Jazz Jackrabbit 2 Online

Another Jazz 2 fan · Jul 7, 2002, 01:06 PM

...I didn't read the whole thing again, but I noticed that "for to vote" was still there. That bugs me... get rid of the "for". It should just be "to vote....". Oh, and you should edit the original post and replace it with the edited version, rather than posting it later like you did.

Oh, and I claim page two.

AJ2f

Violet CLM · Jul 7, 2002, 02:05 PM

Try not to alternate between past and present tense. It looks bad. And the grammar (not just Yoda's) is kind of bad. But other then that, it's ok. (Though I've never been a big fan of the script format)

Flint LP · Jul 7, 2002, 07:43 PM

Hey unknown, Yodas Grammer is killer!

Like it I do!
Just for that Unh I will now call you unhi (you still have to earn that "t")
btw HAPPY BIRTHDAY EVILMIKE?
is it his b-day everyday or is something wrong?

Wild Angel · Jul 7, 2002, 07:48 PM

Argh, I did miss that, didn't I? *sighs*

`Wildie

Another Jazz 2 fan · Jul 7, 2002, 08:36 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Flint LP

btw HAPPY BIRTHDAY EVILMIKE?
is it his b-day everyday or is something wrong?

First off, I'd like to state that that is offtopic. Second off, it isn't his B-day, infact several people have been screwing around with the calendar for some unknown reason. Check this topic and this one, both started by me!

Unhit · Jul 7, 2002, 09:41 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Unknown Rabbit
Try not to alternate between past and present tense. It looks bad. And the grammar (not just Yoda's) is kind of bad. But other then that, it's ok. (Though I've never been a big fan of the script format)

I'm sorry for the grammar...but while writing this, I don't think much, I want to do it fast.
AJ2F: I did not re-upload because I was too lazy to add the tags.

Nm you forgot it Wildie. At least, you found all other errors. I love you

!

Fawriel · Jul 8, 2002, 05:38 AM

Don't tease our one and only Unhit,Unknown!
He's by far not as lazy as I am!

If I would have written it,it would be,say,30 lines long!

The grammars not that bad if you're not one of those english-speaking guys!

Spoken,I have!

Unhit · Jul 8, 2002, 06:43 AM

Thanks, Piccolo.

Btw, Ducky: aren't you ever on ICQ?

Wild Angel · Jul 8, 2002, 01:14 PM

She's never on ICQ. x.x

`Wildie

Another Jazz 2 fan · Jul 8, 2002, 01:52 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Piccolo
one of those english-speaking guys!

You're looking at one, buddy.
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Or, rather, reading words written by one, but it's the same thing.

Ducky · Jul 9, 2002, 12:53 PM

*gets hit in the face with a branch*

No, I'm never on ICQ ;P I'm trying to get it back but I have this artificial-sweetener like a crappy Trillian and things take so long to be sorted out. I'm trying to get it worked out before Sunday when I get shipped off to camp.

More, Unhit. ! And go see my Obi-Wan picture since you luff him too.

`Duckahh the uncooperative

Wild Angel · Jul 9, 2002, 01:21 PM

Heheh, yes! I want to talk to you on ICQ, Duckay. Yer awesome. ^.^

`Wildie the incorrect grammatical corrector

Unhit · Jul 9, 2002, 09:36 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Ducky
*gets hit in the face with a branch*

No, I'm never on ICQ ;P I'm trying to get it back but I have this artificial-sweetener like a crappy Trillian and things take so long to be sorted out. I'm trying to get it worked out before Sunday when I get shipped off to camp.

More, Unhit. ! And go see my Obi-Wan picture since you luff him too.

`Duckahh the uncooperative

At J2O? I tried it, but it did not load the whole pic...dunno why.
But it's nice

Wildie, you are the short poster. Nothing about grammar

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Flint LP · Jul 12, 2002, 10:06 AM

All riright Unhi, where is the net part, tis been a long time!

Unhit · Jul 12, 2002, 10:17 AM

Sorry, I was busy with school that week...

Ducky · Jul 12, 2002, 10:18 AM

Nah, that was the whole picture. Lol. ^.^

Anyway should you not be posting moooooore?

Unhit · Jul 12, 2002, 10:49 AM

I told ya I'm busy. Tomorrow prolly...

Wild Angel · Jul 22, 2002, 07:13 PM

I'll help... if you want me to. (Grammar/spelling wise) Though you have quite good English already.

`Widie, the short poster.

Unhit · Jul 22, 2002, 11:30 PM

OK. Fine. My holidays start on thursday, I will contact you then. Very nice. Thanks.

- Unhit, the even shorter poster.

White Rabbit · Jul 29, 2002, 04:27 AM

TOO MUCH OFF-TOPICNESS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ahem.

Er...
Anyway, I'm glad you fixed the story Unhit. It's even greater now but when is the new story coming? But Unhit, you could always send me your notes so I can write it out... J/k.

Unhit · Jul 29, 2002, 10:23 AM

Episode II is about 60% ready. I will probably finish it tomorrow.

White Rabbit · Jul 30, 2002, 12:03 AM

Ah.

Goody goodie good.

Ducky · Jul 30, 2002, 04:42 PM

Yay!! Hurry ^_^
Maybe I'll give you my brother's icq # so you can talk to me.(I took it over while he's gone. I suck ;P)

Unhit · Jul 31, 2002, 11:00 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by Ducky
Yay!! Hurry ^_^
Maybe I'll give you my brother's icq # so you can talk to me.(I took it over while he's gone. I suck ;P)

Violet CLM JCF Éminence Grise Joined: Mar 2001 Posts: 10,994 Jul 7, 2002, 02:05 PM #42
Try not to alternate between past and present tense. It looks bad. And the grammar (not just Yoda's) is kind of bad. But other then that, it's ok. (Though I've never been a big fan of the script format) __________________

Flint LP JCF Member Joined: Mar 2002 Posts: 376 Jul 7, 2002, 07:43 PM #43
Hey unknown, Yodas Grammer is killer! Like it I do! Just for that Unh I will now call you unhi (you still have to earn that "t") btw HAPPY BIRTHDAY EVILMIKE? is it his b-day everyday or is something wrong? __________________ Flint LP out this seemed fitting, once again: I AM GHENGIS KHAN! Jazz2online owns the world!

Wild Angel JCF Member Joined: Jan 2001 Posts: 3,532 Jul 7, 2002, 07:48 PM #44
Argh, I did miss that, didn't I? sighs `Wildie __________________ <center><a href="http://www.livejournal.com/users/wildi/"><img src="http://img.free.idleserv.net/951kf3.jpg" border="0"></a> <font size=1> [blue penguins - livejournal]</center>

Fawriel JCF Éminence Grise Joined: May 2002 Posts: 11,990 Jul 8, 2002, 05:38 AM #47
Don't tease our one and only Unhit,Unknown! He's by far not as lazy as I am! If I would have written it,it would be,say,30 lines long! The grammars not that bad if you're not one of those english-speaking guys! Spoken,I have! __________________

Unhit Pornocrat Joined: Nov 2001 Posts: 3,771 Jul 8, 2002, 06:43 AM #48
Thanks, Piccolo. Btw, Ducky: aren't you ever on ICQ? __________________ <center>somebody holds the key</center>

Wild Angel JCF Member Joined: Jan 2001 Posts: 3,532 Jul 8, 2002, 01:14 PM #49
She's never on ICQ. x.x `Wildie __________________ <center><a href="http://www.livejournal.com/users/wildi/"><img src="http://img.free.idleserv.net/951kf3.jpg" border="0"></a> <font size=1> [blue penguins - livejournal]</center>

Ducky JCF Member Joined: Jan 2001 Posts: 2,257 Jul 12, 2002, 10:18 AM #56
Nah, that was the whole picture. Lol. ^.^ Anyway should you not be posting moooooore? __________________ remember? (:

Unhit Pornocrat Joined: Nov 2001 Posts: 3,771 Jul 12, 2002, 10:49 AM #57
I told ya I'm busy. Tomorrow prolly... __________________ <center>somebody holds the key</center>

White Rabbit JCF Member Joined: Aug 2001 Posts: 4,478 Jul 29, 2002, 04:27 AM #60
TOO MUCH OFF-TOPICNESS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Ahem. Er... Anyway, I'm glad you fixed the story Unhit. It's even greater now but when is the new story coming? But Unhit, you could always send me your notes so I can write it out... J/k.

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