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Oct 6, 2006, 12:13 PM
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Another Guilty Gene concept art

A new challenger appears!

It'll take a while for this guy to appear in the comic, but I'm trying to come up with his looks already, since he's going to be a very important character and thus needs to look good 'n original 'n stuff. I will probably change his age and rank, but I'm not sure yet...



Keep in mind that this is just a concept so it isn't meant to have OMG AUSUM SHAEDING KOLORZ EFFECTZ OLOLOLZ *gasp*
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Nice perspective. The detail on the gun is also very good, while not overwhelming the character in comparison.

My only criticism is that his knees should be farther apart. As is, one is in front of the other but they are both going in the same direction, which gives the impression one leg is shorter than the other. Having the knees farther apart would also give the legs a more dynamic look, which the rest definitely has.
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Great.
It's very visible that you've become very experienced with what you're drawing.. and the design of the gun is quite good, too. Impressive.
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Indeed. Awesome is the only apt description.

I hope to see him in comic soon!
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Originally Posted by Radium
My only criticism is that his knees should be farther apart. As is, one is in front of the other but they are both going in the same direction, which gives the impression one leg is shorter than the other. Having the knees farther apart would also give the legs a more dynamic look, which the rest definitely has.
Understood and I'll keep that in mind.
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Dude, that is a sweet sketch.
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