-Introduction-

Once upon a time, there where a temple, defended by a shield that had the power of all guardians.
Inside this temple there where a huge powerfull crystal that had power to even destroy planets.
This crystal was guarded by 4 guardians, guardian of air, earth, fire, and water.


-On the rock belt of the planet of the death shadows

"Uh, was it this one our lord wanted, or this?" Said the skeleton
"No, it where that big dark rock there, see, it's more dark than any other of choose rocks" Said the other skeleton
They jumped over on another rock and pulled a crystal on it.
"If he screwed up the warp target we're dead" Said the first skeleton.
"We ARE already dead you foo" Said the second skeleton.
A flash appeared and both the skeletons and the dark rock warped away.
They warped into a temple with blood on the floor.
"Finaly, I have the rock of darkness" Said a voice.
Some red eyes glowed in the darkness, a dark sith lord stepped out from the shadows.
He broke a little picie of the rock and throwed it on one of the dark knights that guarded him.
The dark knight where warped into the little picie.
"It works, now go, go my slaves, catch evry guardian in the universe and bring them to me"
He straighted his hand out, blue lightings hitted the dark rock, it crashed to a lot of small picies.
One after one a skeleton came in and collected a picie of the dark rock.


-25 years later, carrotus.

An angel where talking to a wolf.
"Zarch, you'r the last guardian left, you must cancel the war between turtles and wolfs, we must not loose you" Said the Angel
"I'm guardian of wolfs, I must protect them, I cannot leave the planet before the war is over" Said Zarch
"Oh well, watch out, the dark shadow lord could have spys here" Said the Angel and away.
Zarch climped up on his horse and ridded in front of a wolf army.
In front of them where an army of turtles, leaded by Shellieon and Devan.
The two armys began ride to each other.
The war had began.
Devan and Shellieon rided up to Zarch.
Zarch drew his sword but too late.
Shellieon and Devan turned into deamons.
"Whaha little guardian, the great shadow lord gave us ability to morph into deamons, the only cost where catch you" Said Shellion with an evil grin.
"Sir, what's happending?" Said a wolf that just came riding.
"Take care of my son Moonblaze, please, now he will be all alone" Said Zarch.
The deamons lifted Zarch up and pulled a rock on him.
He where warped into the rock.


-By the temple of guardians

"Now I will take my finaly form, as the dark shadow lord, and break into the temple for crush the guardians" Said the dark sith lord.
He morped into a giant shadow with red glowing eyes.
"I am the lord of shadows you silly guardians, repair to die, I will rule the universe" Said he.
The dark shadow began to fly over to the temple.
The 4 guardians stood there, watching him.
"That was the end, now the universe will go under, sorry" Said the guardian of water.
"Can it be true, I feel a little power left in the shield" Said the guardian of air.
In the moment the dark shadow lord hitted the shield, a blue lighting pulled him back with great force.
On carrotus, little Moonblaze yelled of pain.
"I will find the last guardian and destroy him, he will pray for that he did" Said the dark Shadow Lord.







Chapter 1


Scary Sarry landed on the ground and knocked on the little tree door.
A little blue wolf looking rabbit opended the door and greet the vaccum welcome.
"Hello Blazeyman" Said Scary Sarry smiling.
"As usual, right there to dinner time" Anwsered the rabbit.
The rabbit wented back, Scary Sarry folowed him.
She walked in a small tunnel that ended in a little kind of house.
A small fireplace was on fire in a corner, there was a small pot over the fireplace.
In the other side of the room there where a little bed, and in middle of the room there where a table with 2 chairs.
The rabbit lifted the pot from the fireplace and placed it on the table, there was casserole in the pot.
The rabbit shared the casserole in 2 bowls and took place by the table.
Scary Sarry hitted her head on the cealing before she took place by the too.
While the rabbit ate his food normal, Scary Sarry ate it in some few seconds.
When the rabbit was finished with eat his food, Scary Sarry pulled him up of the trip until they where outside again.
"Common Moonblaze, let's find some bad guys to punish" Said she.
Moonblaze folowed Scary Sarry in the deep forest.
"We should not walk in direction of the center of the forest" Said Moonblaze.
A bush shaked and a black deamon flew out and grapped Moonblaze at the way.
"Blazey! Hey you, come back with him! He's not your stew!" Yelled she after it.
Moonblaze tried folow the way, hour after hour they fly, until he fell asleep.
When he wake up he was on a little sily bed builded on rocks.
He looked around in the room and found out that he was in a little jail room.
There was a window, but infact from humans Moonblaze where pretty low, so he'd need to climp.
When he looked thought the window, he where looking out in a huge prison, down on the ground, hundred of rabbits where working on a kind of big weapon.
There where turtle guards around in the prison with whips, they whiped rabbits when they slowed down.
Moonblaze heard somebody came walking thought the jail gangway.
A turtle opened his jail and grapped him in his neck and pulled him out on the jail ground.
It was a hard work, Moonblaze's job where lifting metal around, but he wasen't really strong, so he slowed down a lot of times.
A rain begin falling.
After some hours Moonblaze's body begin to shake, he fall on his knees and lost the metal he was carring.
He feel the pain in his body when the whip hitted his back.
He heard the sound of a helicopter, the rabbits begin to yell.
Moonblaze looked up on the chopper and saw rabbits with blasters jumped out of it.
A rabbit shot the turtle there whiped Moonblaze.
At the top of the jail building a turtle with glasses was giving orders to aim on the chopper with a huge cannon.
A turtle fired a missle with the cannon in direction of the chopper.
Moonblaze's eye color went glowing, the time stopped, evrybody and evrything froze.
Moonblaze straighted his arm out and wispered some strange words. The missle flashed and disappered.
The time beginned again and evrybody beginned moving again.
The turtle with glasses went angry.
Even down on the jail ground they could hear him yell.
"WHO DID THAT? JUST CATCH IT TO ME!" Yelled the turtle with glasses.
The chopper fired a missle on the jail wall, a big hole was blasted in the wall.
The rabbits begin run out, Moonblaze fell on the way, he feel step after step on his back until he fainted.

Please!
Take me!!!!
I want to be Piccolo,the WoopyDoopy-strong warrior!
No other info required!

Grammar still needs work, and it's kind of hard to understand. But, assuming I can tell what's going on, I guess I like it.

Hey Unknown Rabbit, I'm missing some bad guys, what about you?

...Scary Sarry said smiling...
...the rabbit answered...
...went...followed...

Sorry,too much!

I'm sorry, but I really like the way you write, Moonblaze. Lol! It reminds me a lil of Slayie. Where are you from?

So cool..

Yes! I am the evil one who, in a deep and penetrating voice, points out grammar errors. And my pants are fuschia.

My friend Mike wears bright yellow pants.
But man! those are cooler.


Mooooooonblazeh. Continue.

Sorry for it took so long time, but I had a lot of stuff to do.
Ducky, you'r welcome to have a charather in my story, just gimme some details.


Chapter 2


Moonblaze wake up by someone where shaking his body.
"Wake up sleepy" Said the red female rabbit there where shaking his body.
She had a red and yellow fur and clear yellow eyes.
"The nurse said your health is okay again" Said the rabbit.
"Who're you?" Asked Moonblaze.
"My name is Goldy, I was in the prison too, but I wake up 2 days ago, you have sleep in 3 days" Said Goldy.
Moonblaze went up, he had white cloth on.
He was in a room with many beds, some of them containing rabbits, it had to be a hostpital room.
"Wanna be friends?" Asked Goldy.
"Sure, but where am I?" Anwsered Moonblaze.
"At Carrotus's castle ofcurse, Jazz Jackrabbit saved you, he's our king" Said Goldy.
"Let's spy their meeting, common, it'll be fun" Said Goldy.
"Why should we spy their meeting?" Said Moonblaze.
"So we know what's going on ofcurse" Said Goldy.
"Okay" Said Moonblaze.
They went out from the room, Goldy knew the castle and folowed Moonblaze to a door by a huge room where there where a lot of rabbits by a large table, at the end of the table, Jazz Jackrabbit, a red male rabbit, a blue female rabbit was sitting.
"The red rabbit beside kind Jazz is his brother Spaz, and the blue female rabbit is Queen Eva." Explained Goldy.
They listended to the disguissing.
"Devan has still some rabbit prisons left, he may not get his planet destroyer weapon build"
"But annoy him will lead to war"
"What do you want, Carrotus ruined or a war?"
"There's a point in that"
"Our plans had nearly crashed when Devan fired that missle"
"Now what are you two during there?" Said a voice behind Moonblaze and Goldy.
Moonblaze and Goldy turned fast around, a yellow female rabbit where standing and looking at them.
"Hello Lori, how yea feel?" Said Goldy.
Lori pulled Moonblaze and Goldy into the room.
"Rabbits, do you two know anything about what happended in the prison?" Said Jazz.
"Erm..no, sorry my king" Said Goldy.
"I do" Said Moonblaze.
"Always say my king, fool" Whispered Goldy to Moonblaze.
"What do you know rabbit?" Said Jazz.
"First of all, my name's Moonblaze, not rabbit, and why should I tell you?" Said Moonblaze annoyid.
Goldy kicked Moonblaze.
"You do respect him now" Whispered Goldy.
Jazz laughed.
"Okay Moonblaze, sorry, what do you know? We need to know" Said Jazz.
"I was standing and watching the missle, then the time stopped, evrything froze, I straighted my hand out, the missle flashed away, and things came normal again." Said Moonblaze.
Jazz now looked at Moonblaze with a respectfull look.
"Okay, you two can go now" Said Jazz.
Goldy and Moonblaze walked out of the room.
"I think it'll be a good idea if I show you the castle's garden now so we can speak without people listing on us" Said Goldy.
"Erm...okay" Said Moonblaze.
Goldy folowed Moonblaze out in the castle's garden, there where a lot of flowers, trees, and giant carrots.
"Is that true, Moonblaze?" asked Goldy.
"Of course!" said Moonblaze, indignantly. "Why should I lie?"
There was a rustling sound, and a bush next to them shook.
"So, this is the rabbit with great magical powers." said a voice.
A rabbit with a cloak jumped out from the bush.
"Moonblaze, run, it's Unknown Rabbit, he works for Devan!" yelled Goldy.
She begin runing, but Moonblaze stood his ground, and glared at Unknown Rabbit.
"Ah, you're not afraid, good. That way I don't need to hunt you." said Unknown Rabbit, with a evil grin.
Moonblaze slashed Unknown Rabbit with his claws.
"I've seen sleeping babies with more fight then you" said Unknown Rabbit scornfully, then disappeared before they could stop him.
"Moonblaze, behind you!" yelled Goldy, pointing.
Moonblaze didn't get a chance to turn around before Unknown Rabbit knocked him out.
"No, you can't do that!" yelled Goldy, angrily.
Goldy began to run over to Unknown Rabbit, but in the brief space of a few seconds, Unknown Rabbit had bound Moonblaze with chains.
Before Goldy could reach the two, Unknown Rabbit had grabbed Moonblaze and ran away.

Let's do the Kirby!
I still didn't appear!
So,the story is quite cool,still,but I liked the first part better.
Dunno why!
Except it!

"Is that true, Moonblaze?" asked Goldy.
"Of course!" said Moonblaze, indignantly. "Why should I lie?"
There was a rustling sound, and a bush next to them shook.
"So, this is the rabbit with great magical powers." said a voice.
A rabbit with a cloak jumped out from the bush.
"Moonblaze, run, it's Unknown Rabbit, he works for Devan!" yelled Goldy.
She begin runing, but Moonblaze stood his ground, and glared at Unknown Rabbit.
"Ah, you're not afraid, good. That way I don't need to hunt you." said Unknown Rabbit, with a evil grin.
Moonblaze slashed Unknown Rabbit with his claws.
"(Sentence Nonsensical, completely rewritten): I've seen sleeping babies with more fight then you" said Unknown Rabbit scornfully, then disappeared before they could stop him.
"Moonblaze, behind you!" yelled Goldy, pointing.
Moonblaze didn't get a chance to turn around before Unknown Rabbit knocked him out.
"No, you can't do that!" yelled Goldy, angrily.
Goldy began to run over to Unknown Rabbit, but in the brief space of a few seconds, Unknown Rabbit had bound Moonblaze with chains.
Before Goldy could reach the two, Unknown Rabbit had grabbed Moonblaze and ran away.

Thanks Unknown Rabbit, people!
Do that some more.

I could REALLY?

Oh but I better not. But thank you.
SHWEEET continuations.

`Ducky

EEEP! LET ME IN! My profile's in the everybody's characters topic

Que Passa!!!!

Same here, if it's not too late!

Whoa, Batty Buddy's role will mattach PERFECT, I have great plans for him.
And to JediGrath, I can't offer more than a role as an enemy.
We'll see how it will move along in the next chapter.

So he'll be a Sithgrath?

Que Passa!!!!

"Righty-O!"
-Felix the Cat(The wonderful, wonderful cat.)

WOW! -REALLY? Then I guess, count me in.

"Sometimes great things come in small packages...

Other times, small packages only assume that they're great things..."
-Myo's Prolouge
Myo Tiss(A subcatagory of Snooze and Mat.)

Hurry with my appearance ;D!

Include me or be killed by many angered squirells!

I have an idea - not ALL of the prisoners escaped, right? WELL, What if I was one of the prisoners still in that place?

What about Devan brainwashing a good guy so he will fight the other good guys?
Idea?

AND what about a turtle on the good side???
Now THAT'S an idea!!!
Am I posting too much?

First of all, I don't take requests, so stop giving idea's, I won't take them.
I've been a lot busy in the moment, I might write chapter 3 today, but I can't promish anything yet.

Well,excuse us for trying to be helpful...

I claim my own tread, ha!
Sorry becuse I have been a little late, but here it goes.
Ups, I exactelly posted this chapter in evryone's charather




Chapter 3


Moonblaze woke up, he was chained to a metal board.
Turtles was walking evrywhere, he was in a kind of lab.
A lot of wires was bound to his body, they was linking to a black rabbit.
It looked completely like himself, just except for the fur was black.
"Now don't screw it up" Said Devan.
Some turtles began to pull a wheel around.
Slowly the electricity began to load up in a genarator, after a while, the genarator was full charged up.
Devan pulled a buttom, Moonblaze folow the electricity move from the generator and in the wires.
A few seconds after, the electricity began to charge around in Moonblaze body.
Moonblaze yelled of pain, the black rabbit's fur began to turn blue slowly.
Unknown Rabbit standed beside Devan and enjoyid it like it all was a fun horror movie.
The electricity stopped when the rabbit's fur was completely blue.
"Finaly, now give the clone life" ordered Devan some turtles.
Devan switched some wires, and the turtles began pulling the wheel around again.
The electricity loaded in the clone's body.
After a while, it stopped, and the clone began to wake.
"My creation, my preasure, I'll call him Zypher" said Devan glad.
"What with the real thing, Devan?" asked Unknown Rabbit with an evil look on Moonblaze.
"Ah, you can have to kill it" Anwsered Devan.
Unknown Rabbit drew a sword, began walking over to Moonblaze with an evil grin.
"Here ends your life loser" Said he.
He straighted the sword over Moonblaze's chest.
A scream sounded.
"Oh no, not him again" Said Unknown Rabbit and left the sword on the floor.
He draw his gun, Moonblaze saw a bat coming flying.
Unknown Rabbit fired some shoots after it, but missed.
The bat landed in Unknown Rabbit's face so he fall on the floor.
"Que Passa!!!!" Yelled the bat to Devan.
"Why can't you leave me, erm...Batty Buddy?" Said Devan angry.
"I'll pass you out, don't touch innocent rabbits" Anwsered Batty Buddy.
Batty Buddy cutted the chains on Moonblaze over and began fighting the turtle guards.
"Run rabbit, run" Yelled Batty Buddy to Moonblaze.
Moonblaze looked around and saw a large door in the other end of the room.
He began run in dirrection of it.
Devan releashed Zhyper and ordered it to catch Moonblaze.
Zhyper was faster than Moonblaze and jumped in front of Moonblaze.
"Are you already leaving? You'r like a family for me" Said Zhyper with an evil laugh.
He straighted his hand out, Moonblaze blow back.
"There's a different between us, I know how to use your powers, while you'r just a little creap that dosen't know anything" said Zhyper.
Moonblaze saw flashes of the past, of himself as child floating up with green aura around him.
He saw flashes of a male wolf being killed by Shellieon.
"My father.." Whispered Moonblaze.
"I will not give up" Said Moonblaze.
He straighted his hand out, and now Zhyper blow away.
Moonblaze ran to the door and opended it.
He heard Batty Buddy yell behind him "Que Passa, wait for moi!"
Batty Buddy came flying, both Moonblaze and Batty Buddy went out of the door and closed it behind them.
They where in another room, there was a lava pool in the middle of the room and a tupe over it.
"That tube leads up, hole the way out from Devan's not to well hidden lab, let me lift you out" Said Batty Buddy and grapped Moonblaze.
They flew up in the tube, after a while they where out, and on the top of the lab.
"Que Passa!, find your way home lil' wolf" Said Batty Buddy and flew away.
Moonblaze jumped down from the lab's roof.
Someone grapped him from behind, it was Unknown Rabbit.
"Hehe, you'r not going away from here alive" Said Unknown Rabbit with an evil grin.
He turned around and stared at Unknown Rabbit.
"Are this a staring contest?" Said Unknown Rabbit.
Moonblaze straigthed his hand out and Unknown Rabbit blow away.
He landed up on the roof.
Moonblaze went normal again and ran away.
"I'll get you a day" Yelled Unknown Rabbit after Moonblaze.



Uh oh, seens like Moonblaze has began learning using his powers...*Dumdroll*
To be resumed, in a War tavern near you

I hate being bad! and Quo-Avek totally ruined me in the legend of the Mystic Ba'orgtite emerald by having me be evil. Why cant I be good?

Okay, lemme get things clear, you and picolo seens to plan the next part of the story, I said stop there.
That's not being helpfull, that's ruling.
Next of all, you'll have to wait then, until the part where Moonblaze is warped into furuture where Unhit will be

I haven't read the story, but it sounds good anyway.

LOL!
Batty Buddy!!!
Cool!
But I'm still not in!
*sigh*

Great story man!! Man, that is pure humor. Especially when Batty comes, whooho!! Go on man, it's great!!!

Que Passa!!!!

YAHOO!!! Great story- can't wait for more...

"Vah! Denuone latine loquebar? Me ineptum. Interdum modo elabitur."
-Belle Acitavac
Sue and Louie

Ah, here's the Fourth one, have fun.

Chapter 4


Moonblaze ran for a long time until he came to a forest. The trees were not quite normal, he noted, indeed, they were growing in all angles imaginable and a few others as well.
There was a old sign laying on the ground, but some leafs that had fallen from a bush covered the text.
Moonblaze pushed the leafs away impatiently, and read the sign. "Mystic Forest".
Moonblaze, after some searching, located a road going through the forest, which he followed. Soon, he came to a waterfall, with water splashing down into a little lake. He kneeled down to drink some water.
The peace was short lived, however, as Moonblaze then heard something behind some bushes. He walked over to them, and drew them apart so he could see what was on the other side.
He saw a male human, wearing a brown robe, a white-grey chemise and brown boots.
The human and a green rabbit that was wearing a black t-shirt, and black trousers, were fighting with lightsabers. The green rabbit seemed hardpressed. Moonblaze knew that rabbits should stick together, so he jumped out from the bushes, avoiding any thorns that wished to poke him, and attacked the human with his claws.
However, the human was fast, Moonblaze noted, as he was lifted a few feet off the ground by his chin.
"Hey, Piccolo, look what I found!" said the human.
Moonblaze bit the human's hand so he let go.
"Easy now, we won't hurt you" said the human, as Moonblaze landed on the ground painfully.
"But.... you were attacking that rabbit!" protested Moonblaze, completely confused.
"Just call me Piccolo. 'Rabbit' is so undignified. Anyway, we're training, this human is Unhit, a powerful Jedi knight, who also happens to be my master." said the rabbit, proudly.
"The best place to train in the ways of the force, without being hunted by Sith lords, is here in the Mystic Forest, they don't really know anything about this planet" said Unhit, helping Moonblaze to his feet. "Come with us, we're finished now anyway, and you must be hungry, you couldn't have gotten here without walking quite a way. You live with the other rabbits, right?"
"Yes, but I'm lost´" Said Moonblaze.
"So what's your name, anyway?" asked Piccolo.
"Moonblaze" anwsered Moonblaze, simply.
Unhit walked away, Picolo and Moonblaze following.
"You're pretty small, aren't you?" asked Piccolo, with good reason. Unhit and himself were at least a foot taller then Moonblaze.
Moonblaze glared at Piccolo, annoyed.
"How old are you, anyway?" asked Unhit.
"Erm...13 years old" answered Moonblaze.
"Ha! A lil' kid" said Piccolo, scornfully.
"Aw, shut up." muttered Moonblaze.
Suddenly, a large balrog appeared from some trees, Unknown Rabbit leading him along. "Moonblaze again." said Unknown Rabbit, scornfully. "I see you've aquired some Friends since we last met. Balrog, get those Jedi!"
But before the balrog could attack, Moonblaze jumped in front of the Balrog and swiped at its eyes. The Balrog yelped and ran away, as Moonblaze glared triumphantly after it.
"You have no power here, go!" cried Piccolo, igniting his lightsaber for emphasis.
"I'll be back with my Balrog later, and you won't get away so easily then!" cried Unknown Rabbit, then ran in persuit of the fleeing balrog.
"Heh, I think he's right, Moonblaze, they'll be prepared for you next time." said Piccolo, moderately worried. "But don't worry, we can take care of them."
"I don't like it, he might have been sent by someone." said Unhit.
There were no further attacks, and the three soon came to a house built in a tree, Unhit waved his hand, and a ladder dropped down, which they climbed.
Piccolo and Unhit showed Moonblaze a small box hidden under the floorboards, and stored their lightsabers in it, to prevent easy theivery.
"So we meet again, Unhit." said a sinister voice from a dark corner. "But this time the advantage is mine!"
A hand waved from the shadows, and the hidden box exploded out from the floorboards, and landed in the outstretched palm of the newcomer.
"Looking for this?" laughed the voice, as a dark robed figure stepped into the light. "Ah, you got a new pet on your team, Unhit. I should introduce myself, then. I am CelL, the greatest Sith lord ever´ said CelL.
"He's still dreaming´" whispered Unhit to Piccolo and Moonblaze, assuredly.
"Shut up, you!" cried CelL, glaring his red eyes at Unhit. "Never FoRget that it is I who rules here, and not you!´
Moonblaze rolled his eyes. "Even Unknown Rabbit was more scary than you." he said.
"Oh, so you have met my new assistant?" asked CelL. Then laughing, he flung his arms wide, not noticing the box with the lightsabers went flying into Unhit's hand, which had been ready to catch it.
"Let the force remain in darkness, and crush this pitiful abode" cried CelL.
The tree began to shake menacingly, and Unhit grabbed the other two and leaped from the shuddering treehouse. When they landed on earth, Unknown Rabbit and the balrog came running. The balrog whimpered when it saw Moonblaze, but Unknown Rabbit slapped it, and it kept going.
"Piccolo, you take care of Unknown Rabbit, I'll take CelL, Moonblaze, take the Balrog." Said Unhit.
There was an explosion from above, and as shards of the treehouse went flying in every direction, CelL flew down to the ground, robes billowing out, and alighted gently.
"The time has come," the Sith lord said, "to fight with many things." Unhit handed Piccolo his lightsaber, as Unknown Rabbit took a red one from his belt. There was an electrical hiss as both lightsabers ignited, and the two began fighting.
Moonblaze felt something big hit him from behind, so he leaped onto the nearest tree, where he clung, straining to get higher, out of the reach of the blundering beast. The balrog came runing again.
Moonblaze reached the top of the tree, and stuck his tounge out in direction of the balrog, which was staring up in fury.
The balrog shook the tree, and Moonblaze jumped down, to land on its head.
"Smart Rabbit vs. stupid Balrog, second round. Ding!" said Moonblaze.

And you'll have to wait with the result of the great fight until next chapter.

Nice. Finally I am in !

Moonblaze ran for a long time until he came to a forest. The trees were not quite normal, he noted, indeed, they were growing in all angles imaginable and a few others as well.
There was a old sign laying on the ground, but some leafs that had fallen from a bush covered the text.
Moonblaze pushed the leafs away impatiently, and read the sign. "Mystic Forest".
Moonblaze, after some searching, located a road going through the forest, which he followed. Soon, he came to a waterfall, with water splashing down into a little lake. He kneeled down to drink some water.
The peace was short lived, however, as Moonblaze then heard something behind some bushes. He walked over to them, and drew them apart so he could see what was on the other side.
He saw a male human, wearing a brown robe, a white-grey chemise and brown boots.
The human and a green rabbit that was wearing a black t-shirt, and black trousers, were fighting with lightsabers. The green rabbit seemed hardpressed.
Moonblaze knew that rabbits should stick together, so he jumped out from the bushes, avoiding any thorns that wished to poke him, and attacked the human with his claws.
However, the human was fast, Moonblaze noted, as he was lifted a few feet off the ground by his chin.
"Hey, Piccolo, look what I found!" said the human.
Moonblaze bit the human's hand so he let go.
"Easy now, we won't hurt you" said the human, as Moonblaze landed on the ground painfully.
"But.... you were attacking that rabbit!" protested Moonblaze, completely confused.
"Just call me Piccolo. 'Rabbit' is so undignified. Anyway, we're training, this human is Unhit, a powerful Jedi knight, who also happens to be my master." said the rabbit, proudly.
"The best place to train in the ways of the force, without being hunted by Sith lords, is here in the Mystic Forest, they don't really know anything about this planet" said Unhit, helping Moonblaze to his feet. "Come with us, we're finished now anyway, and you must be hungry, you couldn't have gotten here without walking quite a way. You live with the other rabbits, right?"
"Yes, but I'm lost´" Said Moonblaze.
"So what's your name, anyway?" asked Piccolo.
"Moonblaze" anwsered Moonblaze, simply.
Unhit walked away, Picolo and Moonblaze following.
"You're pretty small, aren't you?" asked Piccolo, with good reason. Unhit and himself were at least a foot taller then Moonblaze.
Moonblaze glared at Piccolo, annoyed.
"How old are you, anyway?" asked Unhit.
"Erm...13 years old" answered Moonblaze.
"Ha! A lil' kid" said Piccolo, scornfully.
"Aw, shut up." muttered Moonblaze.
Suddenly, a large balrog appeared from some trees, Unknown Rabbit leading him along. "Moonblaze again." said Unknown Rabbit, scornfully. "I see you've aquired some Friends since we last met. Balrog, get those Jedi!"
But before the balrog could attack, Moonblaze jumped in front of the Balrog and swiped at its eyes. The Balrog yelped and ran away, as Moonblaze glared triumphantly after it.
"You have no power here, go!" cried Piccolo, igniting his lightsaber for emphasis.
"I'll be back with my Balrog later, and you won't get away so easily then!" cried Unknown Rabbit, then ran in persuit of the fleeing balrog.
"Heh, I think he's right, Moonblaze, they'll be prepared for you next time." said Piccolo, moderately worried. "But don't worry, we can take care of them."
"I don't like it, he might have been sent by someone." said Unhit.
There were no further attacks, and the three soon came to a house built in a tree, Unhit waved his hand, and a ladder dropped down, which they climbed.
Piccolo and Unhit showed Moonblaze a small box hidden under the floorboards, and stored their lightsabers in it, to prevent easy theivery.
"So we meet again, Unhit." said a sinister voice from a dark corner. "But this time the advantage is mine!"
A hand waved from the shadows, and the hidden box exploded out from the floorboards, and landed in the outstretched palm of the newcomer.
"Looking for this?" laughed the voice, as a dark robed figure stepped into the light. "Ah, you got a new pet on your team, Unhit. I should introduce myself, then. I am CelL-4, the greatest Sith lord ever´ said CelL.
"He's still dreaming´" whispered Unhit to Piccolo and Moonblaze, assuredly.
"Shut up, you!" cried CelL, glaring his red eyes at Unhit. "Never FoRget that it is I who rules here, and not you!´
Moonblaze rolled his eyes. "Even Unknown Rabbit was more scary than you." he said.
"Oh, so you have met my new assistant?" asked CelL. Then laughing, he flung his arms wide, not noticing the box with the lightsabers went flying into Unhit's hand, which had been ready to catch it.
"Let the force remain in darkness, and crush this pitiful abode" cried CelL.
The tree began to shake menacingly, and Unhit grabbed the other two and leaped from the shuddering treehouse. When they landed on earth, Unknown Rabbit and the balrog came running. The balrog whimpered when it saw Moonblaze, but Unknown Rabbit slapped it, and it kept going.
"Piccolo, you take care of Unknown Rabbit, I'll take CelL, Moonblaze, take the Balrog." Said Unhit.
There was an explosion from above, and as shards of the treehouse went flying in every direction, CelL flew down to the ground, robes billowing out, and alighted gently.
"The time has come," the Sith lord said, "to fight with many things."
Unhit handed Piccolo his lightsaber, as Unknown Rabbit took a red one from his belt. There was an electrical hiss as both lightsabers ignited, and the two began fighting.
Moonblaze felt something big hit him from behind, so he leaped onto the nearest tree, where he clung, straining to get higher, out of the reach of the blundering beast. The balrog came runing again.
Moonblaze reached the top of the tree, and stuck his tounge out in direction of the balrog, which was staring up in fury.
The balrog shook the tree, and Moonblaze jumped down, to land on its head.
"Smart Rabbit vs. stupid Balrog, second round. Ding!" said Moonblaze.

And you'll have to wait for the results of the great fight until the next "chapter".

Unknown Rabbit is know my offical grammar fixer.
Now do the same to the other chapters.

I can wait.

Tamtadadam... *waits fer next chapter*

I have added an Introduction to the first chapter, fixed some grammer, and named the story what it should be.

Good story, but DON'T YOU DRE ASK ME TO PUT ME IN YOUR STORY! I don't want to be seen with too much spelling errors around me.

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