Anyone remember the older story? With Unknown Rabbit who fixed most of my spelling. =P Anyway I desided to rewrite the story and (possibly) finish it. Feel free to add critic and comments...

Chapter One - The magical beginning

I'm Moonblaze Mysterious Moonwind, guardian of the Moon Temple, son of Zarch Mysterious the wolf and Lyana Moonwind the rabbit. You can call me MB because my friends does that, if I had any. It's not like I had a clue of my parents, they died at my birth while the spell reflected at me back to whoever that cast it. (Later I got a call from some Rowling about copyright.) I'm somewhat destined to guard this mysterious temple.. forever. I don't know why or what it contains, but maybe it's best like that. Okay, so some day a nerdy turtle shows up and paralyzes me with this "gun", breaks into the temple whenever he carries off with a huge blue gloving gem. I'm like "*** jerk!" but I couldn't catch up with his "Shell Fortress". So here I stand, in the middle of a dark forest, having to return the gem to the temple. Why isn't there ever included a strategy guide to these kind of stories?

Devan had fled to his flying fortress, the Shell Foretress, and left over the stunned guardian at the temple. Moments later Moonblaze prepares to his take off on this new possible adventure, packing his stuff and kissing the temple goodbye. Screw the last part. Anyway, Moonblaze goes off until he reaches a tiny camp with two brave Jediknights practicing their combat skills.

"Hey look Unhit, it's an idiot lost in the forest!" yelped Fawriel.
"Hey, what's up.. blue rabbit with fluffy hair?" called Unhit.
"Oh I'm just hunting a 4 tons large flying fortress that stole something from me, but otherwise nothing special." replied Moonblaze Unhit.
"Sounds fun." responded Fawriel ironic.
Moonblaze started staring at Fawriel but Unhit apologized: "Oh don't care of my fellow newbi.. padawan!"

So Moonblaze joined them and started telling his tale. Unhit made a great spectator with all the "Ohhh" and the "Wow!" sound effects in the right moments. Fawriel, unlikely, started to snore disturbing much.

"That turtle truly sounds like Devan" Unhit explained.
"Do I care of his name?" Moonblaze replied bored.
"Moonblaze, don't tell me you NEVER heard of Jazz Jackrabbit!" Shouted Fawriel. "He's Devan's archenemy, Carrottus' hero, AND a sonic rip off!".
"That's impressive! Where can I find this hero?" asked Moonblaze curious.
"At Carrottus castle." replied Fawriel.
"Which castle?" asked Moonblaze.
"That castle." said Fawriel and pointed towards Carrottus Castle in front of them.
"Oh. You mean the big white one over there?" asked Moonblaze.
"Do you see any other ones?" replied Fawriel ironic.
"Shut up, Faw." demanded Unhit.
"Fine." Said Fawriel and left into the woods.

So Moonblaze part Unhit to Carrottus Castle to meet prince Jazz Jackrabbit and princess Eva Earlong.

"I'm sorry dude, but Jazz's not home! He's out and hang out with the boys again, Tic, Mike, Veggie, you know. Sometimes I wish I had married a DOG! At least they don't come home drunk! You'd better wait with talking to Jazz until tomorrow." Explained Eva.
"Wonderful story. Why first tomorrow, miss Earlong?" asked Moonblaze.
"Cause he's not very smart when he's drunk.. Just ask our previous guest. You have to dig him up yourself, however." Eva replied.

So Moonblaze had the rest of the day to stuff around on the castle. After wandering around in the castle in few hours, Moonblaze stumbled into a hybrid between a cat and a deer.

"Hey watch it, rabbit!" warned Skulg.
"Nice to meet you too!" replied Moonblaze.
"Oh, Blazey, long time no see! Last time you was still guarding that odd temple." babbled Skulg.
"Skulg, I've ALWAYS been guardian the Moon Temple." Moonblaze anwsered.
"Oh." apologized Skulg.

As their conversation started rollin' out, the light suddenly turned off.

"Which FOOL has blown the fuses?" yelled Skulg furiously.
"Hey watch it!" yelped Moonblaze.

GONG. A creature melded in shadows had knocked Moonblaze out and started running off with him.

"Get your creepy hands of my lunc.. friend!" yelled Skulg while she tried to catch up. It was too late. Moonblaze had been kidnapped.

Jazz Jackrabbit and a few other guys entered the castle "Hey honey.. did I miss anything?"..

To be continued.

well its different form yuor old old story, but i like it
[edit sorry dont reveal the plot too much ]

ok bye
Alex

Nice. *nods approvingly* The WT's been kinda dead lately. We need some fresh stuff.

Yeah. It seems to me the only thing keeping it alive is the pre win-3.1 days.

Spiffy dialogues ;>
Btw, did I get this right...he was kidnapped in the castle?

Originally Posted by Unhit

Spiffy dialogues ;>
Btw, did I get this right...he was kidnapped in the castle?

Yeah.

"Get your creepy hands of my lunc.. friend!"
^ROFL

mmmm sounds kinda like knuckles