Hey sup B)

I'm writing a Jazz fanfic, and in one part, he and his crew sing the Carrotus National Anthem. Only problem is, Carrotus doesn't have a national anthem. Until now.

I only wrote the first lyric, and I haven't come up with a title, so it's only a start. *ahem* Without further ado,

The Carrotus National Anthem (Sing to the tune of "Halls of Montezuma")

From the rolling hills of Diamondus, To the dunes of Deserto,
We have fought for peace and independence, and the place that we call home;
First to come and never first to leave, the battle stages of the worlds,
You will find the mark of Carrotus everywhere rabbits have roamed.

EDIT "Carrotus" in first line changed to Diamondus. Thanks n00b and Cooba.

I think Carrotus in the first line should be a different planet.

Originally Posted by n00b

I think Carrotus in the first line should be a different planet.

Diamondus?

Done. Thanks, n00b and Coob.

Shouldn't this be a planetary anthem then?

Or perhaps an interplanetary one if it is patroned by other worlds.

Or perhaps its a species anthem?

Just wondering.


[I think the Jackrabbit Transformer song on the americian album is good anthem music, but it doesn't carry a tune well]

\o/

Rabbits live happily, rescued to be free and safe from all turtle invaders
The unknown and unnamed Carrot God is hailed and worshipped as our creator
We share war stories and jokes in the War Tavern sipping carrot juice
Because both war tales and carrots in Carrotus are known to be profuse

..my humble addition.

(dont bother me with the fact that I'm 2 weeks late)

Originally Posted by Doubble Dutch

Shouldn't this be a planetary anthem then?

Jazz conquored all the worlds he visited during JJ1 in the name of Carrotus.

Originally Posted by Sonyk

Jazz conquored all the worlds he visited during JJ1 in the name of Carrotus.

Or at least in the name of the Galactic Rabbits

O Carrotus! Our home and native planet!
True patriot love in all thy sons command.
With glowing hearts we see thee rise,
The True Carrot strong and free!
From far and wide, O Carrotus,
We stand on guard for thee.
Jazz keep our land glorious and free!
O Carrotus, we stand on guard for thee.
O Carrotus, we stand on guard for thee.

Okay, maybe not.

Just wondering what you think it'd sound like. Will it be full of patriotic claptrap like the Americian and Carrotusian anthems? Will it declare expansion, like in Hitlers Germany? Will it be decepticely peaceful like the Canadian anthem? I want to know.

Stijn: This post was originally part of a seperate thread with "Shellian planetary anthem" as topic.

That was really weird. SChoo wiird itchd stummd pu ma spollin.

Originally Posted by Doubble Dutch

Just wondering what you think it'd sound like. Will it be full of patriotic claptrap like the Americian and Carrotusian anthems? Will it declare expansion, like in Hitlers Germany? Will it be decepticely peaceful like the Canadian anthem? I want to know.

Stijn: This post was originally part of a seperate thread with "Shellian planetary anthem" as topic.

A mix of Hitler and Canada