Jun 18, 2003, 09:18 AM | |
The Lost Jazz Adventure 2
Okay so this mabye abit strange,it's based on the episode,tell me if it's great,Okay here it goes
Cameos and appearances allowed,some characters will also appear and the ones who are NOT in the Jazz2 history Chapter 1: The enemy within It wasn't long ago in the Lost Village (The village where the vikings and jazz live) Jazz was in his home still wondering if he completly destroyed Tomator,suddenly there was a knock on the door,It was Erik "Hi Jazz! Still worried about Tomator striking back" when he saluted Jazz he was happy and then when he said the other words he became a bit worried too,he sat on the couch with Jazz and put his hand on Jazz's shoulder "Don't worry,Tomator is completely dead by now,there's no way he could've survived the giant explosion in his ship", Jazz on the other hand was still worried,Erik wasn't now worried instead he was happy about Tomator's death,"yeah....no i am just worried because there might be a new villian and-" suddenly Olaf quickly opened the door "GUYS!! THE FOREST IS EXPLODING!!" Olaf hid under the couch,Jazz said while snickering "What a baby!",Erik and Jazz went to look outside and it looked like a war in the forest all they know and the readers that the forest,the Mystery Forest is 4444 Km's long,Jazz couldn't see the enemy but saw lots of explosions,Jazz quickly put out his gun and shot a missile at the yellow dot,the thing fell down,Jazz came to look at it and it was,Well whaddya know? MC!,"WHAT'S THE BIG IDEA SHOOTING ME WITH A MISSILE?!?!?!?!",Jazz stepped 5 backwords and Erik did too,the new lifeform as Jazz could say mabye on their side,a spy,a villian to the enemy,or a good guy?
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Jun 18, 2003, 10:39 AM | |
"GUYS!! THE FOREST IS EXPLODING!!" =P
I guess it's good so far, but I advise the use of paragraphs and sentences.
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Jun 18, 2003, 10:59 AM | |
I second that.
Er, third. Whatever.
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Jun 18, 2003, 11:26 AM | |
Okay.
Chapter 2: The newcomer of this planet When Jazz found MC,MC was really angry at Jazz. Jazz ran to his home somewhat knowing that the guy Jazz shot was very powerfull by the look on him. Olaf was watching TV,Erik and Jazz anime falled and got up quickly and Jazz said "How did a TV exist in this village? There was no electric,mabye yes. Mabye no. Mabye both" it was very strange,but Jazz thinks he knows who brought this TV in Jazz's house,at the morning MC made a house him self a bit 20 meters away from the vikings house and MC made a spaceship that was superior than anyone else's,naming it: The Z Senex Tima,Jazz didn't knew how MC built the spaceship but it was amazing it had everything,everyone dreamed of.....Erik "How smart is this guy anyway?!" Erik said while in a suprised emotion,"By the looks of the space ship i say MC has the I.Q. of 800",Erik couldn't say a word and he fainted,"Erik? ERIK!!!! Oh my god...", "You killed Erik! You (-)" (South park quote) Jazz drags Erik into his home End of chapter 2 part 1
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Jun 18, 2003, 11:33 AM | ||
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I guess the story's pretty good considering your age. Mayhaps I have to dig out that old story I wrote when I was ten =P.
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GENERATION 22: The first time you see this, copy it into your sig on any forum and add 1 to the generation. Social experiment. <i>"This picture shows me that the gray bird man is just a bully and picks on smaller birds. Just because he has no friends and takes it out on others smaller than him to look good. I can see in the parrats eyes that it does however have a understanding of the gray bird man and is upset about getting cut."</i> - Speeza on cartoon birds. |
Jun 18, 2003, 11:38 AM | |
Authors can also appear in their fanfic they made if they wanted to
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Jun 18, 2003, 11:39 AM | ||
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Ooh, ooh! I found that story I wrote when I was ten! I'm gunna go read my wonderful literary masterpiece now.
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GENERATION 22: The first time you see this, copy it into your sig on any forum and add 1 to the generation. Social experiment. <i>"This picture shows me that the gray bird man is just a bully and picks on smaller birds. Just because he has no friends and takes it out on others smaller than him to look good. I can see in the parrats eyes that it does however have a understanding of the gray bird man and is upset about getting cut."</i> - Speeza on cartoon birds. |
Jun 18, 2003, 11:42 AM | |
Childhood memories are great to remember even though some guy's suck and then improve,it's still great to see back in the past
and i still remember "Boat Trip" a level i made in The Lost Jazz Adventure 1,i strangely remembered it and i made it.
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Jun 18, 2003, 11:44 AM | |
Sometimes i also found a book of my past homeworks,when i didn't know much at school,and i'll tell ya
YEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!! THE SCHOOL IS ENDING FOR ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THE SCHOOL IS NOT GONNA BE A PAIN IN MY BRAIN,YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Jun 18, 2003, 11:53 AM | |
Okay, I finished reading the story I wrote when I was ten. I now fully appritiate how well you are writing, MC.
Maybe I'll scan the story and show it off, but I may have to get permission from the friend that helped me write it...
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Jun 18, 2003, 11:54 AM | |
i know how i type,i am not english,i only use english because i like the language instead i use Slovenian.
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Jun 18, 2003, 12:00 PM | |
(That's the first time i ever saw anyone bow at me.)
Really i am not english,i talk slovenian,it's VERY diffrent than english and you know i (-)ING hate slovenian talk Okay so what i'm probably gonna do now is make a sprite from scratch,See ya! *teleports*
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Jun 18, 2003, 12:02 PM | |
Ah, great, now we learn MC is some kind of genious.
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Jun 18, 2003, 12:03 PM | ||
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Jun 18, 2003, 12:08 PM | ||
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GENERATION 22: The first time you see this, copy it into your sig on any forum and add 1 to the generation. Social experiment. <i>"This picture shows me that the gray bird man is just a bully and picks on smaller birds. Just because he has no friends and takes it out on others smaller than him to look good. I can see in the parrats eyes that it does however have a understanding of the gray bird man and is upset about getting cut."</i> - Speeza on cartoon birds. |
Jun 18, 2003, 12:10 PM | |
*teleports back* Naa i am not gonna do the sprite i said,but i only made the head i already made 3 sprites of my real and REAL form,Human Form,and there's also a form where i am fused with Master Cheater (If you remember when i said i and MC are gonna be a seperate person,Daniel Lazar and MC being seperate persons and in a comic they are gonna become two in one)
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Jun 18, 2003, 01:16 PM | |
Whee, yesterday I stumbled upon a folder of doodles I made when I was in 5th grade! THEY'RE SO GREAT!!! XD
I just HAVE to make a movie out of one set of comicy stuff... =)
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Jun 18, 2003, 03:56 PM | |
Great. Acid writes, composes music, and now he draws. What's next, he flies, too?
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Jun 18, 2003, 04:13 PM | ||
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Jun 18, 2003, 05:17 PM | |
Dun forget I program and make movies! Oh yeah, I build stuff too.
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Jun 18, 2003, 05:18 PM | |
/me falls over.
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Jun 19, 2003, 02:10 AM | |
4I Falcon! *pick's up 4I Falcon and put's him on the ground (standing)* Chapter 3 is gonna be next but i am gonna do something else,make comics
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Jun 19, 2003, 06:34 AM | |
mmhh. MC knows how to write and draw. I still beat him.
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Jun 19, 2003, 06:39 AM | ||
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I model in 3d. I've still got you there.
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Jun 19, 2003, 09:16 AM | |
Chapter 2: The newcomer of this planet,part 2.
after Erik fainted because of MC's I.Q. he was brought into Jazz's house. Unknown to him,Jazz still thinks Tomator mabye out there,just watching our every move. Erik woke up,and went outside quickly to see where MC went,MC was just on a cloud relaxing (O_O;; How can he do that anyway?),then was bored up there and flied down with his wing,Erik's jaw dropped,Baleog came and was supicious what was happening out side. Baleog thought MC paralized Erik and he's going to kill him so Baleog launched a spear at MC,MC saw the spear in slow motion and dodged it,even though no one knew that MC was both Smart and Fast,MC quickly got rid of Baleog's weapons by a single snap. "Old man those things are dangerous! Stop using them!" MC said while grinning,Baleog's face turned red,meaning to fight MC with his own bare hands,MC quickly dodged Baleog with arms folded " ![]() Stay tuned for Chapter 3: The meaning of Life and Death!
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Jun 19, 2003, 10:25 AM | |
I draw, sing (yeeeeeeaaaaah..... at least when nobody's listening........ rain keeps falling on my head... dadada....), tell stories, do stuff, other stuff.... erm... I can do push-ups. And stuff. Yep, stuff. Erm... yeah.
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Jun 19, 2003, 10:27 AM | ||
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Jun 19, 2003, 10:28 AM | ||
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GENERATION 22: The first time you see this, copy it into your sig on any forum and add 1 to the generation. Social experiment. <i>"This picture shows me that the gray bird man is just a bully and picks on smaller birds. Just because he has no friends and takes it out on others smaller than him to look good. I can see in the parrats eyes that it does however have a understanding of the gray bird man and is upset about getting cut."</i> - Speeza on cartoon birds. |
Jun 19, 2003, 10:30 AM | ||
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GENERATION 22: The first time you see this, copy it into your sig on any forum and add 1 to the generation. Social experiment. <i>"This picture shows me that the gray bird man is just a bully and picks on smaller birds. Just because he has no friends and takes it out on others smaller than him to look good. I can see in the parrats eyes that it does however have a understanding of the gray bird man and is upset about getting cut."</i> - Speeza on cartoon birds. |
Jun 19, 2003, 12:02 PM | |
Is this gonna become an chat thread or a story thread about "The Lost Jazz Adventure 2"?????
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