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Oct 17, 2004, 05:36 AM
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Leftover of spandex

After the rabbit took the control over Rocket Turtle (Devan's invention), he made the turtle fly away from Devan's hidden laboratory. There was a fight between both, in which rabbit's green spandex got completely distorted. However, he didn't care that much about that, because his mission was really important, and thinks like "Oh noes! My new spandex is destroyed!" were totally irrelevant and they could take much time. The rabbit ran into inner structures of the lab, because Devan's time machine was nowhere to find, so was an unidentified yellow henchlizard.

The laboratory was huge, and had lot of things which rabbits used to use long time ago. However, just because the stuff was outdated doesn't mean it's not dangerous at all, as rabbit got hurt by stepping on incredibly cold metal plate, which apparently looked like it was frozen on a purpose. Due of having nothing better to do, he had to avoid those plates by jumping from occasional pipe to occasional pipe, avoiding big rats trying to jump at him.

As further he went, in each step there were more supplies for Devan's army. Surprisingly, gray rabbit noticed some type of munitions which most likely would've been fitting for a gun with LFG function, which his gun didn't support unfortunately. The odd fact was, he never saw a turtle using LFG functional weapon. If his gun only COULD support LFG, all the science things would've been destroyed easily, but they seemed to be invinvible against his own weapon.

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That's it. The rabbit with spandex survived somewhat, unlike Violet wanted him to be dead in TIME WARP. If anyone volunteers to put their characters in, I will do so, as this story will die with no one but Devan and the rabbit itself in the story.

Last edited by cooba; Oct 17, 2004 at 10:35 AM. Reason: BAD GRAMMAR PWNT.
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Oct 17, 2004, 10:10 AM
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It's an interesting concept, but the grammar could use some work, especially in the first paragraph - there are parts I can only try to guess what you mean.
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Oct 17, 2004, 10:34 AM
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Yeah, I kind of messed it up in a rush. ;| Fixed now.

By the way, I'm trying to make this story interactive. At the end of chapter, a question will be given, and you will have to pick one of some amount of choices. Occasionally, questions will not be given, but such occassions will be *very* rare.

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Oct 18, 2004, 04:25 AM
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Rabbit was proud when he found out, that the dirt he just stepped on wasn't that cold like most metal things he touched were. On the dirt, there and there were spread some old, OLD things which Devan most likely destroyed and left them here.

Wandering through piles of junk, rabbit noticed one computer, which was different than all the others. The difference was, it was running. Screen was a little damaged, but otherwise it looked fine. The keyboard wasn't similar to those he saw in R.A.B.T. labs. It was rectangular, and split to three parts, or so it seemed. Rabbit didn't feel to check all the buttons and what were written on them, because the biggest one saying ENTER took his attention immediately. When he pressed that button, the blue screen with some odd geometrical forms turned to eye-hurting, pale yellow shade, and the odd things changed their shape to two rectangular and tall windows. Immediately, on both appeared some text. The first window's text was written in incredibly big font; one letter took 1/3 of screen, height wise. There appeared a scrollbar to the left of the words. Unfortunately, he couldn't scroll that down, because there were no mouse nearby, and he completely didn't know how to use that keyboard.


The question : What you want rabbit to do now?
  • ignore the computer and go futher in the lab.
  • check all computers in order to find a mouse.
  • analyze the keyboard so you can move the scrollbar manually.
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Oct 18, 2004, 11:26 AM
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Oh no, not an Uberbob ripoff.
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Oct 18, 2004, 11:46 AM
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Oh no, not an Uberbob ripoff.
It's definately NOT an Uberbob ripoff; it seems to be closer to one of those choose-your-own-adventure books where you decide big things that affect the plot (as opposed to "pick up rock; save game"). Which, in my opinion, is quite a novel idea for a WT story, considering that people are making most of these up as they go anyway.
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Oct 18, 2004, 05:22 PM
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Analyze the keyboard! Analyze the keyboard.

I don't even use a mouse very much, you'd be surprised how many functions modern keyboards have. [God bless scroll lock.]
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