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Jul 2, 2007, 01:49 PM
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A new character, Necrigod
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/58930147/

Say what you think, I'm open for (almost) any critique (by almost, I mean critique like "lol, it sucks" which you wouldn't ever say, right?).
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Jul 2, 2007, 03:02 PM
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I just spent like an hour writing a five page critique of a story, so I'll make this quick:

Try to make sure both legs are the same width (same with arms), use a reference image for doing lightning, and keep your light source constant (the lighting on the character appears to be coming from the upper left, but the only light source visible in the picture is the lightning behind him).
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About the light, there is an column of light not visible because of the angle. Thanks for comments!
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Why does your god look like the insignificant stick bug
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His left feet seems to be dangling in mid air. The lightning and "painting"-effects look pretty awesome.
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Lol, it sucks!

I like the eyes.

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Why does your god look like the insignificant stick bug
To be different from all the others out there, niche marketing people!
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