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Nemesis

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Nov 4, 2002, 02:10 AM
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More sketchy stuff

http://www.pencilpen.com/artists/Nem...deportrait.jpg

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Nov 4, 2002, 02:59 AM
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The style is really cool, thought the hair (at least i think he has), is hard to see.
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Nov 4, 2002, 03:11 AM
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He's a skinhead. No hair.
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Nov 4, 2002, 12:15 PM
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Come on, I know you all love me.
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No need to speak
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Carry out this wish for me let nothing interfere

Rise to submission
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Discard your clothes
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We're intertwined forever and have always been
Say the word
And I'll depart
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And so comes the dark
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Nov 4, 2002, 02:39 PM
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I love the style.
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Nice... an impressionistic style, light on a dark background. Something not many people try. Very nice indeed.
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Nov 5, 2002, 10:24 PM
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Funny how many replies I don't get.

Meh. Guess I really made myself hated.

Thanks for the comments, anyhow.
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Sorry for not commenting earlier. >.>;

As I told you when you showed it to me, looks good. The etchy-sketchy style is still very appealing to me. The red gives it sharpness and the white makes it 'pop', so to speak.

I'm going to go photograph the rare sunrise I see now. Keep up the good work. ^-^

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WHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO,
GO IMPRESSIONISTIC-STUFF!!!!!!

LUVIT!^-^
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Nov 6, 2002, 05:58 AM
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Having no comments does not mean they hate you.
Having no comments means no crits. That should make you happy.
Please, don't become a comment ho. People are just stupid and don't post about art unless they are crits, suckups, or want you to draw them :P
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Nov 6, 2002, 07:03 AM
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Lol.
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lol i luv ur art nem plz draw mor!11!!11!!!!1!!!!!!1!

You don't want comments like that, right? :-)
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Nov 6, 2002, 11:48 AM
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Very true. Oops.

I'd like more criticism. I know there's something wrong with it. But I can't find anything wrong with it alone.

I know having no comments doesn't mean they hate me. I didn't mean that. I meant that I'm really not on peoples good sides in this community very much. Because I'm good at ****ing people off.

It's also that I'm not a girl. So I expected Wild to get more comments on her art than on mine.

Somebody atleast TRY to crit my art. I'm too used to having my work destroyed with criticism. It's not a BAD thing. But I don't wanna feel like I've reached my limit.

Or have I? In which case I'll move off human anatomy and onto animals or something.

But yes, I'm not a girl, so there are naturally not as many comments. I know that part.

Next time I'll write "Criticism welcome, but make it good, because I don't want useless comments." and see how much criticism I get. It doesn't hurt to post my art here, of course, so I won't stop posting art.
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Let me taste
Let me feel
I need to know what you keep inside
No need to speak
Just let it be
Carry out this wish for me let nothing interfere

Rise to submission
I'm still beneath in the soil

Discard your clothes
Let loose you hair
We're intertwined forever and have always been
Say the word
And I'll depart
Upon your lips dwells nothing but the meaning of my cause

And so comes the dark
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Flowers already withered
In this endless winter of souls

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Nov 6, 2002, 11:56 AM
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First off, gender is no excuse. Two of Ducky's threads got only 15. One of mine got 7.
It's all in presence, man.

And on to the crits.

Something about the ear seems off. And the neck is too thin, unless you were going for this exact look. If so, then it is perfectly what you plotted it to be.
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Nov 6, 2002, 12:07 PM
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Thankyou for the crits.
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Rise to submission
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Discard your clothes
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We're intertwined forever and have always been
Say the word
And I'll depart
Upon your lips dwells nothing but the meaning of my cause

And so comes the dark
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Flowers already withered
In this endless winter of souls

Opeth - By the Pain I see in Others
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