First, I appologize. I dropped the Swifthawk story. It could've got somewhere but it wasn't. The first few posts were good, then I ran out. If I ever use the name again, it won't mean anything.

Second, I'm kind of gathering ideas for a story. It's kind of set in like villages, forests, mountains, castles, etc. (no high-tech settings, maybe one or so) but kind of a futuristic war. For example, I have one character.

Name: Flare

Weapon: Chrome Concussion Pistol encrested with a mysterious red stone. Fires short blasts of powerful shockwave orbs (red).

Uniform/Clothes: Black bodysuit, Red right-side shoulder armor, Orange left-side. Blood red spiked fur. Young (12 or so) and strong-willed.

My charater is Freeza, an icy demon, with a taste of the finest male blood. She uses the blood for power. When Freeza gets a taste of Flare's blood, she explodes with power!

Magna is another on of mine. She's a loaded pistol. She's out to stop Freeza.

Intro of prolouge of the story would be nice