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Apr 5, 2003, 03:27 AM
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Story!

It's been a while..


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Spaztic was sitting in an uncomftrable, metal chair, gazing dreamily into the deep unknown.
There was no sign of anything unusual, he sighed as he got up out of the chair to stretch his legs.
The small digital clock on the control panel read 1:00 PM, only one more hour before he could get some sleep.

"Everything ok in here Spaztic?" He could hear a voice behind him say.

Spaztic turned around and saw that Mcatis had entered the room with two cups of coffee.

"Would you mind starting a little earlyer Mcatis? Im really sleepy, nothing at all happened, we didnt even enter one tiny astroid field. I mean, come on, is that to much to ask?" Spaztic said.

Mcatis took a sip from the coffee and sat down in the chair. "Go ahead, try not to wake Slayo up, i think he catched a little fever back on Diamondus."

"Will do, have fun." Spaztic said with a smile as he left the room.

He entered the room and almost stumble over a suitcase that was standing in the way. SlaYo grumbled but didnt wake up.

"I cant wait untill tommorow, we'll finally be back on Carrotus. It seems like years, i cant wait to go to the war tavern."


**

Mcatis was reading a magazine that he already read two times before and yawned.
The clock read 7:00 PM.

"We should be there in less then half an hour." He said as he took a look outside, he then took a look at the radar.

"That's strange, no other vessels at all, i guess the darn thing is broken again."

Suddenly the small spaceship they were on started shaking, Mcatis could hear a loud noise in the backroom followed by some swearing, a little later Slayo walked into the room.

"What was going on?" He asked as he rubbed his paws trough his face.

Mcatis looked outside. "I dont know, theres nothing on the rader, and i cant see anything outside either."


**

The spaceship came closer to the planet.

"Oh man, what happened over here?" Slayo said as he looked outside, the forest had been burned down.

Mcatis didnt say anything, he just stared outside.
Slayo went in the backroom to get Spaztic, a moment later they landed on the surface of Carrotus.
Everything was so silent and dark, the smell was almost unbearable.


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Just a little opening chapter thing.
It probably has allot of small spelling/grammar errors but it was pretty late when i wrote this and i drank more then one beer the other night. OkBYe

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Apr 5, 2003, 08:39 AM
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Ok. Put down the crackstick, and try again.

Heh, I knew mcatis and Spaztic would be in it, somehow just by looking at it was by you. ;P
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Apr 5, 2003, 09:04 AM
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Lol, dont make these comments just because your not in it Ninja

And this is just the beginning, me, Spaztic and mcatis are coming back home, is that to hard to understand? Cracka! No more of the gruntz
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Apr 6, 2003, 12:43 AM
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Hehe, love it, Slay. You've got me wanting some more. WE'RE COMING HOME, CRACKAS!

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Apr 6, 2003, 02:30 PM
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On second thought, pick the crackstick back up again. Must have more. ;P
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Nicely written story. Ties in well to #jj2. ;-P
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Haha, thanks Traft, it wasnt ment to tie in with it though. Just a story with the same people that visit there.
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i want of more story, slayo friend !
pleaze of give more or i angry !
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Next time ill make the chapters a little longer, but im also working on a Dutch one for another forum thats taking allot of time.

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The three rabbits walked trough the big cornfields that surrounded the closest city, the city of Earian. A young, greenfurred rabbit came running towards them that was beeing followed by a turtle with a shotgun.

"We gotta help that kid." Mcatis said as he starting running towards the kid, he picked him up and dived in the corn.

Spaztic and Slayo looked into the barrel of the turtles shotgun.

"What are you doing here? Who do you belong to?" The turtle said and he spitted at them.

Mcatis crawled out of the corn and slowly walked over to the turtle.

"We just came back from Diamondus." Spaztic said. "Lower the shotgun before anyone gets hurt."

The turtle laughed. "You two just came back from Diamondus? haha, you have to be kidding."

Mcatis tapped the turtle on the shoulder, the turtle turned around and got punched in the face, he lost his balance and crashed into the floor.

The kid had a scared look on his face, he stared at the three rabbits that had saved him.

Slayo looked at the boy, he got down on one knee and looked him over, the poor boy looked like he hadnt washed up in ages.
He was wearing a pair of baggy pants and a filthy shirt. "Who are you, kid?"

"Im Ninja, i was looking for some food." Ninja said. "Who are you?"

The three man introduced themselves. "We are on our way to the city of Earian, you'd better stay with us kid." Slayo said.

"Yah this is no place for a ..." Spaztic stopped in the middle of his sentence, a tear ran down Ninja's cheek.

Mcatis took a candybar out of his pocket. "Here kid, you can have it, now tell us whats wrong."

"There is no more Earian, there was a raid, the turtles took my father and mother away, i managed to escape."

"Oh no." Spaztic started to run for the town, Slayo and Mcatis followed him. "Come on kid." Mcatis shouted.

(-)

They entered the town, the smell of dead hang in the air. Rotting corpses lay everywhere.
Spaztic ran to a little house, he kicked open the door and looked around for any sign of life.
Slayo sat down on the ground and took a package of smokes out of his shirtpocket.

"Want one kid?" He asked Ninja.

The boy shook his head while Mcatis walked over to the little house that Spaztic entered.

"Tell me exactly what happened here Ninja." Slayo said.

"But sir, your from this planet arent you? Surely you know what happened over here."

Slayo took a drag from his cigarette and shook his head. "I dont, we've been gone for a month."

A sign of confusion appeard on Ninja's face. "But sir, the turtles have been ruling over this planet for two decades now."

Slayo jumped up and ran to the little house. "Guys, guys." He shouted , as he ran in, he saw Spaztic holding the dead body of a young girl in his arms, tears ran down his cheek as he softly spoke to her.

He walked to Mcatis and sat down next to him on an old wooden bench.

"Its his daughter." Mcatis said. "I wonder what the heck happened over here."

Slayo explained to Mcatis what he heard.

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My poor daughter

More, man, more! I need my hit.

Btw, it doesn't matter much but I say I'm a squirrel, but yeah. It doesn't matter =P
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Apr 7, 2003, 03:48 PM
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Ai carramba.. Erm. Sorry mate.
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Apr 7, 2003, 04:15 PM
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can pho be your daughter? can i marry her? please?
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Apr 8, 2003, 06:07 AM
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AHHH!!!

I didn't know Pho posted in war tavern.
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GO GO GADGET SLAYO
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how do you do that haha if you have gummy tyf or wahtever lol
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Sure Coppertop, just like the good old days.

I could add quite a few people.
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I luff you to Ducky =)

Thats really mean Jack =(
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He's joking I hope .
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Hrm, can I be included? You know my personallity already. *Grins and giggles*

Anyways.. lookin' good. *nods* It HAS been awhile.

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Just a very small chapter but i wanted to post it anyway because i'd hate to keep you waiting ;-;.


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Spaztic rubbed his paws trough his eyes. He turned around and stared at the neglected houses.
He turned around to face the others and told them that he needed to be alone for some time.

Spaztic walked trough the empty and depressing streets of Earian.
He could hardly believe his eyes. The statue of king Jazz was decapitated, his bronze head lay in front of his feed, overgrown with weeds.
A small bird sat down on the edge of the bird bath, Spaztic walked towards it and wanted to take the small bird in his hand but it flew away into a bush.
Spaztic followed the bird with his eyes and noticed that someone was looking at him from behind a bush. The person moved when he discovered that he was noticed and fled towards the river. Spaztic tried to follow him, but when he jumped trough the bushes, the person had disappeared without a trace.

The sun came up, the sky turned a beautiful deep purple.
Diamondus slowly rose above the crumbling cottages.
The fire that Mcatis and SlaYo had started was slowly dying out.
Ninja was sleeping and Mcatis covered him up with a blanket he had found in one of the houses. SlaYo had found two can of bean dip, gave one to Mcatis and opened his own.
Mcatis sat down next to him and yawned.

“Tired hey? I don’t blame you, it has been a long day. SlaYo said as he put the can of bean dip to his lips and the contents slid down his throat.

“Lump, disgusting, just like mom used to cook it.” He said jokingly, but he did not laugh.
Neither did Mcatis who gave his can to SlaYo and lay down in the soft grass.
SlaYo threw a few branches on the fire and watched them being consumed by the flames.
He heard a twig snap to his left and quickly turned his head.
As he looked trough the bushes he saw a dark silhouette behind a tree.
It stood there watching him.

“Spaztic?” He whispered. The person did not respond but ran away when it noticed that SlaYo moved in it’s direction. “Mcatis we have visitors, get up and look after the kid.”
With these words he ran of into the dark forest. Mcatis was sound asleep.

SlaYo ran trough the bushes in pursuit of the mysterious person.
He jumped over tree trunks and fought himself a way trough the density of the forest until he reached a small trail.
He looked around. The mysterious person was nowhere to be seen.

A few rays of sunlight were creeping over the treetops and the sky now had a soft, pink colour. Diamondus, the moon of Carrotus was disappearing at the horizon.
SlaYo had no time to watch the moonset thought. He sat down in the grass next to the forest trail, his back was leaning against one of the tall oak trees. The wind seemed to be playing a game with the leaves. A slow breeze came over SlaYo’s face as he closed his eyes so that he could fully concentrate on his environment.
He could hear the birds sing their songs high up in the tree’s, the squirrels running over the crispy leaves that were spread trough out the forest, but he could not hear the mysterious person. SlaYo rose to his feet and wanted to walk back when suddenly he noticed someone at the end of the forest trail. The person could not see him and slowly walked down the trail.

The person seemed to be standing still with his back turned towards him, but slowly turned around. SlaYo stopped dead in his tracks and noticed that it was Spaztic.

“Have you been creeping around the forest?” Spaztic asked him.

“I haven’t I wanted to ask you the same question, I was following someone who ran into the forest when the person noticed that I was following it.

SlaYo and Spaztic were both silent for a moment and they looked down the trail again.
“I guess he or she is gone. We’d better be careful, the person might come back.”

They turned around to enter the forest again, heading back for their camp.
But after the took two paces, SlaYo felt something gently brushing against his leg.
A net quickly closed around them and pulled them high up in the air.
They were hanging there in a net, about 10 feet from the ground.
The mysterious person came closer, it’s face, covered by the hood of a black cloak.
When the person stood a few feet away from the it removed its cloak.

They looked at a tall and slim rabbit, she had beautiful long, black hair that ran down to her waist. Her mouth hang open a little when she saw them.
“Welcome back Spaztic and SlaYo, I’ve missed you.” She said.
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Whee! Slayo continues!
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Mcatis covers me with a blanket.

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