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so you thought i'd never pick up a pencil again, hmm??

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/1210785

If you look in perspective, I know, since I'm going to get crits for this not mistake sortof thing-- her eye on the left in a front facial perspective, or on the paper, on the right, is suppose to be lower. Don't worry about it. Anyways.. crits, comments?

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It's awesome, really. I like it.

Only thing is, and I've noticed this before, you're noses - they look kind of swollen or something. I don't know what it is.
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Noses= extreeeeeeeeeeeemely hard to do. *gripes* I'm trying, I really am... The line on the uhh, right, does make it look big, doesn't it??? *glares at it sitting on her desk* Yes... it does...
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Que Passa!!!!

Noses ARE hard. However, I don't really see anything wrong with that nose in particular...
...Tell you the truth, my uncle has a nose like that.
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I dunno, the eye doesn't look TOO bad...

Yep, the only thing I can crit would be the schnozz. But noses ARE really tricky to draw right, as they're a really funky shape. Which is why I usually draw simple triangular noses. :-)

In fact, about the only thing as hard as noses when it comes to the face would be ears...
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Norah Jones rocks.
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