Original title!

Well, the deadline of Baggers' contest is drawing near, so I've got to start training to draw those guys.
Also, I'm planning to draw a couple of comics of them in the not-so-very-distant future...
So, here's a little scribble of the two I quickly scribbled in some more than half an hour.

I'm asking for your input on the way I drew them, since the style is not exactly the same as the original one. Tell me about anything you like and don't like and anything I forgot or didn't get right ( *points at Jazz' backpack* ).
kthxbai

Nice sketch.

There are some things wrong with it though:

-Spaz' face looks a bit wrong, however, I don't know what exactly it is.
-Jazz' legs are too big and long I'd say.
-The backpack is too edgy.
-Aren't Spaz' arms a bit short compared to the legs? Could be my imagination though.

Other than that it's fine.

It's awesomely groovy, but make sure the poses make sense.

To do this just stand or whatever in the exact same pose, hodling or pretending to hold/operate similer things to see if you don't feel like you should be standing differently, if you have real trouble with poses take a picture of yourself or someone else in a pose as reference.

Originally Posted by LittleFreak

Nice sketch.

There are some things wrong with it though:

-Spaz' face looks a bit wrong, however, I don't know what exactly it is.
-Jazz' legs are too big and long I'd say.
-The backpack is too edgy.
-Aren't Spaz' arms a bit short compared to the legs? Could be my imagination though.

Other than that it's fine.

-Argh.
-Hm. COULD be.
-Correct.
-Perspective.