Jan 26, 2003, 05:35 PM | |
Just a Little Something
just recently got myself a Side7 account, so have loaded the one picture i have scanned onto this machine of mine,,
http://www.side7.com/cgi-bin/S7SDB/D....pl?INO=243407 am ready to be flamed!! *endurance pose; eyes shut* |
Jan 26, 2003, 05:59 PM | |
Well, first of all, the face (and the whole thing in general) seems kind of flat and 2D. The right knee is too far forward, and the left leg is too tube shaped. The arms look alright, though. I'd recomend using some form of planing sketch (like breaking it down into basic shapes) to get your dimentions and proportions right. I have a sketch I did of a rabbit somewhere... I'll post it when I find it (everything on my hard drive is kind of stored in one folder).
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Jan 27, 2003, 08:47 AM | |
Plain, simple, I love it. :D
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Jan 27, 2003, 09:34 AM | |
Must... flame....
YOU SUCK! YOU ALL SUCK! BWAHAHAHHAHA! *pant* *pant* Okay, I feel better now.
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GENERATION 22: The first time you see this, copy it into your sig on any forum and add 1 to the generation. Social experiment. <i>"This picture shows me that the gray bird man is just a bully and picks on smaller birds. Just because he has no friends and takes it out on others smaller than him to look good. I can see in the parrats eyes that it does however have a understanding of the gray bird man and is upset about getting cut."</i> - Speeza on cartoon birds. |
Jan 27, 2003, 04:45 PM | |
oh i knew id get some sort of criticism for that one,, just note that it was done last summer (when i was first experimenting with furry-style), and i have improved,, will scan some more when i have the chance to,, JUST TO MAKE RADIUM FEEL BETTER,,
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Jan 27, 2003, 04:49 PM | |
Don't be hurt if I flame it, it's just my nature.
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GENERATION 22: The first time you see this, copy it into your sig on any forum and add 1 to the generation. Social experiment. <i>"This picture shows me that the gray bird man is just a bully and picks on smaller birds. Just because he has no friends and takes it out on others smaller than him to look good. I can see in the parrats eyes that it does however have a understanding of the gray bird man and is upset about getting cut."</i> - Speeza on cartoon birds. |
Jan 27, 2003, 04:56 PM | |
didnt say i was "hurt", just telling yous' that this pic is a little out of date for my current skillz,, :P
and, seeing as im a "noob" to this side of the forums, i decided to stick something up here for now,, |
Jan 27, 2003, 05:02 PM | |
I understand, but remember that you only get one shot at first impressions =P.
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GENERATION 22: The first time you see this, copy it into your sig on any forum and add 1 to the generation. Social experiment. <i>"This picture shows me that the gray bird man is just a bully and picks on smaller birds. Just because he has no friends and takes it out on others smaller than him to look good. I can see in the parrats eyes that it does however have a understanding of the gray bird man and is upset about getting cut."</i> - Speeza on cartoon birds. |
Jan 27, 2003, 05:09 PM | |
i've never drawn a half-good picture in my whole life, fireball. that one's a masterpiece compared to mine.
well, actually i had one with kirby standing on jazz's head, but i lost it... dad-burnit...
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Jan 27, 2003, 05:25 PM | ||
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Jan 27, 2003, 05:27 PM | |
practise is all i need to improve myself,, dont really take orders (advice) well into it,, heh
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Jan 27, 2003, 05:30 PM | ||
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GENERATION 22: The first time you see this, copy it into your sig on any forum and add 1 to the generation. Social experiment. <i>"This picture shows me that the gray bird man is just a bully and picks on smaller birds. Just because he has no friends and takes it out on others smaller than him to look good. I can see in the parrats eyes that it does however have a understanding of the gray bird man and is upset about getting cut."</i> - Speeza on cartoon birds. |
Jan 28, 2003, 03:03 AM | |
"And you need to "practise" your spelling =P."
No, actually, Practise and Practice are both correct spelling. ![]() The good thing about the picture is that its simple. But like Radium said, construction is worth a shot, just to get proportions and all the like correct first. But of course, we haven't seen your latest art. Hurry! ![]()
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Jan 28, 2003, 09:14 AM | ||
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GENERATION 22: The first time you see this, copy it into your sig on any forum and add 1 to the generation. Social experiment. <i>"This picture shows me that the gray bird man is just a bully and picks on smaller birds. Just because he has no friends and takes it out on others smaller than him to look good. I can see in the parrats eyes that it does however have a understanding of the gray bird man and is upset about getting cut."</i> - Speeza on cartoon birds. |
Jan 28, 2003, 05:35 PM | ||
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