Jan 25, 2007, 09:20 AM | |
"Revenge of Tweedle"'s feedback or MSC
OK, first, please don't post in this thread, unless you're a moderator. I made it so that everyone can easily find everything anout my storie(which will be ve-e-e-e-e-e-ery long!)
So here what I've got: The sections are: Planets, Characters, Guns, Ships, Organizations, Cities. suggestions for stuff are not welcome! Wait until I post! Main Menu: Character's profiles Planets and Locations Guns Ships Organizations Cities Last edited by WerBack3>>; Jan 25, 2007 at 09:31 AM. |
Jan 25, 2007, 09:28 AM | |
Characters' profiles
Profile Name: Tweedle Home Planet: Sweetland Years: 24 Kind: Lizard Sex:Male Location: Unknown Notes: Dangerous, but not evil as Devon. He also is against Devon, because Devon destroyed his Homeplanet- Sweetland. Part of Perfection's Secret group Profile Name: Perfection Home Planet: Unknown Years: 21 Sex:Male Kind: Rabbit Location: Leporidae- Terra (Rabbit's lands from latin) Notes: Leader of Perfection's secret group(which is not-so-secret). One of the Leaders of Leporidae- Terra. He's against Devon, because Devon tried to destroy Lepporidae- Terra Profile Name: "Heretic" Cata Home Planet: Inferno Years: 20 Kind: Rabbit Sex:Male Location: Lepporidae- Terra Notes: He's one of the leaders of Perfection's secret organization. He tries to save the order in the Galaxy. Profile Name: Mirc Home Planet: Romanidae Years: 15 Kind: Rabbit Sex:Male Location: Papricotus Notes: He's very clever for his ages. He was musician on his planet, but he left so that he can fight against Devon. Profile Name: WerBack III Home Planet: Psych Years: 14 Kind: Lizard Sex:Male Location: Psych Notes: The king of Psych. He is like a god for the Psychers, because he defended the planet from Devon's hands. |
Jan 25, 2007, 04:58 PM | |
While I appreciate the effort you are putting into your story, instead of having to make a separate thread just to explain your story, I think you should be describing these things in the story itself. These kinds of detail threads are really only useful when they are for collaborative and group stories. Profiles can be posted in the stickied Profiles Thread.
Also, I would suggest adding more detail to your character profiles - appearances, personalities, etc. Browse through the Profiles thread for examples. |
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