Okay, the introduction where easy to write sinice that was what the adventure was based on.
I will write chapters to it.

Planet Carrotus.
1200

9 rings of great power where created, they where gave to 9 rabbits with great leadership events.
But they where cheated, another rings was created, one to rule them all, one to take them down in darkness and chain them.
Devan, the creater of the last ring, used its power to build a great army of turtles.
Soon many villages got destroyed by his army, many kingdoms where taken over.
But a few races did challenge..

Devan’s plains
1230

Devan’s army of orgs and an army of cats, lizards, and bats where ranked up.
A large horn sounded, the two armys began to fight.
Soon almost evry org was killed, but the power of the ring could not be destroyed.
Devan rided over to the leader of lizards, slashed evrybody who moved in his way.
He slashed the leader of lizards, Fazell.
"FATHER" Yelled Fawer and slashed after Devan.
It where now all hope seens being lost, but radomly Fawer Devan’s finger and cutted it off.
Sauron lost the ring, he disappeared in a flash of light.
The ring landed on the ground, Fawer collected it up.
"Follow me Fawer, son of Fazell" Said Elwond, a cat.
The cat and lizard rided up to mountdoom.
"THROW IT DOWN" Yelled Elwond.
But lizard’s soul was easy to trick, he did keept the ring.
On the way home, they where attacked by rogues, Fawer lost the ring into a lake.
And what shouldn’t have gone lost got lost.
Storys became rumors, rumors became legends, legends got forgotten.

Carrotus village
1750

A red rabbit where pulled in a lake by a yellow rabbit.
It swimed down, the rabbit saw something flashing down in water.
Soon the red rabbit swimed up again with a ring in his hand.
"What’s that Wack? A ring? I just had birthday it’s my birthday present!" Said the yellow rabbit angry.
"No, you already got 2, I want to keep this ring Gorru" Said Wack and drolled his eyes.
Gorru drew a knife and killed Wack, he took the ring and ran away.
The ring where bring to the forgotten mountain, it gave Gorru a un-nature long life without food.

The forgotten Mountain
1990

After 40 long years, the ring left Gorru, it should be found by a wizard there where looking for Gorru.
But something that nobody expected happended.
Deep fall into a hole from the cave, he rolled long down.
He radomly grapped a ring while he tried get up again.
"My preasure, where’s my preasure" yelled Gorru out in the cave.

Que Passa!!!!

And then Mount Doom said "Hi, how ya doing- I'm Unknown Rabbit..."

Just kidding... /\/\

Anyway, nice story. Keep it up.

There's going to be a chapter evry Monday, Wensday, and Friday, but today I have been really busy so I haven't got writted anything sorry.

Nice story heeh

Chapter 1.


It was a nice morning at carrotus keep, the little town slowly began to wake up.
Deep where out on the mark with some other rabbits for make up the area where Deep’s 50 years birthday should be held.
A rabbit didn’t live much more about 40 years, it where amazing that a rabbit could get 50 years old.
Deep had invitated around hole the town to the party, usual you just invitate your friends and their family.
Shadow the rabbit mage came riding with a carriage full of stuff.
A few young rabbit kids came out of their houses and began run after the carriage.
"Fireworks! Fireworks! Fireworks! " Yelled they.
Shadow smiled and did a wave with his hand.
A few fireworks started, it gave a lot of colorfull light.
The kids laughed and jumped around in the firework.
"Finaly you’r here" said a voice.
A female lopeared rabbit with a grey fur was standing and waiting on Shadow.
Her long dark hair blowing in the wind.
"Hello Ducky" Said Shadow smiling.
Ducky jumped up in the carriage and huged Shadow.
Shadow where a male rabbit with a black fur, his eyes where clear blue.
He where dressed in a kind of grey cloak and he where wearing his magic staff.
"I would not set anything in my way for Deep’s 50 years birthday" Said Shadow.
Ducky jumped out of the carriage and waved to Shadow.
"See you later Shadow" Said Ducky and ran in the forest.
Shadow rided up to the old war tavren, he packed his horse out from it.
A young blue rabbit took care of Shadow’s horse.
Shadow walked to the door to the tavren.
The door where smacked up by two rabbits.
Somebody yelled angry after them.
Shadow grapped them.
"Well well well, who do we have here? Black Rabbit and White Rabbit? " Said Shadow scornfully.
An angry tavren owner came out.
"You two! You come in again! Clean up!" Said he angry.
"Easy now August" Said Shadow and did let Black Rabbit and White Rabbit down.
The brothers slighty walked in the tavren again and new angry voices sounded.
"Clean up!" "You two pulled my food on the floor! You’r gonna pay for that!" "Don’t play next in the tavren fools".
"Oh, hi Shadow" Said August and grunted.
"Choose trouble brothers never learn it, at least Moonblaze always helps me.
He’s a good service, it’s rare you find loyal people as him" Said August.
Some blue wolf rabbit stepped out of the tavren door.
"Did you call on me sir?" Said Moonblaze
"Nono, just help with clean up, then you can go home Moonblaze" Said August friendly.
Moonblaze yelled happy and moved back.
"So should it be a room Shadow?" Asked August and drolled his eyes when another angry voice sounded over White Rabbit this time.
"Yea, thanks. How much?" Asked Shadow.
"Oh, tonight we offer free rooms because of Deep’s Birthday" Said August.
"But he have began acting really strange in the last time, and only been in his house.
Some day when I visited him, I found a ring. When he saw me hold it he took it from me and ordered me home" told August.
"Hm…I will find more out about that ring later" Said Shadow wondering.
Inside the tavren Deep was sitting in the middle and getting drunk with some other guys.
Black Rabbit, Moonblaze, and White Rabbit where cleaining a lot of mess of food from the floor.
August walked behind the disk and found a box with key.
He handed Shadow one and hided the box again.
"Well, have a good evning Shadow" Said August and smiled.
Shadow walked up of the trip and looked at the key number. "É3"
He found the room and locked up, it was a nice little room.
There where a little fireplace, a bed, a window, some carpets on the floor and other normal stuff in a tavren room.
Shadow casted himself on his bed, he did feel suddenly sleepy.
After a few minuts he where in deep sleep.
Moonblaze finaly got finished with cleaning the floor with Black Rabbit and Whire Rabbit.
"Okay, it’s done" Said August from the disk.
He handed Moonblaze his daily wagets.
"Now use them carefully at the party Mooney" Said August and smiled.
Moonblaze noded and walked out of the tavren door.
The tavren door where smacked up and out ran Black Rabbit and White Rabbit with another angry rabbit hunting them.
Moonblaze sighted and began walk in dirrection of the mark.
Even it where a bit dark, it where still warm.
"Such a nice summer huh Moonblaze?" Said Ducky which came riding on a horse.
"Hey Ducky, yes" Said Moonblaze and smiled.
Ducky lifted Moonblaze up on the horse and together they rided down to the place where the party should be hold.
There where set many tents up, containing activitys or just crates with food.
Ducky found a place for park her horse, she jumped down and helped Moonblaze down.
"Now stay here Dixi" Said she to the horse.
Moonblaze laughed of the name but stopped when Ducky glared annoyid at him.
A white female rabbit in nice clothes came walking with 3 rabbit kids, a green one with floppy ears, a red one with his tounge out, and a yellow cute little one.
"Hello Maria Jackrabbit" Said Ducky.
"Oh, hello Ducky. I took my childrens with me, this is Jazz" Said she.
"This is Spaz, he dropped his head on a rock, I don’t hope it damage him for furuture" Said she.
"And at last Lori" Said she.
Spaz bited in Lori’s hair.
Lori began cry.
"Oh, I will come later when I got them relaxed" Said Maria.

To be continued.

I hope I did my grammer better this time, and my spell checking .

Ummm.. kind of. But I hope you don't expect me to fix that big thing.

Que Passa!!!!

When is Spaz ever going to learn not to drop his head? You got to keep a good grip on your head, and put it down safely when your done with it...

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You MUST continue... the fate of the WORLD depends apon it... no pressure...

I'm a "mess cleaner"?
Um... I can't really say I like that, but good job anyway Blaze. Just put more action and less speech into your stories.

Originally posted by Moonblaze

Spaz bited in Lori’s hair.
Lori began cry.

I'm in hysterics. No offense. This is really great. Keep it up.

Originally posted by White Rabbit
"mess cleaner"

Nope, a ''mess maker''.
A little trouble maker ;-P

Cool story,but your grammar really can use some work...

originally posted by MoonBlaze
"Choose trouble brothers never learn it, at least Moonblaze always helps me.

*grins at Mooney*
Yeah right!

Now remember Moonblaze has the role as Sam, the loyal little hobit that won't give up.
Like Merrin and Pippin made troubles first time we'd meet them too.

I WaNtEd ThAt RoLe!
(Mmm,I completely forgot who I am...)