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YeS! Something to critisize!
His left arm seems to have two joints, his head is a bit too tall and not wide enough. You need a bit of practice on arm muscles, remember that one muscle (the quadrecep, I think) is one the outer side of the arm, and the Bicep is on top. Sketching something as a stick figure first helps prevent curved limbs, like this left arm. And the web kind of looks like barbed wire... but that would hurt.
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I also noticed that his (HIS) right leg looks disjointed. Otherwise, it's a pretty good drawing. Very detailed.

Radium is right, though.
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I really don't think he was looking for photo-realism.
Look at most comics; they aren't realistic either.

I like it.
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Que Passa!!!!

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I love the webbing. The figures good too, but that webbing kicks... something I can't say.
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Yes well...*cough*


The reason for the funny head is that I colored outside of the lines accidently, and had to cover it up. *Slaps self* I'm gonna be more careful next time. (I guess I could fix that on the computer pretty easily, but this is just an unedited scan, so...yeah.

And I didn't actually draw it from my head. I copied it off of a comic book cover, so though it may have a few bodily mistakes, the things like muscle placement aren't exactly my fault. Plus Spider-man is always kinda tweaked with his muscles anyways.

As for the barbed wire, that's just what it looked like. Not my fault either.

(But thnx for the comments. I think I agree with pretty much all that was said.)
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I really don't think he was looking for photo-realism.
Look at most comics; they aren't realistic either.

I like it.
Yeah.

I like it, too. How long did that take you to detail? lol

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Umm...I have no clue.
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