Jazz Jackrabbit 2 Online

Fawriel · May 4, 2005, 04:49 AM

It looks like I'll have to bother you guys with it. Whee!

This is Kariya, from my story Fabella Vitae.

And to all the critics out there ( Yes, I mean you, Unknown ), I already know that I messed up the lighting in her hair and the pants, that her ears look weird and her pose doesn't make sense. Yay.

Sacrush · May 4, 2005, 04:53 AM

nice, keep making art.

Olsen · May 4, 2005, 05:06 AM

nice

White Rabbit · May 4, 2005, 05:56 AM

Is that an invisible button she's pressing? Otherwise it's perhaps a bit kangaroony (look at feet). Still good thoguh.

Marine1969 · May 4, 2005, 05:58 AM

Me like.

Blade Nightflame · May 4, 2005, 07:38 AM

Awesome drawing 'Faw.

LittleFreak · May 4, 2005, 08:08 AM

I've always liked your drawings. =D

This one is not flawless, but I find it pretty good. ^^

White Rabbit · May 4, 2005, 08:15 AM

Flawless..? It's Fawful!

Fawriel · May 4, 2005, 09:23 AM

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Originally Posted by White Rabbit

Flawless..? It's Fawful!

OH GAWD YES!

*ahem*
Well, thanks, everyone. ^^'

Violet CLM · May 4, 2005, 09:52 AM

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Originally Posted by Fawriel

And to all the critics out there ( Yes, I mean you, Unknown ), I already know that I messed up the lighting in her hair and the pants, that her ears look weird and her pose doesn't make sense. Yay.

They kind of look like bananas... I think the real problem is that they're at different angles. The hair is also a little long, but I approve of the upwards part. Nice tan.

Blade Nightflame · May 4, 2005, 10:05 AM

The right ear (Our right. >>) seems a bit too wrong, in the way of direction. It defies the laws of physics, XD.

Batty Buddy · May 4, 2005, 05:16 PM

Que Passa!!!!

My favorite characters of yours is Takiri. Kariya is cool too, though...

Hazel-rah · May 4, 2005, 07:32 PM

*lix*

Nice drawing.... gotta love it <3

Kaine Jackrabbi · May 13, 2005, 07:02 PM

Very nice!!! It's practically flawless!!!

NaT · May 13, 2005, 10:48 PM

If all of you think this is nice! then you have to look at my pictures and I don't even know what will you say!!!

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(they are too good to be true!)

LittleFreak · May 14, 2005, 06:09 AM

I want proof.

Radium · 04:43 PM

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Originally Posted by NaT

If all of you think this is nice! then you have to look at my pictures and I don't even know what will you say!!!

Remeber kids! =D

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NaT · May 14, 2005, 08:35 AM

Only I don't know how to put pictures here!

Fawriel · 04:43 PM

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Originally Posted by Radium

Remeber kids! =D

++da Vinci

And, thanks, Kaine.

By the way, improved again. Muah.

Maybe I'll make an own thread for the colored version. If there'll be one.

For the not-so-extremely observant, this picture differs in style from my previous ones.This is what future pictures of mine will be drawn like. Be afraid. Or excited. But very much so in any case.

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LittleFreak · 04:44 PM

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Originally Posted by Radium

Remeber kids! =D

Sigged.

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Originally Posted by Nat

Only I don't know how to put pictures here!

Upload your pics somewhere, for example at gameshack.com.

To post a picture over here, use the following tags without the spaces.

[ img ]http://images.bravenet.com/common/images/smilies/bouncer.gif[ /img ]

If you leave out the spaces, it gets

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NaT · May 16, 2005, 11:01 AM

World war. Germany and Russia!!!

***Stijn*** · May 16, 2005, 11:03 AM

Nice style. It would be a good idea to use more than one face variation though.

LittleFreak · May 16, 2005, 11:06 AM

I don't like how the Nazi is killing the Russian.

NaT · May 16, 2005, 11:08 AM

It's not one face it's just that it's winter time so you can't see them very well !!!! heh!

LittleFreak · May 16, 2005, 11:56 AM

That's a lie! =P

NaT · May 16, 2005, 12:18 PM

Well then i will draw another one a better one!!!
Anyway here are some more faces!!! the SCARYEST!!!! and the UGLYEST!!!
Plese tell me, do they look thesame???

White Rabbit · May 16, 2005, 12:38 PM

Hello, your majesty, Charles I.

cooba · May 16, 2005, 01:02 PM

Heh, your style seems to work a lot better than it seemed to be. Keep on making pictures, and try to use more colors than green and gray.

NaT · May 16, 2005, 09:12 PM

I draw with pencels so it's gray and I don't have a scanner, so I photo them with a digital camera.
And mayby I will show you one day my work with colours!!!

LittleFreak · May 17, 2005, 12:09 AM

Your drawings are pretty good (though I still don't like the first one). The face style seems to be always similiar though.

I guess you'd be good in drawing comics or the like, your faces look very cartoony.

However, you've stolen lil Fawie's topic. >O

Fawriel · May 17, 2005, 09:48 AM

Indeed.
And even though my art isn't too great and not nearly as stylized as yours, I don't think yours is quite good enough for you to justify putting down mine.

***Stijn*** · May 17, 2005, 10:12 AM

Where did he put down your art, Faw? But you're right, Nat should open a topic for his own art rather than posting it here.

Fawriel · May 17, 2005, 10:13 AM

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Originally Posted by NaT

If all of you think this is nice! then you have to look at my pictures and I don't even know what will you say!!!

NaT · May 17, 2005, 11:54 AM

Well you asked for proof!!!!

Hareoic · May 17, 2005, 03:44 PM

I can't find anything to criticize, since I'm not much of an artist anyway.

Radium · May 17, 2005, 04:57 PM

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Originally Posted by Hareoic

I can't find anything to criticize, since I'm not much of an artist anyway.

Now, I wouldn't say that. Anyone can become an artist with effort, determination, and money.

Kaine Jackrabbi · May 17, 2005, 06:01 PM

Yeah, my art would drop like flies before anyone else's art.

Hareoic · May 17, 2005, 08:31 PM

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Originally Posted by Radium

Now, I wouldn't say that. Anyone can become an artist with effort, determination, and money.

I lack all of those traits because I'm lazy.

LittleFreak · May 18, 2005, 02:03 AM

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Originally Posted by NaT

Well you asked for proof!!!!

I'm not saying your art is bad. You draw very good actually.

But still, just coming over here and saying "My art is a lot better!!!" isn't very nice at all.

NaT · May 18, 2005, 09:30 PM

Well I guess ,sorry!!!

Fawriel JCF Éminence Grise Joined: May 2002 Posts: 11,990 May 4, 2005, 04:49 AM #1
Since nobody seems to want to comment on my art on DA anymore... It looks like I'll have to bother you guys with it. Whee! This is Kariya, from my story Fabella Vitae. And to all the critics out there ( Yes, I mean you, Unknown ), I already know that I messed up the lighting in her hair and the pants, that her ears look weird and her pose doesn't make sense. Yay. __________________

Sacrush JCF Member Joined: Feb 2004 Posts: 748 May 4, 2005, 04:53 AM #2
nice, keep making art. __________________ Extraterrestrials

Olsen JCF Member Joined: May 2004 Posts: 1,370 May 4, 2005, 05:06 AM #3
nice __________________ some kind of nature

White Rabbit JCF Member Joined: Aug 2001 Posts: 4,478 May 4, 2005, 05:56 AM #4
Is that an invisible button she's pressing? Otherwise it's perhaps a bit kangaroony (look at feet). Still good thoguh.

Blade Nightflame JCF Member Joined: Nov 2002 Posts: 464 May 4, 2005, 07:38 AM #6
Awesome drawing 'Faw. __________________ Current project: Corrupted Dreams and DES (Doom mods. Actually making them, compared to every one of my JJ2 'mods') Sorry to the whole J2O for any troubles I've caused while being a stupid n00b.

LittleFreak JCF Member Joined: May 2004 Posts: 4,190 May 4, 2005, 08:08 AM #7
I've always liked your drawings. =D This one is not flawless, but I find it pretty good. ^^ __________________ Sober again. Still love it.

Kaine Jackrabbi JCF Member Joined: May 2005 Posts: 31 May 13, 2005, 07:02 PM #14
Very nice!!! It's practically flawless!!!

LittleFreak JCF Member Joined: May 2004 Posts: 4,190 May 14, 2005, 06:09 AM #16
I want proof. __________________ Sober again. Still love it.

NaT JCF Member Joined: May 2005 Posts: 205 May 14, 2005, 08:35 AM #18
Only I don't know how to put pictures here!

NaT JCF Member Joined: May 2005 Posts: 205 May 16, 2005, 11:01 AM #21
Worldwar World war. Germany and Russia!!!

*Stijn* Ａｄｍｉｎｉｓｔｒａｔｏｒ Joined: Mar 2001 Posts: 6,968 May 16, 2005, 11:03 AM #22
Nice style. It would be a good idea to use more than one face variation though.

LittleFreak JCF Member Joined: May 2004 Posts: 4,190 May 16, 2005, 11:56 AM #25
That's a lie! =P __________________ Sober again. Still love it.

NaT JCF Member Joined: May 2005 Posts: 205 May 16, 2005, 12:18 PM #26
More Well then i will draw another one a better one!!! Anyway here are some more faces!!! the SCARYEST!!!! and the UGLYEST!!! Plese tell me, do they look thesame???

cooba JCF Veteran Joined: Jan 2004 Posts: 7,823 May 16, 2005, 01:02 PM #28
Heh, your style seems to work a lot better than it seemed to be. Keep on making pictures, and try to use more colors than green and gray. __________________ Mystic Legends http://www.mysticlegends.org/ The Price of Admission - Hoarfrost Hollow - Sacrosanct - other - stuff

NaT JCF Member Joined: May 2005 Posts: 205 May 17, 2005, 11:54 AM #34
Well you asked for proof!!!! __________________ Had to change my sig couse of "Link" Titan! thats my DevArt avatar!

Hareoic JCF Member Joined: Jul 2001 Posts: 2,578 May 17, 2005, 03:44 PM #35
I can't find anything to criticize, since I'm not much of an artist anyway. __________________ But perhaps the most likely reason of all, was that his bombs were simply two sizes too small

NaT JCF Member Joined: May 2005 Posts: 205 May 18, 2005, 09:30 PM #40
Well I guess ,sorry!!! __________________ Had to change my sig couse of "Link" Titan! thats my DevArt avatar!

Jazz Jackrabbit 2 Online

Since nobody seems to want to comment on my art on DA anymore...