hilton, the National Palace of Culture in Sofia and the Museum of Earth and Man. The strange thing happened in the museum. More strange is that many rabbits were there
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Oct 31, 2004, 03:02 AM | |
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Continuation 1
Suddenly a black coated person appears in my house with a knife. But he doesn't kill anyone, he uses it as a magical portal thru the kitchen which leads to Dalspots' house where EvilMike cracked the code of a room with HAX. The black coated person went into the room after someone called him by cellphone and told him to follow EvilMike in the hax tunnel. So he appeared in Spots' house and followed him. Dalspots spied them with a cam and recognized Ninja. They talked in their weird language called Evilioni. (...)I found a members list for red team on the floor :S. Here's what it says: btw the notes we receive are written in Evilioni on the back side. Cfir, branuit Sasan bo tinatad qaste, ja smarkaz emu. Now the list I found: Cooba (weapon guy), R3ptile (advisor), Yasco (vice-leader), EvilMike (website developer http://hem.passagen.se/sgwst), SkulL (leader), Ninja (commander of red team), Eagle (code cracker, secret tunnel owner), Violet (Guard) And a note with description of SGWST (name, leader, official language etc). Dalspots received a note too: "Dear FBI agents, We know you're 'watching' us there, the rabbits are in the warehouse, and soon we will make rabbit fur out of them. Have fun trying to stop that. ~'unknown nickname'." And he said that there was the same note on the back side in Evilioni. I found this: 'Dear FBI agents, we wanted to tell you the exact number of members in SGWST. Well, you won't believe it, but it's 30. ~<13AS55> 'Ajen FBI agenti, aso vanqero n'tillo hadaz numir bau SGWST tehomi. Datse, e je nepili oim, ast numi'l 30. ~<13AS55> So many members. But that's not all. Cooba, Violet and Fl@sh appeared in my house. That's an exciting moment from the story. They started a conversation in Evilioni and came to my living room. After that all people from SGWST had a meeting. To be continued... Last edited by Anubis; Nov 1, 2004 at 12:58 AM. Reason: Vi0let's g3nd3r, C00b's ang3r :D |
Oct 31, 2004, 03:36 AM | |
I forgot some details. Criss is kidnapped too. Day was found locked in the closet, luckily Dalspots had the key. And the murder of Neon PSY, replaced by Acid PSY. Yasco went through the window and cut his head off. Acid has been found dead in the attic by Ragnarok. He has been looking for something, so we better look for clues in the attic.
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Oct 31, 2004, 04:33 AM | |
Rather bad writing form. You keep adding details randomly, as though you are telling this to someone verbally and thus cannot go back and change things. Remember the edit button!
...are you talking about Violet CLM? Or some other Violet? |
Oct 31, 2004, 05:02 AM | |
What Risp said... this is confusing to read. Needs some decent formatting, too. And use EDIT button. I beg you.
In addition, I TOLD YOU VIOLET IS MALE YOU FIEND. I hope this is last time you include my private thoughts in a WT story where everyone can read them. |
Oct 31, 2004, 09:45 AM | |
Nyah
=O I always forget that Edit button. And I didn't know Violet is male, that's not on purpose. About Cooba's hopes that this is last time I include his thoughts, I promise it's the last time.
(Editing a post for first time, it's easy ![]() So that photo on Fooproducts is probably a joke? Last edited by Anubis; Oct 31, 2004 at 10:02 AM. Reason: =P |
Oct 31, 2004, 11:13 AM | |
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All my photos on Fooproducts are male. ![]() |
Oct 31, 2004, 01:01 PM | ||
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Nov 1, 2004, 02:05 AM | ||
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Nov 1, 2004, 03:29 AM | ||
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In addition, I second what Faw said... this is unreadable. Needs formatting, dialogues and such. Archangel, too. *gets haxed by 4I*
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Nov 1, 2004, 12:02 PM | ||
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Nov 1, 2004, 12:05 PM | |
I like the part where Yasco gets his head cut off while going through a window.
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Nov 2, 2004, 10:14 AM | |
Part III, the SGWST meeting,
Cooba: Let's talk in English so Dalspots and Alex can understand us. In the meeting Ninja/Optic, the commander of red team, was accepting Fl@sh in the red team Fl@sh: You're in now, but you still have to do the test. Kill Dayanne, teleport to Dalspots' house where she lives now. I tell Dalspots this and he turns her into a fish and puts her into the aquarium with frogs. Fl@sh teleports, but he recognizes the fish and he's sure he didn't see it last time. Yasco doesn't believe him and tells him to forget about that fish. He starts thinking what to do. He gets invisible and Dalspots can't make him visible even with elite magic. He turns off the lights and Fl@sh tries to touch the aquarium. He opens it and starts messing up the sand with his knife while looking for Day. He breaks the aquarium. Spots makes Dayanne be a frog so she won't die. And it appears as a frog behind a mirrow. Yasco sees that through his magic mirror and tells Fl@sh about it. Fl@sh almost hurts Day, but she starts jumping. Then she turns into a dog and attacks Fl@sh. He shoots her into the heart with seekers, but then Zeus suddenly appears in the air, catches the seeker and throws it to Fl@sh. But it's not over yet. R3ptile, Eagle and Yasco appear into the room. Criss kicks R3ptile in his nutz. Zeus shoots Yasco, apples start raining and Eagle takes them to hospital and Dayanne to the warehouse. So now Scare, Tyuni, Day and Kara are in the warehouse. They climb up to the top and jump out, but there are 2 guards. Tyuni is hit in the shoulder and he's unconcious. Scare puts off Fl@sh's black mask and shoots him. He's terribly injured now. Violet soon gets unconcious too after a long fight. Tyuni is taken to a hospital in Moscow and the others quickly call transport to get out of Russia. So now Tyuni's in hospital. But I detect DrJones, the doctor, talking on his cellphone to somebody in Evilioni which means that he's from SGWST. Soon I found a members list of blue team: DrJones SGWST Killer Disguise SGWST Leader DrPain SGWST Advisor Graphix SGWST Co-leader Jarno vos SGWST Commander of Blue Team Shadow SGWST Website Developer Silvero SGWST Gem Expert Chimaera SGWST Guard Booshi SGWST Weapon Guy Mercurio SGWST Museum Robber Fawriel SGWST Spy Doubble Dutch SGWST Crazy Professor Radium SGWST Karate Warrior GOLD: Enigma SGWST King Moti SGWST Queen Nimrod SGWST Royal Disguiser Alberto SGWST Headquarters Cleaner Fl@sh and Violet are now in SGWST headquarters and DrPain will make sure they get better. To be continued... |
Nov 2, 2004, 10:20 AM | ||
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Nov 2, 2004, 11:10 AM | |
Ajen FBI agenti, asare in victri Dalspots de dead nimad ifao seekeri! <13AS55>
Dear FBI agents, have fun translating the note. Me: Hewwo Disguise: Who's speaking? Me: You have me on your MSN list. Disguise: I do? Me: Yeah, but I'm a policeman. Translate the note we received or we'll arrest you. Dear FBI agents, we'll soon kidnap Dalspots and kill him with our seekers! <13AS55> (translation). Disguise: This signature is for hi-ranked people only Disguisey Wisey: Did I say soon? >P Wisey: It'll be after 30 seconds, Fl@sh, teleport to FBI headquarters. Cya, man. -end of talking on cellphone- Dalspots dressed like a policewoman. Fl@sh can't find him. The bad guyz are somewhere in front of the cracked door (Eagle hacked it). [Ð(-)lspøts] says: Troubled. Caught by FLASH.[Ð(-)lspøts] says: Gonna do a nice trick. [Ð(-)lspøts] says: LOOK, a FOO. CAPTURE IT FLASH. [Ð(-)lspøts] says: *Flash looks* [Ð(-)lspøts] says: *I run.* [Ð(-)lspøts] says: Pwned. |
Nov 3, 2004, 06:46 AM | ||
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