ok. i'm gonna have a go at writing a story again. one thing people who want to be in it will help with the story.they will write a chapter from their characters point if view when i prompt them to. i'm allowing 4 people to join at first. enjoy.



Prologue



Are you ever actually lost? Do you really not know where you are? Or have you been their before? Do you know who you know? Do they know you? Is all you know real? Or is it fantasy? Are you sane? Or are you "lost" in your own mind? What is real and what isn't? What is reality as you know it? Memories? Feelings? Do those even exist? Think about where you are now. Are you even there? Or are you only fancy yourself there? Are you real or do you fancy yourself real? Who knows? Who knows...



I will read the profiles of all who post and will pick those that will be useful early on. if you don't get picked you may or may not come in later. till we meet again this is Tobias signing off...

I am willing to help. But I need alittle better of the perspective of what you are writing. Post chapter one. I need alittle better of a idea of what you are writing from.



Profile

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Name: Wild Angel



Species: Siegel Angel



Age: 17



Gender: Female



Nickname: Wildie or Wild



Looks: Black leather dress that is cut five inches over the knee. My fur is jet black, but I have hair in between my ears that looks like pure gold strands.



Items I always have : A platinum bladed broad sword with a gold hilt. It has my initials engraved into the blade. "Wild Angel"

I have a wand, which I can do everything and anything with.

A hunting knife with a silver blade. The hilt is a dragon with it's wings spread, and a emerald in it's mouth.



Orphan?: Yes



Why?: My parents where killed when I was just a baby by Devan Shell.



Past: I don't talk about it much, but when I was a baby, my mother died trying to protect me. Devan Shell took me and raised me as a soldier and a fighter. I was then trained to be something of his entertaining slave. I ran away when I was seventeen, or my current age. I carry a velvet covered journal that I write in every now and then. It has my memories of my worst days with Devan Shell. At age fourteen, Devan found out my telepathic powers, and treated me as a mage from then on.



Powers: I can create orbs with my hands. I am telepathic which means I can read peoples minds and memories.



Personality: I am pretty much sweet and loving all of the time. I hate Devan Shell, he is my mortal enemey. I try every chance to kill him. I am serious when needed, and very, very good in battle. I will protect any of my friends, and die for them.



Strength: 9/10



Skills: Running, climbing walls, I use walls to bouce off of *read my story*, swimming, fighting, riding horses, ect...*everything mainly*



Brothers and Sisters: One, GoldBones *but it is up to him to join *



Wot did I miss?

ok. nothing really long for chap one though. not much time...



Chapter 1

3 hours and 20 minutes till the Rip



Alone. I had been isolated for a year and a half now. The only one who still know's I'm alive is my friend Kazooie. No contact. This altitude is to low for any signal to reach in, but they can go out. It is so cold. All I have to do is moniter the balance of the 5 nearby systems and the one I'm in. It's so boring...



"Tobias an anomalies are appearing in all monitered systems." said the computer.



"Scan them alright?"



"Yes, Tobias."



I remember working on the disruptor that day. I remember alot of things. Since I've comeback here,but that'snot the story.



"Anomalies harmless. ETTI(estimated time till implosion) 3 hours. Ship detected."



"Friend or foe?"



"Unknown...unknown..unknown..un"



"Shutup already! Let me now if it lands."



"It is preparing to land. ETTL(estimated time till landing)20 minutes."



"Oh well. There goes working for today."



I left the moniter room and grabbed my cloak. It was time to find out who these visitors were. I headed out into the cold.



"Tobias, anomalies are changing."



If I only had been there for that none of what was to happen would have. If only...



TO BE CONTINUED...



Hope that helps.

Oooh, I love this type of story! I'll help, just don't anyone get mad at me if I mess up

I'll join Tobias! Just i hope i don't die like in ur other stories .

hehehhee. i need a profile ax.

I'll join



Name: Kovu Alec Easgi

Race: 12/16 Rabbit, 3/16 Gerenpfpssh, 1/16 Mystic

Fur: Brown

Hair: Black

Eyes: Green

Weapons: Silver Longsword, Gold Samurai Sword, Blaster

Clothes: Black jacket, black pants, a black cape and red shirt.

Powers: Slight manipulation of the time/space contiunum.

Personality: Cheery and optimistic on the outside, hiding a dark, serious interior.

Me!

kaz is the first party member. i'm assuming that's what you ment by and I quote "Me!" if not oh well your along for the ride anywho goodnight all

Oh wow...I wish I could, but I don't know...I'll leave it to you, if there is a place...I'd like to be in it..

siigh.

`Ducky

Kovu is the second.

ok. ducky and coppertop are 3rd and 4th. there are a total of 30 spaces throught this adventure. I hope. so keep posting if you'd like to be in it.



Chapter 2

3 hours till Rip



It was so cold that day. I was standing in it, waiting for a ship. An unknown ship at that. Then I saw it. The ship was descending to land about a mile away so I took off again. I arrived about 1 minute after it had landed. I didn't darego near it since it was still hot from entry. It wasn't as cold that close to the ship. I wondered who was in it. Around 30 minutes later the ship had cooled enough for me to touch it. It was seamless and a shiny white silver that matched the falling snow. It suddenly began to open so I back away. A figure stood framed in the opening.



"Tobias?"



"Who wants to know?"



I then saw it was Kaz Algo.



"Kaz? What the heck are you doing coming to this planet?"



"To see if you'd like a chance to get off of this ice cube."



"Oh."



"Kaz! Is Tobias out there?"



"Yeah, Kovu he's out there in the sub-zero temperature."



"Yikes!"



Kaz was pulled aside and Kovu Alec Easgi appeared in the doorway.



"Here Tobias let me help you into the ship."



Kovu pulled me on and I was able to see that there were two others besides Kaz and Kovu. One I knew was Ducky Greyrabbit the other I had never met.



"Nice to see you again Ducky."



"Hello again."



I turned back to Kaz and Kovu.



"Who's the new one?"



"That's Copper." Kovu told me.



"Ah." said I.



I turned around.



"Pleasure to meet you Copper."



"Nice to meet you too."



10 minutes till the Rip



We were back at my home, or hotel, it really depended on the time of year. It had been a nice few hours talking with old and new acquantinces, but it was time to get to the point.



"Alright, what's the real reason you came?"



"Well...." began Kaz.



"We were wondering if you'd like to go on another adeventure." finished Kovu.



"It figures."



"Tobias, anomalies are preparing to implode." shouted the computer.



"Ah, come along my friends. A fairly large event is about to take place. It happens every 9000 years." said I.



I led them to the moniter room and sudenly saw all the readouts on the new conditions of the anomalies.



"Oh crud.....HIT THE DECK!!"



TO BE CONTINUED....



To Ducky and Coppertop: Kaz and Kovu talked more due to the fact they've been in my stories before thus I know how towrite them, don't worry I'll be able to write your characters soon correctly I hope.



To all:

Hope you enjoyed chapter 2!

oh and you all don't have to write. just those I have witness something important.

I did...sob. How fabulous.

`Ducky

Hey, Tobias, m'profile's in the Thread started by Kiku. Please use the latest one



I don't mind writing, I look for'ard to it. . .

Do i witness something important !



anyway here my profile: Alter it to fit ur story

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Name: Ax Man



Looks: A Dark blue rabbit, with a deep scar under my left eye. If we are getting into esthicits i have deep green eyes. Very strong looking hands and a very deep gash on my shoulder from my battle with Govadon. I also have a chain mail and matching shield bearing a king's symbol (Mine is Aqruin but u can change it) I also wear a blood read cape that I stole from Govadon when I killed him.



Weapon: a magical sword called Govalan. The sword has a beautiflly engraved scabberd, with a picture of a dragon in flight. When Drawn the sword emits a purple light to show it's power. The handle of the sword has a picture of a king with a halo around his head...The following poem is engraved in the handle in ancient ruins:





The sword of power

The sword of strength

The sword to banish evil’s bane.



The one of legend

The one of truth

The king of all that walks



The wand is yours

But is not

Heed it careful

But never enough



The great lord shall return

From his tomb of stone

Once again to try and rule the world



To banish him is your right by birth

Heed it well it is a task of truth

For pure you must be

Or embrace yourself to it’s evil



For the sword heed’s by its emotion

When wielding it be true to your heart

And not your mind. For if so you shall truly die.



Until the day the sword is named

Heed it carefully, because you shall not know your birthright

Use it only for good not for evil,

Shall you become a service of the great lord

In his task to rule the world







Skills: Sword Fighting



Heritage: Comes from a long line of king's which was unoknown to him at birth. THe fight with Govadon and then with the Dark Shadow made him come to this realization to rule the land.



Powers: The Wand (See my story) has left a mark on him. If he thinks hard enough he can heal wounds. This takes extreme concentration and drains his own energy..nearly killing him.



Dark Powers: His sword has a mind of it's own, that convinces the handler to use it for dark purposes. It was made so only I can handle it properly, but even i have a problem with it. If you submit you will do\execute things that can drive a man to insanity. It will act off of the handlers darkest thoughts.



Brothers & Sisters: None...They were wiped out in an attempt by a neighbouring country to inherit the throne. That is why i was taken away from my kingdom.



Parents: Dead...They were wiped out in an attempt by a neighbouring country to inherit the throne. That is why i was taken away from my kingdom.



Foster Parent: Unowkn. He left me when i was old enough to fight, at the Aqruin gates.



Misc: I am usually a very serious man. The sword has left a mark on me. When asked about my kingdom, i alwasy reply "It was the past" I have been known to cast sarcastic jokes though. After battle it is best that i am left alone though. I usually mourn all of the Dead.

ax do you mind being evil? i need a bad guy

maybe..maybe not. Never been put in as a bad guy, always a first though. Would I get to sorta write a chapter from the evil prespective? Anyway I'll try it.

yes you would.

Hey, hey, hey, wot about me? *sobs*

I was a bad guy once...







`Ducky

don't worry wild angel. you'll be put in somewhere's

Continue!

give me one more day coppertop. i have homework!

Heheheh. Homework, eh? Not me. . .

ok, this ones short.



Chapter 3



Time of Rip



They only had a few seconds to react to Tobias's command but they all managed to throw themselves to the floor just as a universe shattering explosion rocked the room and planet. The anomalies change had made them directly connected to the dimensional barriers that keep every reality seperate. When they imploded they broke the barriers creating gaping holes. the 6 galaxys mentioned were effected and a new one added in the middle. That one is the only hope or heros have of setting everything back to the way it should be. The dimensions leaking into ourown include Evil, Spirit, Bone, Youth, Aqua, Dragon, and Order. Each member of the group gathered by fate represents one of them. Two are missing. The one of order must be found and the one of evil must be bound for the barriers to be put back into place. Thus begins....Rip Part One: Dragons Fire!



TO BE CONTINUED....



Featured in next chapter:

The state of the party members and the begining of an epic quest to save all that we know.

Yay Tooobias! At last. Ok it wasn't a long last, but whatever.

Thankyouthankyouthankyou, spiffy

`Ducky

Short, but however very spiffy and sufficent

Cool, now read my story! Heheh

Nifty Chappie.

Chapter 4



A.R.(after rip)Day 1



They had all felt the odd tingling sensation after the explosion, they just didn't know what it meant. It was around 5 minutes before anyone dared to move.



"What was that?", asked Ducky.



"That was the implosion of the anti-matter barriers holding back other dimensions!",said I.



"Meaning what?",asked Copper.



"Meaning quite possibly reality is seriously screwed up right now.", said I.



I got up anddusted myself off then noticed something very odd....my hands were tranlucent! I very slowly raised my eyes with an oh no to myself and say that everything had changed.



"You all might wanna get up and see this....", I said.



Slowly everyone got up and got a look at their surroundings. The moniter room had been nearly wiped out and the little that remained was displaying nonsense code. The normally frigid mountain the hotel was situated on was now a jungle of multi-colored trees and plants.



"What the?!", Kovu cried out.



Kovu had just then noticed that his hands and feet were webbed.



"Uh, I guess I forgot to mention something...", I said hoping not to get hurt, " when the dimensional barriers broke we were each connected to one and now we've all taken on the main characteristics of the dimension we were connected to....that's it."



Everyone began to look themselves over. Kaz had been turned into a small dragon that just barely reached anyone's shoulders. Copper had become nothing but a skeleton, dry bones that were bleached white. Kovu of course had gained webbed hands and feet. Ducky didn't look all that different, no one would know what she was connected to until 4 days later. I had become a spirit or ghost if you please.



"Oh my...", was the echoed cry.



"I'm afraid other will have been affected too. We need to see if we can fix this.", I said.



"How are we to get off the planet?",asked Kaz.



"The Same way you came here." I said.



A little later we were all back on the ship. Copper was still in a daze from what had happened so Ducky had hauled her to an onto the ship with Kovu's help. Kovu took the pilots seek and activated launch. 6 minutes later the streaked off into the sky carrying us with it.

Coppertop your up. write a section from your view just after the explosion to where the story leaves off.

Oh, my goodness. . . I'm a. . . skeleton?



Do I start a new chapter?. . .nevermind.



Chapter Five (?)



I was shocked. Was this a nightmare? It seemed like one. Lost in thought -and fear- I barely heard the voice that tried to penetrate my senses.

"Copper? Copper!" I snapped back to reality.

"D-Ducky?" My voice was nothing more than a spidery whisper, like the wind. A far cry from my former musical tones. Everyone else looked like they too were in shock, but not as badly. I tried to stifle a laugh when I saw Kaz.

"What happened?" asked I. Tobias explained swiftly. I winced slightly as I tried to stand. I found I couldn't for long, and sank back to the floor. This didn't make sense. I shivered and winced again. Everything hurt.

As I tried to organize my thoughts, a searing pain ripped across my forehead. I cried out, and for a moment I blacked out.



When I came to, I was not on the ship. There were trees all around, and fog drifted by, swirling around my feet. I was wearing a cloak that fell to my feet, and a cowl hid my face. My perspective was strange; I realized that I now stood taller than I ever had. I also realized that I was not awake. Or at least, I didn't think I was. I was filled with confusion. I could not think when I dreamed, yet I could not be here unless I was dreaming. . . The pain seared through my head again, and the mist shrouded forest faded away to black.



I opened my eyes. I was on the floor of the ship, that was right. But I still wore the hooded cloak of my dreams. Dreams, visions, hallucinations, call it what I would, I still had the whitish grey cloak, and glowing leaves were settled about my feet. An unexplainable terror surged through me, followed by a sense of pure rightness. I was what I should be. Yet I wasn't.

For the first time, I caught a glimpse of the "new" Tobias. When he had last spoken to me -that seemed like millennium ago- I had been so preoccupied I had not really looked at him. Now I did look at him- or rather, through him. He was translucent, which sent more fear through me. Was nothing normal?

"Tobias? W-what happened?" I had a strong sense of deja-vu. He looked as baffled as I felt.

"I don't know. You sort of disappeared for a minute, and Ducky called me. Then you were back, sort of materializing, and you were wearing that cloak." I felt a chill run up my spine.

"Well, what ever once wore this form was never Carrotan," said I, trying to make light of it. Tobias nodded.

I swayed slightly. The world was spinning; what was happening? I sighed softly, and then the ground rushed up at me as I collapsed and darkness took me. . .

Bravo!



(appluades)



(waves a translucent hand into the distance and disappears)



"Goodbye, I shall return another day for an adventure so grand it will end as all good things must, but they are never-ending for they always continue the heart and dreams of the heros and heroines. Through the foggy grayness of time the memories never will fade. I on the other hand shall."



Fades into complete invisiblity.

Yay t' th' both of ye

Good job, CT, and the same t' Tobias..

`Ducky

*bows* Thank you, thank you



Uh. . . (what was I gonna say? Oh yeah.) Hey Tobias, who's next?

providing I can contact kovu. him. after that kaz. then ducky(after 4 more days have passed in the story)



expect the next chap this weekend or the next. i have finals coming up

Weehheee, i wanna be after Ducky.

YaY! I look foward to the next part, Kove's got a reputation in stories

Thank ye

So, what I just write a chappie from my

prespective? Kewl...



Chapter Six



"I...I can't breathe!" A feeble phrase escaped my now beak like lips, my voice a perverted

distortion of what it once was. I sucked at the air, but it was empty. I collapsed to

the cold, mettalic floor. My world was but

a rush of confused color and sound. But then,

I felt something clamp about my neck. Something wet...wonderful.

My vision returned, and, satisfied that I wouldn't die, I began to ask about.

"What...is this?" I rubbed the metal collar.

"It's a water-pack, it'll pump oxygen into you're, ah...gills." A short, red dragon

hissed, as it hopped around.

"Who are you?" I asked it.

"Why...I'm Kazooie!" As I looked around,

I saw the vapory version of Tobias, the dragon, ofcourse, and a skeleton, which I

assumed was Coppertop.

And then there was Ducky, who appeared just

as before.

"Well this is peachy..." No sooner had I said this, when I saw Copper fall in a heap,

which was indeed a singular thing when concering a skeleton. We hovered around her, but were uncertain what to do, being,

y'know, having no organs and all. A moment

later she came to.

I sighed,

"What happened?" I inquired.

"I...don't know. There was this misty jungle place, and I was really tall..."

"Waitaminute..." Tobias pondered,

"...suppose, you were able to see what dimension we're in...that'd make it..."

"Aqua dimension." I said