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New Christmas cartoon
Happy holidays everyone. I've just finished work on a new 6 minute holiday animation. Go check it out here

Feedback appreaciated!

Have a fun filled Christmas too everyone!
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Nice animation
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That was excellent.
I found the running animation at the end a bit weird, but the music, the dialogue and all the other animations were great. I especially like..er...Satan Santa's speed-burst talk, of which I only caught fragments of (the?) sentence.
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Thanks. I think the problem with the running animation was it was made to look really fast, but when my brother made me add these motion blur things to it it slowed the scene down a bit so the animation might occasionaly skip a few frames of the run cycles making them look weird. But it looks right in the avi version for the dvd, which no one but me gets .
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That was very nicely done. I agree with WR about the run cycle, though. Also, some of the voice clips seemed quieter than others, meaning I had to adjust the volume a few times (or it could have been my speakers dying. Not sure). Either way, good job.
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It has bad words ;l
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*covers WR's ears*
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That rocked. Best animation I ever saw from you. Some really good gags, too.
( All the points of criticism have already been pointed out. ;o )
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It has bad words ;l
What? Where? I see no bad words...
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*points*

There look!


Its eeevil! And makes your hair curly!
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Oh yea, just a reminder: use audio streams instead of audio events.
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Oh yea, just a reminder: use audio streams instead of audio events.
I uh, did. Except for a couple of places like some of the music or when they were fighting at the start.
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